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* InstantRunes: Shikako learns how to apply seals through touch.
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* GeometricMagic: Shikako makes frequent use of fuinjutsu.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Shikako, occasionally.
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* OlderAndWiser: [[spoiler:Shikako, due to having the memories of a previous life.]]
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* TheUnfought: So far Shikako has managed to sidestep [[spoiler: Kabuto]] several times.
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* TheUnfought: So far Shikako has managed to sidestep [[spoiler: Kabuto]] several times.times.
* YouCanBarelyStand: [[spoiler:Shikako kills all three Sound genin by herself while concussed and nursing several broken ribs from the encounter with Orochimaru.]]
* YouCanBarelyStand: [[spoiler:Shikako kills all three Sound genin by herself while concussed and nursing several broken ribs from the encounter with Orochimaru.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptation]]: [[spoiler:Karin.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptation]]: [[spoiler:Karin.[[spoiler:Karin, although the characters don't know her name. She gets mauled to death by a bear offscreen and they find her body.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptation]]: [[spoiler:Karin.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Naruto's fight with Neji in the Chunin exams. Neji never even touches the real Naruto.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Shikako. She prefers to ambush her opponents or take them out with traps whenever possible. [[spoiler:Also see the entry for MurderIsTheBestSolution.]]
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* MurderIsTheBestSolution: [[spoiler:Shikako kills the genin team from Sound because it was the least risky option available to her. This is a source of considerable guilt afterwards.]]
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* EmotionlessGirl: Shikako has an accident while practicing the Nara clan techniques that leaves her completely detached from everything for a few days, to the point where she can't even bring herself to care that it isn't her normal state of mind.
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* EmotionlessGirl: Shikako has an accident while practicing the Nara clan techniques that leaves her completely detached from everything for a few days, everything, to the point where she can't even bring herself to care that it isn't her normal state of mind.mind. She recovers after a few days, though.
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* EmotionlessGirl: Shikako has an accident while practicing the Nara clan techniques that leaves her completely detached from everything for a few days, to the point where she can't even bring herself to care that it isn't her normal state of mind.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Shikako has shades of this, especially early on. Nowhere near as bad as Hinata, though.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Shikako comes up with several plans [[spoiler:to fight Zabuza and Haku.]] Unfortunately, she forgets to tell them to her teammates. [[spoiler:Fortunately, none of them actually die.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Shikamaru threatens Sasuke[[spoiler:after he hurt Shikako while under the effect of the curse seal.]] We don't get to find out what he said, but it made Sasuke nervous around him.
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* NoodleIncident: Shikamaru threatens Sasuke[[spoiler:after Sasuke [[spoiler:after he hurt Shikako while under the effect of the curse seal.]] We don't get to find out what he said, but it made Sasuke nervous around him.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Shikamaru displays this twice, [[spoiler:first when Sasuke hurt Shikako while under the influence of the curse seal,]] and again [[spoiler:when she gets [[MindRape mind raped]] by Itachi.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Shikamaru threatens Sasuke[[spoiler:after he hurt Shikako while under the effect of the curse seal.]] We don't get to find out what he said, but it made Sasuke nervous around him.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Zabuza and Haku.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Zabuza and Haku. Also Hayate.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Zabuza and Haku.]]
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Followed for the most part, but kept interesting by having the narrator notice the logical inconsistencies of the original work and coming up with plausible explanations for them.
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* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler:Shikako uses the replacement technique to protect Sasuke from Itachi's [[MindRape Tsukuyomi]], which means she gets hit by it instead.]]
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* DemotedToExtra: Sakura [[spoiler:due to Shikako taking her place on Team Seven, which she feels guilty about.]]
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Shikako Nara is an average girl from the village hidden in the leaves. She has friends, a loveing family, but there is something different about her, a secret. And she's been keeping it from birth.
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Shikako Nara is an average girl from the village hidden in the leaves. She has friends, a loveing loving family, but there is something different about her, a secret. And she's been keeping it from birth.
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A massive door-stopper garenteed to keep you reading for hours.
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A massive door-stopper garenteed guaranteed to keep you reading for hours.
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''Life as a ninja. It starts with confusion and terror and doesn't get any better from there.''
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A unique approach to the [[spoiler: self-insert]] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
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A unique approach to the [[spoiler: self-insert]] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
protagonist as an observer.
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** Naruto is Sanguine and TheButtMonkey (sometimes).
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** Naruto is Sanguine and TheButtMonkey ButtMonkey (sometimes).
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A unique approach to the [[spoiler: self-insert]] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
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A unique approach to the [[spoiler: self-insert]] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.protagonist.
A massive door-stopper garenteed to keep you reading for hours.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* FourManBand and FourTemperamentEnsemble
** Naruto is Sanguine and TheButtMonkey (sometimes).
** Sasuke is Choleric and likes to think he's the OnlySaneMan, but can't really pull it off.
** Kakashi is Phlegmatic and The Pervert.
** [[spoiler: Shikako]] is Melancholic and TheSmartGuy (also acts as the true OnlySaneMan)
* TheUnfought: So far Shikako has managed to sidestep [[spoiler: Kabuto]] several times.
A massive door-stopper garenteed to keep you reading for hours.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* FourManBand and FourTemperamentEnsemble
** Naruto is Sanguine and TheButtMonkey (sometimes).
** Sasuke is Choleric and likes to think he's the OnlySaneMan, but can't really pull it off.
** Kakashi is Phlegmatic and The Pervert.
** [[spoiler: Shikako]] is Melancholic and TheSmartGuy (also acts as the true OnlySaneMan)
* TheUnfought: So far Shikako has managed to sidestep [[spoiler: Kabuto]] several times.
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A unique approach to the [spoiler: self-insert] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
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A unique approach to the [spoiler: self-insert] [[spoiler: self-insert]] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
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A unique approach to the [spoiler: self-insert] genre of fan-fiction, Dreaming of Sunshine avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
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A unique approach to the [spoiler: self-insert] genre of fan-fiction, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7347955/1/Dreaming_of_Sunshine Dreaming of Sunshine Sunshine]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples examples- via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
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''There was only darkness. I was small and helpless, lost and confused and alone and trapped in a body that would not, could not respond to my helpless panicked thoughts. I could hear a child, a baby, screaming but it wasn't me because I couldn't move, couldn't breathe couldn't do anything but lie still and hope we were hidden and please, please don't notice me…''
Shikako Nara is an average girl from the village hidden in the leaves. She has friends, a loveing family, but there is something different about her, a secret. And she's been keeping it from birth.
A unique approach to the [spoiler: self-insert] genre of fan-fiction, Dreaming of Sunshine avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
Shikako Nara is an average girl from the village hidden in the leaves. She has friends, a loveing family, but there is something different about her, a secret. And she's been keeping it from birth.
A unique approach to the [spoiler: self-insert] genre of fan-fiction, Dreaming of Sunshine avoids many of the more common pitfalls assosciated with the poorer examples via snappy dialogue and plot that remains focused on the inner struggles of the protagonist.
