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* HeroesPreferSwords: Ben uses the pharaoh's ''khopesh'' to sabotage his shield generator, and arms himself with it to fight Captain Drexel during his escape. Elastamun is given a similar sword for the battle.

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* HeroesPreferSwords: Ben uses the pharaoh's ''khopesh'' to sabotage his shield generator, and arms himself with it to fight Captain Drexel during his escape. Elastamun is given a similar sword for the battle.battle, and Raht uses a larger sword in his powered state.
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* HeroicBSOD: Elastamun suffers one when witnessing Ahmed [[spoiler: mutated by Ghostfreak's corrodium beam like everyone else in Giza. He tries to cope by playing an Arghul flute, and recovers when observing a space station where Ghostfreak and the Tennysons were at the time.]]
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Ja'Kaal sneaks Ben (as Gray Matter) into the palace by attaching him to one of his arrows...and firing it at a drainpipe several yards away without Ben's weight affecting the arrow's trajectory.

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* CollectorOfTheStrange: Downplayed by Ahmed, who sells historical artifacts that museums donate to his curio shop when they can't be exhibited.



* DoingInTheWizard: Minor example when Ben asks how Undyyne is able to make energy spears. Initially it's played up as magic like her counterpart from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'', but she explains at the end that they come from an implant that can create HardLight constructs by thought, if on a limited scale.
* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: When Ben (as Ghostfreak) forces Rehk'Set to remove all his clothes and possessions, then his mask that made him look like an actual Thep Khufan. Taken further when doing this [[BalefulPolymorph turns him back into a human mummy]], and the mask itself shatters, [[SealedEvilInACan releasing the god of chaos]] who had used it to bond with his host.]]

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* DoingInTheWizard: Minor example when Ben asks how Undyyne is able to make energy spears. Initially it's played up as magic like her counterpart from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'', but she explains at the end that [[spoiler: they come from an implant that can create HardLight constructs by thought, if on a limited scale.
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* DramaticUnmask: DramaticUnmask:
** Near the beginning when Elias Amsude returns to [[spoiler: his lair under the Khafre satellite pyramid and removes his human disguise, revealing himself to be the Thep Khufan Elastamun.]]
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[[spoiler: When Ben (as Ghostfreak) forces Rehk'Set to remove all his clothes and possessions, then his mask that made him look like an actual Thep Khufan. Taken further when doing this [[BalefulPolymorph turns him back into a human mummy]], and the mask itself shatters, [[SealedEvilInACan releasing the god of chaos]] who had used it to bond with his host.]]
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* PetTheDog: [[spoiler: After the gods assess Valensen's actions, they allow him to pass on to the afterlife regardless of his untimely death.]]

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* CallBack: Elastamun buys a pair of papyrus scrolls from Ahmed at the beginning and notices they were written as a journal by an unnamed source, describing Thep Khufans in Egypt at some point. [[spoiler: Rehk'Set's confession at the climax reveals that he wrote them while as a scribe to Ahmenhotep I, and [[StartOfDarkness sought his rise to power from there]].]]



* CoolSword: Ben uses the pharaoh's ''khopesh'' to sabotage his shield generator, and arms himself with it to fight Captain Drexel during his escape. Elastamun is given a similar sword for the battle.


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* HeroesPreferSwords: Ben uses the pharaoh's ''khopesh'' to sabotage his shield generator, and arms himself with it to fight Captain Drexel during his escape. Elastamun is given a similar sword for the battle.
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* CoolSword: Ben uses the pharaoh's ''khopesh'' to sabotage his shield generator, and arms himself with it to fight Captain Drexel during his escape. Elastamun is given a similar sword for the battle.
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* Mummy: Thep Khufans are a variant on this, being no more than a mask-like head that sprouts organic bandages to form bodies. [[spoiler: Rehk'Set transforms into a straight example when he takes off his mask.]]

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* Mummy: {{Mummy}}: Thep Khufans are a variant on this, being no more than a mask-like head that sprouts organic bandages to form bodies. [[spoiler: Rehk'Set transforms into a straight example when he takes off his mask.]]
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* Mummy: Thep Khufans are a variant on this, being no more than a mask-like head that sprouts organic bandages to form bodies. [[spoiler: Rehk'Set transforms into a straight example when he takes off his mask.]]
* MummyWrap: Valerian catches Ben this way upon breaking into the palace, and again by Skaraab to be escorted to the pharaoh.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The epilogue shows Elastamun and his new girlfriend Neferti tying up loose ends on Earth and spending a week-long vacation in Egypt, before returning to Anur Khufos for a new life together. The Tennysons' adventure is also recorded in statues and murals.

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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The epilogue shows Elastamun and his new girlfriend Neferti tying up loose ends on Earth and spending a week-long vacation in Egypt, before returning to Anur Khufos for a new life together. The Tennysons' adventure is also recorded in statues and murals.murals.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Undyyne has to compensate for this trope while training Ben in combat, and acts like a drill instructor during the session.

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* TheCity: Mos Isis, a thriving city whose inhabitants are allied with the resistance.



* CaptainErsatz:
** The four Golden Guard leaders are direct send-ups of Rapses' guardians from ''WesternAnimation/MummiesAlive''
** A Piscciss Volann soldier named Undyyne derives from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}''.
* TheCity: Mos Isis, a thriving city whose inhabitants are allied with the resistance.



* {{Expy}}:
** The four Golden Guard leaders are direct send-ups of Rapses' guardians from ''WesternAnimation/MummiesAlive''
** A Piscciss Volann soldier named Undyyne derives from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}''.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Ilais is assigned by the pharaoh to sneak aboard one of the resistance's speeders and cripple its cloaking device. Only thing is, she was told to infiltrate the one Ben was on, and mistakenly boards a different speeder, getting captured by its occupants in the process.
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* VoiceOfTheResistance: When the resistance finds a security room in the palace, Elastamun hijacks the pharaoh's video network to reveal the pharaoh's plans to the public, and promises the people that they will be free by sunrise.

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* VoiceOfTheResistance: When the resistance finds a security room in the palace, Elastamun hijacks the pharaoh's planet's video network to reveal the pharaoh's plans to the public, and promises the people that they will be free by sunrise.
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* HigherTechSpecies: The Transylians, Frankenstein-like aliens who recently introduced some of their technology to the Thep Khufans to rebuild their society after the Ectonurites enslaved it.

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* HigherTechSpecies: The Transylians, Frankenstein-like aliens who recently introduced some of their technology to the Thep Khufans to rebuild their society after the Ectonurites enslaved it.Ectonurite war.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: The Thep Khufans call their past enslavement by the Ectonurites a war.

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** The four Golden Guard leaders are direct send-ups of Ri

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** The four Golden Guard leaders are direct send-ups of RiRapses' guardians from ''WesternAnimation/MummiesAlive''
** A Piscciss Volann soldier named Undyyne derives from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}''.
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* TransformationSequence: The Golden Guard does this once Ben takes out the shield around the pharoah's palace. Marnor even jokes about how similar it is to how Ben uses the Omnitrix.

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* TransformationSequence: The Golden Guard does this once Ben takes out the shield around the pharoah's palace. Marnor even jokes lampshades about how similar it is to how Ben uses the Omnitrix.

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** The four Golden Guard leaders are direct send-ups of Rapses' guardians in ''WesternAnimation/MummiesAlive'', and Ben even tells them this similarity at the end of the story, having previously watched the actual cartoon.
** Similarly, the soldier Undyyne is basically the same character from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'', as a Ripjaws alien.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler: Rehk'Set has Valensen burned alive by a pyronite early in the story. Elastamun doesn't know this until the climax when the pharaoh [[WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied taunts him over it]].]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Just before Valensen [[spoiler: is hauled downstairs to be incinerated]], he tells the pharaoh that Set must possess him to have such a twisted idea of saving the planet. [[spoiler: Turns out, he was right.]]
* GodsHandsAreTied: Downplayed. The reason for Anur Khufos' weak culture is due to [[spoiler: the gods having decided not to appear to them for some time, on the grounds that they wanted to Anur Khufos to recover on its own after freeing it from the Ectonurites. They add that the existence of [[AllMythsAreTrue other powerful aliens on Earth posing as gods]] and Egypt forgetting its old culture was why the Egyptian gods didn't return to Earth. It's only by Gwen and Raht alerting them to Set's actions in the present that they finally show up at the end.]]
* GoldColoredSuperiority: The royalty and Golden Guard wear gold-colored ornaments and ornate headdresses. The latter also gain GoldenSuperMode when changing into their powered forms. [[spoiler: Ra also appears entirely golden at the end.]]
* GossipyHens: Valerian and Rel'Hathor, a pair of servants in the palace. Ben takes advantage of this when the former kidnaps him upon breaking in.

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** The four Golden Guard leaders are direct send-ups of Rapses' guardians in ''WesternAnimation/MummiesAlive'', and Ben even tells them this similarity at the end of the story, having previously watched the actual cartoon.
** Similarly, the soldier Undyyne is basically the same character from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'', as a Ripjaws alien.
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* FailedASpotCheck: HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Skaraab and Ilais work for pharaoh Rehk'Set has Valensen burned alive by a pyronite early in throughout the story. Elastamun doesn't know this until the climax But when Set takes over, they ally themselves with the pharaoh [[WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied taunts him over it]].]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Just before Valensen [[spoiler: is hauled downstairs to be incinerated]], he tells the pharaoh
heroes instead, knowing that Set must possess him would be impossible to have such a twisted idea of saving the planet. [[spoiler: Turns out, he was right.]]
* GodsHandsAreTied: Downplayed. The
reason for Anur Khufos' weak culture is due to [[spoiler: the gods having decided not to appear to them for some time, on the grounds that they wanted to Anur Khufos to recover on its own after freeing it from the Ectonurites. They add that the existence of [[AllMythsAreTrue other powerful aliens on Earth posing as gods]] and Egypt forgetting its old culture was why the Egyptian gods didn't return to Earth. It's only by Gwen and Raht alerting them to Set's actions in the present that they finally show up at the end.]]
* GoldColoredSuperiority: The royalty and Golden Guard wear gold-colored ornaments and ornate headdresses. The latter also gain GoldenSuperMode when changing into their powered forms. [[spoiler: Ra also appears entirely golden at the end.]]
* GossipyHens: Valerian and Rel'Hathor, a pair of servants in the palace. Ben takes advantage of this when the former kidnaps him upon breaking in.
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* EngineeredPublicConfession: Set up by the resistance, by [[ChekovsGun hacking some of the drones]] to broadcast the pharaoh's actions over the planet's video network.

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* EngineeredPublicConfession: Set up by the resistance, by [[ChekovsGun [[ChekhovsGun hacking some of the drones]] to broadcast the pharaoh's actions over the planet's video network.
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* VoiceOfTheResistance: When the resistance finds a security room in the palace, Elastamun hijacks the pharaoh's video network to reveal the pharaoh's plans to the public, and promises the people that they will be free by sunrise.

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* ScienceFantasy: Anur Khufos has shades of this. Egyptian culture and architecture is prominent, and magic is integral to that culture, but advanced technology is everywhere, ranging from speeders and plasma guns to computers and portals. Justified in HigherTechSpecies above.


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* SufficientlyAdvancedBambooTechnology: Anur Khufos has shades of this. Egyptian culture and architecture is prominent, and magic is integral to that culture, but advanced technology is everywhere, ranging from speeders and plasma guns to computers and portals. Justified in HigherTechSpecies above.

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* AndTheAdventureContinues: The story ends with the Tennysons returning to Cape Canaveral to continue their summer vacation, with Grandpa Max suggesting St. Louis as his next stop, leading to the last ''WesternAnimation/BenTen'' episode of Season 3.



* SequelHook: The story ends with the Tennysons returning to Cape Canaveral to continue their summer vacation, with Grandpa Max suggesting St. Louis as his next stop, leading to the last ''WesternAnimation/BenTen'' episode of Season 3.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Pharaoh Rho'Tep, who mysteriously died to be replaced with his nephew Rehk'Set. [[spoiler: Revealed later on that Set worked Rehnenset into his family as an adopted nephew called Rehk'Set, who eventually killed Rho'Tep to [[TyrantTakesTheHelm steal the throne for himself]].]]
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* Really700YearsOld: The pharaoh Rehk'Set turns out to actually be [[spoiler: A [[HumanAllAlong human scribe]] named Rehnenset, who worked for Ahmenhotep I, around 4,000 years ago. He had been made immortal and revived by Set shortly after his death, and made into a Thep Khufan to blend in.]]

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* Really700YearsOld: The pharaoh Rehk'Set turns out to actually be [[spoiler: A [[HumanAllAlong human scribe]] named Rehnenset, who worked for Ahmenhotep I, around 4,000 years ago. He had been made immortal and revived by Set shortly some time after his death, and made into a Thep Khufan to blend in.]]

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* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: When Ben (as Ghostfreak) forces Rehk'Set to remove his mask that made him look like an actual Thep Khufan. Taken further when doing this turns him back into a human mummy, and the mask itself shatters, [[SealedEvilInACan releasing the god of chaos]] who had used it to bond with his host.]]

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* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: When Ben (as Ghostfreak) forces Rehk'Set to remove all his clothes and possessions, then his mask that made him look like an actual Thep Khufan. Taken further when doing this [[BalefulPolymorph turns him back into a human mummy, mummy]], and the mask itself shatters, [[SealedEvilInACan releasing the god of chaos]] who had used it to bond with his host.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Just before Valensen [[spoiler: is hauled downstairs to be incinerated]], he remarks that Set must possess the pharaoh to have such a twisted idea of saving the planet [[spoiler: by kidnapping humans.]] [[spoiler: Turns out, he was right.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Just before Valensen [[spoiler: is hauled downstairs to be incinerated]], he remarks tells the pharaoh that Set must possess the pharaoh him to have such a twisted idea of saving the planet [[spoiler: by kidnapping humans.]] planet. [[spoiler: Turns out, he was right.]]


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* ShamefulStrip: Valensen is stripped of his robes and Horus-themed headgear [[spoiler: just before the pharaoh has him executed.]]


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* VillainBall: Rehk'Set holds it a third into the story, relying on a covert agent to cripple the resistance' flagship, rather than sending troops to thwart them. This gives the resistance grounds for attacking the palace in full force. He does show a bit of foresight when analyzing Ben Tennyson's background, though.

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* JumpedAtTheCall: On the 15th year of Elastamun's research mission, Valensen finally breaks the news to him of what's really happening on his planet, and what the mission was truly for. Elastamun had grown incredibly bored with modern Egypt up to that point, partly due to MiddleEasternTerrorists in the area.



* JumpedAtTheCall: On the 15th year of Elastamun's research mission, Valensen finally breaks the news to him of what's really happening on his planet, and what the mission was truly for. Elastamun had grown incredibly bored with modern Egypt up to that point, partly due to MiddleEasternTerrorists in the area.



* MotiveRant: [[spoiler: Set delivers one during the climax, saying he will destroy either Earth or Anur Khufos out of revenge for humanity distorting his image from Ra's protector to being the same as Apophis, [[EvenEvilHasStandards which even he dreads]]. Ben calls him a baby for that while inside a hover ship.]]

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* MotiveRant: [[spoiler: Set delivers one during the climax, saying he will destroy either Earth or Anur Khufos out of revenge for being left in the shadow of the other gods, and humanity distorting his image from Ra's protector to being the same as Apophis, [[EvenEvilHasStandards which even he dreads]]. Ben calls him a baby for that while inside a hover ship.]]



** The [[spoiler: Omni-gate]] operates like the ''Film/{{Stargate}}'', and makes the five tones from ''Film/CloseEncountersOfTheThirdKind'' when connecting to a location on Earth.

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** The [[spoiler: Omni-gate]] operates like the ''Film/{{Stargate}}'', and makes the five tones from ''Film/CloseEncountersOfTheThirdKind'' when connecting to a location on Earth. [[spoiler: Set]] even considers using planet Abydos as a suitable place of exile for the heroes near the end.


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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: [[spoiler: Elastamun does this to Set when asked when Egypt began to confuse Set with Apophis. He answers, then points out that neither humans nor his species ever have uniform opinions, which is part of why chaos and order are so important. It works, but only enough for Set to alter his plans.]]

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* BadassLongRobe: Higher class Thep Khufans get to wear these, with varying colors depending on their ranks. Also coupled with ornate [[CoolCrown golden headgear]].

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* BadassLongRobe: Higher class Thep Khufans get to wear these, with varying colors depending on their ranks. Also coupled with ornate [[CoolCrown golden headgear]].



* ColorCodedCharacters: Several characters wear distinctly colored outfits to tell them apart.
** Elastamun and Neferti wear red.
** The vizier Valensen and Skaraab, the pharaoh's magician, both sport [[PurpleIsPowerful purple robes]], being in high rank to the throne.
** Zigzagged with the pharaoh himself. He appears wearing black cloaks, but his face and eyes are red. Doubles as foreshadowing, as [[spoiler: the mask is actually a vessel for the god Set, who is almost entirely red.]]



* GoldColoredSuperiority: The royalty and Golden Guard wear gold-colored ornaments and ornate headdresses. The latter also gain GoldenSuperMode when changing into their powered forms. [[spoiler: Ra also appears entirely golden at the end.]]



* LawOfChromaticSuperiority: Several characters wear distinctly colored outfits that designate their rank. Raht even tells the Tennysons which rank goes with what color when reading from a scroll.
** Elastamun and Neferti wear red.
** The vizier Valensen and Skaraab, the pharaoh's magician, both sport [[PurpleIsPowerful purple robes]], being in high rank to the throne.
** Ja'Kaal wears blue, having been part of the pharaoh's military regime before forming the resistance.
** Zigzagged with the pharaoh himself. He appears wearing [[EvilWearsBlack black cloaks]], but his face and eyes are red. Doubles as foreshadowing, as [[spoiler: the mask is actually a vessel for the god Set, [[RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver who is entirely red save for his head]].]]



* MotiveRant: [[spoiler: Set delivers one during the climax, saying he will destroy either Earth or Anur Khufos out of revenge for humanity distorting his image from Ra's protector to being the same as Apophis, [[EvenEvilHasStandards which even he dreads]]. Ben calls him a baby for that while inside a hover ship.]]



* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: [[spoiler: Set claims to be this, having multiple reasons to not be painted as the villain human Egyptians said he is, but he [[NeverMyFault blames them for everything]] and decides to use the pharaoh's resources to destroy Earth.]]
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* HigherTechSpecies: The Transylians, Frankenstein-like aliens who introduced some of their technology to the Thep Khufans to rebuild their society after the Ectonurites enslaved it.

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* HigherTechSpecies: The Transylians, Frankenstein-like aliens who recently introduced some of their technology to the Thep Khufans to rebuild their society after the Ectonurites enslaved it.



* ScienceFantasy: Anur Khufos has shades of this. Egyptian culture and architecture is prominent, and magic is integral to that culture, but advanced technology is everywhere, ranging from speeders and plasma guns to computers and portals. Justified in VestigialEmpire below.

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* ScienceFantasy: Anur Khufos has shades of this. Egyptian culture and architecture is prominent, and magic is integral to that culture, but advanced technology is everywhere, ranging from speeders and plasma guns to computers and portals. Justified in VestigialEmpire below.HigherTechSpecies above.

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* BigBad: The power-hungry pharaoh, Rehk'Set. He rules the entire planet with an iron fist, using [[BigBrotherIsWatching surveillance drones and video screens]] to spy on the population, and uses slaves to build his monuments like pharaohs on Earth.

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* BigBad: The power-hungry pharaoh, Rehk'Set. He rules the entire planet with an iron fist, using [[BigBrotherIsWatching surveillance drones and video screens]] to spy on the population, and uses slaves to build his monuments like pharaohs on Earth.



* EngineeredPublicConfession: Set up by the resistance, by hacking some of the drones to broadcast the pharaoh's actions over the planet's video network.

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* EngineeredPublicConfession: Set up by the resistance, by [[ChekovsGun hacking some of the drones drones]] to broadcast the pharaoh's actions over the planet's video network.


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* EyeOfHorusMeansEgypt: Taken to disturbing extremes where the pharaoh uses [[SurveillanceDrone hovering drones]] that have the Eye of Horus where the camera is, which he uses to spy on the population. Horus himself sulks at these near the end.
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* DecoyProtagonist: The first two chapters imply that Elastamun is the main character of the story. But the Tennysons are valued as the most important, and most of the story is focused on them instead.

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