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* AdaptationalBadass: It is clear that in this version Ash didn't TookALevelInDumbass when he traveled to Unova. He even menaged to reach the final, only losing to N due to him using [[OlympusMons Reshiram]].

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* AdaptationalBadass: It is clear that in this version Ash didn't TookALevelInDumbass when he traveled to Unova. He even menaged managed to reach the final, only losing to N due to him using [[OlympusMons Reshiram]].



** N, while still being a WellIntentionedExtremist, is far more cruel than canon: he tries to kill Dawn, threatened Ash with a knife and uses a torture device to force Ash's Pokemon to fight for him.

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** N, while still being a WellIntentionedExtremist, is far more cruel than canon: he tries to kill Dawn, threatened Ash with a knife and uses a torture device to force Ash's Pokemon Pokémon to fight for him.



* BadAssNormal: Alder and his Pokemon are fighting five-to-one against five of the Team Plasma Sages. To give his Pokemon a chance, he takes as many attacks as he can with his body, In the end, not only he wins, but he still has enough energy to punch Ghetsis.

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* BadAssNormal: Alder and his Pokemon Pokémon are fighting five-to-one against five of the Team Plasma Sages. To give his Pokemon a chance, he takes as many attacks as he can with his body, In the end, not only he wins, but he still has enough energy to punch Ghetsis.



* ClingyJealousGirl: Subverted. Dawn mostly finds Ash getting embarassed by Cynthia's vicinity ''exhilaranting''.

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* ClingyJealousGirl: Subverted. Dawn mostly finds Ash getting embarassed embarrassed by Cynthia's vicinity ''exhilaranting''.''exhilarating''.



* CprCleanPrettyReliable: Averted: when Cynthia has to perform it on Ash, the boy throws up twice, and they still have to bring him to a hospital, while fearing he might have suffered brain damage due to briefly dieing.

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* CprCleanPrettyReliable: Averted: when Cynthia has to perform it on Ash, the boy throws up twice, and they still have to bring him to a hospital, while fearing he might have suffered brain damage due to briefly dieing.dying.



* SlaveMook: When it is time to fight the Unova Elite Four, N uses the Pokemon he stole from Ash, forcing them to fight with soundwaves that cause them pain. Then, in his fight with Alder, he does the same thing with the Pokemon he took from the Elite Four.

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* SlaveMook: When it is time to fight the Unova Elite Four, N uses the Pokemon Pokémon he stole from Ash, forcing them to fight with soundwaves that cause them pain. Then, in his fight with Alder, he does the same thing with the Pokemon Pokémon he took from the Elite Four.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Dawn was never a slouch in battling, but training with Alder and Cynthia made her formidable enough she and her team single handely rescue Ash from Team Plasma airship.
* UndyingLoyalty: Ash and Dawn has this for each other, and that's before they realize they are in love.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After his hideout has been conquered, Giovanni disbands Team Rocket and escape capture.

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* TookALevelInBadass: Dawn was never a slouch in battling, but training with Alder and Cynthia made her formidable enough she for her and her team Team to single handely handedly rescue Ash from Team Plasma Plasma's airship.
* UndyingLoyalty: Ash and Dawn has have this for each other, and that's before they realize they are in love.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After his hideout has been conquered, Giovanni disbands Team Rocket and escape escapes capture.
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* SlaveMook: When is time to fight the Unova Elite Four, N uses the Pokemon he stole from Ash, forcing them to fight with soundwaves that cause them pain. Then, in his fight with Alder, he does the same thing with the Pokemon he took from the Elite Four.

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* SlaveMook: When it is time to fight the Unova Elite Four, N uses the Pokemon he stole from Ash, forcing them to fight with soundwaves that cause them pain. Then, in his fight with Alder, he does the same thing with the Pokemon he took from the Elite Four.
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* OneDialogueTwoConversations: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.

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* OneDialogueTwoConversations: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave give him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.
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* TheMentor: While they are on a mission at the Silph Co., Sabrina helps Ash develops his Aura abilities.

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* TheMentor: While they are on a mission at the Silph Co., Sabrina helps Ash develops develop his Aura abilities.
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* LikesOlderWomen: While Ash's true feelings are clearly for Dawn, he also founds Cynthia attractive. According to Sabrina, he even occasionally dreams about the champion.

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* LikesOlderWomen: While Ash's true feelings are clearly for Dawn, he also founds finds Cynthia attractive. According to Sabrina, he even occasionally dreams about the champion.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Lance,Cilan,N,Ghetsis]] and, by the end of the story [[spoiler:Delia]].

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Lance,Cilan,N,Ghetsis]] [[spoiler:Lance, Cilan, N, Ghetsis]] and, by the end of the story [[spoiler:Delia]].
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* ForcedIntoEvil: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]]. When they were young, their parents died, and Ghetsis took them, allowing them to not being separated into different foster homes. Both for this and the fear they fell towards him, they accepted to work for him.

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* ForcedIntoEvil: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]]. When they were young, their parents died, and Ghetsis took them, allowing them to not being separated into different foster homes. Both for this and the fear they fell felt towards him, they accepted to work for him.
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** Dawn actually suggests to let the two teams wore each other out and then attack the weakened winner. Cynthia and Alder refuses, because they are afraid the winner would have both dragons at that point, making it too powerful.

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** Dawn actually suggests to let the two teams wore wear each other out and then attack the weakened winner. Cynthia and Alder refuses, refuse, because they are afraid the winner would have both dragons at that point, making it them too powerful.
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* CprCleanPrettyReliable: Averted: when Cynthia has to perform it on Ash, the boy throws up twice, and they still have to bring him to a hospital, while fearing he might have suffered brain damage due to briefly diying.

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* CprCleanPrettyReliable: Averted: when Cynthia has to perform it on Ash, the boy throws up twice, and they still have to bring him to a hospital, while fearing he might have suffered brain damage due to briefly diying.dieing.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one who planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.

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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one who planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an a HeroicSacrifice.
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A party is being held in Pewter City to honor Ash after he came second place in the Unove League. Unfortunately, the boy is feeling there nothing to celebrate about yet another failure. Things get much worse after a bomb planted by Team Plasma to kill him instead claims other victims. With no other choice, Ash has to join a group to stop them. Of course, there is no way Dawn isn't going to help him.

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A party is being held in Pewter City to honor Ash after he came second place in the Unove League. Unfortunately, the boy is feeling there is nothing to celebrate about yet another failure. Things get much worse after a bomb planted by Team Plasma to kill him instead claims other victims. With no other choice, Ash has to join a group to stop them. Of course, there is no way Dawn isn't going to help him.
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* MithologyGag: The dress Dawn wears while under cover are those of the female protagonist of Black and White.

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* MithologyGag: MythologyGag: The dress Dawn wears while under cover are those of the female protagonist of Black and White.

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* MithologyGag: The dress Dawn wears while under cover are those of the female protagonist of Black and White.



* ShoutOut: When Ash and Dawn go under cover in the Nimbasa museum, they use the fake names [[Francise/{{Batman}} Dick Grayson and Barbara Gordon]].

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* ShoutOut: When Ash and Dawn go under cover in the Nimbasa museum, they use the fake names [[Francise/{{Batman}} [[ComicBook/BatMan Dick Grayson and Barbara Gordon]].


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* VillainExitStageLeft: After his hideout has been conquered, Giovanni disbands Team Rocket and escape capture.

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* CloakingDevice: Team Plasma has one, allowing them to strike with surprise. [[spoiler:They also use it on Reshiram during the battle with Ash.]]



** Dawn actually suggests to let the two teams wore each other out and then attack the weakened winner. Cynthia and Alder refuses, because they are afraid the winner would have both dragons at that point, making it too powerful.



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Lance,Cilan]] and, by the end of the story [[spoiler:Delia]].

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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Lance,Cilan]] [[spoiler:Lance,Cilan,N,Ghetsis]] and, by the end of the story [[spoiler:Delia]].


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* RejectedApology: Ash refuses to forgive [[spoiler:Cilan]] for bombing the Pewter City gym and making his mom fall into a coma.
* ShoutOut: When Ash and Dawn go under cover in the Nimbasa museum, they use the fake names [[Francise/{{Batman}} Dick Grayson and Barbara Gordon]].
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* ActionGirl: Cynthia in not only a great trainer, as usual, but is very capable of defeating people with their bare hands.

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* ActionGirl: Cynthia in not only a great trainer, as usual, but is very capable of defeating people with their her bare hands.
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* ActionGirl: Cynthia in not only a great trainer, as usual, but is very capable of defeating people with their bare hands.


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* EvilVsEvil: While fighting against the League, Team Rocket and Plasma are also at war with each other to gain control of the legendary dragons of Unova.


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* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: The members of the league are not above using it.

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* CripplingOverspecialization: Alder and the Elite Four trained specifically to contrast Reshiram. So when N uses a completely different team, it throws them for a loop, allowing him to defeat all five.



* LookedOutOfTheLoop: Since she wasn't present for much of Ash's Unova journey, Dawn has no idea the TerribleTrio she knew in Sinnoh has TookALevelInBadass. Ash quickly informs her.

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* LookedOutOfTheLoop: LockedOutOfTheLoop: Since she wasn't present for much of Ash's Unova journey, Dawn has no idea the TerribleTrio she knew in Sinnoh has TookALevelInBadass. Ash quickly informs her.


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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Ghetsis orders Reshiram to use Hyper Beam on Ash with the intent of killing him. However the attack strucks the Black Stone, which absorbs it, giving it enough energy to morph into Zekrom.


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* TookALevelInBadass: Dawn was never a slouch in battling, but training with Alder and Cynthia made her formidable enough she and her team single handely rescue Ash from Team Plasma airship.
* UndyingLoyalty: Ash and Dawn has this for each other, and that's before they realize they are in love.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Ash saves Dawn, Alder, Cynthia, Lenona and Burgh from a Plasma ambush.
** In Chapter 12, Dawn mounts an assault on the Plasma airship, where Ash was being kept prisoner and rescues him.



* CprCleanPrettyReliable: Averted: when Cynthia has to perform it on Ash, the boy throws up twice, and they still have to bring him to a hospital, while fearing he might have suffered brain damage due to briefly diying.
* FailureHero: As the title says, Ash feels this way for much of the story: at first for losing yet another league, and then due to his inability to keep his loved ones safe from Team Plasma.



* LikesOlderWomen: While Ash's true feelings are clearly for Dawn, he also founds Cynthia attractive. According to Sabrina, he also occasionally dreams about her.

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* LikesOlderWomen: While Ash's true feelings are clearly for Dawn, he also founds Cynthia attractive. According to Sabrina, he also even occasionally dreams about the champion.
* LookedOutOfTheLoop: Since she wasn't present for much of Ash's Unova journey, Dawn has no idea the TerribleTrio she knew in Sinnoh has TookALevelInBadass. Ash quickly informs
her.



* WouldHurtAChild: No member of Team Plasma has trouble attacking, hurting or trying to kill Ash and Dawn.

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* SlaveMook: When is time to fight the Unova Elite Four, N uses the Pokemon he stole from Ash, forcing them to fight with soundwaves that cause them pain. Then, in his fight with Alder, he does the same thing with the Pokemon he took from the Elite Four.
* WouldHurtAChild: No member of Team Plasma or Rocket has trouble attacking, hurting or trying to kill Ash and Dawn.
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* AdaptationalWimp: Unlike canon, Krokorok hasn't evolved by the end of Ash's Unova journey. Ash still brings it when he is told to make his best team [[spoiler:SubvertedTrope and it finally evolved during a battle with Team Rocket]].

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* AdaptationalWimp: Unlike canon, Krokorok hasn't evolved by the end of Ash's Unova journey. Ash still brings it when he is told to make his best team [[spoiler:SubvertedTrope [[spoiler: and it finally evolved during a battle with Team Rocket]].
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Subverted. Dawn mostly finds Ash getting embarassed by Cynthia's vicinity ''exhilaranting''.
* ForcedIntoEvil: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]]. When they were young, their parents died, and Ghetsis took them, allowing them to not being separated into different foster homes. Both for this and the fear they fell towards him, they accepted to work for him.



* HeroicSacrifice: When the bomb in the Pewter City Gym goes off, Lance protects Delia with his body, getting crushed by rubble.



* JustAKid: Alder is initially against the idea of letting Ash and Dawn join them, since they are only ten years old. Later he warms up to the idea, [[spoiler:but he still tries to defeat N while the two aren't here.]]
* LikesOlderWomen: While Ash's true feelings are clearly for Dawn, he also founds Cynthia attractive. According to Sabrina, he also occasionally dreams about her.



* OneDialogueTwoConversations: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.

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* OneDialogueTwoConversations: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.wild.
* WouldHurtAChild: No member of Team Plasma has trouble attacking, hurting or trying to kill Ash and Dawn.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.

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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh who planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.
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* TheGadfy: Much to Ash's surprise, Sabrina is now this. Cynthia explains it is a way to live a second childhood, since she didn't get it the first time.
* HalfOfTheManHeUsedToBe: While trying to protect Dawn and Alder, [[spoiler:Cilan]] is cut at the waist by a Night Slash.

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* TheGadfy: TheGadfly: Much to Ash's surprise, Sabrina is now this. Cynthia explains it is a way to live a second childhood, since she didn't get it the first time.
* HalfOfTheManHeUsedToBe: HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: While trying to protect Dawn and Alder, [[spoiler:Cilan]] is cut at the waist by a Night Slash.



* OneDialogueTwoConversation: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.

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* OneDialogueTwoConversation: OneDialogueTwoConversations: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]] are the Shadow Triad of his Plasma. However, they are ForcedIntoVillainy by a combination of fear and gratitude toward Ghetsis.

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]] are the Shadow Triad of his Plasma. However, they are ForcedIntoVillainy ForcedIntoEvil by a combination of fear and gratitude toward Ghetsis.



* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.

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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.HeroicSacrifice.
* BadAssAbnormal: Ash learns how to control his Aura to create energy shields and sense other people's presence.
* BadAssNormal: Alder and his Pokemon are fighting five-to-one against five of the Team Plasma Sages. To give his Pokemon a chance, he takes as many attacks as he can with his body, In the end, not only he wins, but he still has enough energy to punch Ghetsis.
* TheGadfy: Much to Ash's surprise, Sabrina is now this. Cynthia explains it is a way to live a second childhood, since she didn't get it the first time.
* HalfOfTheManHeUsedToBe: While trying to protect Dawn and Alder, [[spoiler:Cilan]] is cut at the waist by a Night Slash.
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Lance,Cilan]] and, by the end of the story [[spoiler:Delia]].
* TheMentor: While they are on a mission at the Silph Co., Sabrina helps Ash develops his Aura abilities.
* OneDialogueTwoConversation: When N and Pikachu meet after Team Plasma kidnap the Pokemon, N promises him he will bring Pikachu back to his friends. Of course, Pikachu thinks that he means to gave him back to Ash, while N wants to release him in the wild.
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* AdaptationalBadass: It is clear that in this version Ash didn't TookALevelInDumbass when he traveled to Unova. He even menaged to reach the final, only losing to N due to him using [[OlympusMon Reshiram]].

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* AdaptationalBadass: It is clear that in this version Ash didn't TookALevelInDumbass when he traveled to Unova. He even menaged to reach the final, only losing to N due to him using [[OlympusMon [[OlympusMons Reshiram]].



* AdaptationalVillany: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]] are the Shadow Triad of his Plasma. However, they are ForcedIntoVillany by a combination of fear and gratitude toward Ghetsis.

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* AdaptationalVillany: AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]] are the Shadow Triad of his Plasma. However, they are ForcedIntoVillany ForcedIntoVillainy by a combination of fear and gratitude toward Ghetsis.



* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HellFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.

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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HellFaceTurn HeelFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.
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A party is being held in Pewter City to honor Ash after he came second place in the Unove League. Unfortunately, the boy is feeling there nothing to celebrate about yet another failure. Things get much worse after a bomb planted by Team Plasma to kill him instead claims other victims. With no other choice, Ash has to join a group to stop them. Of course, there is no way Dawn isn't going to help him.

* AdaptationalBadass: It is clear that in this version Ash didn't TookALevelInDumbass when he traveled to Unova. He even menaged to reach the final, only losing to N due to him using [[OlympusMon Reshiram]].
** Ash's Pokemon are strong enough to defeat the Unova Elite Four. Unfortunately, they are [[spoiler:being controlled by N]].
* AdaptationalVillany: [[spoiler:Cilan and his brothers]] are the Shadow Triad of his Plasma. However, they are ForcedIntoVillany by a combination of fear and gratitude toward Ghetsis.
** N, while still being a WellIntentionedExtremist, is far more cruel than canon: he tries to kill Dawn, threatened Ash with a knife and uses a torture device to force Ash's Pokemon to fight for him.
* AdaptationalWimp: Unlike canon, Krokorok hasn't evolved by the end of Ash's Unova journey. Ash still brings it when he is told to make his best team [[spoiler:SubvertedTrope and it finally evolved during a battle with Team Rocket]].
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Cilan is one of the Shadow Triad, and the one woh planted the bomb that killed Lance and put Delia into a come]]. After seeing Ash's resolve, he pulls a HellFaceTurn and starts helping the heroes, even performing an HeroicSacrifice.

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