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* LegacyCharacter: Meta example: the names of Sakura parents (Amaya and Takeru) as well as a certain Hidden Cloud jounin (Tetsu) are taken from Anowack's earlier Naruto fic ''One Hundred Days'', although their characters and backstories are completely different.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Kakashi demands to know what the hell Kushina was thinking when she told Sakura that she killed Sakura's mother- even if Kushina ''does'' feel responsible, it's making his job far more difficult than necessary.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Kakashi demands to know what the hell Kushina was thinking when she told Sakura that she killed Sakura's mother- mother - even if Kushina ''does'' feel responsible, it's making his job far more difficult than necessary.
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* YouShouldHaveDiedInstead: Takeru never forgave Kushina for living when Amaya died. However, in a subversion, after it happened he insisted that she ''had'' to live, both to atone and because he didn't want Naruto to grow up without a mother as well.
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* YouShouldHaveDiedInstead: Takeru never forgave Kushina for living when Amaya died. However, in a subversion, after it happened he insisted that she ''had'' to live, live - both to atone and so she wouldn't take the easy way out, ''and'' because he didn't want Naruto to grow up without a mother as well.
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** Most importantly, Sakura is ''not'' Naruto - she is a ShrinkingViolet with much less self-esteem; she doesn't have the Uzumaki's genetic traits which would give her his ''massive'' chakra reserves and stamina (and her seal isn't custom-made for her; and because of differing circumstances, she doesn't learn the Shadow Clone technique.
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** Most importantly, Sakura is ''not'' Naruto - she is a ShrinkingViolet with much less self-esteem; she doesn't have the Uzumaki's genetic traits which would give her his ''massive'' chakra reserves and stamina (and her seal isn't custom-made for her; her); and because of differing circumstances, she doesn't learn the Shadow Clone technique.technique (and neither does Naruto).
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* ForWantOfANail: This world is "close to canon" fundamentally (even in terms of backstory), with a few noteworthy differences that effect the overall formula.
** Most importantly, Sakura is ''not'' Naruto - she is a ShrinkingViolet with much less self-esteem; she doesn't have the Uzumaki's genetic traits which would give her his ''massive'' chakra reserves and stamina (and her seal isn't custom-made for her; and because of differing circumstances, she doesn't learn the Shadow Clone technique.
** Most importantly, Sakura is ''not'' Naruto - she is a ShrinkingViolet with much less self-esteem; she doesn't have the Uzumaki's genetic traits which would give her his ''massive'' chakra reserves and stamina (and her seal isn't custom-made for her; and because of differing circumstances, she doesn't learn the Shadow Clone technique.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mizuki]] is an AntiVillain in this story, forced into betraying Konoha by [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] threatening one of his loved ones and reaches his limit when [[spoiler:Sakura is put at risk.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mizuki]] Mizuki is an AntiVillain in this story, forced into betraying Konoha by [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] threatening one of his loved ones and reaches his limit when [[spoiler:Sakura is put at risk.]]
** If WordOfGod is to be believed, Mizuki originally turned traitor willingly but, due to his greater conscience (resulting from not growing apart from his teammate Takeru), he had second thoughts until [[spoiler:Tsubaki is threatened.]] However, he does [[spoiler:go quietly into interrogation]] after [[spoiler:saving Sakura.]]
** If WordOfGod is to be believed, Mizuki originally turned traitor willingly but, due to his greater conscience (resulting from not growing apart from his teammate Takeru), he had second thoughts until [[spoiler:Tsubaki is threatened.]] However, he does [[spoiler:go quietly into interrogation]] after [[spoiler:saving Sakura.]]
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It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead - in this world, for as-yet-undisclosed reasons, the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of his own son Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place (although Sakura thankfully grew up with her father, at least). The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed - Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood - as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead - in this world, for as-yet-undisclosed reasons, the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of his own son Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place (although Sakura thankfully grew up with her father, at least).place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed - Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood - as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Takeru is a "Career-Genin", being in his position for something like 30 years. This and his encroaching age leads to some people (such as [[spoiler:Zabuza]]) underestimating him, but he's more experienced and competant than many a Chuunin.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Takeru is a "Career-Genin", being in his position for something like nearly 30 years. This and his encroaching age leads might lead to some younger people (such as [[spoiler:Zabuza]]) underestimating him, but he's likely more experienced and competant than many a most Chuunin.
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* BestServedCold: [[spoiler:Yugito intends to take her brother's crippling out on Tetsu's hide. And quite possibly Sakura's as well.]]
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* BestServedCold: [[spoiler:Yugito intends to take her brother's crippling out on Tetsu's hide. [[OhCrap And quite possibly Sakura's as well.well]].]]
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* BloodyMurder: [[spoiler:Hidan]] has this power as this is before he gained the [[spoiler:immortality powers of Jashin]] he had in canon.
* BrokenBird: Sakura. Kushina as well - while she's still Konoha's prominent sealing master, she's also a crippled single mother.
* BrokenBird: Sakura. Kushina as well - while she's still Konoha's prominent sealing master, she's also a crippled single mother.
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* BloodyMurder: [[spoiler:Hidan]] has possessed this kind of power as this is before he gained gainin the [[spoiler:immortality powers of Jashin]] he had has in canon.
* BrokenBird:Sakura. Sakura.
** Kushina as well - while she's still Konoha's prominent sealing master, she's also a crippled singlemother.mother who can no longer fight for her village and on top of that, she;s wrought with guilt over leading her friend Amaya to her death and for burdening Amaya's husband and daughter with the Kyuubi.
* BrokenBird:
** Kushina as well - while she's still Konoha's prominent sealing master, she's also a crippled single
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* Team 7: Same as {{Canon}}.
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It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead - in this world, for as-yet-undisclosed reasons, the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of his own son Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place ([[SarcasmMode don't worry though]] - (although Sakura still has thankfully grew up with her father father, at least). The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed - Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood - as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
* AlmightyJanitor: Takeru is a "Career-Genin", being in his position for something like 30 years. This and his encroaching age leads to some people (such as [[spoiler:Zabuza]]) underestimating him, but he's more experienced and competant than many a Chuunin.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Kabuto takes this a step further by being an apparent friend (or at least associate) of Takeru Haruno.
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* BestServedCold: [[spoiler:Yugito intends to take her brother's crippling out on Tetsu's hide. And quite possibly Sakura's as well.]]
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Kabuto takes this a step further bybeing an apparent acting the part of a friend (or at least associate) of towards both Sakura and her father, even going with Takeru Haruno.on the Wave Country mission.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Kabuto takes this a step further by
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* BrokenBird: Sakura, in proverbial spades.
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* BrokenBird: Sakura, in proverbial spades.Sakura. Kushina as well - while she's still Konoha's prominent sealing master, she's also a crippled single mother.
* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Kasumi.
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* DropTheHammer: [[spoiler:Kasumi]]'s weapon of choice.
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* DisappearedDad: Minato, for his son Naruto. He didn't even know who his father was until he became a genin.
* DivideAndConquer: [[spoiler:Tetsu]]'s distraction of Kakashi was meant to ensure [[spoiler:his genin team]] would defeat Team 7 [[spoiler:so they can steal their coveted bloodlines, or at least Sasuke's Sharingan.]] It would have worked, were it not for [[spoiler: [[{{Determinator}} Sakura's]] [[SpannerInTheWorks jinchuuriki abilities]].]]
* DropTheHammer:[[spoiler:Kasumi]]'s Kasumi's weapon of choice.choice.
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* Team 7: Same as {{Canon}}.
** Tetsu's team: Eimi Ogushi is TheKirk, Kasumi Tenrai is TheMcCoy, Hikaru Nii is TheSpock.
* DivideAndConquer: [[spoiler:Tetsu]]'s distraction of Kakashi was meant to ensure [[spoiler:his genin team]] would defeat Team 7 [[spoiler:so they can steal their coveted bloodlines, or at least Sasuke's Sharingan.]] It would have worked, were it not for [[spoiler: [[{{Determinator}} Sakura's]] [[SpannerInTheWorks jinchuuriki abilities]].]]
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* Team 7: Same as {{Canon}}.
** Tetsu's team: Eimi Ogushi is TheKirk, Kasumi Tenrai is TheMcCoy, Hikaru Nii is TheSpock.
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: [[spoiler:Or rather, ''Sister'': Yugito Nii, Hikaru's elder sister, is positively ''livid'' with Tetsu for getting her brother critically injured and comatose in a failed, unsanctioned and blatantly ''stupid'' attempt to get Team 7's bloodlines - she promises his punishment will not be merciful in the least. What this will mean for Sakura - the one who injured Hikaru while defending her ''own'' TrueCompanions - remains to be seen.]]
* MissingMom: Amaya, for Sakura. Araimi - the daughter of Team 7's client on their first C-Rank client, Keikan - also doesn't have a living mother.
* OhCrap: Kasumi's reaction when [[spoiler:Sakura handily ''breaks'' her hammer, rendering her powerless before she resumes the beatdown.]]
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Takeru's attitude towards Kushina and Minato. Tragically, his grief for Amaya leaks over towards Naruto as well despite the latter having no awareness of all this - most likely because Naruto should've been the jinchuuriki, but for some reason it fell to Sakura instead.
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:When Sakura unleashes her Kyuubi power against the Cloud ninja. Doubly so when Kasumi spitefully injures an already-unconscious Naruto.]]
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:When Sakura unleashes her Kyuubi power against the Cloud ninja. Doubly so when Kasumi spitefully injures an already-unconscious Naruto.]]
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* TellMeAboutMyFather: Played straight with Sakura, concerning her mother. Inverted with Naruto - when he's calling out Kushina for not telling him how or why she's responsible for "killing" Sakura's mother, he furiously prepares to storm out after declaring how she never even told him about Minato; this prompts her to finally tell her son that his father was the Fourth Hokage.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Takeru's attitude towards Kushina and Minato. Tragically, his grief for Amaya leaks over towards Naruto as well despite the latter having no awareness of all this - most likely because Naruto should've been thejinchuuriki, jinchuuriki ([[WordOfGod Anowack]] heavily hints that the seal was indeed meant for Naruto, but for some reason it fell Minato was forced to instead use Sakura instead.
to contain the demon).
* TooDumbToLive: Besides his [[spoiler:getting her brother probably crippled for life]], [[spoiler:Yugito]] is also unimpressed with [[spoiler:Tetsu's "flagrant violation of the truce between [their] villages" - making it very clear than even if she wasn't feeling vengeful towards him, his complete idiocy in defying the Leaf-Cloud treaty means that they owe Konoha [[OffWithHisHead his head]] to compensate for his backstabbing. Even if his attempted kidnapping were successful, he'd essentially sealed his fate the moment he cooked up the scheme.]]
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:When Sakura unleashes her Kyuubi power against the Cloud ninja. Doubly so when Kasumi [[TooDumbToLive spitefully injures an already-unconsciousNaruto.Naruto]].]]
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Takeru's attitude towards Kushina and Minato. Tragically, his grief for Amaya leaks over towards Naruto as well despite the latter having no awareness of all this - most likely because Naruto should've been the
* TooDumbToLive: Besides his [[spoiler:getting her brother probably crippled for life]], [[spoiler:Yugito]] is also unimpressed with [[spoiler:Tetsu's "flagrant violation of the truce between [their] villages" - making it very clear than even if she wasn't feeling vengeful towards him, his complete idiocy in defying the Leaf-Cloud treaty means that they owe Konoha [[OffWithHisHead his head]] to compensate for his backstabbing. Even if his attempted kidnapping were successful, he'd essentially sealed his fate the moment he cooked up the scheme.]]
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:When Sakura unleashes her Kyuubi power against the Cloud ninja. Doubly so when Kasumi [[TooDumbToLive spitefully injures an already-unconscious
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* WritersCannotDoMaths: While Anowack is good at keeping details consistent, there is ''one'' jarring example of this in-story: specifically, Mizuki's being Takeru's old friend and teammate. While interesting in context, makes no sense in regards to the ages of the characters; Takeru and Amaya were in the same graduating class as Minato & Kushina , meaning they would've been in their mid- to late-20's at the time the Kyuubi attacked, putting Takeru in his late 30's at the youngest (it's unlikely he graduated at a considerably younger age than Minato or Kushina). Mizuki meanwhile is somewhere in his 20's in the present, and his being Iruka's old friend as well in-universe means he ''couldn't'' have graduated before the Kyuubi attack. The only explanation which completely fits is that they became teammates in ''Dead Garden'' only after Amaya's dead, which appears to contradict some statements made by WordOfGod.
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* HeroicResolve: Sakura channels this trope in its most pure form to become the only genin able to withstand the suffocating pressure of [[spoiler:Hidan's]] killing intent [[spoiler:(although the Kyuubi takes the credit for this when it and Sakura meet)]].
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* StarterVillain: [[spoiler:Hidan]], although he subverts the usually SortingAlgorithmOfEvil.
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* StarterVillain: [[spoiler:Hidan]], although he subverts the usually SortingAlgorithmOfEvil.usual SortingAlgorithmOfEvil. [[spoiler:The Cloud Team, too.]]
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* ActionGirl: Sakura is [[FauxActionGirl growing]] [[CharacterDevelopment into]] [[TookALevelInBadass one]], however slowly; Hinata has seemingly already reached this. Tsubaki and Hana are no pushovers, either, and their performances in [[spoiler:the Land of Waves]] [[AdaptationalBadass far outweigh]] anything {{Canon}} ever let them do.
* BerserkButton: Sakura's is threatening or hurting her loved ones - Kushina is often on the recieving end of the DeathGlare ([[ItsAllMyFault not that she tries to defend herself]]), and [[spoiler:the Cloud Team]] made a big mistake in hurting her teammates.
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* CombatMedic: Naruto.
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* CombatMedic: Naruto.Naruto, and of course [[EvilAllAlong Kabuto]].
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Sasuke.
* ManipulativeBastard: Kabuto.
* NiceGuy: '''Naruto'''. Sakura is also shown to be quite kind-hearted, albeit very [[BrokenBird broken]] as well.
* NiceGuy: '''Naruto'''. Sakura is also shown to be quite kind-hearted, albeit very [[BrokenBird broken]] as well.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Sakura, with the aid of the Kyuubi]] unleashes one of these on [[spoiler:the Cloud team]] when they try to [[spoiler:kidnap Sasuke and Naruto for their bloodlines]].
* OutOfCharacterAlert / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
* OutOfCharacterAlert / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Sakura, with the aid of the Kyuubi]] unleashes one of these on [[spoiler:the Cloud team]] when they try to [[spoiler:kidnap Sasuke and Naruto (especially Sasuke) for their bloodlines]].
bloodlines.]]
*OutOfCharacterAlert / SpottingTheThread: OutOfCharacterAlert[=/=]SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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* ParentalSubstitute: Kushina was a secondary mother-figure to Sasuke, especially after Mikoto's death. Sasuke being [[SugarAndIcePersonality who he is]] means he's always been a little unsure of how to interact with her.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Haku]], but contrary to popular presentation, this is decisively ''not'' a good thing.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Haku]], but [[spoiler:Haku]] - and contrary to popular presentation, this is decisively ''not'' a good thing.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and its sequel ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed - Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood - as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and its sequel ''One Hundred Weeks''. Weeks''.
It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura''instead- instead - in this world, for as-yet-undisclosed reasons, the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his his own son]] son Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place.place ([[SarcasmMode don't worry though]] - Sakura still has her father at least). The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed - Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood - as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura''
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* AlphaBitch: Ino and Ami. Naruto points this out when he explains why he doesn't consider the former his friend.
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* AlphaBitch: Ino and Ami. Naruto points this out when he explains why he doesn't consider the former his friend.friend (though Sakura herself notes she's not as bad as Ami).
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** Mizuki, Takeru's old teammate, also qualifies - years ago, he [[TakingTheBullet took a kunai to the hand]] protecting Sakura, and [[spoiler:killed Tsurugi for threatening her.]]
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** Mizuki, Takeru's old teammate, also qualifies - years ago, he [[TakingTheBullet took a kunai to the hand]] protecting Sakura, and [[spoiler:killed in the present [[spoiler:he killed Tsurugi for threatening her.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Haku.]] Contrary to the usual, this is decisively ''not'' a good thing.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Haku.]] Contrary [[spoiler:Haku]], but contrary to the usual, popular presentation, this is decisively ''not'' a good thing.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Takeru's attitude towards Kushina and Minato. Tragically, his grief for Amaya leaks over towards Naruto as well despite the latter having no awareness of all this - most likely because Naruto should've been the jinchuuriki, but for some reason it fell to Sakura instead.
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* HeroicSelfDepreciation: Sakura starts off in the story with ''zero'' self-confidence and a crippling lack of self-worth, thanks to not having the HeroicWillpower of Naruto. She's ''slowly'' getting better, though.
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* HeroicSelfDepreciation: HeroicSelfDeprecation: Sakura starts off in the story with ''zero'' self-confidence and a crippling lack of self-worth, thanks to not having the HeroicWillpower of Naruto. She's ''slowly'' getting better, though.
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** Misumi Tsurugi in Chapter 1 (Type II, if you consider the anime {{Filler}} to be canon). [[spoiler:Hidan]] is also a Type II.
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** Misumi Tsurugi [[spoiler:Misumi Tsurugi]] in Chapter 1 (Type II, if is a Type II (if you consider the anime {{Filler}} to be canon). [[spoiler:Hidan]] canon), as is also a Type II.[[spoiler:Hidan]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mizuki]] who is an AntiVillain in this story, forced into betraying Konoha by [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] threatening one of his loved ones and reaches his limit when Sakura is put at risk.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mizuki]] who is an AntiVillain in this story, forced into betraying Konoha by [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] threatening one of his loved ones and reaches his limit when Sakura [[spoiler:Sakura is put at risk.]]
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** Mizuki, Takeru's old teammate, also qualifies - years ago, he [[TakingTheBullet took a kunai to the hand]] protecting Sakura, and [[spoiler:killed Tsurugi for threatening her.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and its sequel ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura - Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- childhood - as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
* AlphaBitch: Ino and Ami. Naruto points this out when he explains why he doesn't consider the former his friend.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Kabuto takes this a step further by being an apparent friend (or at least associate) of Takeru Haruno.
* DeathByAdaptation:
** Misumi Tsurugi in Chapter 1 (Type II, if you consider the anime {{Filler}} to be canon). [[spoiler:Hidan]] is also a Type II.
** [[spoiler:One of the Haimaru triplets]] in Chapter 8.
** Misumi Tsurugi in Chapter 1 (Type II, if you consider the anime {{Filler}} to be canon). [[spoiler:Hidan]] is also a Type II.
** [[spoiler:One of the Haimaru triplets]] in Chapter 8.
* GenerationXerox: Sakura's mother was "dead last" in her graduating class, just like her daughter. Daresay this is {{Foreshadowing}}?
* HeroicSelfDepreciation: Sakura starts off in the story with ''zero'' self-confidence and a crippling lack of self-worth, thanks to not having the HeroicWillpower of Naruto. She's ''slowly'' getting better, though.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Sakura's mother was "Amaya of the Five Elements"
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* RedBaron: Sakura's mother was "Five-Element Amaya".
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Haku.]] Contrary to the usual, this is decisively ''not'' a good thing.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Sakura's mother was "Amaya of the Five Elements"
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* StarterVillain: [[spoiler:Hidan]], although he subverts the usually SlidingScaleOfVillainy.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Takeru, we ''get'' that you dislike Kushina and [[YouShouldHaveDied have pretty good reason for it]], but telling Sakura not to hang out with Naruto (because he's her son) was probably ''not'' a really good idea - he and Hinata were the ''only'' students who wanted to befriend your daughter, and being cold to Naruto meant that, in turn, Hinata refused to hang out with Sakura unless she made peace with Naruto (which took ''years''). [[SarcasmMode Good job, man]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Takeru, we ''get'' that you dislike Kushina and [[YouShouldHaveDied [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead have pretty good reason for it]], but telling Sakura not to hang out with Naruto (because he's her son) was probably ''not'' a really good idea - he and Hinata were the ''only'' students who wanted to befriend your daughter, and being cold to Naruto meant that, in turn, Hinata refused to hang out with Sakura unless she made peace with Naruto (which took ''years''). [[SarcasmMode Good job, man]].
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* BrokenBird: Sakura, in proverbial spades.
* CombatMedic: Naruto.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Takeru, we ''get'' that you dislike Kushina and [[YouShouldHaveDied have pretty good reason for it]], but telling Sakura not to hang out with Naruto (because he's her son) was probably ''not'' a really good idea - he and Hinata were the ''only'' students who wanted to befriend your daughter, and being cold to Naruto meant that, in turn, Hinata refused to hang out with Sakura unless she made peace with Naruto (which took ''years''). [[SarcasmMode Good job, man]].
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** OverprotectiveDad: Unfortunately he tends to be a bit ''too'' protective of her, ordering her to have nothing to do with the one person who actually wanted to be friends with her (Naruto), resulting in her being alone and friendless during her time at the academy.
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** OverprotectiveDad: Unfortunately he tends to be a bit ''too'' protective of her, ordering her to have nothing to do with the one person of the only people who actually wanted to be friends with her (Naruto), resulting in her being alone and friendless during her time at the academy.
* StarterVillain: [[spoiler:Hidan]], although he subverts the usually SlidingScaleOfVillainy.
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* WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied: [[spoiler:Hidan]] taunts [[spoiler:Tora]] like this after [[spoiler:massacring the Hot Spriongs Village]].
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* WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied: [[spoiler:Hidan]] taunts [[spoiler:Tora]] like this after [[spoiler:massacring the Hot Spriongs Springs Village]].
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Discussion and drafts of upcoming chapters can be found on [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dead-garden-naruto.196459/ the SpaceBattles forum thread]].
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Discussion and drafts of upcoming chapters can be found on [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dead-garden-naruto.196459/ the SpaceBattles forum thread]].
thread]]. Please note that this page features tropes which have so far only appeared in the drafts on the forum, so there may be spoilers even if you've read every published chapter on [=fanfiction.net=].
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Currently spoilering all things related to the Cloud-nin team, at least as ninjas, as they\'re incognito during their first scene.
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* DropTheHammer: [[spoiler:Kasumi]]'s weapon of choice.
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* ShockAndAwe: [[spoiler:Tetsu]] can channel electricity through his prosthetic metal arm and [[spoiler:Eimi]] uses several lightning techniques, [[spoiler:one of which Sasuke steals with his Sharingan]].
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:When Sakura unleashes her Kyuubi power against the Cloud ninja. Doubly so when Kasumi spitefully injures an already-unconscious Naruto.]]
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:When Sakura unleashes her Kyuubi power against the Cloud ninja. Doubly so when Kasumi spitefully injures an already-unconscious Naruto.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving (but crippled) mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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* Jerkass: While normally friendly enough, Kasumi is really a bit of a bully and a thug.
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* Jerkass: {{Jerkass}}: While normally friendly enough, Kasumi is really a bit of a bully and a thug.
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* OurOfCharacterAlert / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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* OurOfCharacterAlert OutOfCharacterAlert / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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Discussion and drafts of upcoming chapters can be found on [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dead-garden-naruto.196459/ the SpaceBattles forum thread]].
* OurOfCharacterAlert / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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* SomethingTheyWouldNeverSay / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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* SomethingTheyWouldNeverSay / SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi has ''almost'' managed to convince Sakura that she and it are one and the same being, when it misspeaks, referring to Naruto and Sasuke as "your friends" rather than "our friends".]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Kakashi demands to know what the hell Kushina was thinking when she told Sakura that she killed Sakura's mother- even if Kushina ''does'' feel responsible, it's making his job far more difficult than necessary.
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* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Kasumi says this when Naruto accidentally sees her naked at the hot springs, before screaming "Pervert!" [[ShamelessFanserviceGirl Not that she really cares.]]
* Jerkass: While normally friendly enough, Kasumi is really a bit of a bully and a thug.
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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Kasumi.
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* BloodyMurder: [[spoiler:Hidan]] has this power as this is before he gained the [[spoiler:immortality powers of Jashin]] he had in canon.
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* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler:Tora]].
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* WhatAnIdiot: [[spoiler:Sakura]] is going [[spoiler:Kyuubi-berserk]] and [[spoiler:Kasumi]] breaks [[spoiler:Naruto's]] [[KickTheDog arm while he's already unconscious]] to show they're being serious. [[UnstoppableRage Bad idea.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: [[spoiler:Sakura]] is going [[spoiler:Kyuubi-berserk]] and [[spoiler:Kasumi]] breaks [[spoiler:Naruto's]] [[KickTheDog arm while he's already unconscious]] to show they're being serious. [[UnstoppableRage Bad idea.]]WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied: [[spoiler:Hidan]] taunts [[spoiler:Tora]] like this after [[spoiler:massacring the Hot Spriongs Village]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[Tropers/Anowack Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[Tropers/Anowack [[{{Tropers/Anowack}} Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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* {{Determinator}}: Sakura finally gets to display this in the battle against [[spoiler:Hidan]].
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Sakura, with the aid of the Kyuubi]] unleashes one of these on [[spoiler:the Cloud team]] when they try to [[spoiler:kidnap Sasuke and Naruto for their bloodlines]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173680/1/Dead_Garden Dead Garden]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail fic written by [[OneOfUs our own]] [[Tropers/Anowack Anowack]], who also wrote ''One Hundred Days'' and ''One Hundred Weeks''. It retells ''Naruto'' as it might have been if it were called ''Sakura'' instead- the 4th Hokage sealed the Kyuubi into Haruno Sakura instead of [[spoiler:his own son]] Naruto. Naruto's mother Kushina survived and Sakura's mother, Haruno Amaya, died in her place. The story extrapolates how these changes would affect the way the cast would have developed -Sakura growing up as the village pariah, Naruto being raised by his loving mother, Sasuke having Naruto as a good friend from childhood- as they are assigned to Team 7 and begin their ninja careers.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* TheAtoner: Kushina, who blames herself for the death of Sakura's mother.
* ChildhoodFriends: Naruto and Sasuke, due to Kushina having been friends with Sasuke's mother Mikoto. Also Naruto and Hinata.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mizuki]] who is an AntiVillain in this story, forced into betraying Konoha by [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] threatening one of his loved ones and reaches his limit when Sakura is put at risk.
* HeroicBSOD: Sakura doesn't take the revelation that she's the host of the Kyuubi nearly as well as Naruto does in canon. It really comes to a head when [[spoiler:she misunderstands the bell test as an attempt by Kakashi to get rid of her by rigging it against her, causing her to try and quit as a ninja]].
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: As in canon, Sakura goes to a dreamscape inside of her where the Kyuubi is imprisoned. Unlike in canon, it takes the form of [[spoiler:a devastated version of Konoha, frozen in time, with the Kyuubi in the form of a beastlike Sakura imprisoned in an iron cage hanging from a dead sakura tree in the middle of a [[TitleDrop dead garden]].]]
* PapaWolf: Haruno Takeru threatens to ''kill'' Kakashi if he "allows" Sakura to have an "accident" while she's under his supervision, regardless of the fact that Kakashi is a famous jounin and he's just a career genin.
** OverprotectiveDad: Unfortunately he tends to be a bit ''too'' protective of her, ordering her to have nothing to do with the one person who actually wanted to be friends with her (Naruto), resulting in her being alone and friendless during her time at the academy.
* VariableLengthChain: Naruto's trademark ability is the chakra chain snare he learned from his mother.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Naruto and Sasuke.
* YouShouldHaveDiedInstead: Takeru never forgave Kushina for living when Amaya died. However, in a subversion, after it happened he insisted that she ''had'' to live, both to atone and because he didn't want Naruto to grow up without a mother as well.
* ZeroApprovalGambit: Kakashi improvises a short-term one to unify Team 7 by [[spoiler:ordering Naruto and Sasuke to kill Sakura after she attempts to quit as a ninja. Instead they both fight him to protect Sakura.]]
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* TheAtoner: Kushina, who blames herself for the death of Sakura's mother.
* ChildhoodFriends: Naruto and Sasuke, due to Kushina having been friends with Sasuke's mother Mikoto. Also Naruto and Hinata.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mizuki]] who is an AntiVillain in this story, forced into betraying Konoha by [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] threatening one of his loved ones and reaches his limit when Sakura is put at risk.
* HeroicBSOD: Sakura doesn't take the revelation that she's the host of the Kyuubi nearly as well as Naruto does in canon. It really comes to a head when [[spoiler:she misunderstands the bell test as an attempt by Kakashi to get rid of her by rigging it against her, causing her to try and quit as a ninja]].
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: As in canon, Sakura goes to a dreamscape inside of her where the Kyuubi is imprisoned. Unlike in canon, it takes the form of [[spoiler:a devastated version of Konoha, frozen in time, with the Kyuubi in the form of a beastlike Sakura imprisoned in an iron cage hanging from a dead sakura tree in the middle of a [[TitleDrop dead garden]].]]
* PapaWolf: Haruno Takeru threatens to ''kill'' Kakashi if he "allows" Sakura to have an "accident" while she's under his supervision, regardless of the fact that Kakashi is a famous jounin and he's just a career genin.
** OverprotectiveDad: Unfortunately he tends to be a bit ''too'' protective of her, ordering her to have nothing to do with the one person who actually wanted to be friends with her (Naruto), resulting in her being alone and friendless during her time at the academy.
* VariableLengthChain: Naruto's trademark ability is the chakra chain snare he learned from his mother.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Naruto and Sasuke.
* YouShouldHaveDiedInstead: Takeru never forgave Kushina for living when Amaya died. However, in a subversion, after it happened he insisted that she ''had'' to live, both to atone and because he didn't want Naruto to grow up without a mother as well.
* ZeroApprovalGambit: Kakashi improvises a short-term one to unify Team 7 by [[spoiler:ordering Naruto and Sasuke to kill Sakura after she attempts to quit as a ninja. Instead they both fight him to protect Sakura.]]