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* AdaptationalVillainy: A minor example with Caster's original Master. In the source material, few details are given about him, but the reason Caster killed him for the first place apparently was due to him disrespecting her and constantly trying to humiliate her. In this version, he apparently tried to use his Command Spells to ''rape'' her. However, this could be a case of UnreliableNarrator, seeing how [[PlayingTheVictimCard Caster is the one narrating the tale]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: A minor example with Caster's original Master. Master Atrum Gallista. In the source material, few details are given about him, but the reason Caster killed him for the first place apparently was due to him disrespecting her and constantly trying to humiliate her.her with the UBW anime establishing him as an amoral scumbag of a magus. In this version, he apparently tried to use his Command Spells to ''rape'' her. However, this could be a case of UnreliableNarrator, seeing how [[PlayingTheVictimCard Caster is the one narrating the tale]].
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Avenger's civilian attire is similar to Saber's in LightNovel/FateZero, only with reversed colors (black blouse with white pants and jacket) and CoolShades.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Avenger's civilian attire is similar to Saber's in LightNovel/FateZero, Literature/FateZero, only with reversed colors (black blouse with white pants and jacket) and CoolShades.
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** At the beginning of the first chapter, Ben, while arriving to the city, read his report on the event at Fuyuki City, including a list of all Masters in LightNovel/FateZero and the various way their bodies were found (or, in Waver's case, not found).
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** At the beginning of the first chapter, Ben, while arriving to the city, read his report on the event at Fuyuki City, including a list of all Masters in LightNovel/FateZero Literature/FateZero and the various way their bodies were found (or, in Waver's case, not found).
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-->'''Ilya''': "No fair! Something so cute shouldn't have [[MakeMeWannaShout such a strong attack]]! Cheater!"
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-->'''Ilya''': "No fair! Something so cute shouldn't have [[MakeMeWannaShout [[SuperScream such a strong attack]]! Cheater!"
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** Again in chapter 5, when Rin finds him bearing an unconcious Saber in his arms.
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** Again in chapter 5, when Rin finds him bearing an unconcious unconscious Saber in his arms.
