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* ButThouMust: A voice tells Noria to go to the Overmare’s Office, through the Atrium. Noria decides that she wants to go to the Pipbuck Storage Area first, but the voice just tells her to go the Overmare’s Office.
-->'''Noria''': Great, I can't go where I want to.
-->'''Noria''': Great, I can't go where I want to.
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* XMeetsY: The story is like Fallout meets Alan Wake.
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-->[[spoiler: Cadence]]: I know in my heart, you'll do the right thing...\\
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-->[[spoiler: Cadence]]: I know in my heart, you'll do the right thing...\\
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* AccidentalInnuendo:
-->'''Trinity:''' Never mind, awesome job! Let's go see if we can get off!\\
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'''What! I meant what we can get off! Meaning the terminal!
* AccidentalPun: Concerning the Crystal Heart
** [[spoiler: Cadence]]: I know in my heart, you'll do the right thing...\\
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[[spoiler: Cadence]]: I made a punny. Ohhh [[spoiler: Cadence...]] You still got it...
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-->[[spoiler: Cadence]]: I know in my heart, you'll do the right thing...\\
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Sleet Gray is being mentally tortured by the Darkness, throwing all of her mistakes and the worst parts of her life at her, to try and make her too weak to fight back. Her response...
** ''The image of her mother lying frozen and shattered on the Wasteland dirt flashes through Sleet's mind. "My mother is dead; I killed her, her and everypony else I ever knew. You will not use their voices against me!" By this point she's screaming, her actual voice cutting through the illusions around her. "NOW GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD!"''
** ''The image of her mother lying frozen and shattered on the Wasteland dirt flashes through Sleet's mind. "My mother is dead; I killed her, her and everypony else I ever knew. You will not use their voices against me!" By this point she's screaming, her actual voice cutting through the illusions around her. "NOW GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD!"''
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* YourMindMakesItReal: The Darkness’ illusions, if you’re not smart enough to see through them.
* XMeetsY: The story is like ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' meets ''VideoGame/AlanWake''.
* XMeetsY: The story is like ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' meets ''VideoGame/AlanWake''.
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* YourMindMakesItReal: The Darkness’ illusions, if you’re not smart enough to see through them.
* XMeetsY: The story is like ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' meets ''VideoGame/AlanWake''.them.
* XMeetsY: The story is like ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' meets ''VideoGame/AlanWake''.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The members of the expedition all come from radically different backgrounds, are all over the place, and all have their own reasons and motivations for being there.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The members of the expedition all come from radically different backgrounds, are all over the place, backgrounds and all have their own reasons and motivations for being there.
* ShipTease: Nero and Trinity.
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* TokenRomance: Nero and Trinity.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/173598/fallout-equestria-shadows-in-the-dark Shadows in the Dark]] is a RecursiveFanfiction for FalloutEquestria. It is a fanfiction adaption of a small roleplay on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/ Fimfiction.net]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/173598/fallout-equestria-shadows-in-the-dark Shadows in the Dark]] is a RecursiveFanfiction for FalloutEquestria.Fanfic/FalloutEquestria. It is a fanfiction adaption of a small roleplay on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/ Fimfiction.net]].
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* XMeetsY: The story is like Fallout meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].
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* XMeetsY: The story is like Fallout ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].''VideoGame/AlanWake''.
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* Cloud Cuckoolander: Trinity, you are so random.
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* Cloud Cuckoolander: CloudCuckoolander: Trinity, you are so random.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: Trinity, you are so random.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: Cloud Cuckoolander: Trinity, you are so random.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: Trinity, you are so random.
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* GenkiGirl: Trinity, you are so random.
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-->''Noria:'' Great, I can't go where I want to.
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-->''Noria:'' ''Great, I can't go where I want to.''
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-->''Noria:'' ''Great, Great, I can't go where I want to.''
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** ''Noria: Great, I can't go where I want to.''
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** East Cost: Have fun, stay safe, and if a little blue marker disappears, and you hear my pained, foalish screams of terror, please tell Trinity to find a good necromancer.
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** When Lightning turns on the light on her Pipbuck, the light creates a safe zone of light for a radius of 85 centimetres from the Darkness. This is a reference to Byakuya Kuchiki’s Bankai from [[Bleach Bleach]], which has a safe zone of 85 centimetres.
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** When Lightning turns on the light on her Pipbuck, the light creates a safe zone of light for a radius of 85 centimetres from the Darkness. This is a reference to Byakuya Kuchiki’s Bankai from [[Bleach Bleach]], Bleach, which has a safe zone of 85 centimetres.
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** When Lightning turns on the light on her Pipbuck, the light creates a safe zone of light for a radius of 85 centimetres from the Darkness. This is a reference to Byakuya Kuchiki’s Bankai from Bleach, which has a safe zone of 85 centimetres.
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** When Lightning turns on the light on her Pipbuck, the light creates a safe zone of light for a radius of 85 centimetres from the Darkness. This is a reference to Byakuya Kuchiki’s Bankai from Bleach, [[Bleach Bleach]], which has a safe zone of 85 centimetres.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Mirage is extremely manipulative, condescending, and willing to kill the other members of the expedition if it means getting what she wants. Whenever she helps someone else, it’s ultimately just to help further her own goals.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Mirage is extremely manipulative, condescending, and is readily willing to kill the other members of the expedition if it means getting what she wants. Whenever she helps someone else, it’s ultimately just to help further her own goals.
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* GenkiGirl: Trinity, you are so... random.
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* GenkiGirl: Trinity, you are so... so random.
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* MindRape: How the Shadow operates if it doesn’t just try to kill you outright.
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* MindRape: How the Shadow operates chooses to operate if it doesn’t just try to kill you outright.
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* HopeSpot: At the end of the story: [[spoiler: ''The darkness within the stable met a permanent end here, at least here that is. There will always be a darkness in the cold of night, but at least for now... The boogeyman is gone.'']]
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* HopeSpot: At the end of the story: story:
** [[spoiler: ''The darkness within the stable met a permanent end here, at least here that is. There will always be a darkness in the cold of night, but at least for now... The boogeyman is gone.'']]
** [[spoiler: ''The darkness within the stable met a permanent end here, at least here that is. There will always be a darkness in the cold of night, but at least for now... The boogeyman is gone.'']]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: The Crystal Heart is successfully retrieved, and its healing magic will likely go a long way to restoring Equestria to what it once was, but almost all of the ponies sent to find it are killed, and the two survivors are both haunted by what they experienced, in two different ways.]]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: The Crystal Heart is successfully retrieved, and its healing magic will likely go a long way to restoring Equestria to what it once was, but almost all of the ponies sent to find it are killed, and the two survivors are both haunted by what they experienced, experienced for the rest of their lives, in two different ways.]]
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** ''Noria: Great, I can't go where I want to.''
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Sleet Gray.
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* DemonicPossession: A piece of the Darkness becomes a part of Sleet Gray after she tries to freeze it. [[spoiler: It's the only bit of the Darkness to survive when the stable is destroyed.]]
** Gives her a perk.
*** Scarred by the Abyss: You've looked into the Abyss, and it's looked into you. And like it or not, it raped you with its eyes. You will no longer be threatened by any sort of dark manifestation. They see you as one of them, because you kind of are. Your body is warped due to your exposure.\\
When at full hp, it will simply look like a very odd splash of black coating. It will look natural... Almost.\\
At 3/4ths hp it will begin to look like a shadow has been cast on those areas of your body.\\
At 1/2hp it will begin to actively avoid light by spreading across your body, you will also hear the voice of the void.\\
At 1/4 hp it will bubble in light and actively shift around in the areas where you are tainted.\\
At 10% hp it will grow tendrils and attempt to kill any threat to it. Light, living things and it will not kill you, but it will attempt to knock you unconscious for your own safety.\\
At 5 % hp it will engulf your entire body, and take over, using your body for as long as it takes for you to regenerate to a quarter of your hp, or until sunrise, whichever comes first. You will have no active memory of the things you do in this state, but you may relive them in nightmares or be forced to remember them by your shadow half.\\
You will have persistent nightmares until the day you die, and perhaps not even then will they stop.\\
You also have a connection with the void. This gives you a multitude of powers you don't fully understand or can control.\\
You have a shadow half of yourself effectively giving you schizophrenia. It always sees the worst in you, brings out the worst in you, but is not overtly evil to you, or anyone else. It's only purpose is to make you question all of your actions and truly hate yourself. It only ever tends to agree with you when your life is on the line.
** Gives her a perk.
*** Scarred by the Abyss: You've looked into the Abyss, and it's looked into you. And like it or not, it raped you with its eyes. You will no longer be threatened by any sort of dark manifestation. They see you as one of them, because you kind of are. Your body is warped due to your exposure.\\
When at full hp, it will simply look like a very odd splash of black coating. It will look natural... Almost.\\
At 3/4ths hp it will begin to look like a shadow has been cast on those areas of your body.\\
At 1/2hp it will begin to actively avoid light by spreading across your body, you will also hear the voice of the void.\\
At 1/4 hp it will bubble in light and actively shift around in the areas where you are tainted.\\
At 10% hp it will grow tendrils and attempt to kill any threat to it. Light, living things and it will not kill you, but it will attempt to knock you unconscious for your own safety.\\
At 5 % hp it will engulf your entire body, and take over, using your body for as long as it takes for you to regenerate to a quarter of your hp, or until sunrise, whichever comes first. You will have no active memory of the things you do in this state, but you may relive them in nightmares or be forced to remember them by your shadow half.\\
You will have persistent nightmares until the day you die, and perhaps not even then will they stop.\\
You also have a connection with the void. This gives you a multitude of powers you don't fully understand or can control.\\
You have a shadow half of yourself effectively giving you schizophrenia. It always sees the worst in you, brings out the worst in you, but is not overtly evil to you, or anyone else. It's only purpose is to make you question all of your actions and truly hate yourself. It only ever tends to agree with you when your life is on the line.
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* NonPlayerCharacter:
** Quick Buck- An earth pony merchant of the unsavoury type. He financed this whole venture. It's clear he's hiding something though, something more than perhaps a shady past.
*** East Coast- A unicorn scientist and doctor joined the expedition in the hope of getting the stable up and running to use as a sort of massive clinic. He wears a Followers of Fluttershy lab coat with armored plates.
**** Trinity- An awkward, brash unicorn mare who seems to follow East wherever he may go. She apparently is his assistant and is far less opposed to violence then her employer. She's a cyberpony with cybernetics that redefine advanced.
***** Debonaire- A genius, millionaire, philanthropist with a flair for old word clothing, this unicorn seemingly is here to remind Buck that Debonaire did more than most of the actual financing for this trip, and that Buck simply brought everyone together. Whenever asked about the purpose for the excursion he always laughed warmly and cleverly changed the subject.
****** Mirage- Brilliant, seductive, pragmatic, and bitchy are great words to describe this Zebra scientist. She spent most of her time arguing with East Coast, then trying to sleep with him. She's a beauty with a brain and never answered why she was on this expedition.
******* Diamond Pick- A looney old cutter who led everyone in. There seemed nothing wrong with this tannish unicorn besides the way he didn't want to be anywhere near this place, and frequently talked about how many ponies came looking for this place and never returned.
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** Nero- A male unicorn cyberpony.
*** Lightning- A pegasus mare cyberpony.
**** Noria- An earth pony mare cyberpony, with cybernetics more advanced than any other.
***** Sleet Gray- A pegasus mare, who keeps her wings hidden under a coat sleeve.
****** Sky Lock- A changeling.
** Quick Buck- An earth pony merchant of the unsavoury type. He financed this whole venture. It's clear he's hiding something though, something more than perhaps a shady past.
*** East Coast- A unicorn scientist and doctor joined the expedition in the hope of getting the stable up and running to use as a sort of massive clinic. He wears a Followers of Fluttershy lab coat with armored plates.
**** Trinity- An awkward, brash unicorn mare who seems to follow East wherever he may go. She apparently is his assistant and is far less opposed to violence then her employer. She's a cyberpony with cybernetics that redefine advanced.
***** Debonaire- A genius, millionaire, philanthropist with a flair for old word clothing, this unicorn seemingly is here to remind Buck that Debonaire did more than most of the actual financing for this trip, and that Buck simply brought everyone together. Whenever asked about the purpose for the excursion he always laughed warmly and cleverly changed the subject.
****** Mirage- Brilliant, seductive, pragmatic, and bitchy are great words to describe this Zebra scientist. She spent most of her time arguing with East Coast, then trying to sleep with him. She's a beauty with a brain and never answered why she was on this expedition.
******* Diamond Pick- A looney old cutter who led everyone in. There seemed nothing wrong with this tannish unicorn besides the way he didn't want to be anywhere near this place, and frequently talked about how many ponies came looking for this place and never returned.
* PlayerCharacter:
** Nero- A male unicorn cyberpony.
*** Lightning- A pegasus mare cyberpony.
**** Noria- An earth pony mare cyberpony, with cybernetics more advanced than any other.
***** Sleet Gray- A pegasus mare, who keeps her wings hidden under a coat sleeve.
****** Sky Lock- A changeling.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Sleet Gray is being mentally tortured by the Darkness, throwing all of her mistakes and the worst parts of her life at her, to try and make her too weak to fight back. Her response...
** ''The image of her mother lying frozen and shattered on the Wasteland dirt flashes through Sleet's mind. "My mother is dead; I killed her, her and everypony else I ever knew. You will not use their voices against me!" By this point she's screaming, her actual voice cutting through the illusions around her. "NOW GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD!"''
** ''The image of her mother lying frozen and shattered on the Wasteland dirt flashes through Sleet's mind. "My mother is dead; I killed her, her and everypony else I ever knew. You will not use their voices against me!" By this point she's screaming, her actual voice cutting through the illusions around her. "NOW GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD!"''
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The members of the expedition all come from radically different backgrounds, are all over the place, and all have their own reasons and motivations for being there.
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* BlackComedy:
** East Cost: Have fun, stay safe, and if a little blue marker disappears, and you hear my pained, foalish screams of terror, please tell Trinity to find a good necromancer.
** East Cost: Have fun, stay safe, and if a little blue marker disappears, and you hear my pained, foalish screams of terror, please tell Trinity to find a good necromancer.
