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The story was last updated on March 23, 2023, and there has been no activity from the author since July 7, 2023.
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%%* AdaptationExpansion: On March 13th, the story had undergone a massive rewrite that great changes and expands upon narrative elements found in the very first chapter.
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** While the original indicated that XANA and the Hiss were collaborating, how was left ambiguous. The rewrite has the Hiss possess Milly at the same time as XANA is possessing her teddy bear, with then narration confirming it's a mutual partnership.
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** While the original indicated that XANA and the Hiss were collaborating, how was left ambiguous. The rewrite has the Hiss possess Milly at the same time as XANA is possessing her teddy bear, with then the narration confirming it's a mutual partnership.
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** Milly is aware of her teddy bear's abilities and can command it to attack, rather than it just following X.A.N.A's orders.
* TokenAdult: Ingrid and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 11-13 years or so, both Ingrid is 15, while Yumi is the oldest of the Lyoko Warriors at 14.
* TokenAdult: Ingrid and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 11-13 years or so, both Ingrid is 15, while Yumi is the oldest of the Lyoko Warriors at 14.
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** Milly is aware of her teddy bear's abilities and can command it to attack, rather than it just following X.A.N.A's orders.
orders, though it has shown levels of autonomy.
* TokenAdult: Ingrid and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 11-13 years or so,both Ingrid is 15, while Yumi is the oldest of the Lyoko Warriors at 14.14. Ingrid is the overall oldest at 15 years old.
* TokenAdult: Ingrid and Yumi are {{downplayed|Trope}} examples. While the majority of the Lyoko Warriors are around 11-13 years or so,
