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** Chapter 12: "Oh, Byuk, you should really know me better than that by now. I plan for ''everything''." Cut to the following Death Note entry: [[spoiler: Pinkamena Diane Pie, Murdered]]."
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** Chapter 12: "Oh, Byuk, you should really know me better than that by now. I plan for ''everything''." Cut to the following Death Note entry: [[spoiler: "[[spoiler: Pinkamena Diane Pie, Murdered]]."
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** Byuk mentions that Shinigami have visited other worlds before, and one day he might tell Twilight that story...
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* WhamLine: Chapter 26: [[spoiler: Applejack: “Dash, that ain’t us.”]]
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** Chapter 26: [[spoiler: Applejack: “Dash, that ain’t us.”]]”]]
** Chapter 31: [[spoiler: "LYRA HEARTSTRINGS. HEART ATTACK. PAINFUL]]."
** Chapter 12: "Oh, Byuk, you should really know me better than that by now. I plan for ''everything''." Cut to the following Death Note entry: [[spoiler: Pinkamena Diane Pie, Murdered]]."
** Chapter 26: [[spoiler: Applejack: “Dash, that ain’t us.
** Chapter 31: [[spoiler: "LYRA HEARTSTRINGS. HEART ATTACK. PAINFUL]]."
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Twilight, [[spoiler: Fluttershy, and Photo Finish.]] Mer is also this when compared to Rem. On another level, while Light initially had some standards on who he killed, Twilight targets anypony who's reported to have committed a crime, provided they don't meet her moral standards.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Twilight, [[spoiler: Fluttershy, and Photo Finish.]] Mer is also this when compared to Rem. On another level, while Light initially had some standards on who he killed, Twilight targets anypony who's reported to have committed a crime, provided they don't meet her moral standards.as she wants a completely crime-free Equestria.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Twilight, [[spoiler: Fluttershy, and Photo Finish.]] Mer is also this when compared to Rem.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Twilight, [[spoiler: Fluttershy, and Photo Finish.]] Mer is also this when compared to Rem. On another level, while Light initially had some standards on who he killed, Twilight targets anypony who's reported to have committed a crime, provided they don't meet her moral standards.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Twilight kills criminals of various caliber -- her main targets are {{Karma Houdini}}s and those she considers unrepentant -- so a pony with a life-long history of minor offences might also be offed. Second Kira openly kills those who speak against Kira.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Twilight kills criminals of various caliber caliber, even those guilty of relatively minor crimes -- her main targets are {{Karma Houdini}}s and those she considers unrepentant -- so a pony with a life-long history of minor offences might also be offed. Second Kira openly kills those who speak against Kira.
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* AGodAmI: Mostly averted. See: ComesGreatResponsibility.
** However, after [[spoiler: L's death]] at the end of Season 2, Twilight dives right into this -- she decides to set up Kira as a mythological figure of evil in order to scare anyone out of performing evil ever again, while also leading the "resistance" against Kira. She figures that such a position on both sides would make her a goddess.
** However, after [[spoiler: L's death]] at the end of Season 2, Twilight dives right into this -- she decides to set up Kira as a mythological figure of evil in order to scare anyone out of performing evil ever again, while also leading the "resistance" against Kira. She figures that such a position on both sides would make her a goddess.
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* AGodAmI: Mostly averted. See: ComesGreatResponsibility.
** However, afterAfter [[spoiler: L's death]] at the end of Season 2, Twilight dives right into this -- she decides to set up Kira as a mythological figure of evil in order to scare anyone out of performing evil ever again, while also leading the "resistance" against Kira. She figures that such a position on both sides would make her a goddess.
** However, after
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** Tragically (and horrifically) inverted when [[spoiler: Granny Smith dies while holding Apple Bloom.]]
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: After the first golem encounter, Pinkie Pie hints that she knows Twilight is Kira, and is trying to talk her out of it. [[spoiler: Sadly, this gets her killed.]]
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* PragmaticAdaptation: The Death Notes rule that no one over 124 years old can be killed with it was omitted since [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld living past that is common]] in Equestria. [[spoiler:Granny Smith is killed with the Death Note despite Ponyville existing for canonically at least two hundred years and Granny Smith having been part of it's founding.]]
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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** [[FanFic/PastSins Spell Nexus]] is part of the Night Court and the initial investigation into the Kira murders.
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** Chapter 33: Twilight Sparkle, who takes the role of Light in this fanfic: [[spoiler: “Colgate... I think you’ll be a fantastic L.”]]
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** Chapter 33: Twilight Sparkle, who takes the role of Light in this fanfic: [[spoiler: “Colgate..."Colgate... I think you’ll be a fantastic L.”]]"]]
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** Twilight's actions cause the crime rate in general to drop, but the crime rate in Ponyville actually goes up, due to her controlling some of her victims into committing crimes.
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* TheFalseCutie: From willingly killing children to saying that some ponies don't deserve kindness, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] has gone from a genuine TheCutie to this.
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* DyingMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's death.]]
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** [[spoiler:Spike is a lot like Soichiro Yagami, especially during the staged execution scene.]]
** Rainbow Dash is a lot like Aizawa.
** Colgate is a lot like Matsuda.
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** [[spoiler:Spike is a lot like Soichiro Yagami, especially during the staged execution scene. This likely won't end well for him.]]
** Rainbow Dash is a lot likeAizawa.
Matsuda, feeling useless and wanting to contribute to the case.
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* OutsideContextVillain: Thanks to the Death Note (which even she doesn't understand fully), Twilight becomes this to the entire Equestrian government.
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* AdaptationalWhimp: Rainbow Dash is a great deal less competent then her canon counterpart in this story, see ButtMonkey for more information.
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* ETuBrute: Likely what will happen if everyone finds out that Twilight is Kira.
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** [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Everypony said it was a dumb idea to build a town in a swamp, but they built it anyway, just to show them.]]
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** [[spoiler: Photo Finish]] takes the role of Misa Amane's stalker.
** Geldus is Gelus.
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* FallenHero: Twilight and [[spoiler: Fluttershy.]]
* ForegoneConclusion:The only question is [[spoiler:manga or movie ending?]]Averted. WordOfGod says that the ending will be much different then the anime/manga/film.
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** [[spoiler:Sweetie Belle basically plays Mr. Mogi's role in the film version of DeathNote.]]
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* RefugeInAudacity: At one point, Colgate loses her temper and punches out a pony in the middle of a crowded street. She comes to her senses, realising that she is a police oficer and has just assaulted a civilian... she resolves the situation by arresting her victim and leaving before anypony has a chance to react.
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* RefugeInAudacity: At one point, Colgate loses her temper and punches out a pony in the middle of a crowded street. She comes to her senses, realising realizing that she is a police oficer officer and has just assaulted a civilian... she resolves the situation by arresting her victim and leaving before anypony has a chance to react.
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* WhamLine: Chapter 26: [[spoiler: Applejack: “Dash, that ain’t us.”]]
** Chapter 33: Twilight Sparkle, who takes the role of Light in this fanfic: [[spoiler: “Colgate... I think you’ll be a fantastic L.”]]
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** Colgate is a lot like Matsuda.
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** [[spoiler:Sweetie Belle is a lot like Mr. Mogi and, to some extent, Sayu Yagami.]]
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** [[spoiler:Scootaloo, upon Sweetie Belle's death, is a lot likeMr. Mogi and, to some extent, Sayu Yagami.]]
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* ActorAllusion: [[spoiler: Rarity's role in the plot is exactly the same as Naomi Misora. Both are voiced by TabithaStGermain.]]
** WordOfGod states it was accidental, if very funny.
** WordOfGod states it was accidental, if very funny.
** This seems to be standard for the L position [[spoiler: seeing as Shells, her successor, is the same]].
* ChekhovsGun: You know those potato chips Pinkie gave Twilight? Turns out, [[spoiler: they're a SoulJar]].
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** "She" has a sister, Wysteria, who quickly becomes this to Shells, [[spoiler: L's true successor]].
** "She" has a sister, Wysteria, who quickly becomes this to Shells, [[spoiler: L's true successor]].
* CovertGroup: L's investigation team. [[spoiler: Which turns out to be part of a larger organization.]]
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* {{Outgambitted}}: Mer, oh so much. [[spoiler: Not only does her plan to leave Twilight in IronicHell backfires with fatal results, it turns out that in all the contingencies Twilight had to plan for, Mer's betrayal was the only one she was reasonably sure of, so that the more likely outcome of her XanatosGambit was built around it.]]
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* {{Outgambitted}}: Mer, oh so much. [[spoiler: Not only does her plan to leave Twilight in IronicHell backfires backfire with fatal results, it turns out that in all the contingencies Twilight had to plan for, Mer's betrayal was the only one she was reasonably sure of, so that the more likely outcome of her XanatosGambit was built around it.]]
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* RunningBothSides: As per ''Death Note'' canon, [[spoiler: after L's death, Twilight takes over the investigation into her own actions as Kira]].
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* RunningBothSides: As per ''Death Note'' canon, [[spoiler: after L's death, Twilight takes over the investigation into her own actions as Kira]]. Though in a difference from canon, [[spoiler: Twilight manipulates Colgate into being the one who takes on L's mantle]]; so while not directly running both sides, she's at least in control of both.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler: After L's death, Jazz quits the investigation, stating that his loyalty was to her, not the team.]]
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler: After L's death, Jazz quits the investigation, stating that his loyalty was to her, not the team.]]
