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* TokenAdult: Ingrid and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 13 or so, both Ingrid and Yumi are 15.
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* TokenAdult: Ingrid and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 13 11-13 years or so, both Ingrid and is 15, while Yumi are 15.is the oldest of the Lyoko Warriors at 14.
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* UncertainDoom: Ingrid appears to die after her first fight with a Hiss-possessed Milly, but the narration never actually mentions her dying, and her corpse is nowhere to be found later. A post the author made giving Emily Pope's analysis on Molly reveals that she is alive but in urgent care.
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* UncertainDoom: Ingrid appears to die after her first fight with a Hiss-possessed Milly, but the narration never actually mentions her dying, and her corpse is nowhere to be found later. A post the author made giving Emily Pope's analysis on Molly Milly reveals that she is alive but in urgent care.
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* UncertainDoom: Ingrid appears to die after her first fight with a Hiss-possessed Milly, but the narration never actually mentions her dying, and her corpse is nowhere to be found later.
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* UncertainDoom: Ingrid appears to die after her first fight with a Hiss-possessed Milly, but the narration never actually mentions her dying, and her corpse is nowhere to be found later. A post the author made giving Emily Pope's analysis on Molly reveals that she is alive but in urgent care.
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* MutualMasquerade: Prior to the events of the first few chapters, the Lyoko Warriors and the FBC were in the dark about each other - the former just pegged Ingrid for a nosy girl interested in the paranormal, while the latter was suspicious of the group and their connection to the AWEs that would constantly happen around the school.
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* MutualMasquerade: Prior to the events of the first few chapters, the Lyoko Warriors and the FBC were in the dark about each other - the former just pegged Ingrid for a nosy girl interested in the paranormal, while the latter was suspicious of the group and their connection to the AWEs several Altered World Events that would constantly happen around the school.have occurred on campus.
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* TokenAdult: Ingrid is a {{downplayed|Trope}} example, as while the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 13 or so, Ingrid is 15. People have commented on how she's older than most of her classmates.
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* TokenAdult: Ingrid is a and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} example, as while examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 13 or so, both Ingrid is 15. People have commented on how she's older than most of her classmates.and Yumi are 15.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: {{Averted|Trope}} The first few chapters reference the events of ''Code Lyoko'''s first episode ''Teddygodzilla''. The story detracts HEAVILY from the source material to the point where the original episode's plot isn't as comparable.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: {{Averted|Trope}} {{Averted|Trope}}. The first few chapters reference the events of ''Code Lyoko'''s first episode ''Teddygodzilla''. The story detracts HEAVILY from the source material to the point where the original episode's plot isn't as comparable.is completely different.
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The formation of [=AWEs=] is increasing and has spread all over the world. The newest director of the FBC, Ingrid Layton, is investigating one such event in France. Unknown to her, however, said AWE is [[WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko the Supercomputer]], and it has already been long discovered by a rag-tag group of boarding school students. However, trouble begins to stir rapidly when X.A.N.A. becomes in league with the resurgent Hiss, and now both groups have no choice but to join forces to combat it and other hostile paranatural entities, all while uncovering why the Bureau has become so interested in the Supercomputer, and the mystery surrounding its origins.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original concepts and bringing new elements not found in the source material for both franchises.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original concepts and bringing new elements not found in the source material for both franchises.
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The formation of [=AWEs=] (Altered World Events) is increasing and has spread all over the world. The newest director of the FBC, Ingrid Layton, is investigating one such event in France. Unknown France as her first directorial undertaking. Unbeknownst to her, however, said AWE is [[WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko the Supercomputer]], and it has already having been long discovered already by a rag-tag group of boarding school students. However, trouble begins to stir rapidly when the X.A.N.A. becomes in league with the resurgent Hiss, Hiss. Now Ingrid and now both groups the Lyoko Warriors have no choice but to join forces to combat it and other protect their worlds from hostile paranatural entities, all while uncovering why the Bureau has become so interested in the Supercomputer, and the mystery surrounding its origins.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original concepts and bringing new elements not found in the source material for both franchises.
origins.
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** This Hiss also gets in on this, being able to more directly empower its hosts and change their appearances.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The rewrite has several changes and expansions in the very first chapter.
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** This Hiss also gets in on this, being able to more directly empower its hosts and change their appearances.
* %%* AdaptationExpansion: The On March 13th, the story had undergone a massive rewrite has several that great changes and expansions expands upon narrative elements found in the very first chapter.
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* AgentMulder: Odd fills this role, being the only member of the Lyoko Warriors who is willing to take Ingrid's comments at face value. He's als othe only one to come to the correct conclusion that whatever is possessing Milly ''isn't'' XANA, but rather a differnet entity that is taken advantage of the chaos for its own ends.
* AgentScully: During the events of "Teddygodzilla,
* AgentScully: During the events of "Teddygodzilla,
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* AgentMulder: Odd fills this role, being the only member of the Lyoko Warriors who is willing to take Ingrid's comments at face value. He's als othe also the only one to come to the correct conclusion that whatever is possessing Milly ''isn't'' XANA, but rather a differnet different entity that is taken taking advantage of the chaos for its own ends.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: When Ingrid tries to get the Lyoko Warriors to explain regarding XANA, she points out how leaving her in the dark just makes things harder for the both of them. The Lyoko Warriors retort that she's asking a lot of them when she isn't willing to share her secrets with them, as she refuses to tell them who she is (as in, that she is Director of the Federal Bureau of Control).
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: When Ingrid tries to get the Lyoko Warriors to explain regarding XANA, she points out how leaving her in the dark just makes things harder for the both of them. The Lyoko Warriors retort that she's asking a lot of them when she isn't willing to share her secrets with them, as she refuses to tell them who she is (as in, that she is the Director of the Federal Bureau of Control).
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** Jesse was assertive and composed, while Ingrid is more emotional and lacking in self esteem.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The rewrite, compared to the original.
** The initial incursion in "Teddygodzilla" is significantly darker than in the original, with a Hiss-possessed Milly outright ''attacking'' Sissi.
** In a more minor example, Ingrid and Sissi have an arguement unique to the rewrite that is ''incredibly'' mean spirited on both ends.
** The rewrite has a Hiss-possessed Milly appear to straight up ''kill'' Ingrid at the end of their first encounter.
** The initial incursion in "Teddygodzilla" is significantly darker than in the original, with a Hiss-possessed Milly outright ''attacking'' Sissi.
** In a more minor example, Ingrid and Sissi have an arguement unique to the rewrite that is ''incredibly'' mean spirited on both ends.
** The rewrite has a Hiss-possessed Milly appear to straight up ''kill'' Ingrid at the end of their first encounter.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The rewrite, story as compared to the original.
source material.
** The initial incursion in "Teddygodzilla" is significantly darker than in the original, with a Hiss-possessed Milly outright''attacking'' attacking and kidnapping Sissi.
** In a more minor example, Ingrid and Sissi have anarguement argument unique to the rewrite that is ''incredibly'' mean spirited mean-spirited on both ends.
**The rewrite has a A Hiss-possessed Milly appear appears to straight up ''kill'' Ingrid at the end of their first encounter.
** The initial incursion in "Teddygodzilla" is significantly darker than in the original, with a Hiss-possessed Milly outright
** In a more minor example, Ingrid and Sissi have an
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** As a side effect of their organizational level differences, the Lyoko Warriors are stuck fighting X.A.N.A. on their, while Ingrid has people to at least talk to when dealing with paranatural entities.
** A more minor difference between the two is their choice of headquarters - the factory housing the Supercomputer is an obscure location, but it can still be found if you're actively looking at it. The Oldest House, meanwhile, exists in broad daylight in New York, but generates a PerceptionFilter that actively prevents people from noticing its existence.
** A more minor difference between the two is their choice of headquarters - the factory housing the Supercomputer is an obscure location, but it can still be found if you're actively looking at it. The Oldest House, meanwhile, exists in broad daylight in New York, but generates a PerceptionFilter that actively prevents people from noticing its existence.
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** As a side effect of their organizational level differences, the Lyoko Warriors are stuck fighting X.A.N.A. on their, their own, while Ingrid has people to at least talk consult, and an entire database to reference when dealing with paranatural entities.
** A more minor difference between the two is their choice of headquarters - the factory housing the Supercomputer is an obscure location, but it can still be found if you're actively looking at it. The Oldest House, meanwhile, exists in broad daylight in NewYork, York but generates a PerceptionFilter that actively prevents people from noticing its existence.
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** After discovering that XANA activated a ''second'' tower during the events of "Teddygodzilla", they reluctantly accept Ingrid's aid so that they can defeat the AI without entering the Supercomputer.
** Once it becomes apparent that Ingrid has a way of working around [[ResetButton Return to the Past]], the Lyoko Warriors decide to indict her into their ranks. This becomes extremely fortuitous a few hours later, as it turns out that XANA and the Hiss have allied as well.
** Once it becomes apparent that Ingrid has a way of working around [[ResetButton Return to the Past]], the Lyoko Warriors decide to indict her into their ranks. This becomes extremely fortuitous a few hours later, as it turns out that XANA and the Hiss have allied as well.
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** A mortally wounded Ingrid is forced to watch Milly horrifically transform several police officers into mindless Hiss Monsters, bone-cracking disfigurement and skin deformation included.
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* ItsAllMyFault: When it looks like Ingrid was killed by a Hiss-possessed Milly, Jeremie feels completely responsible due to being the one to activate the Supercomputer (he still thinks that Milly's possession was done by XANA at this point).
* KilledOffscreen: Since Ingrid is now Director of the FBC, this is evidently what happened to Jesse Faden. Comments during her first fight with the Hiss imply Jesse somehow merged with Polaris.
* MutualMasquerade: Prior to the events of "Teddygodzilla" and its immediate aftermath, the Lyoko Warriors and the FBC were in the dark about each other - the former just pegged Ingrid for a nosy girl interested in the paranormal, while the latter only knew that the Supercomputer was likely an Object of Power.
* OhCrap: A somber example, but the Lyoko Warriors are disheartened when it appears that Ingrid has been killed by a Hiss-possessed Milly, as that means she is gone for good.
%%* OnlyTheChosenMayWield: As in canon, only the Director of the FBC can wield the Service Weapon. Ingrid explicitly tells Yumi that trying to wield it would likely kill her.
* OutsideContextProblem: The Lyoko Warriors are left completely flat footed dealing with the Hiss and Ingrid, as their abilities defy anything X.A.N.A. has thrown at them. In particular, they're left dumbfounded when the Hiss manages to completely hide all evidence of its existence after its first confrontation with Ingrid.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied. Ingrid keeps her hair cut short and a special sweater that fits her no matter how big she gets. These traits were endowed upon her by her mother, who Ingrid misses. It's implied that her mother has passed. Her father's presence is also questionable.
* ThePenIsMightier: A variation - the default for of Ingrid's [[MorphWeapon Service Weapon]] is a pen.
* KilledOffscreen: Since Ingrid is now Director of the FBC, this is evidently what happened to Jesse Faden. Comments during her first fight with the Hiss imply Jesse somehow merged with Polaris.
* MutualMasquerade: Prior to the events of "Teddygodzilla" and its immediate aftermath, the Lyoko Warriors and the FBC were in the dark about each other - the former just pegged Ingrid for a nosy girl interested in the paranormal, while the latter only knew that the Supercomputer was likely an Object of Power.
* OhCrap: A somber example, but the Lyoko Warriors are disheartened when it appears that Ingrid has been killed by a Hiss-possessed Milly, as that means she is gone for good.
%%* OnlyTheChosenMayWield: As in canon, only the Director of the FBC can wield the Service Weapon. Ingrid explicitly tells Yumi that trying to wield it would likely kill her.
* OutsideContextProblem: The Lyoko Warriors are left completely flat footed dealing with the Hiss and Ingrid, as their abilities defy anything X.A.N.A. has thrown at them. In particular, they're left dumbfounded when the Hiss manages to completely hide all evidence of its existence after its first confrontation with Ingrid.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied. Ingrid keeps her hair cut short and a special sweater that fits her no matter how big she gets. These traits were endowed upon her by her mother, who Ingrid misses. It's implied that her mother has passed. Her father's presence is also questionable.
* ThePenIsMightier: A variation - the default for of Ingrid's [[MorphWeapon Service Weapon]] is a pen.
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* ItsAllMyFault: When it looks like Ingrid was killed by a Hiss-possessed Milly, Jeremie feels completely responsible due to being the one to activate the Supercomputer (he still thinks that Milly's possession was done by XANA X.A.N.A at this point).
* KilledOffscreen: Since Ingrid is now the Director of the FBC, this is evidently what happened to Jesse Faden. Comments during her first fight with the Hiss imply Jesse somehow merged with Polaris.
* MutualMasquerade: Prior to the events of"Teddygodzilla" and its immediate aftermath, the first few chapters, the Lyoko Warriors and the FBC were in the dark about each other - the former just pegged Ingrid for a nosy girl interested in the paranormal, while the latter only knew was suspicious of the group and their connection to the AWEs that would constantly happen around the Supercomputer was likely an Object of Power.
school.
* OhCrap: A somber example, but the Lyoko Warriors are disheartened whenit appears they learn that Ingrid has been killed by a Hiss-possessed Milly, as that means she is gone for good.
%%* * OnlyTheChosenMayWield: As in canon, only the Director of the FBC can wield the Service Weapon. Ingrid explicitly tells Yumi that trying to wield it would likely kill her.
Weapon.
* OutsideContextProblem: The Lyoko Warriors areleft completely flat footed flat-footed when dealing with the Hiss and Ingrid, as their abilities defy anything X.A.N.A. has thrown at them.them prior. In particular, they're left dumbfounded when the Hiss manages to completely hide all evidence of its existence after its first confrontation with Ingrid.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied. Ingrid keeps her hair cut short and has a special sweater that fits her no matter how big she gets. These traits were endowed upon her by her mother, who Ingrid misses. It's implied that her mother has passed. Her father's presence is also questionable.
* ThePenIsMightier: A variation - the defaultfor form of Ingrid's [[MorphWeapon Service Weapon]] is a pen.
* KilledOffscreen: Since Ingrid is now the Director of the FBC, this is evidently what happened to Jesse Faden. Comments during her first fight with the Hiss imply Jesse somehow merged with Polaris.
* MutualMasquerade: Prior to the events of
* OhCrap: A somber example, but the Lyoko Warriors are disheartened when
* OutsideContextProblem: The Lyoko Warriors are
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied. Ingrid keeps her hair cut short and has a special sweater that fits her no matter how big she gets. These traits were endowed upon her by her mother, who Ingrid misses. It's implied that her mother has passed. Her father's presence is also questionable.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Followed [[DownplayedTrope only partway through the first chapter in both the original and the rewrite]].
** In the original, the plot of "Teddygodzilla" plays out as it did in canon with minor differences until Aelita deactivates the tower, [[NotHisSled only for it to be revealed that XANA activated a second tower]]. This forces the Lyoko Warriors to seek out Ingrid's aid to figure out a new way to defeat XANA.
** The stations are adhered to even less in the rewrite, as XANA and the Hiss possess Milly's teddy bear ''and Milly herself'' in the first portion of "Teddygodzilla".
%%* TokenAdult: Ingrid is a {{downplayed|Trope}} example, as while the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 13 or so, Ingrid is 15. People have commented on how she's older than most of her classmates.
** In the original, the plot of "Teddygodzilla" plays out as it did in canon with minor differences until Aelita deactivates the tower, [[NotHisSled only for it to be revealed that XANA activated a second tower]]. This forces the Lyoko Warriors to seek out Ingrid's aid to figure out a new way to defeat XANA.
** The stations are adhered to even less in the rewrite, as XANA and the Hiss possess Milly's teddy bear ''and Milly herself'' in the first portion of "Teddygodzilla".
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Followed [[DownplayedTrope only partway through the {{Averted|Trope}} The first chapter in both few chapters reference the events of ''Code Lyoko'''s first episode ''Teddygodzilla''. The story detracts HEAVILY from the source material to the point where the original and the rewrite]].
** In the original, theepisode's plot of "Teddygodzilla" plays out isn't as it did in canon with minor differences until Aelita deactivates the tower, [[NotHisSled only for it to be revealed that XANA activated a second tower]]. This forces the Lyoko Warriors to seek out Ingrid's aid to figure out a new way to defeat XANA.
comparable.
**The stations are adhered to even less in the rewrite, as XANA X.A.N.A and the Hiss possess Milly's teddy bear ''and Milly herself'' in herself''. This is because of X.A.N.A and the first portion Hiss forming an alliance, and Milly becomes a terrifying enemy for the protagonists to face.
** Milly is aware of"Teddygodzilla".
%%*her teddy bear's abilities and can command it to attack, rather than it just following X.A.N.A's orders.
* TokenAdult: Ingrid is a {{downplayed|Trope}} example, as while the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 13 or so, Ingrid is 15. People have commented on how she's older than most of her classmates.
** In the original, the
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%%* YoungAndInCharge: Ingrid mixes this with being an EnsignNewbie - due to the nature of how the Federal Bureau of Control works, she is both one of the youngest members of the group and it’s its overall leader after The Board.
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The formation of [=AWEs=] is increasing and has spread all over the world. The newest director of the FBC, Ingrid Layton, is investigating one such event in France. Unknown to her, however, said AWE is [[WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko the Supercomputer]], which is already being watched over by the Lyoko Warriors. When it seems like X.A.N.A. teamed up with the resurgent Hiss, both groups are forced to unite to face a common threat.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original concept and bringing new elements to the story.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original concept and bringing new elements to the story.
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The formation of [=AWEs=] is increasing and has spread all over the world. The newest director of the FBC, Ingrid Layton, is investigating one such event in France. Unknown to her, however, said AWE is [[WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko the Supercomputer]], which is and it has already being watched over been long discovered by the Lyoko Warriors. When it seems like a rag-tag group of boarding school students. However, trouble begins to stir rapidly when X.A.N.A. teamed up becomes in league with the resurgent Hiss, and now both groups are forced have no choice but to unite join forces to face a common threat.
combat it and other hostile paranatural entities, all while uncovering why the Bureau has become so interested in the Supercomputer, and the mystery surrounding its origins.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the originalconcept concepts and bringing new elements to not found in the story.
source material for both franchises.
On March 13, 2023, the story has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev, on Website/SufficientVelocity [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/code-control-code-lyoko-x-remedy-entertainments-control.1079211/?post=91251534#post-91251534 here]], and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROL here]].
It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROL here]].
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over has undergone a rewrite, expanding the original concept and bringing new elements to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev, on Website/SufficientVelocity the story.
It can be read on:
* [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/code-control-code-lyoko-x-remedy-entertainments-control.1079211/?post=91251534#post-91251534 here]], and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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* [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/code-control-code-lyoko-x-remedy-entertainments-control.93773/?post=21102128#post-21102128 Sufficient Velocity]]
* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROLhere]].FanFiction.Net]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38125477/chapters/95242636 Archive of Our Own]]
* [[https://www.wattpad.com/1324812956-code-control-awe-one-teddygodzilla-part-i Wattpad]]
* and [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15632737/Code-CONTROL/1 Quotev]]
It can be read on:
* [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/code-control-code-lyoko-x-remedy-entertainments-control.
It can be read
* [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/code-control-code-lyoko-x-remedy-entertainments-control.93773/?post=21102128#post-21102128 Sufficient Velocity]]
* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROL
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38125477/chapters/95242636 Archive of Our Own]]
* [[https://www.wattpad.com/1324812956-code-control-awe-one-teddygodzilla-part-i Wattpad]]
* and [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15632737/Code-CONTROL/1 Quotev]]
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The formation of [=AWEs=] is increasing and has spread all over the world. The newest director of the FBC, Ingrid Layton, is investigating one such event in France. Unknown to her, however, said AWE is [[WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko the Supercomputer]], which is already being watched over by the Lyoko Warriors. When it seems like X.A.N.A. teamed up with the resurgent Hiss, both groups are forced to unite to face the common threat.
On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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The formation of [=AWEs=] is increasing and has spread all over the world. The newest director of the FBC, Ingrid Layton, is investigating one such event in France. Unknown to her, however, said AWE is [[WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko the Supercomputer]], which is already being watched over by the Lyoko Warriors. When it seems like X.A.N.A. teamed up with the resurgent Hiss, both groups are forced to unite to face the a common threat.
On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev,Sufficient Velocity, on Website/SufficientVelocity [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/code-control-code-lyoko-x-remedy-entertainments-control.1079211/?post=91251534#post-91251534 here]], and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev,
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%%* BoringButPractical: The FBC maintains internet safety this way - its web domain is hidden inside the Darkweb under traditional cybersecurity programs, meaning you'd ''really'' have to be looking to find it.
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* HarmfulToMinors: The majority of the cast are under the age of 15, and in the first few chapters most of them have been exposed to some pretty terrible things.
** Nicolas and Herb witness a possessed Milly kidnap Sissi while her room is covered in what they think is blood.
** Tamiya watches Ingrid get impaled by Milly. ''TWICE''.
** A mortally wounded Ingrid is forced to watch Milly horrifically transform several police officers into mindless Hiss Monsters, bone-cracking disfigurement and skin deformation included.
** The Lyoko Warriors make the horrible revelation that Ingrid may have died fighting Milly, and if she is, their ResetButton won't bring her back, a situation they've always tried avoiding.
** Nicolas and Herb witness a possessed Milly kidnap Sissi while her room is covered in what they think is blood.
** Tamiya watches Ingrid get impaled by Milly. ''TWICE''.
** A mortally wounded Ingrid is forced to watch Milly horrifically transform several police officers into mindless Hiss Monsters, bone-cracking disfigurement and skin deformation included.
** The Lyoko Warriors make the horrible revelation that Ingrid may have died fighting Milly, and if she is, their ResetButton won't bring her back, a situation they've always tried avoiding.
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* ItsAllMyFault: When it looks like Ingrid was killed by a Hiss-possessed Milly, Jeremie feels completely responsible due to being the one to activate the Supercomputer (he still thinks that Milly's possession was done by XANA at this point).
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also exported the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Quotev, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. They have also export the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. Currently, only the rewritten chapter one is up. They have also promised to export the story over to Archive of Our Own, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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On March 13, 2023, the author began rewriting the story. Currently, only the rewritten chapter one is up. They have also promised to export the story over to Wattpad, Archive of Our Own, Sufficient Velocity, and ''Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.''
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* AscendedToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Comments by a Hiss-possessed Milly indicate that Jesse apparently went the way of Dr. Darling, though in her case it's indicated that Jesse actually had a MergerOfSouls with Polaris.
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* KilledOffscreen: Since Ingrid is now Director of the FBC, this is evidently what happened to Jesse Faden. Comments during her first fight with the Hiss imply Jesse somehow merged with Polaris.
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* AdaptationalWimp: The Hiss, in both versions - ''Control'' indicated that the Hiss would br unstoppable if it ever escaped the Holdest House, but despite having made it to Kadic here, the Hiss has yet to do more than cause a small amount of mayhem.
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* AdaptationalWimp: The Hiss, in both versions - ''Control'' indicated that the Hiss would br be unstoppable if it ever escaped the Holdest The Oldest House, but despite having made it to Kadic here, the Hiss has yet to do more than cause a small amount of mayhem.
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* AdaptationalBadass: X.A.N.A. is significantly stronger in this story than it was at the same point in canon - he's able to possess a second tower within seconds of the first deactivating, something he wouldn't be able to do for the duration of the first season of ''Code: Lyoko''. In the rewrite, he's able to possess Milly's teddy bear ''and Milly'' in his first appearance. This is indicated to be due to a case of SymbioticPossession with The Hiss.
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* AdaptationalBadass: AdaptationalBadass:
** X.A.N.A. is significantly stronger in this story than it was at the same point in canon - he's able to possess a second tower within seconds of the first deactivating, something he wouldn't be able to do for the duration of the first season of ''Code: Lyoko''. In the rewrite, he's able to possess Milly's teddy bear ''and Milly'' in his first appearance. This is indicated to be due to a case of SymbioticPossession with TheHiss.Hiss.
** This Hiss also gets in on this, being able to more directly empower its hosts and change their appearances.
** X.A.N.A. is significantly stronger in this story than it was at the same point in canon - he's able to possess a second tower within seconds of the first deactivating, something he wouldn't be able to do for the duration of the first season of ''Code: Lyoko''. In the rewrite, he's able to possess Milly's teddy bear ''and Milly'' in his first appearance. This is indicated to be due to a case of SymbioticPossession with The
** This Hiss also gets in on this, being able to more directly empower its hosts and change their appearances.
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%%* AdaptationalWimp: A slight example with the Hiss - in canon, the Hiss inflicting DemonicPossession on a person is usually fatal. Here, it's shown that exorcising the Hiss ''very'' shortly after it initiates possession will spare the host. That being said, comments from Jesse in ''Control'' imply that it is possible to save those possessed by the Hiss if you expel it before they have time to settle into a new host.
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* TheCloudCuckoolanderWasRight: While Odd is too grounded to normally count as a CloudCuckooLander, he's the only member of the Lyoko Warriors to figure out that an entity other than XANA is possessing Milly, and that Ingrid's powers aren't related to XANA either.
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter. Ingrid is this to Jesse.
** Jesse was assertive and composed, while Ingrid is more emotional and lacking in self esteem.
** Jesse was heavily favored by the Bureau, while Ingrid was met with skepticism, to the point that in the rewrite, she has trouble using the Service Weapon.
** [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Jesse dressed in black while Ingrid prefers to wear white]].
** Jesse was assertive and composed, while Ingrid is more emotional and lacking in self esteem.
** Jesse was heavily favored by the Bureau, while Ingrid was met with skepticism, to the point that in the rewrite, she has trouble using the Service Weapon.
** [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Jesse dressed in black while Ingrid prefers to wear white]].
** The rewrite has a Hiss-possessed Milly appear to straight up ''kill'' Ingrid at the end of their first encounter.
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%%* OutsideContextProblem: A two way example here.
** The Lyoko Warriors have faced plenty of supernatural phenomena before, but all of it is tied to The Supercomputer and, by extension, X.A.N.A. The Hiss, however, is an EldritchAbomination hailing from an entirely different reality that [[OhCrap doesn't need the Supercomputer to cause problems]]. Additionally, Ingrid's abilities are unlike anything shown in either Lyoko or Earth, making her a source of tension in the group. Most damning of all, the Hiss is ''not'' a unique entity - plenty of other paranatural entities exist alongside it.
** While the FBC deals with Objects of Power all the time, the Supercomputer is the first one that can mess with time. Additionally, they've never encountered a group already trying to contain said object. X.A.N.A. also possesses a level of versatility unknown to the Bureau, with his powers allowing him to do practically ''anything'' to defeat his foes.
%%* ThePenIsMightier: A variation - the default for of Ingrid's [[MorphWeapon Service Weapon]] is a pen.
** The Lyoko Warriors have faced plenty of supernatural phenomena before, but all of it is tied to The Supercomputer and, by extension, X.A.N.A. The Hiss, however, is an EldritchAbomination hailing from an entirely different reality that [[OhCrap doesn't need the Supercomputer to cause problems]]. Additionally, Ingrid's abilities are unlike anything shown in either Lyoko or Earth, making her a source of tension in the group. Most damning of all, the Hiss is ''not'' a unique entity - plenty of other paranatural entities exist alongside it.
** While the FBC deals with Objects of Power all the time, the Supercomputer is the first one that can mess with time. Additionally, they've never encountered a group already trying to contain said object. X.A.N.A. also possesses a level of versatility unknown to the Bureau, with his powers allowing him to do practically ''anything'' to defeat his foes.
%%* ThePenIsMightier: A variation - the default for of Ingrid's [[MorphWeapon Service Weapon]] is a pen.
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** While the FBC deals with Objects of Power
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* ThePenIsMightier: A variation - the default for of Ingrid's [[MorphWeapon Service Weapon]] is a pen.
* UncertainDoom: Ingrid appears to die after her first fight with a Hiss-possessed Milly, but the narration never actually mentions her dying, and her corpse is nowhere to be found later.
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* ConditionalPowers: Ingrid's Service Weapon can only be used by direct authorization from The Board. Without The Board's favor, the Service Weapon becomes inactive. However, since The Board still recognizes her as the Director, she can still carry around and interact with the Service Weapon without it killing her.
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* ArcVillain: A Hiss-possessed Milly serves as this for the first few chapters.
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%%* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Before the Return to the Past at the end of "Teddygodzilla", Ingrid tries to argue that she could help the Lyoko Warriors if she was allowed to keep her memory and contact her allies. The rest of the group points out that those allies would likely prevent the Lyoko Warriors from accessing the Supercomputer anymore and stop them from saving Aelita. Yumi, in particular, points out that Ingrid won't even tell them the Bureau's name. The point ultimately becomes moot when Ingrid reveals that she can resist Return to the Past.
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** Ingrid never had any bound objects of power shown in the original. The rewrite gives her a notebook that exists in its own time space, which allowed her to keep track of her research between multiple Returns to the Past.
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%%* EntertaininglyWrong: Jeremie and the rest of the Lyoko Warriors assume that the Federal Bureau of Control would want to destroy the Supercomputer if they found out about it and X.A.N.A. While the FBC would probably try to destroy X.A.N.A., they'd want the Supercomputer intact for studying, which Ingrid brings up when the group decides to induct her into their ranks.
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''[[https:https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROL Code: CONTROL]]'' is a fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/8750190/ D4IKIZEN]]. It is a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko'' and ''VideoGame/{{Control}}''.
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It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROL here]].
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''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13927102/1/Code-CONTROL?__cf_chl_tk=RmcM0CVVNJ2RyVKGLOEJXbg8iQlWMCQGJQ_QdmfiEng-1678431566-0-gaNycGzNClA Code: CONTROL]]'' is a fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/8750190/ D4IKIZEN]]. It is a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/CodeLyoko'' and ''VideoGame/{{Control}}''.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The rewrite, compared to the original.
** The initial incursion in "Teddygodzilla" is significantly darker than in the original, with a Hiss-possessed Milly outright ''attacking'' Sissi.
** In a more minor example, Ingrid and Sissi have an arguement unique to the rewrite that is ''incredibly'' mean spirited on both ends.
** The initial incursion in "Teddygodzilla" is significantly darker than in the original, with a Hiss-possessed Milly outright ''attacking'' Sissi.
** In a more minor example, Ingrid and Sissi have an arguement unique to the rewrite that is ''incredibly'' mean spirited on both ends.