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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11803928/1/Challenger Challenger]]'' is a ''{{Anime/Pokemon}}'' fanfic in much the same vein as ''{{FanFic/Traveler}}''- a {{Reconstruction}} AlternateUniverse fanfiction detailing Ash's journey across Kanto while blending in elements of the games- including a [[GreatOffscreenWar background war]] against [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Team Cipher]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11803928/1/Challenger Challenger]]'' is a ''{{Anime/Pokemon}}'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4310240/darkfire1220 darkfire1220]] in much the same vein as ''{{FanFic/Traveler}}''- a {{Reconstruction}} AlternateUniverse fanfiction detailing Ash's journey across Kanto while blending in elements of the games- including a [[GreatOffscreenWar background war]] against [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Team Cipher]].
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Now has a [[Characters/Darkfire1220sChallenger character page]] in need of Wiki Love.
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* DemotedToExtra: Since the story-line has more similarities with the games, Brock and Misty aren't prevalent outside their gyms and the occasional cameo here and there.
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* DemotedToExtra: Since the story-line has more similarities with the games, Brock and Misty aren't prevalent outside their gyms and the occasional cameo here and there. Pikachu, while an important part of Ash's team, isn't his main partner and best friend here.
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* SpiritualAntithesis: While inspired by Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'s reconstructive take on the ''Pokémon'' mythos, ''Challenger'' is more rooted in science and biology such as how evolution works while ''Traveler'' has a greater emphasis on the mythical aspects of the ''Pokémon'' world such as the {{physical god}}s that roam it and their connections to certain individuals.
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* SpiritualAntithesis: While inspired by Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'s reconstructive take on the ''Pokémon'' mythos, ''Challenger'' is more rooted in science and biology such as how evolution works while ''Traveler'' has a greater emphasis on the mythical aspects of the ''Pokémon'' world such as the {{physical god}}s that roam it and their connections to certain individuals. The legendary Pokémon in both stories are also polar opposite to each other. While ''Traveler'' had them as unstoppable gods who change the very nature of the world by their very appearance, ''Challenger'' treats them as stronger than average Pokémon that can be captured by humans.
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** Legendary Pokémon are also not as impressive as they are in the games. They tend to range from extremely powerful to PhysicalGod depending on the legendary. Here, the ones shown so far are just stronger than normal Pokémon.
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** Chapter 29 reveals that Team Rocket managed to capture [[spoiler:''Latios''!]]
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** Chapter 29 reveals that Team Rocket managed to capture [[spoiler:''Latios''!]][[spoiler:''Latios!'']]
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* AmplifierArtifact: [[spoiler:Similarly to the Lake of Rage, Team Rocket have a device that forces evolution, which they deploy to destroy the St. Anne.]]
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* AmplifierArtifact: [[spoiler:Similarly Similarly to the Lake of Rage, Team [[spoiler:Team Rocket have a device that forces evolution, which they deploy to destroy the St. Anne.]]
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*** Both Pikachu and Eevee [[spoiler:(later Espeon)]] refused nicknames when captured. Rhydon was also not given a nickname on being captured, nor was Froakie or Gyarados.
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*** Both Pikachu and Eevee [[spoiler:(later Espeon)]] refused nicknames when captured. Rhydon was also not given a nickname on being captured, nor was Froakie or Gyarados.
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** Team Rocket is also much more of a threat this time, as their actions are shown to threaten countless innocent lives and they have the money and resources to [[spoiler:capture ''legendary Pokémon'']].
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** Chapter Eight: Ash, Paul, and Gary [[spoiler:attack the Game Corner and are nearly killed by Team Rocket Admins. Pikachu is crippled and needs rehabilitation.]]
** Chapter Sixteen: Team Rocket attack [[spoiler:the St. Anne. Proton and Petrel nearly kill the main characters again, and inform them that the operation was planned specifically to get revenge on them. [[FromBadToWorse Then, Team Rocket's new experimental device activates and evolves every Magikarp in the area to Gyarados, killing thousands of people on the lifeboats. Charizard is knocked out and Ash only survives due to getting caught on a Gyarados fleeing in pain.]]]]
** Chapter Sixteen: Team Rocket attack [[spoiler:the St. Anne. Proton and Petrel nearly kill the main characters again, and inform them that the operation was planned specifically to get revenge on them. [[FromBadToWorse Then, Team Rocket's new experimental device activates and evolves every Magikarp in the area to Gyarados, killing thousands of people on the lifeboats. Charizard is knocked out and Ash only survives due to getting caught on a Gyarados fleeing in pain.]]]]
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** Chapter Eight: 8: Ash, Paul, and Gary [[spoiler:attack the Game Corner and are nearly killed by Team Rocket Admins. Pikachu is crippled and needs rehabilitation.]]
** ChapterSixteen: 16: Team Rocket attack [[spoiler:the St. Anne. Proton and Petrel nearly kill the main characters again, and inform them that the operation was planned specifically to get revenge on them. [[FromBadToWorse Then, Team Rocket's new experimental device activates and evolves every Magikarp in the area to Gyarados, killing thousands of people on the lifeboats. Charizard is knocked out and Ash only survives due to getting caught on a Gyarados fleeing in pain.]]]]]]]]
** Chapter 29 reveals that Team Rocket managed to capture [[spoiler:''Latios''!]]
** Chapter
** Chapter 29 reveals that Team Rocket managed to capture [[spoiler:''Latios''!]]
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* PutOnABus: [[spoiler:Pikachu gets sent to Vermillion Gym for rehab after being badly injured in the Game Corner.]]
** CommutingOnAbus: [[spoiler:He briefly showed up again while Ash was in Vermillion waiting for the St. Anne.]]
** CommutingOnAbus: [[spoiler:He briefly showed up again while Ash was in Vermillion waiting for the St. Anne.]]
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* PutOnABus: [[spoiler:Pikachu gets sent to Vermillion Gym for rehab after being badly injured in the Game Corner.]]
** CommutingOnAbus: [[spoiler:He There was an instance of CommutingOnAbus, since he briefly showed up again while Ash was in Vermillion waiting for the St. Anne.]]]]
** Luna decides to depart from the group so she can travel and grow by herself.
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** Luna decides to depart from the group so she can travel and grow by herself.
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* HopeSpot: Ash has beaten [[spoiler:Proton, and it looks like everyone's going to get out safely. Then Petrel reveals himself, mocks Ash, and reveals that his [[MasterOfIllusion Zoroark has been messing with them the entire time.]] ]]
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* HopeSpot: Ash has beaten [[spoiler:Proton, and it looks like everyone's going to get out safely. Then Petrel reveals himself, mocks Ash, and reveals that his [[MasterOfIllusion Zoroark has been messing with them the entire time.]] ]]]]
* ItsPersonal: Ash develops this relationship with Team Rocket over time, [[spoiler:culminating after learning that they destroyed the St. Anne ''just to get at him'', especially after being told by Drake to avoid contact with them.]]
* ItsPersonal: Ash develops this relationship with Team Rocket over time, [[spoiler:culminating after learning that they destroyed the St. Anne ''just to get at him'', especially after being told by Drake to avoid contact with them.]]
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* ItsPersonal: [[spoiler:Ash develops this relationship with Team Rocket over time, culminating after learning that they destroyed the St. Anne ''just to get at him'', especially after being told by Drake to avoid contact with them.]]
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* TheBusCameBack: As of chapter 28, Pikachu has made a full recovery from [[spoiler:the events the Game Corner]] and is back on Ash's team.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Pretty much all of Ash's team as they evolve and grow.
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* ForWantOfANail: AlternateUniverse differences aside, the main starting point for the story is that Ash wakes up in time to get his starter instead of oversleeping.
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Not to be confused with the other Pokemon fanfic on this wiki called ''{{FanFic/Challenger}}''.
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Not to be confused with the other Pokemon Pokémon fanfic on this wiki called ''{{FanFic/Challenger}}''.
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** Paul is nowhere close to as arrogant as he was in the anime, and has a more pleasant {{friendly rivalry}} with Ash. He even helps out against Team Rocket. Also, unlike his anime counterpart, he doesn't abuse his Pokemon or get rid of them when he feels they aren't worth his time anymore.
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** Paul is nowhere close to as arrogant as he was in the anime, and has a more pleasant {{friendly rivalry}} with Ash. He even helps out against Team Rocket. Also, unlike his anime counterpart, he doesn't abuse his Pokemon Pokémon or get rid of them when he feels they aren't worth his time anymore.
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** In the anime, Paul found Chimchar when he was running for his life and fought back against his attackers. Here, he was given to Paul by Cynthia.
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** In the anime, Paul found Chimchar when he was running for his life and fought back against his attackers.the attacking wild Zangoose. Here, he was given to Paul by Cynthia.
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* AlmightyMom: Delia is frightening when she's angry. Even Oak, the former champion of Kanto, doesn't want to be near her when she's pissed off.
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* AlmightyMom: Delia is frightening when she's angry. Even Oak, the former ''former champion of Kanto, Kanto'', doesn't want to be near her when she's pissed off.
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* SpiritualAntithesis: While inspired by Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'s reconstructive take on the ''Pokemon'' mythos, ''Challenger'' is more rooted in science and biology such as how evolution works while ''Traveler'' has a greater emphasis on the mythical aspects of the Pokemon world such as the {{physical god}}s that roam it and their connections to certain individuals.
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* SpiritualAntithesis: While inspired by Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'s reconstructive take on the ''Pokemon'' ''Pokémon'' mythos, ''Challenger'' is more rooted in science and biology such as how evolution works while ''Traveler'' has a greater emphasis on the mythical aspects of the Pokemon ''Pokémon'' world such as the {{physical god}}s that roam it and their connections to certain individuals.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In the same vein as ''Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'', the story is way darker than the anime or games could hope to be, as fights are more visceral and detailed with realistic injuries. Though the story still has plenty of lighthearted moments and is still recognizable Pokémon, it's tone is more in line with the ''Adventure'' mangas.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In the same vein as ''Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'', the story is way darker than the anime or games could hope to be, as fights are more visceral and detailed with realistic injuries. Though While the story still has plenty of lighthearted moments and is still recognizable Pokémon, it's tone is more in line with the ''Adventure'' mangas.manga.
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* CerebusRetcon: The regions from the ''VideoGame/PokemonRanger'' series are given reason as to why they completely bar their doors to trainers. Of all the regions to suffer from the Cypher war, they had the worst fallout, so trainers are forbidden from entering.
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* HandWave: The regions from the ''VideoGame/PokemonRanger'' series are given reason as to why they completely bar their doors to trainers. Of all the regions to suffer from the Cypher war, they had the worst fallout, so trainers are forbidden from entering.
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** Paul's Chimchar is stated and shown to be a battle prodigy, even doing a decent job against one of Paul's Nidoking in a training match.
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** Paul's Chimchar is stated and shown to be a battle prodigy, even doing a decent job against one of Paul's Nidoking in a training match. A major step up from the anime, where he'd freeze up when things were against the wall for him.
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* SuicidalOverconfidence: Breaking into the Game Corner Team Rocket base to get evidence might have been justified. Continuing to explore was very much this.
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* SuicidalOverconfidence: Breaking into the Game Corner Team Rocket base to get evidence might have been justified. Continuing to explore was very much this. The result? [[spoiler:They are nearly killed and Pikachu is crippled.]]
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* HandWave: The regions from the ''VideoGame/PokemonRanger'' series are given reason as to why they completely bar their doors to trainers. Of all the regions to suffer from the Cypher war, they had the worst fallout, so trainers are forbidden from entering.
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* TheHeavy: Of Team Rocket so far, Proton has had by far the greatest amount of interaction with Ash. [[note]]Beaten in Mount Moon just barely, brutalising Pikachu and nearly killing Ash in Celadon, a Steelix intended for him providing the majority of the muscle for the grunts accosting May, and [[spoiler:heading up the attack on the St. Anne that had Ash as its primary target.]] [[/note]]
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* TheHeavy: Of Team Rocket so far, Proton has had by far the greatest amount of interaction with Ash. [[note]]Beaten in Mount Moon just barely, brutalising brutalizing Pikachu and nearly killing Ash in Celadon, a Steelix intended for him providing the majority of the muscle for the grunts accosting May, and [[spoiler:heading up the attack on the St. Anne that had Ash as its primary target.]] [[/note]]
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* AlmightyMom: Delia is frightening when she's angry. Even Oak, the former champion of Kanto, doesn't want to be near her when she's pissed off.
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** Cynthia; while she's still quite the badass, she's not yet Sinnoh's Champion. Though this is justified by the Sinnoh League being a fairly recent development, so there hasn't been anyone strong enough to become Champion.
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** Cynthia; while she's still quite the badass, she's not yet Sinnoh's Champion.Champion and simply works for the Sinnoh League. Though this is justified by the Sinnoh League being a fairly recent development, so there hasn't been anyone strong enough to become Champion.
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* BadassInDistress: Cynthia was held captive by Team Rocket after they got the jump on her and knocked her out with Sleep Powder.
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* BadassInDistress: BadassInDistress:
** Paul ends up being captured by Team Rocket alongside several other trainers on Mt. Moon.
** Cynthia was held captive by Team Rocket after they got the jump on her and knocked her out with Sleep Powder.
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** Cynthia was held captive by Team Rocket after they got the jump on her and knocked her out with Sleep Powder.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In the same vein as ''Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'', the story is way darker than the anime or games could hope to be, though it still has plenty of lighthearted moments and is still recognizable Pokémon.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In the same vein as ''Fanfic/{{Traveler}}'', the story is way darker than the anime or games could hope to be, though it as fights are more visceral and detailed with realistic injuries. Though the story still has plenty of lighthearted moments and is still recognizable Pokémon.Pokémon, it's tone is more in line with the ''Adventure'' mangas.
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** It's implied that Chimchar's ''Blaze'' ability is on par with the average Chimchar, where as in the anime, it turned him into an unstoppable force of nature.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Giovanni is the leader of Team Rocket, but everyone sees him as a powerful and respectable Gym leader.
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** Professor Oak was just a researcher in the anime and games. Here, he's the ''former champion'' of Kanto.
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* BadassFamily: Gary is a kickass trainer and he's the grandson of the ex-champion of the Kanto region. That should give you some ideas.