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-->'''Violet:''' I don't think it was about love, Klaus. I think it was about power. [[spoiler:When people only think of themselves…when they want power more than anything, it destroys them. It turns them into monsters, and they can't…they can't feel anymore. He was selfish, and he wanted her. [[StockPhrases But if he couldn't…couldn't have her, then no one would.]] He had to make sure of it.]]

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-->'''Violet:''' I don't think it was about love, Klaus. I think it was about power. [[spoiler:When When people only think of themselves…when they want power more than anything, it destroys them. It turns them into monsters, and they can't…they can't feel anymore. He [[spoiler:He was selfish, and he wanted her. [[StockPhrases But if he couldn't…couldn't have her, then no one would.]] He had to make sure of it.]]



-->'''Klaus:''' You know, a family…a home… You want those things, don't you?
-->'''Violet:''' Well...yes. You know I do.
-->'''Klaus:''' Won't you regret giving that up, because of me?
-->'''Violet:''' Oh Klaus. You and Sunny are my family.

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-->'''Klaus:''' You know, a family…a home… You want those things, don't you?
-->'''Violet:'''
you?\\
'''Violet:'''
Well...yes. You know I do.
-->'''Klaus:'''
do.\\
'''Klaus:'''
Won't you regret giving that up, because of me?
-->'''Violet:'''
me?\\
'''Violet:'''
Oh Klaus. You and Sunny are my family.



--->'''Klaus:''' He called Sunny our little sister.
--->'''Violet:''' He could've guessed that. What else would she be?
--->'''Klaus:''' Our daughter. People who don't know better might think--
--->'''Violet:''' Klaus!
--->'''Klaus:''' What I meant is, the engineer knew that Sunny is our sister. He was looking for us.

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--->'''Klaus:''' -->'''Klaus:''' He called Sunny our little sister.
--->'''Violet:'''
sister.\\
'''Violet:'''
He could've guessed that. What else would she be?
--->'''Klaus:'''
be?\\
'''Klaus:'''
Our daughter. People who don't know better might think--
--->'''Violet:''' Klaus!
--->'''Klaus:'''
think--\\
'''Violet:''' Klaus!\\
'''Klaus:'''
What I meant is, the engineer knew that Sunny is our sister. He was looking for us.
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* RelativeError: Ziggagged trope. Klaus argues that the normal assumption to make about a trio consisting of a young man, a young woman, and a small child is to assume they're a nuclear family. When they ''aren't'' mistaken as such, Klaus finds this suspicious.

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* RelativeError: Ziggagged trope. Klaus argues that the normal OccamsRazor assumption to make about a trio consisting of a young man, a young woman, and a small child is to assume they're a nuclear family. When they ''aren't'' mistaken as such, Klaus finds this suspicious.suspicious, even though it's correct.
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* RelativeError: Ziggagged trope. Klaus argues that the normal assumption to make about a trio consisting of a young man, a young woman, and a small child is to assume they're a nuclear family. When they ''aren't'' mistaken as such, Klaus finds this suspicious.
--->'''Klaus:''' He called Sunny our little sister.
--->'''Violet:''' He could've guessed that. What else would she be?
--->'''Klaus:''' Our daughter. People who don't know better might think--
--->'''Violet:''' Klaus!
--->'''Klaus:''' What I meant is, the engineer knew that Sunny is our sister. He was looking for us.

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