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* EasilyForgiven: A staple of Coeur's stories with the premise of Jaune hiding a major secret. Despite nearly a hundred chapters of anticipation over Jaune's breaking Class traditions, the full legal, social, and personal implications are dismissed and brushed aside with little debate or acknowledgement by the end of Book 7.

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* EasilyForgiven: A staple of Coeur's stories with the premise of Jaune hiding a major secret. Despite nearly a hundred chapters of anticipation over Jaune's breaking Class traditions, the full legal, social, and personal implications are dismissed and brushed aside with little debate argument or acknowledgement by the end of Book 7.7. See YMMV page for the full reaction.
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* EasilyForgiven: A staple of Coeur's stories with the premise of Jaune hiding a major secret. Despite nearly a hundred chapters of anticipation over Jaune's breaking Class traditions, the full legal, social, and personal implications are dismissed and brushed aside with little debate or acknowledgement by the end of Book 7.
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* HistoryRepeats: The endings of the sixth and seventh books. [[spoiler:After suffering physical and mental anguish, Jaune returns to Vale too late to prevent a catastrophe but just in time to watch as things devolve around him and untold numbers of people die. This all culminates with the princess that he has come to greatly respect and care for being lethally injured and Jaune [[CradlingYourKill holding them]] [[DiedInYourArmsTonight gently as they pass.]] He then rejoins with the rest of the Hunters, meets back with them at their guild hall, and they all come to something of a reconciliation.]]
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* Book 7 - The Current Arc: With peace between Vale and Mistral finally achieved, The Hunters ride out to aid in the relief effort while their leader grapples with his newfound abilities.

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* Book 7 - The Current Arc: Vale's New Dawn: With peace between Vale and Mistral finally achieved, The Hunters ride out to aid in the relief effort while their leader grapples with his newfound abilities.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Each book tends to be several shades darker than its predecessor. By Book 7, the friendship and romance tones of the earlier books have been largely replaced or overshadowed by themes of loss and tragedy.

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** Book 7: [[spoiler:The guild have come to something of a reconciliation, but hundreds of civilians have been massacred, Qrow's dead, Lisa's dead, Jaune just suffered a week of almost unending torture, the kingdom of Vale seems to be on the brink of collapse, Raven is still at large and planning to summon Salem to make a potentially apocalyptic wish, and no one has any idea how to stop her that doesn't in some way make everything worse.]] This is the closest any book has come so far to a true DownerEnding.



* RocksFallEveryoneDies: Averted. Somehow. WordOfGod is that for Salem to grant a wish [[spoiler:it ''must'' be in a way that kills the wisher. The author even goes on to list ways how in response to reader suggestions.]] There's even an in-story opportunity when [[spoiler:Raven tells Jaune how Salem pulled a meteor to Remnant in order to explain where the metal for her InfinityPlusOneSword.]] However, how or why the world isn't already destroyed by before the story starts is never explained. See {{Plothole}} above.

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* RocksFallEveryoneDies: Averted. Somehow.[[{{Plothole}} Somehow]]. WordOfGod is that for Salem to grant a wish [[spoiler:it ''must'' be in a way that kills the wisher. The author even goes on to list ways how various wishes could go apocalyptically wrong in response to reader suggestions.]] There's even an in-story opportunity when [[spoiler:Raven tells Jaune how Salem pulled a meteor to Remnant in order to explain where how she obtained the metal for her InfinityPlusOneSword.]] However, how How or why the world isn't already destroyed by before the story starts is never explained. See {{Plothole}} above.story's start has yet to be explained.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her JackassGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her to begin with.]] WordOfGod also states that Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. However, this still doesn't settle any issues about why the world isn't already destroyed long before the story starts [[note]] The author even lists numerous ways a wish could be interpreted to kill everyone [[/note]].

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her JackassGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her to begin with.]] WordOfGod also states that Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. [[RocksFallEveryoneDies However, this still doesn't settle any issues about why the world isn't already destroyed long before the story starts starts.]] [[note]] The author even lists numerous ways a wish could be interpreted to kill everyone [[/note]].everyone. [[/note]]


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* RocksFallEveryoneDies: Averted. Somehow. WordOfGod is that for Salem to grant a wish [[spoiler:it ''must'' be in a way that kills the wisher. The author even goes on to list ways how in response to reader suggestions.]] There's even an in-story opportunity when [[spoiler:Raven tells Jaune how Salem pulled a meteor to Remnant in order to explain where the metal for her InfinityPlusOneSword.]] However, how or why the world isn't already destroyed by before the story starts is never explained. See {{Plothole}} above.

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*** Attempted to be filled come Book 7 [[spoiler:where it's revealed Jaune died in his fight with Cinder, and forging the magical sword with himself brought him back to life with his dual Class,]] not only does this utterly fail to address any of the above issues, but also leaves the rather obvious problem of [[spoiler:how Jaune manages to use his forging skills to merge with the sword while already dead.]]



** Again in Book 7 where the beginning of the Book goes into how [[spoiler: the Noble Classes controls the Labour Classes due to the former's high Cha stat compared to their low leveled Res stat.]] Come the climax of the Book [[spoiler:many Labour Classes start rioting in Vale without a single attempt or explanation of why the Noble Classes don't just tell them to stop and go home which the Labourers should be compelled to obey.]] As of Book 7 when and how high Cha seems to work depends entirely on the plot.

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** Again in Book 7 where the beginning of the Book goes into how [[spoiler: the Noble Classes controls the Labour Classes due to the former's high Cha stat compared to their the latter's low leveled Res stat.]] Come the climax of the Book [[spoiler:many Labour Classes start rioting in Vale without a single attempt or explanation of why the Noble Classes don't just tell them to stop and go home which the Labourers should be compelled to obey.]] As of Book 7 when and how high Cha seems to work depends entirely on the plot.
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** Again in Book 7 where the beginning of the Book goes into how [[spoiler: the Noble Classes controls the Labour Classes due to the former's high Cha stat compared to their low leveled Res stat.]] Come the climax of the Book [[spoiler:many Labour Classes start rioting in Vale without a single attempt or explanation of why the Noble Classes don't just tell them to stop and go home which the Labourers should be compelled to obey.]] As of Book 7 when and how high Cha seems to work depends entirely on the plot.
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* BittersweetEnding: Every. '''Single.''' '''''Book.'''''
** Book 1: Jaune is attending Beacon academy with a group of close knit friends who are all well on their way to becoming heroes, but they're also stuck in a deal with a manipulative LoanShark and their eventual expulsion seems almost inevitable.
** Book 2: The Hunters have successfully completed their Annual Quest and saved many people while doing so, but their financial situation is still tenuous, one of their temporary party members died, and the world is revealed to be much larger and more dangerous than they could have ever imagined.
** Book 3: The Hunters have managed to escape from their abusive financial situation that has plagued them since Book 1, but the perpetrators of the incident have escaped mostly unscathed and are also revealed to be part of a larger organization bent on sowing chaos and destruction throughout Remnant.
** Book 4: The Hunters have successfully saved Mistral from complete destruction, but fighting has broken out that threatens to plunge the kingdoms into a state of war.
** Book 5: The city of Magnis has been saved and a temporary ceasefire negotiated, but Jaune's romantic relationship has come to a bitter end, hundreds have died defending the keep, and Roman and Neo have escaped to Vacuo to continue their misdeeds there.
** Book 6: The war has finally been brought to a close, but [[spoiler:the guild is fractured, dozens of villages have been massacred due to Mistral's treachery, and Jaune was forced to kill Cinder, the only person to show him genuine kindness after TheReveal, thanks to the manipulations of [[CharmPerson the King of Mistral.]]]]

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** The description of the rune Jaune engraves on the sword he forges in Chapter 12 of Book 7 exactly matches that of the symbol found on both [[spoiler:the doors to the Vacuoan temple, and [[TheMacGuffin Jaune's amulet]]]] but he states that has never seen it before. The author later corrects this to have Jaune actually recognize the symbol.



** In Chapter 12 of Book 7:
*** Jaune's internal dialogue mentions that he has only told [[spoiler:Ozpin, the king, and the guild]] about his Runesmithing but we have only ever seen him convey this infomation to [[spoiler:Ruby, Ozpin, and perhaps his family.]]
*** The description of the rune Jaune engraves on the sword he forges this chapter exactly matches that of the symbol found on both [[spoiler:the doors to the Vacuoan temple, and [[TheMacGuffin Jaune's amulet]]]] but he states that has never seen it before.

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*** The description of the rune Jaune engraves on the sword he forges this chapter exactly matches that of the symbol found on both [[spoiler:the doors to the Vacuoan temple, and [[TheMacGuffin Jaune's amulet]]]] but he states that has never seen it before.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Raven desires to kill Salem not from any kind of altruism, but so that she can become an [[SocialDarwinism apex predator.]] And judging from her characterization so far, she is hardly better than Salem in any case.

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Good rule of thumb, if there is only one bullet point under an entry or subentry, then it's probably either unneeded and can be combined with the above point, or both points need to be reformatted. I don't think Wo G was trying to explain how Jaune made a wish, I think it was just elaborating using him as an example.


** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her JackassGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her.]]
*** Attempted to be settled yet again as WordOfGod states Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. This however, still doesn't settle any issues about why she doesn't try to find someone unwitting enough to make a wish that could destroy the world long before the story starts [[note]] The author even lists numerous ways a wish could be interpreted to kill everyone [[/note]], nor how or why [[spoiler:Jaune made a wish to her]] without even being aware of her.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her JackassGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her.]]
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her to be settled yet again as begin with.]] WordOfGod also states that Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. This however, However, this still doesn't settle any issues about why she doesn't try to find someone unwitting enough to make a wish that could destroy the world isn't already destroyed long before the story starts [[note]] The author even lists numerous ways a wish could be interpreted to kill everyone [[/note]], nor how or why [[spoiler:Jaune made a wish to her]] without even being aware of her.[[/note]].
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*** Attempted to be settled yet again as WordOfGod states Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. This however, still doesn't settle any issues about why she doesn't try to find someone unwitting enough to make a wish that could destroy the world, nor how or why [[spoiler:Jaune made a wish to her]] without even being aware of her.

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*** Attempted to be settled yet again as WordOfGod states Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. This however, still doesn't settle any issues about why she doesn't try to find someone unwitting enough to make a wish that could destroy the world, world long before the story starts [[note]] The author even lists numerous ways a wish could be interpreted to kill everyone [[/note]], nor how or why [[spoiler:Jaune made a wish to her]] without even being aware of her.
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*** Attempted to be settled yet again as WordOfGod states Salem can stick around and grant wishes to anyone who makes them rather than just her summoner. This however, still doesn't settle any issues about why she doesn't try to find someone unwitting enough to make a wish that could destroy the world, nor how or why [[spoiler:Jaune made a wish to her]] without even being aware of her.
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** Even after the author gives up telling the story solely from Jaune's POV, and starts switching perspectives in narration randomly in Book 7, the rest of the cast are still given little development, as the other perspectives simply focus on the situation Jaune is absent from, rather than the characters.
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** WordOfGod is Book 8 is intended to be almost entirely this for many of the story's hanging questions. YMMV on whether the timing is appropriate or comes off as needlessly dragged out like the Res stat.
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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her.]]
** During the [[spoiler:battle between Cinder and Jaune, where Jaune is stabbed and fuses with a sword,]] how or why Jaune is able to get back up and continue to function despite [[spoiler: being impaled and thus leading to both organ damage and restricted blood flow (to say nothing of metal entering the blood stream)]] is never explained. Also comes up again in the opposite way [[spoiler:when Jaune is made to constantly battle while wounded after being kidnapped by Raven, Jaune never attempts to seal his wounds by inserting and forging metal into them, as he did when fighting Cinder, since that's aparently a valid medical option.]]

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie JackassGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her.]]
** During the [[spoiler:battle between Cinder and Jaune, where Jaune is stabbed and fuses with a sword,]] how or why Jaune is able to get back up and continue to function despite [[spoiler: being impaled and thus leading to both organ damage and restricted blood flow (to say nothing of metal entering the blood stream)]] is never explained. Also comes up again in the opposite way [[spoiler:when Jaune is made to constantly battle while wounded after being kidnapped by Raven, Jaune never attempts to seal his wounds by inserting and forging metal into them, as he did when fighting Cinder, since that's aparently apparently a valid medical option.]]



** Also notable [[spoiler:during Jaune's kidnapping and being introduced to Raven's gladiatorial system, is a complete lack of Grimm being spawned from all the death and general negativity with the Greycloaks camp, avoiding the issue of why they aren't constantly attacked.]]

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** Also notable [[spoiler:during Jaune's kidnapping and being introduced to Raven's gladiatorial system, is a complete lack of Grimm being spawned from all the death and general negativity with the Greycloaks camp, avoiding the issue of why they aren't constantly attacked.]]]] Also absent again, [[spoiler:when Vale experiences a riot in protest over New Dawn's leader being attacked and kidnapped.]] As of Book 7 the Grimm have been entirely forgotten in the story.
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** For Hero Caste, knowing another Hero's level tells them how difficult or easy they would be to kill, and thus is only told to people they trust absolutely. Likewise, the exact nature of someone's stats is incredibly personal, with revealing them being akin to being naked and exposed to the world.

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** For Hero Caste, knowing another Hero's level tells them how difficult or easy they would be to kill, and thus is only told to people they trust absolutely. Likewise, the exact nature of someone's stats is incredibly personal, with revealing them being akin to being naked and exposed to the world.world, and asking someone their stats is the rough equivalent of asking someone to drop their pants.
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* AdamSmithHatesYourGuts: Since Heroes generate lien by killing Grimm, merchants charge them vastly inflated prices for their goods and services. Jaune's awareness of this and habits gained from a lifetime surrounded by Shopkeepers gives him an edge when haggling, a concept most Heroes don't even seem aware of. His guildmates see this as a Knight's high charisma at work and leave most monetary dealings to him.
* AdaptationalBadass: The Grimm species from the original show, like Beowolves or Ursai, are referred to as the "Elder Grimm" and are all much more dangerous than they were originally. A single Beowolf, the likes of which are killed by dozens in the show, is more than enough to give four of the main characters trouble, and an Ursa gets extremely close to inflicting a TotalPartyKill on the Hunters.

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* AdamSmithHatesYourGuts: Since Heroes generate lien by killing Grimm, merchants charge them vastly inflated prices for their goods and services. Jaune's awareness of this and habits gained from a lifetime surrounded by Shopkeepers gives him an edge when haggling, a concept most Heroes don't even seem aware of. His guildmates see this as a Knight's high charisma at work and leave most monetary dealings to him.
him (especially after Pyrrha accidentally spends nearly all the group's money chartering a ship).
* AdaptationalBadass: The Grimm species from the original show, like Beowolves or Ursai, are referred to as the "Elder Grimm" and are all much more dangerous than they were originally. A single Beowolf, the likes of which are killed by dozens in the show, is more than enough to give four of the main characters trouble, and an Ursa gets extremely close to inflicting a TotalPartyKill on the Hunters. In their place as the mooks are smaller types of Grimm that are correspondingly more numerous.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Several.
** The Hunters involvement in the Greycloak's main plot required they look to take an Annual Quest at the exact time when they did in their First Year, due to being in just the right desperate circumstance of being indebted to Roman in order to push them into attempting it so soon.
** Book 5 has Jaune and Blake [[spoiler:traveling with just the sort of Mistral Soldiers that would be murderous enough to kill Vale prisoners in front of them to push a confrontation.]] As well as have Jaune [[spoiler:foil the Greycloak's plans by taking a break from defending Magnus' walls at just the right moment to spot a suspected Greycloak going somewhere.]]
** Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:that Salem was the one who gave Jaune his amulet that disguised him as a Knight.]] [[{{Plothole}} Though the exact circumstances of how this came about aren't elaborated]] it still requires [[spoiler:Salem conveniently meeting Jaune at the exact moment he makes a wish,]] making the entire story based on this.
** Again in Book 6 where [[spoiler:Mistral's sneak attack on Vale is foiled by Jaune being in his home town right when they're attempting to burn it down.]]
** Another in Book 7 [[spoiler:where Raven has Jaune make an InfinityPlusOneSword out of an unearthly metal provided by Salem, in which both a Blacksmith of sufficient Skill and Level as well as the metal itself is conveniently provided to her.]]
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** In Chapter 12 of Book 7:
*** Jaune's internal dialogue mentions that he has only told [[spoiler:Ozpin, the king, and the guild]] about his Runesmithing but we have only ever seen him convey this infomation to [[spoiler:Ruby, Ozpin, and perhaps his family.]]
*** The description of the rune Jaune engraves on the sword he forges this chapter exactly matches that of the symbol found on both [[spoiler:the doors to the Vacuoan temple, and [[TheMacGuffin Jaune's amulet]]]] but he states that has never seen it before.
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* AdaptationalBadass: The Grimm species from the original show, like Beowolves or Ursai, are referred to as the "Elder Grimm" and are all much more dangerous than they were originally. A single Beowolf, the likes of which are killed by dozens in the show, is more than enough to give four of the main characters trouble, and an Ursa gets extremely close to inflicting a TotalPartyKill on the Hunters.
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No reference sighted. And while I can believe in Coeur's abysmal planning and writing ability enough to have something as contrive as Salem conveniently hiding in a bush while Jaune randomly states a wish to the sky to try to fix his flawed story, it still leaves issues.


** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune]]'s wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant [[spoiler:Jaune]]'s [[spoiler:Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of her original summoner's. summoner's, and when he didn't know of her existence to make a wish to her.]]
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Adding spoilers to conceal Jaune's involvement. Not sure what you were trying to convey with the last part of your statement. Salem implies that Jaune whispered his desire to be a Hero to himself the night she was first summoned, if that helps.


** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of the summoner, and when Jaune didn't even know of her in the beginning of the story to deliberately make a wish instead of a simply unspoken desire.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant Jaune's [[spoiler:Jaune]]'s wish ''at all'' instead of the summoner, and when Jaune didn't even know of her in the beginning of the story to deliberately make a wish instead of a simply unspoken desire.original summoner's.
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** Held again in Book 7 by Ozpin and the Vale King First, as they [[spoiler:devise a plan to have Jaune infiltrate the Greycloaks while not even considering that the Greycloaks may be interested in acquiring the highest Level Blacksmith in the history of Remnant for themselves and would be able to easily acquire and isolate said individual considering they are known to have a highly skilled teleporter on their side.]]
** Later held to a lesser degree by Ozpin in the same Book, [[spoiler:as he sends the rest of the Hunters to comb the city and ascertain Jaune and Lisa's location after they go into hiding using their Whisper Stones, but Jaune's only viable hiding spot is in the Emerald Forest outside of Beacon, and even if he were hiding in the city, he can't use his Whisper Stone in Vale lest he compromise his mission.]]
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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]], though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of the summoner, and when Jaune didn't even know of her in the beginning of the story to deliberately make a wish instead of a simply unspoken desire.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author attempts to HandWave the full implications of this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]], her]] so as to avoid the problem of why the world isn't more affected due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher, though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of the summoner, and when Jaune didn't even know of her in the beginning of the story to deliberately make a wish instead of a simply unspoken desire.
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Found the reference, but it is very brief and weak, and opens up further issues.


** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author seems to have realized how great an effect such a thing would have on the world at large as Jaune postulates in Chapter 7 of Book 7 that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]], though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story.]] The author seems attempts to have realized how great an effect such a thing would have on the world at large as Jaune postulates HandWave this in Chapter 7 of Book 7 by having Jaune postulate that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]], though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her voice at the festival amphitheater.amphitheater, nor the issue of why Salem would grant Jaune's wish ''at all'' instead of the summoner, and when Jaune didn't even know of her in the beginning of the story to deliberately make a wish instead of a simply unspoken desire.
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Book 7: Chapter 7: "I don't know. I doubt my sorrow over my Class issues was enough to summon her, that would be insane. It's possible someone else summoned her near Ansel and was killed, or that the Greycloaks were active even then."


** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story, and tries the same for Cinder before she dies.]] How or why the world isn't more affected or destroyed due to her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher has yet to be explained.

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** Through most of the story Salem is frequently summoned through a ritual involving human sacrifice, but come Book 6 it's revealed [[spoiler:she can grant wishes to anyone she wants even if they aren't aware of her existence, which is how Jaune received the amulet at the start of the story, and tries the same for Cinder before she dies.story.]] How or why The author seems to have realized how great an effect such a thing would have on the world isn't more affected or destroyed due at large as Jaune postulates in Chapter 7 of Book 7 that Salem had already been summoned prior to [[spoiler:Jaune stating his desires to her]], though this still doesn't explain why [[spoiler:Cinder]] heard her LiteralGenie shenanigans on an unsuspecting wisher has yet to be explained.voice at the festival amphitheater.
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** During the [[spoiler:battle between Cinder and Jaune, where Jaune is stabbed and fuses with a sword,]] how or why Jaune is able to get back up and continue to function despite [[spoiler: being impaled and thus leading to both organ damage and restricted blood flow (to say nothing of metal entering the blood stream)]] is never explained. Also comes up again in the opposite way [[spoiler:when Jaune is made to constantly battle while wounded after being kidnapped by Raven, Jaune never attempts to seal his wounds by inserting and forging metal into them, as he did when fighting Cinder, since that's aparently a valid medical option.]]

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