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* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses. He eventually stops asking her for a while, only because he thinks he needs to figure out whwt he's "doing wrong".
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses. He eventually stops asking her for a while, only because he thinks he needs to figure out whwt what he's "doing wrong".
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* CompositeCharacter: Hareta, Mitsumi, and Jun take the roles of the ''Black and White'' protagonist and their rivals.
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* CompositeCharacter: Hareta, Mitsumi, and Jun take the roles of the ''Black and White'' protagonist and their rivals. They also take the roles of the ''X and Y'' characters.
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* {{Tsundere}}: The author describes Mitsumi's relationship with Jun as her being tsundere.
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* {{Tsundere}}: The author describes Mitsumi's relationship with Jun as her being tsundere. She does care for Jun but shows it in a standoffish manner
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10915427/1/Close-But-No-Coffee Close (But Not Coffee)]]'' is a ''Manga/PokemonDiamondAndPearlAdventure'' oneshot by Volcanic Lily,
Set months after the manga ends, Jun is out completing the National Dex while Mitsumi travels with Hareta.
Set months after the manga ends, Jun is out completing the National Dex while Mitsumi travels with Hareta.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10915427/1/Close-But-No-Coffee Close (But Not Coffee)]]'' is a ''Manga/PokemonDiamondAndPearlAdventure'' oneshot by Volcanic Lily,
Lily, It's a Jun/Mitsumi-themed story that's loosely based on ''VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite''.
Set months after the manga ends, Jun is out completing the National Dex while Mitsumi travels with Hareta. Eventually the three decide together to head out to Unova. Jun still has his heart set out on wooing Mitsumi, even if she disagrees.
Set months after the manga ends, Jun is out completing the National Dex while Mitsumi travels with Hareta. Eventually the three decide together to head out to Unova. Jun still has his heart set out on wooing Mitsumi, even if she disagrees.
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses.
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* CompositeCharacter: Hareta, Mitsumi, and Jun take the roles of the ''Black and White'' protagonist and their rivals.
* {{Continuation}}: The characters set off to Unova and end up fighting Team Plasma.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses. He eventually stops asking her for a while, only because he thinks he needs to figure out whwt he's "doing wrong".
* {{Continuation}}: The characters set off to Unova and end up fighting Team Plasma.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses. He eventually stops asking her for a while, only because he thinks he needs to figure out whwt he's "doing wrong".
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10915427/1/Close-But-No-Coffee Close (But Not Coffee)]]'' is a ''Manga/PokemonDiamondAndPearlAdventure'' oneshot by Volcanic Lily,
Set months after the manga ends, Jun is out completing the National Dex while Mitsumi travels with Hareta.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses.
* ExhaustedEyeBags: Mitsumi has faint bags because she doesn't sleep well when traveling with Hareta.
* MegatonPunch: Mitsumi often reacts to Jun's flirting physically. She punches him a lot, but he always tries later.
* {{Tsundere}}: The author describes Mitsumi's relationship with Jun as her being tsundere.
Set months after the manga ends, Jun is out completing the National Dex while Mitsumi travels with Hareta.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* DoggedNiceGuy: Jun keeps on asking Mitsumi out, even after she refuses.
* ExhaustedEyeBags: Mitsumi has faint bags because she doesn't sleep well when traveling with Hareta.
* MegatonPunch: Mitsumi often reacts to Jun's flirting physically. She punches him a lot, but he always tries later.
* {{Tsundere}}: The author describes Mitsumi's relationship with Jun as her being tsundere.
