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* CreepyChild: Kitsune, Gaara
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* UndeadChild: Guess what Tsukuyomi does with the remains of Team Seven. Go on. Guess.
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* BeyondtheImpossible: Naruto's ability to break space and travel dimensions once became so great that he broke out of the continuity of 'Echoes' and ended up in SOMEBODY ELSE'S FANFICTION. No. This isn't crack. On another note, for allowing this to happen, thank you Third Fang!
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* BeyondtheImpossible: BeyondTheImpossible: Naruto's ability to break space and travel dimensions once became so great that he broke out of the continuity of 'Echoes' and ended up in SOMEBODY ELSE'S FANFICTION. No. This isn't crack. On another note, for allowing this to happen, thank you Third Fang!
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Zabuza and Jiraiya vs Amaterasu. Go Zabuza.
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* DefiantToTheEnd: This tends to be the general approach of both the good guys... and the bad guys... and everyone in between.
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* UtopiaJustifiestheMeans: Alpha's world. According to WordofGod it is based partly off of '1984' so this kind of thing is sort of expected.
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* UtopiaJustifiestheMeans: Alpha's world. According to WordofGod it is based partly off of '1984' 1984 so this kind of thing is sort of expected.
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* UtopiaJustifiestheMeans: Alpha's world. According to WordofGod it is based partly off of '1984' so this kind of thing is sort of expected.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: And HOW! Amatsu Mikaboshi is MADE of this.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: And HOW! Amatsu Mikaboshi is MADE of this. What really got me was the concept of CEASING TO EXIST. Moreover, that this was the fate Amatsu Mikaboshi has in store for everybody. Scared yet? ItGetsWorse.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Ah, where to start... What really got me was the concept of CEASING TO EXIST. Moreover, that this was the fate Amatsu Mikaboshi has in store for everybody. Scared yet? ItGetsWorse.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Ah, where to start... What really got me was the concept of CEASING TO EXIST. Moreover, that this was the fate Amatsu Mikaboshi has in store for everybody. Scared yet? ItGetsWorse.
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* ManEatingPlant: The heroes end up in a world filled with nothing but plants that can use the Sharingan... there are no humans and the plants try to EAT the heroes. The rest sort of falls under the category of FridgeHorror when you try and consider (A) what happened to all the people and (B) what happened to MAKE those plants, anyway?!
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* ManEatingPlant: The heroes end up in a world filled with nothing but plants that can use the Sharingan... there are no humans and the plants try to EAT the heroes. The rest sort of falls under the category of FridgeHorror when you try and consider (A) what happened to all the people and (B) what happened to MAKE those plants, anyway?!
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* ManEatingPlant: The heroes end up in a world filled with nothing but plants that can use the Sharingan... there are no humans and the plants try to EAT the heroes. The rest sort of falls under the category of FridgeHorror when you try and consider (A) what happened to all the people and (B) what happened to MAKE those plants, anyway?!
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: And HOW! Amatsu Mikaboshi is MADE of this.
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* ActionGirl: Naruko, Haku, Gaara, Yugito... the list goes on.
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* AntiVillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
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* AntiVillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul. Alpha also counts, if you think she didn't cross the MoralEventHorizon already.
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* Blessed with Suck: You cannot honestly say that you've never thought of how awesome it would be to travel dimensions, pick up friends, fight evil, and find out if Haku is a girl or not. In this, Naruto does all these awesome things... and he keeps getting awesome powers... but it's sort of offset by the fact that in almost every dimension he's ended up in, he's faced a threat to his life and the lives of those he cared about. Not to mention the fact that he's forced to use this dimensional power to escape from the Madara trio...
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* Blessed with Suck: BlessedWithSuck: You cannot honestly say that you've never thought of how awesome it would be to travel dimensions, pick up friends, fight evil, and find out if Haku is a girl or not. In this, Naruto does all these awesome things... and he keeps getting awesome powers... but it's sort of offset by the fact that in almost every dimension he's ended up in, he's faced a threat to his life and the lives of those he cared about. Not to mention the fact that he's forced to use this dimensional power to escape from the Madara trio...
* BloodKnight: Amaterasu embodies the concept. Zabuza too.
* BloodKnight: Amaterasu embodies the concept. Zabuza too.
* TheCorrupter: Tsukiyomi, toward Kazama. Orochimaru also counts.
* TheCorruption: Amatsu Mikaboshi is a sentient, godlike one.
* TheCorruption: Amatsu Mikaboshi is a sentient, godlike one.
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* Did You Just Punch Out Cthulhu?: Amaterasu kills KYUBI to death. Yes, you read that right.
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* Did You Just Punch Out Cthulhu?: DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu?: Amaterasu kills KYUBI to death. Yes, you read that right.
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* EvilMentor: Tsukiyomi plans to be this to Kazama. Kenta was one to Kakashi.
* EvilCounterpart: a major theme. Multiple times, the heroes face alternate versions of themselves or other characters that turned out badly. For example:
** Tsukiyomi to Kazama.
** Arguably, N to Kitsune.
** Alpha to Hashirama Senju.
* FiveManBand: the gang:
||TheHero||Kazama||
||TheLancer||Kakashi and Sasori||
||TheBigGuy||Kitsune, Zabuza||
||TheSmartGuy||Chibaku||
||TheChick||Naruko, Haku||
||SixthRanger||Yugito, Gaara and Kuebiko||
* GenderFlip:NarukoNaruko, Haku, and later Gaara.
* EvilCounterpart: a major theme. Multiple times, the heroes face alternate versions of themselves or other characters that turned out badly. For example:
** Tsukiyomi to Kazama.
** Arguably, N to Kitsune.
** Alpha to Hashirama Senju.
* FiveManBand: the gang:
||TheHero||Kazama||
||TheLancer||Kakashi and Sasori||
||TheBigGuy||Kitsune, Zabuza||
||TheSmartGuy||Chibaku||
||TheChick||Naruko, Haku||
||SixthRanger||Yugito, Gaara and Kuebiko||
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* KnightInShiningArmor: Kuebiko is the closest thing the story as to a LawfulGood hero.
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* TheHero: both Kazama and Naruko share the role.
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* BiggerBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi is the most powerful evil in the setting, but apart from backing the Madara Trio and corrupting Kazama, doesn't take a direct role in the story yet.
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* BiggerBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi is the most powerful evil in the setting, but apart from backing the Madara Trio and corrupting Kazama, doesn't take a direct role in the story yet.
* Blessed with Suck: You cannot honestly say that you've never thought of how awesome it would be to travel dimensions, pick up friends, fight evil, and find out if Haku is a girl or not. In this, Naruto does all these awesome things... and he keeps getting awesome powers... but it's sort of offset by the fact that in almost every dimension he's ended up in, he's faced a threat to his life and the lives of those he cared about. Not to mention the fact that he's forced to use this dimensional power to escape from the Madara trio...
* Blessed with Suck: You cannot honestly say that you've never thought of how awesome it would be to travel dimensions, pick up friends, fight evil, and find out if Haku is a girl or not. In this, Naruto does all these awesome things... and he keeps getting awesome powers... but it's sort of offset by the fact that in almost every dimension he's ended up in, he's faced a threat to his life and the lives of those he cared about. Not to mention the fact that he's forced to use this dimensional power to escape from the Madara trio...
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* Did You Just Punch Out Cthulhu?: Amaterasu kills KYUBI to death. Yes, you read that right.
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Basically, a deconstruction of the whole 'Hero traverses the multiverse and teams up with his alternate counterparts to save the day'. You can't go two chapters without a WhamLine and the characterization is done beautifully. Kagaseo knew what he was doing when he made this gem.
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The story begins with a slightly different version of the canon Naruto's fight with Orochimaru in the Land of Grass. After messing up big time, the blonde ninja, renamed Kazama to avoid confusion, got his seal twisted, accidentally gaining the power to travel across the multiverse, meeting alternate versions of himself, like:
Naruko, a female Naruto with the canon one's personality.
Chibaku, a Naruto adopted by Sasori.
Kitsune, a Naruto with a severe case of DemonicPossession...
And many more.
Problem, the group ends up followed by Madara and chased like a bunch of animals...
Basically, a deconstruction of the whole 'Hero traverses the multiverse and teams up with his alternate counterparts to save theday'.day' plot, and the whole Naruto universe in general. You can't go two chapters without a WhamLine and the characterization is done beautifully. Kagaseo knew what he was doing when he made this gem.
Naruko, a female Naruto with the canon one's personality.
Chibaku, a Naruto adopted by Sasori.
Kitsune, a Naruto with a severe case of DemonicPossession...
And many more.
Problem, the group ends up followed by Madara and chased like a bunch of animals...
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* AndIMustScream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verseCloud-verse, before ending DeaderThanDead.
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* TheAtoner: Kakashi
* BigBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi
* BigBadEnsemble: And HOW! Orochimaru, the Madara Trio, the Raikage, Orochimaru AGAIN, Amatsu Mikaboshi... The list goes on!
* CovertPervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
* BigBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi
* BigBadEnsemble: And HOW! Orochimaru, the Madara Trio, the Raikage, Orochimaru AGAIN, Amatsu Mikaboshi... The list goes on!
* CovertPervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
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* TheAtoner: Kakashi
Kakashi.
*BigBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi
AxCrazy: Cloud-verse Orochimaru after a BodyHorror situation. Kitsune's Kyuubi is far, FAR worse.
* BigBadDuumvirate: the three Madara, Tsukiyomi, Amaterasu and Susanoo, form a stable one.
* BigBadEnsemble: And HOW! Orochimaru, the Madara Trio, the Raikage, Orochimaru AGAIN,Amatsu Mikaboshi... Alpha... The list goes on!
on. The three Madara are however clearly TheHeavy out of them all, most of the others being ArcVillain.
* BiggerBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi is the most powerful evil in the setting, but apart from backing the Madara Trio and corrupting Kazama, doesn't take a direct role in the story yet.
* CovertPervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this. Nobody is fooled.
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* BigBadDuumvirate: the three Madara, Tsukiyomi, Amaterasu and Susanoo, form a stable one.
* BigBadEnsemble: And HOW! Orochimaru, the Madara Trio, the Raikage, Orochimaru AGAIN,
* BiggerBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi is the most powerful evil in the setting, but apart from backing the Madara Trio and corrupting Kazama, doesn't take a direct role in the story yet.
* CovertPervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this. Nobody is fooled.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: the story is far darker than canon and deconstructs it ruthlessly. Then again, the author stated it is a EarnYourHappyEnding kind of story...
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* HeroKiller: the three Madara, BIG TIME.
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* SerialKiller: Kitsune, under the Kyuubi's influence.
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* Big Bad: BigBad: Amatsu Mikaboshi
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* Dark Chick: Alpha... but her intentions are good, so, it's okay right? Right?!
* Deader than Dead: Orochimaru... again.
* Deader than Dead: Orochimaru... again.
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* Dark Chick: DarkChick: Alpha... but her intentions are good, so, it's okay right? Right?!
*Deader than Dead: DeaderThanDead: Orochimaru... again.
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* Dirty Old Man: Jiraiya... Are you so surprised?
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* Dirty Old Man: DirtyOldMan: Jiraiya... Are you so surprised?
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* Hot Mom: The gang enters a world where Naruto's mother is Tsunade.
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* Big Bad: Amatsu Mikaboshi
* Big Bad Ensemble: And HOW! Orochimaru, the Madara Trio, the Raikage, Orochimaru AGAIN, Amatsu Mikaboshi... The list goes on!
* Big Bad Ensemble: And HOW! Orochimaru, the Madara Trio, the Raikage, Orochimaru AGAIN, Amatsu Mikaboshi... The list goes on!
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* Dark Chick: Alpha... but her intentions are good, so, it's okay right? Right?!
* Deader than Dead: Orochimaru... again.
* Deader than Dead: Orochimaru... again.
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* Dirty Old Man: Jiraiya... Are you so surprised?
* Gender Flip: Naruko
* Gender Flip: Naruko
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* Hot Mom: The gang enters a world where Naruto's mother is Tsunade.
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* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: Zabuza
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"Echoes", by Kagaseo
"Echoes" is a "Naruto" fanfiction where... well...
Plot Summary: "AU. A modification of the seal holding back the Kyuubi has surprising consequences. When each choice brings about a new world, what will happen when different possibilities collide? Multiple Naruto. Not NarutoxNaruko, rather brother/sister relationship."
Yeah. That.
Basically, a deconstruction of the whole 'Hero traverses the multiverse and teams up with his alternate counterparts to save the day'. You can't go two chapters without a Wham Line and the characterization is done beautifully. Kagaseo knew what he was doing when he made this gem.
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"Echoes" is a "Naruto" fanfiction where... well...
Plot Summary: "AU. A modification of the seal holding back the Kyuubi has surprising consequences. When each choice brings about a new world, what will happen when different possibilities collide? Multiple Naruto. Not NarutoxNaruko, rather brother/sister relationship."
Yeah. That.
Basically, a deconstruction of the whole 'Hero traverses the multiverse and teams up with his alternate counterparts to save the day'. You can't go two chapters without a Wham Line and the characterization is done beautifully. Kagaseo knew what he was doing when he made this gem.
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"Echoes"
Plot Summary: "AU. A modification of the seal holding back the Kyuubi has surprising consequences. When each choice brings about a new world, what will happen when different possibilities collide? Multiple Naruto. Not
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* CovertPervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
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* The Atoner: Kakashi
* The Determinator: Zabuza
* The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
* And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
* Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
* Covert Pervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
* Shout-Out: Amaterasu is one, giant call-back to a certain King of Heroes.
* The Determinator: Zabuza
* The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
* And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
* Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
* Covert Pervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
* Shout-Out: Amaterasu is one, giant call-back to a certain King of Heroes.
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* The Atoner: Kakashi
AndIMustScream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
*The Determinator: Zabuza
* The Antivillain:AntiVillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
*And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
TheAtoner: Kakashi
*Evil God: Determinator: Zabuza
* GodOfEvil: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
*Covert Pervert: CovertPervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
*Shout-Out: ShoutOut: Amaterasu is one, giant call-back to a certain King of Heroes.
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ECHOES, by Kagaseo
Echoes is a 'Naruto' fanfiction where... well...
Echoes is a 'Naruto' fanfiction where... well...
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'Echoes' is a fanfiction by 'Kagaseo'. In it, we have Naruto. Or at least, we THINK it's Naruto. But he's not OUR Naruto. The plot focuses on the dimensional travels of a Naruto who was experimented on by a certain evil scientist. It is a deconstruction of the multiverse, no, the omniverse and currently goes 26 chapters strong.
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Echoes is a 'Naruto' fanfiction
Plot Summary: "AU. A modification of the seal holding back the Kyuubi has surprising consequences. When each choice brings about a new world, what will happen when different possibilities collide? Multiple Naruto.
Yeah. That.
Basically, a deconstruction of the
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* The Determinator: Zabuza
* The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
* And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
* Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
* The Determinator: Zabuza
* The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
* And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
* Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
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*Covert Pervert: Chibaku THINKS he's this.
*Shout-Out: Amaterasu is one, giant call-back to a certain King of Heroes.
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The Determinator: Zabuza
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Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
The Determinator: Zabuza
The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
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Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
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'Echoes' is a fanfiction by 'Kagaseo'. In it, we have Naruto. Or at least, we THINK it's Naruto. But he's not OUR Naruto. The plot focuses on the dimensional travels of a Naruto who was experimented on by a certain evil scientist. It is a deconstruction of the multiverse, no, the omniverse and currently goes 26 chapters strong.
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'Echoes' is a fanfiction by 'Kagaseo'. In it, we have Naruto. Or at least, we THINK it's Naruto. But he's not OUR Naruto. The plot focuses on the dimensional travels of a Naruto who was experimented on by a certain evil scientist. It is a deconstruction of the multiverse, no, the omniverse and currently goes 26 chapters strong.strong.
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The Atoner: Kakashi
The Determinator: Zabuza
The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
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The Atoner: Kakashi
The Determinator: Zabuza
The Antivillain: N. If his story doesn't make you cry, you have no soul.
And I Must Scream: What happened to Orochimaru after the Cloud-verse
Evil God: Amatsu Mikaboshi.
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'Echoes' is a fanfiction by 'Kagaseo'. In it, we have Naruto. Or at least, we THINK it's Naruto. But he's not OUR Naruto. The plot focuses on the dimensional travels of a Naruto who was experimented on by a certain evil scientist. It is a deconstruction of the multiverse, no, the omniverse and currently goes 26 chapters strong.
