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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/281585/legal-notice-from-high-lord-windvane "Legal Notice From High Lord Windvane"]] makes plain that her (legal) paternal family ''deeply'' rejects her, to the point that her paternal uncle Windvane
*** denies her descent even from her mother Sweetwing (and must be lying, given known Pony biology),
*** uses this excuse to rob her of the title of "High Lady" which she holds by right as a direct matrilineal descent of Commander Hurricane the First,
*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
*** denies her descent even from her mother Sweetwing (and must be lying, given known Pony biology),
*** uses this excuse to rob her of the title of "High Lady" which she holds by right as a direct matrilineal descent of Commander Hurricane the First,
*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/281585/legal-notice-from-high-lord-windvane "Legal Notice From High Lord Windvane"]] makes plain that her (legal) paternal family ''deeply'' rejects her, to the point that her paternal uncle Windvane
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biology).
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First.
***despises Despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
interests.
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this.
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* AngelicBeauty: Rainbow Dash perceives Fluttershy as resembling the Pony equivalent of an [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Angel]] (namely, an [[WingedUnicorn Alicorn]]) when she sees her flying against the sun. This is actually [[spoiler:a prophetic vision, as Fluttershy will eventually Ascend to become Princess Gaia, known to the Changelings as the High Queen Kindness, the ultimate development of the Flutter Ponies]].
-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled.
* AllThereInTheManual: Some key aspects of Fluttershy's life, motives and relatives are revealed in Jordan179's FIMFiction Blog and his comments on other blogs.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself'').
-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled.
* AllThereInTheManual: Some key aspects of Fluttershy's life, motives and relatives are revealed in Jordan179's FIMFiction Blog and his comments on other blogs.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself'').
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-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 [=Jordan179=] plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
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* ArcWords: Some variant on "Fluttershy is free," usually along the lines of "And she was free" get repeated in several other of Jordan179's tales involving the character. It refers to Fluttershy's stubborn defiance of any form of external control, and determination to be her own Pony.
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* AngelicBeauty: Rainbow Dash perceives Fluttershy as resembling the Pony equivalent of an [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Angel]] (namely, an [[WingedUnicorn Alicorn]]) when she sees her flying against the sun. This is actually [[spoiler:a prophetic vision, as Fluttershy will eventually Ascend to become Princess Gaia, known to the Changelings as the High Queen Kindness, the ultimate development of the Flutter Ponies]].
-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled.
* ArcWords: Some variant on "Fluttershy is free," usually along the lines of "And she was free" get repeated in several other ofJordan179's [=Jordan179=]'s tales involving the character. It refers to Fluttershy's stubborn defiance of any form of external control, and determination to be her own Pony.
-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled.
* ArcWords: Some variant on "Fluttershy is free," usually along the lines of "And she was free" get repeated in several other of
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her ''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual [[AllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her ''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
* AllThereInTheManual: Some key aspects of Fluttershy's life, motives and relatives are revealed in Jordan179's FIMFiction Blog and his comments on other blogs.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself'').
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/256710/sexual-orientation-and-behavior-of-the-mane-six-in-context "Sexual Orientation and Behavior of the Mane Six, In Context"]] makes it likely that Fluttershy's [[TwoGirlRomanticFriendship Two Mare Romantic Friendship]] with Rainbow Dash is somewhat sexual at least on Fluttershy's part, largely because Fluttershy may be bisexual ([[spoiler:a Changeling tendency]]) and even more afraid of stallions than she is of mares. It also makes plain that Rainbow Dash may reciprocate but be too afraid of showing softer emotions to act upon it. Crippling shyness and emotional obliviousness are not the best combination for romantic happiness!
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/281585/legal-notice-from-high-lord-windvane "Legal Notice From High Lord Windvane"]] makes plain that her (legal) paternal family ''deeply'' rejects her, to the point that her paternal uncle Windvane
*** denies her descent even from her mother Sweetwing (and must be lying, given known Pony biology),
*** uses this excuse to rob her of the title of "High Lady" which she holds by right as a direct matrilineal descent of Commander Hurricane the First,
*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her ) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself'').
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/256710/sexual-orientation-and-behavior-of-the-mane-six-in-context "Sexual Orientation and Behavior of the Mane Six, In Context"]] makes it likely that Fluttershy's [[TwoGirlRomanticFriendship Two Mare Romantic Friendship]] with Rainbow Dash is somewhat sexual at least on Fluttershy's part, largely because Fluttershy may be bisexual ([[spoiler:a Changeling tendency]]) and even more afraid of stallions than she is of mares. It also makes plain that Rainbow Dash may reciprocate but be too afraid of showing softer emotions to act upon it. Crippling shyness and emotional obliviousness are not the best combination for romantic happiness!
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/281585/legal-notice-from-high-lord-windvane "Legal Notice From High Lord Windvane"]] makes plain that her (legal) paternal family ''deeply'' rejects her, to the point that her paternal uncle Windvane
*** denies her descent even from her mother Sweetwing (and must be lying, given known Pony biology),
*** uses this excuse to rob her of the title of "High Lady" which she holds by right as a direct matrilineal descent of Commander Hurricane the First,
*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her ) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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* ItsAllThereInTheManual: Some key aspects of Fluttershy's life, motives and relatives are revealed in Jordan179's FIMFiction Blog and his comments on other blogs.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself'').
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/256710/sexual-orientation-and-behavior-of-the-mane-six-in-context "Sexual Orientation and Behavior of the Mane Six, In Context"]] makes it likely that Fluttershy's [[TwoGirlRomanticFriendship Two Mare Romantic Friendship]] with Rainbow Dash is somewhat sexual at least on Fluttershy's part, largely because Fluttershy may be bisexual ([[spoiler:a Changeling tendency]]) and even more afraid of stallions than she is of mares. It also makes plain that Rainbow Dash may reciprocate but be too afraid of showing softer emotions to act upon it. Crippling shyness and emotional obliviousness are not the best combination for romantic happiness!
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/281585/legal-notice-from-high-lord-windvane "Legal Notice From High Lord Windvane"]] makes plain that her (legal) paternal family ''deeply'' rejects her, to the point that her paternal uncle Windvane
*** denies her descent even from her mother Sweetwing (and must be lying, given known Pony biology),
*** uses this excuse to rob her of the title of "High Lady" which she holds by right as a direct matrilineal descent of Commander Hurricane the First,
*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her ) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself'').
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/256710/sexual-orientation-and-behavior-of-the-mane-six-in-context "Sexual Orientation and Behavior of the Mane Six, In Context"]] makes it likely that Fluttershy's [[TwoGirlRomanticFriendship Two Mare Romantic Friendship]] with Rainbow Dash is somewhat sexual at least on Fluttershy's part, largely because Fluttershy may be bisexual ([[spoiler:a Changeling tendency]]) and even more afraid of stallions than she is of mares. It also makes plain that Rainbow Dash may reciprocate but be too afraid of showing softer emotions to act upon it. Crippling shyness and emotional obliviousness are not the best combination for romantic happiness!
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/281585/legal-notice-from-high-lord-windvane "Legal Notice From High Lord Windvane"]] makes plain that her (legal) paternal family ''deeply'' rejects her, to the point that her paternal uncle Windvane
*** denies her descent even from her mother Sweetwing (and must be lying, given known Pony biology),
*** uses this excuse to rob her of the title of "High Lady" which she holds by right as a direct matrilineal descent of Commander Hurricane the First,
*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her ) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled
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-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveledtraveled.
* ArcWords: Some variant on "Fluttershy is free," usually along the lines of "And she was free" get repeated in several other of Jordan179's tales involving the character. It refers to Fluttershy's stubborn defiance of any form of external control, and determination to be her own Pony.
* ArcWords: Some variant on "Fluttershy is free," usually along the lines of "And she was free" get repeated in several other of Jordan179's tales involving the character. It refers to Fluttershy's stubborn defiance of any form of external control, and determination to be her own Pony.
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* DamselOutOfDistress: Fluttershy saves herself from [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen Queen Chrysalis]]' psychic powers by using her own psychic powers to counter her commands, and flies rapidly away from Hive Chrysalis.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Fluttershy's mother, who is clearly mad.
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* TitleDrop: The last words of Chapter 3 "[[spoiler:Chrysalis]], in which she confronts and defeats the mind control of the titular being:
-->She would ''never'' serve that thing. Never give up who she was.
-->She was Fluttershy, and within her was more than just the timid little filly who hid under her own hair. Deep within her she knew she was the daughter of proud Pegasi, ones who would never bend the knee to any tyrant.
-->She was Fluttershy. And she was ''free.''
* UnreliableNarrator: Two, both in-story. Both of whom turn out to be telling the truth.
** From Fluttershy'smother, POV, we have Fluttershy's mother Sweetwing, who is clearly mad.mad.
** From Rainbow Dash's POV, we have Fluttershy herself, who Dashie fears is deluded.
-->She would ''never'' serve that thing. Never give up who she was.
-->She was Fluttershy, and within her was more than just the timid little filly who hid under her own hair. Deep within her she knew she was the daughter of proud Pegasi, ones who would never bend the knee to any tyrant.
-->She was Fluttershy. And she was ''free.''
* UnreliableNarrator: Two, both in-story. Both of whom turn out to be telling the truth.
** From Fluttershy's
** From Rainbow Dash's POV, we have Fluttershy herself, who Dashie fears is deluded.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her mother's marriage) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her mother's marriage) ) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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* AngelicBeauty: Rainbow Dash perceives Fluttershy as resembling the Pony equivalent of an [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Angel]] (namely, an [[WingedUnicorn Alicorn]]) when she sees her flying against the sun. This is actually [[spoiler:a prophetic vision, as Fluttershy will eventually Ascend to become Princess Gaia]].
-->>Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled
-->>Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled
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* AngelicBeauty: Rainbow Dash perceives Fluttershy as resembling the Pony equivalent of an [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Angel]] (namely, an [[WingedUnicorn Alicorn]]) when she sees her flying against the sun. This is actually [[spoiler:a prophetic vision, as Fluttershy will eventually Ascend to become Princess Gaia]].
-->>RainbowGaia, known to the Changelings as the High Queen Kindness, the ultimate development of the Flutter Ponies]].
-->Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled
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-->>Rainbow watched for a moment from the ground, utterly bewitched by her beauty and vitality. She passed before the rising Sun, and for a moment Rainbow almost thought she could see a radiant horn springing from her head, as if she were not Fluttershy but instead some new Alicorn. It was only a momentary illusion, but Rainbow remembered it, first in happiness. Much later she would have occasion to remember it in awe, and wonder just how fast she sometimes traveled
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* [[HumanoidAbomination Equinoid Abominations]]: [[spoiler:The Changelings]].
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** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself''.
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** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself''.''herself'').
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2014. It's a sequel to the author's previous fanfic, ''Fanfic/ARobustSolution''.
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Set right after MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E12CallOfTheCutie, it is about Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, and their camping trip to observe a butterfly migration. In the course of that trip, Fluttershy relates some disturbing things about her heritage.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] in 2014
2014.
Set right afterMyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E12CallOfTheCutie, [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E12CallOfTheCutie "Call of the Cutie"]], it is about Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, and their camping trip to observe a butterfly migration. In the course of that trip, Fluttershy relates some disturbing things about her heritage.
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her spoiler:''real'' ''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her [[spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her [[spoiler:''real'' spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her [[spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her [[spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam via the Changeling power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]]].VoluntaryShapeshifting]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her [[spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam through Changeling [[Shapeshifting mimicry]]]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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* AbusiveParents: Fluttershy's mother [[AllThereInTheManual Sweetwing]] is insane. Sweetwing's husband [[spoiler:correctly]] claims not to be Fluttershy's true sire, and pays her a remittance to avoid being embarrassed by her. Her paternal uncle Windvane [[spoiler:falsely]] denies Fluttershy's descent from Commander Hurricane the First, and [[spoiler:is engaged in an [[ItsAllThereInTheManual evil and treasonous conspiracy to overthrow Celestia by means of the blackest magic, equine sacrifice]]. And her [[spoiler:''real'' sire obviously raped her dam through via the Changeling [[Shapeshifting mimicry]]]].power of VoluntaryShapeshifting]]]]. Really, the wonder isn't that Fluttershy's a bit crazy, the wonder is that she's at all emotionally-functional!
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes "Fluttershy's Night Out" even HarsherInHindsight (for Fluttershy) within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes the events of "Fluttershy's Night Out" even HarsherInHindsight (for Fluttershy) ''more'' painful for Fluttershy within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her mother's marriage) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoilers:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her mother's marriage) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoilers:Hitler [[spoiler:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/286357/why-i-cannot-believe-in-a-freelove-equestria "Why I Cannot Believe in a Free-Love Equestria"]] puts Fluttershy's criticism of her mother's behavior ''and'' the events of Bad Horse's "Fluttershy's Night Out" in context: Jordan179 plainly believes that Equestria is a somewhat sexually-conservative society by modern Western standards, which means that Fluttershy sees casual sex as sleazy. This makes "Fluttershy's Night Out" even HarsherInHindsight (for Fluttershy) within this continuity. Poor Fluttershy.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her mother's marriage) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoilers:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/288831/intercepted-mail-a-letter-to-windvane "Intercepted Mail: A Letter To Windvane"]] introduces Fluttershy's cousin Ill Wind, and strongly implies that he is [[spoiler:the Pony who becomes "Dr. Atmosphere." It also strongly implies that Windvane is approaching the MoralEventHorizon of ''commissioning'' the Pegasus Device and engaging in mass equine sacrifice in order to power his treasonous plans to overthrow Princess Celestia and restore the Pegasus Mandate as a fascist dictatorship dominating all Equestria]]. In other words, Fluttershy is basically related (by her mother's marriage) to the in-universe equivalents of [[spoilers:Hitler and Mengele]]. Poor Fluttershy.
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*** despises her because of her poor flight skills, presumed cowardice, and very un-Pegasus-like interests,
*** has learned about her encounter with "Nosey" and is willing to accuse her of ''prostitution'' based upon this, and
*** is willing to malign her ''friends'' (specifically, Rainbow Dash and Rarity) in support of his spurious accusations.
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* ItsAllThereInTheManual: Some key aspects of Fluttershy's life, motives and relatives are revealed in Jordan179's FIMFiction Blog and his comments on other blogs.
** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself''.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/256710/sexual-orientation-and-behavior-of-the-mane-six-in-context "Sexual Orientation and Behavior of the Mane Six, In Context"]] makes it likely that Fluttershy's [[TwoGirlRomanticFriendship Two Mare Romantic Friendship]] with Rainbow Dash is somewhat sexual at least on Fluttershy's part, largely because Fluttershy may be bisexual ([[spoiler:a Changeling tendency]]) and even more afraid of stallions than she is of mares. It also makes plain that Rainbow Dash may reciprocate but be too afraid of showing softer emotions to act upon it. Crippling shyness and emotional obliviousness are not the best combination for romantic happiness!
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** WordOfGod in comments to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bad+Horse Bad Horse]] that the events of "[[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut Fluttershy's Night Out]]" are part of Jordan179's Fluttershy backstory [[spoiler:as a teenager she was cruelly seduced, used and abandoned by a callous stallion]] which further explains why she's so terribly shy ''and'' afraid to seek a stallion. (This also makes Fluttershy's critical attitude toward her mother's actions somewhat [[{{Hypocrisy}} hypocritical]], while adding emphasis to why this disturbs her so much: Fluttershy is actually also criticizing ''herself''.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/256710/sexual-orientation-and-behavior-of-the-mane-six-in-context "Sexual Orientation and Behavior of the Mane Six, In Context"]] makes it likely that Fluttershy's [[TwoGirlRomanticFriendship Two Mare Romantic Friendship]] with Rainbow Dash is somewhat sexual at least on Fluttershy's part, largely because Fluttershy may be bisexual ([[spoiler:a Changeling tendency]]) and even more afraid of stallions than she is of mares. It also makes plain that Rainbow Dash may reciprocate but be too afraid of showing softer emotions to act upon it. Crippling shyness and emotional obliviousness are not the best combination for romantic happiness!
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* MysteriousParent: Fluttershy knows that she was sired by [[spoiler:a Changeling of Hive Chrysalis. She does not know ''which'' Changeling. Or ''why'' Changelings want to sire foals on Ponies in the first place]]. This is very obviously an other horseshoe waiting to be dropped.
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* HarsherInHindsight: WordOfGod indicates that the author includes Bad Horse's [[Fanfic/FluttershysNightOut "Fluttershy's Night Out"]] in his Fluttershy fanon. He did so ''after'' writing this fanfic. Fluttershy thinks this about her mother
-->There she had an unexpected encounter. It had not been her old coltfriend, of that she was quickly certain, yet somehow she thought it was. And she had lain with him on the top of the old hill, between the standing stones; lain in adultery with a strange stallion chance-met in a wild place. Romantic, and deeply-unhinged, indeed.
-> but, if "Fluttershy's Night Out" is taken as true, then she could as easily be thinking this about herself. Poor Fluttershy.
-->There she had an unexpected encounter. It had not been her old coltfriend, of that she was quickly certain, yet somehow she thought it was. And she had lain with him on the top of the old hill, between the standing stones; lain in adultery with a strange stallion chance-met in a wild place. Romantic, and deeply-unhinged, indeed.
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-->There she had an unexpected encounter. It had not been her old coltfriend, of that she was quickly certain, yet somehow she thought it was. And she had lain with him on the top of the old hill, between the standing stones; lain in adultery with a strange stallion chance-met in a wild place. Romantic, and deeply-unhinged, indeed.
-> but, if "Fluttershy's Night Out" is taken as true, then she could as easily be thinking this about herself. Poor Fluttershy.
-->There she had an unexpected encounter. It had not been her old coltfriend, of that she was quickly certain, yet somehow she thought it was. And she had lain with him on the top of the old hill, between the standing stones; lain in adultery with a strange stallion chance-met in a wild place. Romantic, and deeply-unhinged, indeed.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: Both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash benefit from this in-story.
** As a [[spoiler:half-Changeling EmotionEater]], Fluttershy can actually [[spoiler:drain life force from those who feel positive affect toward her]]. For the obvious reasons, she tries to use this ability as sparingly as possible.
** When the Shadow is prowling around Rainbow Dash's sleeping mind, the scent of Fluttershy lying down next to her causes Rainbow Dash to feel positive affect, which drives off the Shadow.
** As a [[spoiler:half-Changeling EmotionEater]], Fluttershy can actually [[spoiler:drain life force from those who feel positive affect toward her]]. For the obvious reasons, she tries to use this ability as sparingly as possible.
** When the Shadow is prowling around Rainbow Dash's sleeping mind, the scent of Fluttershy lying down next to her causes Rainbow Dash to feel positive affect, which drives off the Shadow.
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* EmbodimentOfVirtue: Surprisingly (given that they are VitriolicBestBuds) Applejack appears to be this to Rainbow Dash.
--> I could talk to someone who's deeply moral! she realized. I could talk to Applejack!
--> I could talk to someone who's deeply moral! she realized. I could talk to Applejack!
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* TheCloudcuckoolanderWasRight: Fluttershy's mother is in fact crazy. She also believes that [[spoiler:there are insect-like creatures who can take Pony form and that one of them sired Fluttershy on her. She is absolutely correct in both assertions]].
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* TheCloudcuckoolanderWasRight: Two examples in-story.
** Fluttershy's mother is in fact crazy. She also believes that [[spoiler:there are insect-like creatures who can take Pony form and that one of them sired Fluttershy on her. She is absolutely correct in bothassertions]].assertions]].
** Fluttershy herself makes seemingly-insane claims. Even her best friend Rainbow Dash doesn't believe them. Thing is, [[spoiler:she knows one thing which means that her story of barely escaping the Changelings, and by implication of ''being'' half-Changeling herself, is probably true. She knows the name "Chrysalis"]].
** Fluttershy's mother is in fact crazy. She also believes that [[spoiler:there are insect-like creatures who can take Pony form and that one of them sired Fluttershy on her. She is absolutely correct in both
** Fluttershy herself makes seemingly-insane claims. Even her best friend Rainbow Dash doesn't believe them. Thing is, [[spoiler:she knows one thing which means that her story of barely escaping the Changelings, and by implication of ''being'' half-Changeling herself, is probably true. She knows the name "Chrysalis"]].
