Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* DoubleEntendre: Jean is fond of giving these.
Changed line(s) 18,19 (click to see context) from:
* EntertaininglyWrong: In his youth, Ben met three people he assumed were mutants. In truth, they were [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68626663 Loki, Thor, and Ulik]].
* DoubleEntendre: Jean is fond of giving these.
* DoubleEntendre: Jean is fond of giving these.
to:
* EntertaininglyWrong: EntertaininglyWrong:
** In his youth, Ben met three people he assumed were mutants. In truth, they were [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68626663 Loki, Thor, and Ulik]].
* DoubleEntendre: Jean is fond ** When Emma first gets to know Peter, Jean, and Anne Marie, she assumed they were part of giving these.some mutant group, and that Peter's mutant power was SuperIntelligence.
** In his youth, Ben met three people he assumed were mutants. In truth, they were [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68626663 Loki, Thor, and Ulik]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** The InUniverse meme of Peter calls him [[Anime/DragonBallSuper the ‘Ultra-instinct Geek’]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** This change was [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-69465751 partly influenced by Club 33]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SmokyGentlemensClub: Averted. As this kind of club has gone out of style, the Hellfire Club of this story is more along the lines of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-69463477 fancy restaurants for the super rich]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Irene is little better. One way she does this is by using her blindness to mess with people, such as with her [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-69283804 "If You Seek Amy" shirt]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Carl can get away with a lot due to having rich parents.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* FashionDesigner: Peter develops an interest in designing clothes thanks to making various pieces of clothing for Jean and Anne Marie.
* ProjectileWebbing: Anne Marie can fire webbing from her fingers. Peter uses the webbing she creates for his own web-shooters before he makes his own synthetic version.
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* TeamPet: One of the spiders that bites Peter is hitches a ride in his clothes when he goes home. It is named Shelob and it acts as the teens' pet [[spoiler:until it is killed by Carl when he broke into Peter's room]].
to:
* TeamPet: One of the spiders that bites Peter is hitches a ride in his clothes when he goes home. It is named Shelob and it acts as the teens' pet [[spoiler:until it is killed by Carl when he broke into Peter's room]].
Added DiffLines:
* WallCrawl: Peter and Anne Marie have different versions of this power. Peter has tiny hairs on his hands that help him cling to surfaces, while Anne Marie relies on the webbing from her hands to stick to them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 36 (click to see context) from:
** The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
to:
** The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.Jean names their pet spider [[Franchise/TolkiensLegendarium Shelob]].
Added DiffLines:
** The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SkunkStripe: A lock of Peter's hair turns white after he is drained Anne Marie.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* PsychicNosebleed: This happens to Jean when overworking her telepathy. Emma mentions that it also happened to her in the past, so it may just be the same for all telepaths.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* TeamPet: One of the spiders that bites Peter is hitches a ride in his clothes when he goes home. It is named Shelob and it acts as the teens' pet [[spoiler:until it is killed by Carl when he broke into Peter's room]].
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* UnskilledButStrong: Jean's telepathic and telekinetic is incredibly powerful. Unfortunately, because she has never been instructed how to, and because her powers are so great, she has difficulty controlling them. She is getting tutoring from Emma to overcome this.
to:
* UnskilledButStrong: Jean's telepathic and telekinetic is abilities are incredibly powerful. Unfortunately, because she has never been instructed how to, and because her powers are so great, she has difficulty controlling them. She is getting tutoring from Emma to overcome this.this.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Anne Marie will punch out anyone who threatens Peter, [[spoiler:as Carl found out when she knocked him out with a single punch to the face]].
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Anne Marie will punch out anyone who threatens Peter, [[spoiler:as Carl found out when she knocked him out with a single punch to the face]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* GiverOfLameNames: Jean naming things leads to things having very silly names, such as calling Anne Marie's spider sense as "Peter tingles".
to:
* GiverOfLameNames: Jean naming things leads to things having very silly names, such as calling Anne Marie's spider sense as SpiderSense her "Peter tingles".Tingle".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 17 (click to see context) :
* CurbStompBattle: Peter handles Carl so effortlessly that videos of it become an InUniverse meme.
Added DiffLines:
* NonchalantDodge: Peter handles Carl so effortlessly that videos of it become an InUniverse meme.
Added DiffLines:
** It is later expanded that before he met the Adlers, he was bored with school. Meeting them actually helped him improve by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68675023 getting him interested in stuff outside of school]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 32 (click to see context) from:
* NoSocialSkills:
to:
* NoSocialSkills: Due to relying on her powers to tell how people are feeling since getting them, Jean can't really read social cues from people who are blocking her powers, like with Emma.
Added DiffLines:
* TeenGenius: Peter's a genius even in high school, and his intellect is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68663071 all natural]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* EarlyBirdCameo: In Part 1.7, Peter watches a debate on mutants between Dr. Essex and Dr. Pym. Fans of comics will quickly recognize these as ComicBook/MisterSinister and ComicBook/AntMan.
to:
* EarlyBirdCameo: In Part 1.7, Peter watches a debate on mutants between Dr. Essex and Dr. Pym. Fans of comics will quickly recognize these them as ComicBook/MisterSinister and ComicBook/AntMan.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EntertaininglyWrong: In his youth, Ben met three people he assumed were mutants. In truth, they were [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68626663 Loki, Thor, and Ulik]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EarlyBirdCameo: In Part 1.7, Peter watches a debate on mutants between Dr. Essex and Dr. Pym. Fans of comics will quickly recognize these as ComicBook/MisterSinister and ComicBook/AntMan.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GiverOfLameNames: Jean naming things leads to things having very silly names, such as calling Anne Marie's spider sense as "Peter tingles".
Added DiffLines:
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Jean gained her powers when [[spoiler:her best friend died]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AccentSlipUp: Anne Marie's accent is more present when she's surprised, [[spoiler:such as when she wakes up next to Peter on her bed]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Peter is the one to suggest [[spoiler:killing Carl and disposing of his body after they subdue him]].
* DoubleEntendre: Jean is fond of giving these.
* FreudianTrio: Jean is the Id, Peter is the Ego, and Anne Marie is the Superego.
* NoSocialSkills:
Changed line(s) 30,31 (click to see context) from:
---> '''Duke''': You can call me Duke. [[MemeticMutation This here's Caliban. He's got my back.]]\\
'''Caliban''': ''[groans]''
'''Caliban''': ''[groans]''
to:
---> '''Duke''': '''Duke:''' You can call me Duke. [[MemeticMutation This here's Caliban. He's got my back.]]\\
'''Caliban''': '''Caliban:''' ''[groans]''
Added DiffLines:
* UnskilledButStrong: Jean's telepathic and telekinetic is incredibly powerful. Unfortunately, because she has never been instructed how to, and because her powers are so great, she has difficulty controlling them. She is getting tutoring from Emma to overcome this.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: Anne Marie and Peter are this to Jean, constantly making sure she doesn't make things worse with her LooseLips and constant moments of [[FeeFiFauxPas social blunders]].
to:
* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: Anne Marie and Peter are this to Jean, constantly making sure she doesn't make things worse with her LooseLips [[TheGadfly provocative statements]] and constant moments of [[FeeFiFauxPas social blunders]].
Added DiffLines:
* TheGadfly: Jean enjoys saying things that embarrass others.
Added DiffLines:
* JerkJock: Carl King is the captain of the football team and uses his influence to get other jocks to be bullies too.
Added DiffLines:
* NiceGuy: Emma notes that Peter is one of the most honest, and just plain nice, guys she's ever met.
Added DiffLines:
* TheTalk: Jean makes her spiel about mutant powers sound like this [[PlayedForLaughs for laughs]].
--> “Oh, oh! I have a whole spiel ready.” Jean said brightly. She then shifted her voice, taking on a lecturing tone and held up a finger as she spoke. “Ahem… so… as you are getting older and more mature you may notice your body undergoing some changes--”\\
“You know,” Peter interrupted, “Usually when someone starts with this kind of talk, it’s to explain why I’ve got hair growing in weird places.”\\
“Or why I’ve got tits suddenly popping up.” Anne Marie chimed in.\\
“Or why other things start popping up,” Peter deadpanned.\\
The two Adler girls stared at him in dead silence. He merely waggled his eyebrows in response.
--> “Oh, oh! I have a whole spiel ready.” Jean said brightly. She then shifted her voice, taking on a lecturing tone and held up a finger as she spoke. “Ahem… so… as you are getting older and more mature you may notice your body undergoing some changes--”\\
“You know,” Peter interrupted, “Usually when someone starts with this kind of talk, it’s to explain why I’ve got hair growing in weird places.”\\
“Or why I’ve got tits suddenly popping up.” Anne Marie chimed in.\\
“Or why other things start popping up,” Peter deadpanned.\\
The two Adler girls stared at him in dead silence. He merely waggled his eyebrows in response.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** It's later said that [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68502608 being around a precog]] is part of the reason Jean is the way she is.
Added DiffLines:
* ShipperOnDeck: Jean really wants to see Peter and Anne Marie get together, which does happen.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FreudianSlip: Jean has a tendency of saying these.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AccidentalPervert: Jean apparently has a tendency of walking into the bathroom while Peter is in there, which makes him uncomfortable. She solves this by entering the bathroom by walking in backwards.
Added DiffLines:
* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: Anne Marie and Peter are this to Jean, constantly making sure she doesn't make things worse with her LooseLips and constant moments of [[FeeFiFauxPas social blunders]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* TheCameo: The [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68425994 janitor]] who helps Peter in Chapter 3 is non other than the King of the Cameo, Creator/StanLee.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Anne Marie was [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68369233 initially unaware]] of Jean's powers.
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
to:
* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
** The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
Changed line(s) 19,20 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Duke''': You can call me Duke. [[MemeticMutation This here's Caliban. He's got my back.]]
-->'''Caliban''': ''(groans)''
-->'''Caliban''': ''(groans)''
to:
-->'''Caliban''': ''(groans)''
'''Caliban''': ''[groans]''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** One of the chapters is titled [[Music/{{U2}} "The Boy Falls From The Sky"]], a reference to the [[Theatre/SpiderManTurnOffTheDark ill-fated Broadway musical]].
** Film/SuicideSquad is referenced when the Morlocks introduce themselves to Kurt.
-->'''Duke''': You can call me Duke. [[MemeticMutation This here's Caliban. He's got my back.]]
-->'''Caliban''': ''(groans)''
** Kurt's moniker of "Nachtaffe" is German for [[Film/SpiderManFarFromHome "Night Monkey"]].
** Film/SuicideSquad is referenced when the Morlocks introduce themselves to Kurt.
-->'''Duke''': You can call me Duke. [[MemeticMutation This here's Caliban. He's got my back.]]
-->'''Caliban''': ''(groans)''
** Kurt's moniker of "Nachtaffe" is German for [[Film/SpiderManFarFromHome "Night Monkey"]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Jean's thought processes are rather odd, leading her to do or say strange things with little warning. It's explained as being a side-effect of her [[PowerIncontinence lack of control]] over her {{Telepathy}}. She's constantly getting the thoughts and emotions of other people, and these thoughts and emotions bleed into her personality.
to:
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Jean's thought processes are rather odd, leading her to do or say strange things with little warning. It's explained as being [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68347096 a side-effect side-effect]] of her [[PowerIncontinence lack of control]] over her {{Telepathy}}. She's constantly getting the thoughts and emotions of other people, and these thoughts and emotions bleed into her personality.personality.
* CurbStompBattle: Peter handles Carl so effortlessly that videos of it become an InUniverse meme.
* CurbStompBattle: Peter handles Carl so effortlessly that videos of it become an InUniverse meme.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AtrociousAlias: One of the mutants that goes after Emma calls himself "The Fabulous Frog-man".
--> '''Peter:''' You guys picked your own names. I can tell.
--> '''Peter:''' You guys picked your own names. I can tell.
Added DiffLines:
* CasualDangerDialog: Peter has some friendly banter with Duke while the two are fighting each other.
Added DiffLines:
* HateSink: Carl King is a ruthless bully who pressures the other jocks into bullying the weaker students, like Peter. [[spoiler:He goes into irredeemable territory when he breaks into Peter's room with a gun, and ends up shooting Uncle Ben when the older man found him.]]
Added DiffLines:
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Jean has a tendency of being very handsy with people she likes.
* ShoutOut: The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
* ShoutOut: The codenames that the Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
-> People you meet unexpectedly can end up changing everything. Not just for you, but for the whole world.
''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/ Confused and Dazed]]'' is an AU crossover fanfic of ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution'' and ''Franchise/SpiderMan''. In it, a young Jean Grey is adopted soon after her powers manifest by one Irene Adler. Irene and her two adopted daughters, Jean and Anne Marie, then move to New York, right next to a lovely couple that is taking care of their nephew.
----
!!''Confused and Dazed'' features the following Tropes:
* TheBully: Surprisingly, it is not Flash Thompson, but one Carl King.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Jean's thought processes are rather odd, leading her to do or say strange things with little warning. It's explained as being a side-effect of her [[PowerIncontinence lack of control]] over her {{Telepathy}}. She's constantly getting the thoughts and emotions of other people, and these thoughts and emotions bleed into her personality.
* GreenEyedMonster: Anne Marie is jealous of Emma's good looks.
* LivesInAVan: As she has been kicked out by her family, Emma has to sleep in her car.
----
''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/ Confused and Dazed]]'' is an AU crossover fanfic of ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution'' and ''Franchise/SpiderMan''. In it, a young Jean Grey is adopted soon after her powers manifest by one Irene Adler. Irene and her two adopted daughters, Jean and Anne Marie, then move to New York, right next to a lovely couple that is taking care of their nephew.
----
!!''Confused and Dazed'' features the following Tropes:
* TheBully: Surprisingly, it is not Flash Thompson, but one Carl King.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Jean's thought processes are rather odd, leading her to do or say strange things with little warning. It's explained as being a side-effect of her [[PowerIncontinence lack of control]] over her {{Telepathy}}. She's constantly getting the thoughts and emotions of other people, and these thoughts and emotions bleed into her personality.
* GreenEyedMonster: Anne Marie is jealous of Emma's good looks.
* LivesInAVan: As she has been kicked out by her family, Emma has to sleep in her car.
----
