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*** A Loboan soldier, Lukaro, stems from the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'', Lucario.
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*** A Loboan soldier, Lukaro, stems from the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'', Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Lucario.
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** [[spoiler: When Ben (as Ghostfreak) forces Rehk'Set to remove all his clothes and possessions, then his mask that made him look like an actual Thep Khufan. Taken further when doing this [[BalefulPolymorph turns him back into a human mummy]], and the mask itself shatters, [[SealedEvilInACan releasing the god of chaos]] who had used it to bond with his host.]]
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** [[spoiler: When Ben (as Ghostfreak) forces Rehk'Set to remove all his clothes and possessions, then his mask that made him look like an actual Thep Khufan. Taken further when doing this [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation turns him back into a human mummy]], and the mask itself shatters, [[SealedEvilInACan releasing the god of chaos]] who had used it to bond with his host.]]
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* CoolGate: The various stargates used for quick transport to and from Anur Khufos. Taken UpToEleven with [[spoiler: the pharaoh's 'Omni-gate', an Omnitrix-based portal that can connect to anywhere in the galaxy.]]
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* CoolGate: The various stargates used for quick transport to and from Anur Khufos. Taken UpToEleven Exaggerated with [[spoiler: the pharaoh's 'Omni-gate', an Omnitrix-based portal that can connect to anywhere in the galaxy.]]
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* RunningGag: The gag of Ben getting transformed into an alien ''other'' than the one he wanted crops up in Chapter 5 where Ben tries to turn into Fourarms to destroy one of the guard's landspeeders and gets Upgrade instead.
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* ToBeContinued: The penultimate chapter ends with this after the Tennysons are transported back to the John F Kennedy Space Center and Gwen asks where to now and Grandpa Max suggests going to St. Louis as it's an old vacation spot of his and the Tennysons being glad to have the diversion to spice things up after the crazy dark place and that they'd saved Earth and another planet from destruction and who knows what's to come next:
---> In order to find out, the Ben 10 series continues in the Season 3 finale: “The Visitor”!
---> In order to find out, the Ben 10 series continues in the Season 3 finale: “The Visitor”!
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]] on FFN.
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]] on FFN.AO3]].
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]] on FFN.
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]] on FFN.
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] on AO3 and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]] on FFN.
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]] on FFN.
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* SpeakOfTheDevil: Pharaoh Rehk’Set suddenly appears after his name is spoken by one of his underlings.
-->'''Rehk’Set:''' Whosoever mentions my name is either in need of my presence, or is my enemy.
-->'''Rehk’Set:''' Whosoever mentions my name is either in need of my presence, or is my enemy.
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Egypt on Anur Khufos is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' fanfiction, set between the last two episodes of its third season, capitalizing on the scene where the main characters crash-land in Egypt. The titular planet has been afflicted with a mysterious disease crippling its newest generation of mummy aliens, and no cure is in sight. With an evil pharaoh ruling over the planet, the only hope of salvation lies in finding whoever bears the Omnitrix.
It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]]
It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/13357182/chapters/30585495 here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13037172/1/Egypt-on-Anur-Khufos here]]
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Anyone who disobeys the pharaoh or his guards is [[DisproportionateRetribution immediately executed]]. [[spoiler: Comes back to bite him when [[KarmicDeath Set kills his host]] upon separating from his body.]]
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Anyone who disobeys the pharaoh or his guards is [[DisproportionateRetribution immediately executed]]. [[spoiler: Comes back to bite him when [[KarmicDeath Set kills his host]] upon separating from his body.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: BiggerBad: The chaos god Set, who had been possessing the pharaoh the entire time, as part of the latter's DealWithTheDevil.]]
