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** [[spoiler: Arceus]] actually quotes from Literature/TheBookOfMormon which adds on to AuthorAppeal; YMMV as to it being relevant or not.
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** [[spoiler: Arceus]] actually quotes from Literature/TheBookOfMormon which adds on to AuthorAppeal; YMMV as to it being relevant or not.Literature/TheBookOfMormon.
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---> [[spoiler:'''Bridget:''' "So I... slowly poisoned the baby through the berries. I-I didn't know your body... Y-You've consumed so much it's in your bloodstream... i-it'll take a long time before it's diluted. You won't get sick from it... but your babies will."]]
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---> [[spoiler:'''Bridget:''' "So I... slowly poisoned the baby through the berries. I-I didn't know your body... Y-You've consumed so much it's in your bloodstream... i-it'll take a long time before it's diluted. You won't get sick from it... but your babies will.[[spoiler:'''Legion:''' "That is, if you can catch her."]]
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* [[spoiler: GuardianAngel: Amber. She watches over Mewtwo, but has gone to Mew in her time of need.]]
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* TheWoobie: Just about all the main characters fall under here, mainly Mew.
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* TheWoobie: Just about all the main characters fall under here, mainly Mew.Mew.
* YankTheDogsChain: Too many to name, or else you'd be here all day.
* YankTheDogsChain: Too many to name, or else you'd be here all day.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Good ''God'' this happens a lot. Even though a lot of characters go through this, it's [[spoiler: Mew]] who has it worse off.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Almost happens.
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* FaithHeelTurn: [[Happens to Mew in chapter eleven.]] Implied this happens or has happened to a lot of the Legendaries.
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* PrayerIsALastResort: Ho-oh suggests this to the Legendaries, wanting help to [[spoiler: find Mew and Mewtwo]].
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** [[spoiler: Arceus]] actually quotes from Literature/TheBookOfMormon which adds on to AuthorAppeal; YMMV as to it being relevant or not.
** Some of the accompanying lyrics in the beginning of chapters are scripture verses.
** Some of the accompanying lyrics in the beginning of chapters are scripture verses.
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* AsTheGoodBookSays: A few characters quote passages from the Bible throughout the story (directly or indirectly), in which one doubles as a TitleDrop.
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---> [[spoiler:'''Bridget:''' "So I... slowly poisoned the baby through the berries. I-I didn't know your body... Y-You've consumed so much it's in your bloodstream... i-i'll i-it'll take a long time before it's diluted. You won't get sick from it... but your babies will."]]
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---> [[spoiler:'''Bridget:''' "So I... slowly poisoned the baby through the berries. I-I didn't know your body... Y-You've consumed so much it's in your bloodstream... i-i'll take a long time before it's diluted. You won't get sick from it... but your babies will."]]
---> [[spoiler:'''Bridget:''' "So I... slowly poisoned the baby through the berries. I-I didn't know your body... Y-You've consumed so much it's in your bloodstream... i-i'll take a long time before it's diluted. You won't get sick from it... but your babies will."]]
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** [[spoiler: Legion]]: "Fuck me. ''Hard.''"
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* KissOfLife: Done on a more spiritual sense [[spoiler: until it's played straight when Mew drowns.]]
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: Done by Legion to show Mewtwo what happened to Mew couple of years prior to the story.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WordOfGod says chapter eleven wasn't originally going to be from [[spoiler: Mew's point of view]], but there was a given option of rewriting the entire chapter to [[spoiler: literally project Mewtwo into the memories and not in her head]] on request if it proved too confusing to the reader.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Done somewhat-straight during [[spoiler: the C-section]], but nearly-averted with [[spoiler: the deaths of the scientists.]] Later on, it's nearly-played straight when Manaphy was whipped, but when [[spoiler: Legion turns on Mewtwo]] the scene cut away to Mew's physical reactions to the whipping, then shortly returns for the end result.
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* IntimateHealing: [[PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOutthis]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
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* IntimateHealing: [[PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOutthis]] [[ShoutOut this]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
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* IntimateHealing: Mewtwo does this with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
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* IntimateHealing: [[PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does this does]] [[ShoutOutthis]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
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* GrowingUpSucks/WhoWantsToLiveForever
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* GrowingUpSucks/WhoWantsToLiveForeverGrowingUpSucks / WhoWantsToLiveForever
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* GrowingUpSucks: Mew’s life in general.
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* GrowingUpSucks: Mew’s life in general.GrowingUpSucks/WhoWantsToLiveForever
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** The FlayingAlive scene was inspired by ThePassionOfTheChrist.
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** The FlayingAlive scene was inspired by ThePassionOfTheChrist.pretty much taken from [[ThePassionOfTheChrist The Passion]] [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic of the Christ]].
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* ShoutOut: The shoulder angel and devil seemed to have been inspired by [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk's shoulder entities.]]
** [[TheSimpsons A blink-and-you'll-miss-it where Mew burns a bra in her hand.]]
** The FlayingAlive scene was inspired by ThePassionOfTheChrist.
** [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi LIAR!]]
** [[TheSimpsons A blink-and-you'll-miss-it where Mew burns a bra in her hand.]]
** The FlayingAlive scene was inspired by ThePassionOfTheChrist.
** [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi LIAR!]]
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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie: Mew. She got better, though.]]
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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie: Mew. She got better, though.]]
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** [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes]] [[{{Squick}} for witnessing human sex.]]
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** [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes]] [[{{Squick}} [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]]
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** [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes [[{{Squick}} for witnessing human sex.]]
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** [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes eyes]] [[{{Squick}} for witnessing human sex.]]
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** [[{{Squick}} Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes for witnessing human sex.]]
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** [[{{Squick}} [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes [[{{Squick}} for witnessing human sex.]]
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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie: Mew. She got better, though.]]
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* UnpopularPopularCharacter: There are reviewers who have asked for Entei to have more screentime.
** Unless he’s the ChewToy?
** Unless he’s the ChewToy?
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* UnpopularPopularCharacter: A lot of reviewers haved asked for Entei to have more screentime.
** Unless he’s the ChewToy?
** Unless he’s the ChewToy?
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[[ItHasOnlyJustBegun But that’s when the story really begins.]]
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[[ItHasOnlyJustBegun But that’s when that is when]] [[BetterThanItSounds the story really begins.]]
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The story begins three centuries in the future with bad news: [[CrapsackWorld the world is on the brink of a world war.]] Ho-oh calls for a conference for the Legendaries on this issue, giving first-hand accounts about the world falling apart. For fear of becoming as the common man, he instructs everyone to get over rivalries and make friendships with one another.
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The story begins three centuries in the future with bad news: [[CrapsackWorld the Pokémon world is on the brink of a world war.]] Ho-oh calls for a conference for the Legendaries on this issue, giving first-hand accounts about the world falling apart. For fear of becoming as the common man, he instructs everyone to get over rivalries and make friendships with one another.
