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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor ''VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}'' fanfiction written by Threepwillow. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as its main characters.
Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquatos' act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Galochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AerithAndBob: Inside Pokeylope's head are turtles with names ranging from Carapastian VI of Sauntershire to Bill.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know that you weren't dead?!''
* BookEnds: The fic begins and ends in Psychonauts Headquarters with Gus calling about the circus being in town.
* TheCavalry: Played with when Raz remembers the Either waiting for them and goes to retrieve it.
-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
* CurseEscapeClause: The plot is based around finding out what this is.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
%%* RaceAgainstTheClock
* RunningGag: Lili finishing a RousingSpeech with a mention of a mission the present party has gone on- only to find that nobody knows what she is talking about.
* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves.
* SuperDrowningSkills: All of the Aquatos, [[spoiler:along with Lili, once she considers herself part of Raz's family.]]
* TeleporterAccident: [[spoiler:Lili,]] when Raz takes them to Canada.
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Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquatos' act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Galochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AerithAndBob: Inside Pokeylope's head are turtles with names ranging from Carapastian VI of Sauntershire to Bill.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know that you weren't dead?!''
* BookEnds: The fic begins and ends in Psychonauts Headquarters with Gus calling about the circus being in town.
* TheCavalry: Played with when Raz remembers the Either waiting for them and goes to retrieve it.
-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
* CurseEscapeClause: The plot is based around finding out what this is.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
%%* RaceAgainstTheClock
* RunningGag: Lili finishing a RousingSpeech with a mention of a mission the present party has gone on- only to find that nobody knows what she is talking about.
* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves.
* SuperDrowningSkills: All of the Aquatos, [[spoiler:along with Lili, once she considers herself part of Raz's family.]]
* TeleporterAccident: [[spoiler:Lili,]] when Raz takes them to Canada.
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Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquatos' act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Galochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AerithAndBob: Inside Pokeylope's head are turtles with names ranging from Carapastian VI of Sauntershire to Bill.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know that you weren't dead?!''
* BookEnds: The fic begins and ends in Psychonauts Headquarters with Gus calling about the circus being in town.
* TheCavalry: Played with when Raz remembers the Either waiting for them and goes to retrieve it.
-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
* CurseEscapeClause: The plot is based around finding out what this is.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
%%* RaceAgainstTheClock
* RunningGag: Lili finishing a RousingSpeech with a mention of a mission the present party has gone on- only to find that nobody knows what she is talking about.
* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves.
* SuperDrowningSkills: All of the Aquatos, [[spoiler:along with Lili, once she considers herself part of Raz's family.]]
* TeleporterAccident: [[spoiler:Lili,]] when Raz takes them to Canada.
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-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know [[TearJerker that you weren't dead]]?!''
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know [[TearJerker that you weren't dead]]?!''
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor ''VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}'' fanfiction written by Threepwillow, of VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}. Threepwillow. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as it's its main characters.
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Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquato's Aquatos' act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Gallochio Galochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor fanfiction written by Threepwillow, of VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as it's main characters.
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** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
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* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves
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* SuperDrowningSkills: All of the Aquatos, [[spoiler:along with Lili, once she considers herself part of Raz's family.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor fanfiction written by Threepwillow, of {{Psychonauts}}.VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as it's main characters.
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* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
* This list may also include tropes relating to a secondary or tertiary character or location.
* List of tropes that are only seen in a single episode or a small handful of episodes.
* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
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* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
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** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
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Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquato's act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Gallochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor fanfiction written by Threepwillow, of {{Psychonauts}}. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as it's main characters.
Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquato's act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows
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!! This show provides examples of:
* [=TropeTitle=]: List of tropes that are fixtures of the series.
* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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!! Episodes of this series provide examples of:
* The guidelines for listing show-level tropes apply to this list, too. Alphabetical by trope title.
* List of tropes that are only seen in a single episode or a small handful of episodes.
* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
* This list may also include tropes relating to a secondary or tertiary character or location.
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor fanfiction written by Threepwillow, of {{Psychonauts}}. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as it's main characters.
Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquato's act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows
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!! This show provides examples of:
* [=TropeTitle=]: List of tropes that are fixtures of the series.
* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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!! Episodes of this series provide examples of:
* The guidelines for listing show-level tropes apply to this list, too. Alphabetical by trope title.
* List of tropes that are only seen in a single episode or a small handful of episodes.
* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
* This list may also include tropes relating to a secondary or tertiary character or location.
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