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* EnsembleDarkHorse: Yamamoto, originally introduced as a 'buff yakuza guy' in Chapter 14, attained such a fan following that Kim [[AscendedFanon made him return]] [[AscendedExtra with a name later on]].
** The [[FluffyTheTerrible hacker named Jeff/Zookaman]] who added Chapter xddddddd/Chapter 69 to Kim's DeviantArt is a fan favorite. He was immediately embraced by the fanbase and became a celebrity of sorts, with his ban from the official CGR Discord channel causing great outrage among his fans.

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* EnsembleDarkHorse: Masahiko, Chiasa, and Chiriko are extremely popular among fans, probably because they're the only characters who don't try to put up with Azusa and her whining.
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Yamamoto, originally introduced as a 'buff yakuza guy' in Chapter 14, attained such a fan following that Kim [[AscendedFanon made him return]] [[AscendedExtra with a name later on]].
** The [[FluffyTheTerrible hacker named Jeff/Zookaman]] who added Chapter xddddddd/Chapter 69 to Kim's DeviantArt is also a fan favorite. He was immediately embraced by the fanbase and became a celebrity of sorts, with his ban from the official CGR Discord channel causing great outrage among his the fans.
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** The hacker chapter claims that [[MagicalEye Azusa's heart gives her the ability to]] [[GorgeousGarmentGeneration give the yakuza emo clothes]] (and therefore [[DarkIsNotEvil make them emo/good]]), [[TheNapoleon make Masahiko taller]], and [[BuxomIsBetter make Chiriko's]] [[HoYay boobs bigger]].

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** The hacker chapter claims that [[MagicalEye Azusa's heart gives her the ability to]] [[GorgeousGarmentGeneration give the yakuza emo clothes]] (and therefore [[DarkIsNotEvil make them emo/good]]), [[TheNapoleon make Masahiko taller]], and [[BuxomIsBetter make Chiriko's]] [[HoYay [[LesYay boobs bigger]].

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* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler: In a way, Yami]]

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* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler: In a way, Yami]]Yami.]]



* AlternateUniverse: To [[WebAnimation/TrueLovesStory True Love's Story]], although it was [[WhatCouldHaveBeen originally set in the same universe, just two years earlier]]

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* AlternateUniverse: To [[WebAnimation/TrueLovesStory True Love's Story]], although it was [[WhatCouldHaveBeen originally set in the same universe, just two years earlier]]earlier]].



* AntiHero: EnsembleDarkHorse Masahiko Kurusu turns into an AntiHero of sorts by the end, much to the despair of the fans who wanted to see him kill Azusa.



** [[spoiler: Makoto]] is inexplicably alive in the hacker chapter if only so that he can join Haru, Rin, and Rei when they escape to Australia.



* BiTheWay: Rin, Haru and Shatter are bi, Yami and Akira have been confirmed to be bi by their creators respectively, and the fandom has pretty much declared that Azusa is bi too.

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* BiTheWay: Rin, Haru Haru, and Shatter are bi, Yami and Akira have been confirmed to be bi by their creators respectively, respective creators, and the fandom has pretty much declared that Azusa is bi too.too.
* BloodSplatteredInnocents: Shatter gets covered with blood when [[spoiler:Sophie Church gets hit by a car in his backstory]] and Hitomi is covered in blood in blood after [[spoiler:she accidentally kills Kirumi Kissu]].



* CerebusSyndrome: Though Azusa's backstory, the fic was fluffy to begin with...until [[spoiler:Aunt Homura's death, Azusa's apparent murder of Akira, and the inexplicable inclusion of the yakuza.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: Even though ''Free!'' hardly has anything to do with the fic anymore besides the occasional swim [[{{Malapropism}} meat]], ''Chlorine Grown Roses'' can best be described as ''Free!'' with orphans, murder, and the yakuza involved.



* DefeatEqualsExplosion: Happens to Chiriko in the hacker chapter when she loses the swim meat and flies into the yakuza headquarters. [[InsaneTrollLogic She was the bomb after all]].
** NonFatalExplosions: Apparently, exploding into the yakuza's headquarters wasn't enough to stop Chiriko and the yakuza from showing up at the pool later.



* DisappearedDad: Mr.Yagami has gone missing after his wife died, leaving Yami and his sister to fend for themselves.

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* DisappearedDad: Mr. Yagami has gone went missing after his wife died, leaving Yami and his sister to fend for themselves.



* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Happens to Shatter and Tom in the hacker chapter.



* ExoticEyeDesigns: Azusa has a little pink heart in her right eye, which she apparently used to be bullied for, and Hitomi's eyes gradient from light blue to pink. Additionally, Conchita's eyes seem to be pink and green.

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* EnsembleDarkHorse: Yamamoto, originally introduced as a 'buff yakuza guy' in Chapter 14, attained such a fan following that Kim [[AscendedFanon made him return]] [[AscendedExtra with a name later on]].
**The [[FluffyTheTerrible hacker named Jeff/Zookaman]] who added Chapter xddddddd/Chapter 69 to Kim's DeviantArt is a fan favorite. He was immediately embraced by the fanbase and became a celebrity of sorts, with his ban from the official CGR Discord channel causing great outrage among his fans.
* ExoticEyeDesigns: Azusa has a little pink heart in her right eye, eye which she apparently used to be bullied for, and Hitomi's eyes gradient from light blue to pink. Additionally, pink, and Conchita's eyes seem to be pink and green.green. [[spoiler:[[FamilyEyeResemblance Chiasa]]]] has an upside-down broken heart in hers.
** The hacker chapter claims that [[MagicalEye Azusa's heart gives her the ability to]] [[GorgeousGarmentGeneration give the yakuza emo clothes]] (and therefore [[DarkIsNotEvil make them emo/good]]), [[TheNapoleon make Masahiko taller]], and [[BuxomIsBetter make Chiriko's]] [[HoYay boobs bigger]].



** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Fukawa Touko from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}. [[spoiler: Additionally, the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Koizumi Mahiru's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}.]] Akira herself acts a lot of like Asahina Aoi, as well, and the character is cited as one of the inspirations for Akira's appearance and personality.
** One last Danganronpa expy includes Masahiko Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Kuzuryuu Fuyuhiko, and even resembles him a bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.
** [[Kirumi Kissu turns out to be yet another Danganronpa expy, this time it's Tsumiki Mikan in despair]]
** While less egregious than the rest of the examples listed here, Kimmy Sakura is beginning to look like an expy of Kirigiri Kyouko, who is also from Danganronpa.
** Conchita Fuentes has some parallels to the Vocaloid song Conchita, The Epicurean Daughter of Evil. The author has stated numerous times that she loves Vocaloid.
* TheFaceless: Yamamoto

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** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Fukawa Touko from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}. [[spoiler: Additionally, the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Koizumi Mahiru's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}.]] Akira herself acts a lot of like Asahina Aoi, as well, and the character is cited as one of the inspirations for Akira's appearance and personality.
** One last
personality. Other Danganronpa expy includes expys include Masahiko Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Kuzuryuu Fuyuhiko, and even resembles him a bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.
** [[Kirumi
Kurusu (Kuzuryuu Fuyuhiko), Kirumi Kissu turns out to be yet another Danganronpa expy, this time it's Tsumiki (Tsumiki Mikan in despair]]
** While less egregious than the rest of the examples listed here,
[[spoiler:in despair]]), and, debatably, Kimmy Sakura is beginning to look like an expy of Kirigiri Kyouko, who is also from Danganronpa.
(Kirigiri Kyouko).
** Conchita Fuentes has some parallels to the Vocaloid song Conchita, The Epicurean Daughter of Evil. The author has stated numerous times that she loves Vocaloid.
Vocaloid and Conchita even mentions [[ImAHumanitarian being hungry enough to eat Masahiko in one chapter]].
* TheFaceless: YamamotoYamamoto, the buff yakuza guy from Chapter 14.



* GratuitousJapanese: There's moments where the words seifuku and imouto are thrown in (the former supposedly is the japanese word for school uniforms), and then there's a little segment in chapter 37 that roughly translates to "I sea. Yes. I peed myself."
** on the cover images of chapter 33 and 38 there's a "tasukete" written, although the one on the former is about 5 pixels high on a 1000 pixel canvas.

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* GratuitousJapanese: There's There are moments where the words seifuku and imouto are thrown in (the former supposedly is the japanese Japanese word for school uniforms), and then there's a little segment in chapter 37 that roughly translates to "I sea.see. Yes. I peed myself."
" (the last statement probably being an unfortunate misspelling of 'omoshiroi' (interesting) as 'omorashioi').
** on In the cover images of chapter 33 and 38 there's a "tasukete" 'tasukete" (help me) written, although the one on the former is about 5 pixels high on a 1000 pixel canvas.canvas. There are multiple other cover images that use Japanese in the backgrounds as well.



* HollywoodHacking: Averted with Jeff the hacker, who accessed Kim's account not through advanced technique but because [[TooDumbToLive left her computer in the public library logged into her DeviantArt ''and'' email]].



** Hitomi Styles says that she has 'majic powers', but besides a vague description of how they were used to kill her parents in an accident and a WizardDidIt explanation as to how she and her friends escaped their strait jackets, they have yet to be explained or seen again.

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** Hitomi Styles says that she has 'majic powers', but besides a vague description of how they were used to kill her parents in an accident and accident, a device for WizardDidIt explanation as to how she explanations or a DeusExMachina, and a means for her friends escaped their strait jackets, to push herself on a swing, they have yet to be explained or seen again.



* InNameOnly: ''Chlorine Grown Roses'' has transcended the bonds of being a ''Free!'' fanfic and has since become...well, something.
* KangarooCourt: Hitomi's [[spoiler:expulsion hearing at L'eau de Rose for the murder of Kirumi Kissu]] can be seen as this because the rule that she broke is that 'no girl can hurt another girl'. But considering that the ''first'' rule is 'protect your fellow girl', these rules seem to be made to contradict themselves in situations like the specific one Hitomi is in.



* Mega Twintails: Azusa's right tail is ridiculous long, usually reaching at least her waist.

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* Mega Twintails: {{Malaproper}}: There are many, but the misspelling of 'swim meet' as 'swim meat' was so egregious that it was even used in the hacked Chapter 69.
* MegaTwintails:
Azusa's right tail is ridiculous long, usually reaching at least her waist.



* NiceCharacterMeanActor: [[Kirumi Kissu]]

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* NiceCharacterMeanActor: [[Kirumi Kissu]]Kirumi Kissu, a pop idol who is essentially the antithesis of Azusa and her merry bunch of emo friends and is immediately looked at with scorn by Azusa. [[spoiler:Her baseless suspicions later turn out to be legitimate when it turns out that Kirumi works in the yakuza.]]
* OddFriendship: Who knows how a [[{{Moe}} cute]] MagicalGirl, a [[NoInsideVoice loud]] [[{{Eagleland}} American stereotype]], a [[ShrinkingViolet quiet]] [[ManChild adult who dresses as anime mascots]], a GenkiGirl who's [[CuteBruiser always looking for a fight]], and [[TheGenericGuy Shatter and Yami]] managed to find each other in a mental hospital and become friends despite being from different nationalities?
** Azusa and Akira's relationship is also strange in the same way--the boisterous, lively Akira seems to have very little in common personality-wise or interest wise with the melancholic, quiet Azusa.



* ParentalAbandonment: Azusa's parents died, as did Akira's, as did Hitomi's, as did Conchita's, and as did Yami's mom and his dad just disappeared.
* PeekABangs: Kimmy, Luna and Shatter

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* ParentalAbandonment: Azusa's parents died, as did Akira's, as did Hitomi's, as did Conchita's, as did Luna's, and as did Esther's. Yami's mom and is dead, but his dad just disappeared.
is missing.
* PeekABangs: Kimmy, Luna Luna, and ShatterShatter have these.


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** From the hacker chapter: "SUP MOTHERBITCHES, LET'S GET WET.”
* PresentDayPast: Despite taking place in 2008, the fic features a mentioning of VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} (which came out in 2010), Adele's song 'Hello' (which came out in 2015), and other such anachronisms.


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* RuleOfThree: Seen in the hacker chapter, Chapter 69, with the repeated drownings in the pool; first is Shatter, second is [[TheScrappy Miura]], and third is [[RuleOfFunny the yakuza's guns]].


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** Evidently Jeff the hacker is a shipper, considering that his ending consisted of the canonization of Azusa/Akira/Chiriko, Luna/Esther/Conchita, and Masahiko/Chiasa.


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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: The chapter in which [[spoiler:Hitomi goes to trial]] features a cover image with her looking in horror at her bloody hands.

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** [[Kirumi Kissu turns out to be yet another Danganronpa expy, this time it's Tsumiki Mikan in despair]]



* TheFaceless: Yamamoto



** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, the preteen detective from Canada, Kimmy Sakura, has blond hair and pink bangs, and Hitomi Styles has blonde hair with pink highlights. Among her friends, Luna Moon's hair gradients from platinum blonde to black and at one point, Yami Yagami gets orange highlights in his hair (there may regularly be black highlights in his hair, but with Kim's atrocious art style, it's hard to tell).

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** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, the preteen detective from Canada, Kimmy Sakura, has blond hair and pink bangs, and Hitomi Styles has blonde hair with pink highlights. Among her friends, Luna Moon's hair gradients from platinum blonde to black and at one point, Yami Yagami gets orange highlights in his hair (there may and has regularly be black highlights in his hair, but with Kim's atrocious art style, it's hard to tell). hair.
* NiceCharacterMeanActor: [[Kirumi Kissu]]

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* [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]: [[spoiler: In a way, Yami]]

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* [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]: ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler: In a way, Yami]]



* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead]]: [[spoiler: Somehow, Akira is back even though the chapter in which she "died" explicitly states that she, well, died.]]

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* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead]]: BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Somehow, Akira is back even though the chapter in which she "died" explicitly states that she, well, died.]]]]
* BadDate: Azusa and Rin have their first date at 7/11 of all places.



* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]] [[spoiler: [[AscendedFanon Eventually, the fans seem to prevail, as Akira is later revealed to be A-OK, just bedridden in the hospital.]]]]

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* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: DeadSidekick: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]] [[spoiler: [[AscendedFanon Eventually, the fans seem to prevail, as Akira is later revealed to be A-OK, just bedridden in the hospital.]]]]
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** on the cover images of chapter 33 and 38 there's a "tasukete" written, although the one on the former is about f pixels high on a 1000 pixel canvas.

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** on the cover images of chapter 33 and 38 there's a "tasukete" written, although the one on the former is about f 5 pixels high on a 1000 pixel canvas.



* RapunzelHair: Azusa's hair is tied up in pigtails with one of them reaching her waist. When let down before her parents' murder, they are shown to almost touch the ground. Esther and Luna also have long hair but it only reaches their mid-back.

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* RapunzelHair: Azusa's hair is tied up in pigtails with one of them reaching her waist. When waist, even when let down before her parents' murder, they are shown to almost touch the ground.hair only reaches her waist. Esther and Luna also have long hair but it only reaches their mid-back.

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to Website/DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to Website/DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty almost forty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].


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* AlternateUniverse: To [[WebAnimation/TrueLovesStory True Love's Story]], although it was [[WhatCouldHaveBeen originally set in the same universe, just two years earlier]]


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** on the cover images of chapter 33 and 38 there's a "tasukete" written, although the one on the former is about f pixels high on a 1000 pixel canvas.


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* ParentalAbandonment: Azusa's parents died, as did Akira's, as did Hitomi's, as did Conchita's, and as did Yami's mom and his dad just disappeared.
* PeekABangs: Kimmy, Luna and Shatter


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* SpotlightStealingSquad: Ever after the [[spoiler: mental hospital squad]] appeared, the cast of free has almost disappeared altogether from the plot.
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* [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]: [[spoiler: In a way, Yami]]


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* BiTheWay: Rin, Haru and Shatter are bi, Yami and Akira have been confirmed to be bi by their creators respectively, and the fandom has pretty much declared that Azusa is bi too.


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* DisappearedDad: Mr.Yagami has gone missing after his wife died, leaving Yami and his sister to fend for themselves.


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* GratuitousJapanese: There's moments where the words seifuku and imouto are thrown in (the former supposedly is the japanese word for school uniforms), and then there's a little segment in chapter 37 that roughly translates to "I sea. Yes. I peed myself."
* HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday: The author is quite adamant on restating again and again that Azusa is straight.


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* Mega Twintails: Azusa's right tail is ridiculous long, usually reaching at least her waist.


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* RapunzelHair: Azusa's hair is tied up in pigtails with one of them reaching her waist. When let down before her parents' murder, they are shown to almost touch the ground. Esther and Luna also have long hair but it only reaches their mid-back.


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* ShipperOnDeck: Azusa and Conchita both excitedly point out how 'cute' Yami and Shatter are together.
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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt Website/DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]] [[spoiler: [[Ascended Fandom Eventually, the fans seem to prevail, as Akira is later revealed to be A-OK, just bedridden in the hospital.]]]]

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* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]] [[spoiler: [[Ascended Fandom [[AscendedFanon Eventually, the fans seem to prevail, as Akira is later revealed to be A-OK, just bedridden in the hospital.]]]]



* DirtyOldMan: The maids in Azusa's mansion are forced to wear revealing French maid outfits because "papa liked that kind of stuff o.o". {{Squick}}.



* [[spoiler: DevilInPlainSight/PaperThinDisguise]]: [[spoiler: It's commonly speculated that the character introduced in Chapter 25, Chiriko Kasane, is the main villain Chiasa Tachibana in disguise. This was a theory popularized by character-critique-central based on the grounds that they have similar names and Chiriko's animosity towards Azusa seems to come out of absolutely nowhere. They also share physical similarities, such as red/scarlet eyes (at least in Chapter 25, before they were [[{{Retcon}} Retconned]] and became pink).]]

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* [[spoiler: DevilInPlainSight/PaperThinDisguise]]: DevilInPlainSight / PaperThinDisguise]]: [[spoiler: It's commonly speculated that the character introduced in Chapter 25, Chiriko Kasane, is the main villain Chiasa Tachibana in disguise. This was a theory popularized by character-critique-central based on the grounds that they have similar names and Chiriko's animosity towards Azusa seems to come out of absolutely nowhere. They also share physical similarities, such as red/scarlet eyes (at least in Chapter 25, before they were [[{{Retcon}} Retconned]] and became pink).]]]]
* DirtyOldMan: The maids in Azusa's mansion are forced to wear revealing French maid outfits because "papa liked that kind of stuff o.o". {{Squick}}.



* {{Fainting}}: Azusa has fainted or passed out more times than is probably healthy for a human being, [[spoiler: made worse when, while fainting after hearing that the mastermind behind the unfortunate incidents plaguing her life could be her cousin Chiasa, she somehow manages to kill Akira.]]

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* {{Fainting}}: Azusa has fainted or passed out more times than is probably healthy for a human being, [[spoiler: made worse when, while fainting after hearing that the mastermind behind the unfortunate incidents plaguing her life could be her cousin Chiasa, she somehow manages to kill horribly injure Akira.]]



* InformedAbility: It's said that Azusa used to be the best swimmer on her swim team, but as of now, we have yet to see her swim ''at all'', well or otherwise. Akira also shared this trait at first until she swum in Chapter 12 and apparently swum better than Azusa could ever hope to.
** In Chapter 13, when she finally swims, she hits her head on the bottom of the pool somehow and would have drowned if not for Haru's intervention. [[SarcasmMode What a great swimmer she is! Truly she must be the best on the swim team.]]

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* InformedAbility: It's said that Azusa used to be the best swimmer on her swim team, but as of now, we have yet to see her swim ''at all'', well or otherwise. Akira also shared this trait at first Up until she swum in Chapter 12 and apparently swum better than 25, when Azusa could finally participates in a swim meet and defeats Chiriko, her opponent, she had yet to show off her apparent swimming prowess. The first time she ever hope to.
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swum was in Chapter 13, and when she finally swims, swum, she hits somehow hit her head on the bottom of the pool somehow on the kickoff and would have drowned if not for Haru's intervention. [[SarcasmMode What a great swimmer she is! Truly she must be the best on the swim team.]]



** Hitomi Styles says that she has 'majic powers', but besides a vague description of how they were used to kill her parents in an accident, they have yet to be explained or seen again.
** Masahiko claims that he could easily murder Hitomi, Kimmy, and Azusa, but has yet to do anything particularly threatening [[spoiler: past throwing a shoe at Azusa's head hard enough to knock her unconscious.]] This claim is made even more hilarious when one considers that he, a high ranking member of the yakuza, was taken down and restrained by a ''twelve year old girl''.

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** Hitomi Styles says that she has 'majic powers', but besides a vague description of how they were used to kill her parents in an accident, accident and a WizardDidIt explanation as to how she and her friends escaped their strait jackets, they have yet to be explained or seen again.
** Masahiko claims that he could easily murder Hitomi, Kimmy, and Azusa, but has yet to do anything particularly threatening [[spoiler: past throwing a shoe at Azusa's head hard enough to knock her unconscious.]] unconscious]]. This claim is made even more hilarious when one considers that he, a high ranking member of the yakuza, was taken down and restrained by a ''twelve year old girl''.girl'', possibly more than once.



* [[spoiler: KillTheOnesYouLove]]: [[spoiler: Azusa kills Akira in a fit of rage after hearing that her long lost cousin Chiasa Tachibana may be the one who killed her parents.]][[spoiler: [[BackFromTheDead ...But she turns out to be fine.]]
** This overlaps with SelfMadeOrphan for Hitomi Styles, who killed her parents by accident in a Ferris wheel accident using her 'majic powers'.

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* [[spoiler: KillTheOnesYouLove]]: [[spoiler: Azusa kills Akira in a fit of rage after hearing that her long lost cousin Chiasa Tachibana may be the one who killed her parents.]][[spoiler: [[BackFromTheDead ...But she turns out to be fine.]]
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** This overlaps with SelfMadeOrphan [[spoiler: SelfMadeOrphan]] for Hitomi Styles, who [[spoiler: killed her parents by accident in a Ferris wheel accident using her 'majic powers'.]]



* {{Retcon}}: Mas''se''hiko Kurusu's name is unceremoniously changed to Ma''sa''hiko Kurusu at the beginning of Chapter 23, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin even though it was already misspelled constantly as such (and as Masuhiko) in the first place]].

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* {{Retcon}}: Mas''se''hiko Ma''se''hiko Kurusu's name is unceremoniously changed to Ma''sa''hiko Kurusu at the beginning of Chapter 23, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin even though it was already misspelled constantly as such (and as Masuhiko) in the first place]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]]. It is currently on hiatus since the author has been grounded for poor grades, and will be un-grounded once her grades improve.

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]]. It is currently on hiatus since the author has been grounded for poor grades, and will be un-grounded once her grades improve.\n



* AlphaBitch: Chiriko is described as having a snobby and smug voice and a 'bitchy smirk'. It's also implied that she's wealthy due to her admission into an all-boys school such as Samezuka.



* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]]

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* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]]]] [[spoiler: [[Ascended Fandom Eventually, the fans seem to prevail, as Akira is later revealed to be A-OK, just bedridden in the hospital.]]]]



** In fact, in later chapters, even ''Rin'' has less of a purpose in the story than the OCs, especially after Azusa gets sent to the psych ward. Oddly enough, the only canon character with a role prominent to the plot is Nagisa, and that's only because he's in the yakuza as [[WebAnimation/FiftyPercentOff Thugisa]], and even then, he hasn't been seen since Chapter 17.

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** In fact, in later chapters, even ''Rin'' has less of a purpose in the story than the OCs, especially after Azusa gets sent to the psych ward. Oddly enough, the only canon character characters with a role roles prominent to the plot is Nagisa, and that's only because by this point are Nagisa (because he's in the yakuza as [[WebAnimation/FiftyPercentOff Thugisa]], Thugisa]]) and even then, he hasn't been seen since Chapter 17.Makoto because of his OOC portrayal as a {{Yandere}} who's jealous of Azusa for getting Haru's attention.



* [[spoiler: DevilInPlainSight/PaperThinDisguise]]: [[spoiler: It's commonly speculated that the character introduced in Chapter 25, Chiriko Kasane, is the main villain Chiasa Tachibana in disguise. This was a theory popularized by character-critique-central based on the grounds that they have similar names and Chiriko's animosity towards Azusa seems to come out of absolutely nowhere. They also share physical similarities, such as red/scarlet eyes (at least in Chapter 25, before they were [[{{Retcon}} Retconned]] and became pink).]]



* [[spoiler: KillTheOnesYouLove]]: [[spoiler: Azusa kills Akira in a fit of rage after hearing that her long lost cousin Chiasa Tachibana may be the one who killed her parents.]]

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* [[spoiler: KillTheOnesYouLove]]: [[spoiler: Azusa kills Akira in a fit of rage after hearing that her long lost cousin Chiasa Tachibana may be the one who killed her parents.]][[spoiler: [[BackFromTheDead ...But she turns out to be fine.]]



* OutOfCharacterMoment: Azusa acts ''extremely'' out of character when [[spoiler: letting Masahiko out of the psych ward]], to the point where she even swears and tells him to shut up when he says mean things. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment It comes out of seemingly nowhere and after that, Azusa never acts like that again or even acknowledges that she acted in that way.]]

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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Azusa acts ''extremely'' out of character when [[spoiler: letting Masahiko out of the psych ward]], to the point where she even swears and tells him to shut up when he says mean things. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment It comes out of seemingly nowhere and after that, Azusa never acts like that again or even acknowledges that she acted in that way.]]]] This is written off as character development, but it comes off as nothing of the sort in context.
** Forget the Makoto from the anime; in this fanfic, he's a {{Yandere}} who randomly hates his cousin for getting Haru's attention and unreasonably blames her for Haru breaking up with him.



* {{Retcon}}: Mas{{se}}hiko Kurusu's name is unceremoniously changed to Ma{{sa}}hiko Kurusu at the beginning of Chapter 23, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin even though it was already misspelled constantly as such (and as Masuhiko) in the first place]].

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* {{Retcon}}: Mas{{se}}hiko Mas''se''hiko Kurusu's name is unceremoniously changed to Ma{{sa}}hiko Ma''sa''hiko Kurusu at the beginning of Chapter 23, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin even though it was already misspelled constantly as such (and as Masuhiko) in the first place]]. place]].
** Chiriko Kasane's eyes, which were originally said to be scarlet, are changed to pink in Chapter 26 because the author says that her eyes 'looked like crap' before.



* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of, Asahina Aoi from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/SoundEuphonium specifically.

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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is one, with her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name a literal translation of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of, Asahina Aoi from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/SoundEuphonium specifically.real name, Akira Thompson.


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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]]. It is currently on hiatus since the author has been grounded for poor grades, and will be un-grounded once her grade grades improve.
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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]]. \n It is currently on hiatus since the author has been grounded for poor grades, and will be un-grounded once her grade improve.
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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of, Asahina Aoi from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}} specifically.

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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of, Asahina Aoi from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}} Literature/SoundEuphonium specifically.
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* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead]]: [[spoiler: Somehow, Akira is back even though the chapter in which she "died" explicitly states that she, well, died.]]


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** Conchita Fuentes has some parallels to the Vocaloid song Conchita, The Epicurean Daughter of Evil. The author has stated numerous times that she loves Vocaloid.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called [[VideoGame/AbsoluteDespairGirls Nagisa Shingetsu]], [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Naegi]]sa, [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]], and [[WebAnimation/FiftyPercentOff Thugisa]] by the author by this point.[=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader, but the rest have no excuse.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called [[VideoGame/AbsoluteDespairGirls Nagisa Shingetsu]], Shingetsu Nagisa]], [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Naegi]]sa, [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]], and [[WebAnimation/FiftyPercentOff Thugisa]] by the author by this point.[=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader, but the rest have no excuse.



* {{Expy}}: Belle Lockhart, a maid who is introduced in Chapter 5, acts exactly like Mikan Tsumiki from VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}. When this was pointed out by reviewers, [=SonicXKimmy172=] had to ask in the author's note for Chapter 6 [[TooDumbToLive what anime she was from.]]
** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}. [[spoiler: Additionally, the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Mahiru Koizumi's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}.]] Akira herself acts a lot of like Aoi Asahina, as well, and the character is cited as one of the inspirations for Akira's appearance and personality.
** One last Danganronpa expy includes Masahiko Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu, and even resembles him a bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.
** While less egregious than the rest of the examples listed here, Kimmy Sakura is beginning to look like an expy of Kyouko Kirigiri, who is also from Danganronpa.

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* {{Expy}}: Belle Lockhart, a maid who is introduced in Chapter 5, acts exactly like Mikan Tsumiki Mikan from VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}. When this was pointed out by reviewers, [=SonicXKimmy172=] had to ask in the author's note for Chapter 6 [[TooDumbToLive what anime she was from.]]
** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa Touko from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}. [[spoiler: Additionally, the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Mahiru Koizumi's Koizumi Mahiru's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}.]] Akira herself acts a lot of like Aoi Asahina, Asahina Aoi, as well, and the character is cited as one of the inspirations for Akira's appearance and personality.
** One last Danganronpa expy includes Masahiko Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu, Kuzuryuu Fuyuhiko, and even resembles him a bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.
** While less egregious than the rest of the examples listed here, Kimmy Sakura is beginning to look like an expy of Kyouko Kirigiri, Kirigiri Kyouko, who is also from Danganronpa.



** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case. She has yet to do anything that an adult detective couldn't do, as so far all she's done is add almost nothing to [[spoiler: the investigation of Homura Tomuson's murder]], [[spoiler: name Chiasa Tachibana (a long-lost cousin of Azusa) as the main suspect behind most all misfortunes in the fic]], attempt (and fail) to interrogate Masahiko to get information about the yakuza (and she probably would have killed him in the process, [[spoiler: if Azusa hadn't of let him go free]]), and [[{{Expy}} be a ripoff of]] [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Kyouko Kirigiri]].

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** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case. She has yet to do anything that an adult detective couldn't do, as so far all she's done is add almost nothing to [[spoiler: the investigation of Homura Tomuson's murder]], [[spoiler: name Chiasa Tachibana (a long-lost cousin of Azusa) as the main suspect behind most all misfortunes in the fic]], attempt (and fail) to interrogate Masahiko to get information about the yakuza (and she probably would have killed him in the process, [[spoiler: if Azusa hadn't of let him go free]]), and [[{{Expy}} be a ripoff of]] [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Kyouko Kirigiri]].Kirigiri Kyouko]].



* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of, Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}} specifically.

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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of, Aoi Asahina Aoi from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}} specifically.
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The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, a WesternAnimation/{{Steven Universe}} fanfiction titled Fanfic/''{{Morganite}}'' and a newer Anime/{{Black Butler}} one called ''Blackest of Nights''. So far, the grammar has only gotten worse from the editing.

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The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, a WesternAnimation/{{Steven Universe}} fanfiction titled Fanfic/''{{Morganite}}'' ''{{Fanfic/Morganite}}'' and a newer Anime/{{Black Butler}} one called ''Blackest of Nights''. So far, the grammar has only gotten worse from the editing.



* {{Eagleland}}: The only native-born American citizen in the fic, Luna Moon, eats constantly (even partaking in '3:00 AM hamburgers'), [[PhenotypeStereotype is a blond (and may or may not have blue eyes, depending on whether she's wearing colored eye contacts or not)]], and has GoofyPrintUnderwear with eagles on it. Shatter, a Brit, is disdainful towards her stereotypical crass behavior in Chapter 23:

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* {{Eagleland}}: The only native-born American citizen in the fic, Luna Moon, eats constantly (even partaking in '3:00 AM hamburgers'), [[PhenotypeStereotype is a blond (and may or may not have blue eyes, depending on whether she's wearing colored eye contacts or not)]], has BlackAndWhiteMorality like a stereotypical American, and even has GoofyPrintUnderwear with eagles on it. Shatter, a Brit, is disdainful towards her stereotypical crass behavior in Chapter 23:

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The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, a Steven Universe WesternAnimation/{{Steven Universe}} fanfiction titled ''Morganite'' Fanfic/''{{Morganite}}'' and a newer Black Butler Anime/{{Black Butler}} one called ''Blackest of Nights''. So far, the grammar has only gotten worse from the editing.



* {{Eagleland}}: The only native-born American citizen in the fic, Luna Moon, eats constantly (even partaking in '3:00 AM hamburgers'), [[PhenotypeStereotype is a blond (and may or may not have blue eyes, depending on whether she's wearing colored eye contacts or not)]], and has GoofyPrintUnderwear with eagles on it. Shatter, a Brit, is disdainful towards her stereotypical crass behavior in Chapter 23:
-->'''Luna:''' Sorry, guys! I was eating, my three am burger.''
-->'''Shatter:''' "T-tipical, american...."



** One last Danganronpa expy includes Masehiko Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu, and even resembles him a bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.

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** One last Danganronpa expy includes Masehiko Masahiko Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu, and even resembles him a bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.



** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case. She has yet to do anything that an adult detective couldn't do, as so far all she's done is add almost nothing to [[spoiler: the investigation of Homura Tomuson's murder]], [[spoiler: name Chiasa Tachibana (a long-lost cousin of Azusa) as the main suspect behind most all misfortunes in the fic]], attempt (and fail) to interrogate Masehiko to get information about the yakuza (and she probably would have killed him in the process, [[spoiler: if Azusa hadn't of let him go free]]), and [[{{Expy}} be a ripoff of]] [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Kyouko Kirigiri]].

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** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case. She has yet to do anything that an adult detective couldn't do, as so far all she's done is add almost nothing to [[spoiler: the investigation of Homura Tomuson's murder]], [[spoiler: name Chiasa Tachibana (a long-lost cousin of Azusa) as the main suspect behind most all misfortunes in the fic]], attempt (and fail) to interrogate Masehiko Masahiko to get information about the yakuza (and she probably would have killed him in the process, [[spoiler: if Azusa hadn't of let him go free]]), and [[{{Expy}} be a ripoff of]] [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Kyouko Kirigiri]].



** Masehiko claims that he could easily murder Hitomi, Kimmy, and Azusa, but has yet to do anything particularly threatening [[spoiler: past throwing a shoe at Azusa's head hard enough to knock her unconscious.]] This claim is made even more hilarious when one considers that he, a high ranking member of the yakuza, was taken down and restrained by a ''twelve year old girl''.

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** Masehiko Masahiko claims that he could easily murder Hitomi, Kimmy, and Azusa, but has yet to do anything particularly threatening [[spoiler: past throwing a shoe at Azusa's head hard enough to knock her unconscious.]] This claim is made even more hilarious when one considers that he, a high ranking member of the yakuza, was taken down and restrained by a ''twelve year old girl''.



* OutOfCharacterMoment: Azusa acts ''extremely'' out of character when [[spoiler: letting Masehiko out of the psych ward]], to the point where she even swears and tells him to shut up when he says mean things. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment It comes out of seemingly nowhere and after that, Azusa never acts like that again or even acknowledges that she acted in that way.]]

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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Azusa acts ''extremely'' out of character when [[spoiler: letting Masehiko Masahiko out of the psych ward]], to the point where she even swears and tells him to shut up when he says mean things. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment It comes out of seemingly nowhere and after that, Azusa never acts like that again or even acknowledges that she acted in that way.]]



* {{Retcon}}: Mas{{se}}hiko Kurusu's name is unceremoniously changed to Ma{{sa}}hiko Kurusu at the beginning of Chapter 23, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin even though it was already misspelled constantly as such (and as Masuhiko) in the first place]].



** Masehiko acts like a stereotypical tsundere when [[spoiler: Azusa releases him from the psych ward]], even going so far as to assume that she's doing it so that he'll owe her something.

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** Masehiko Masahiko acts like a stereotypical tsundere when [[spoiler: Azusa releases him from the psych ward]], even going so far as to assume that she's doing it so that he'll owe her something.
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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 20 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. However, the author has been grounded, so the fanfiction will be on a temporary hiatus. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 20 more than twenty chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. However, the author has been grounded, so the fanfiction will be on a temporary hiatus.this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].



* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called [[VideoGame/AbsoluteDespairGirls Nagisa Shingetsu]], [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], and [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called [[VideoGame/AbsoluteDespairGirls Nagisa Shingetsu]], [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], and [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Naegi]]sa, [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]] Momoe]], and [[WebAnimation/FiftyPercentOff Thugisa]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though point.[=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.reader, but the rest have no excuse.



** Kimmy mistakenly calls Azusa 'Kim' in Chapter 20. Not only is this [[AuthorAvatar the Suethor's name]], but considering that Kimmy shares this name with her Suethor, it's made even more confusing.



* DeathByOriginStory: Apparently the murderer of Azusa's parents is set to be revealed in the future, but as of now, the murder is unexplained and is used as nothing more than an additional reason for Azusa to angst about how terrible her life is.
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* [[spoiler: DeadSidekick]]: [[spoiler: Ever since Azusa killed Akira, the story has taken a much darker tone and become much less lighthearted. In fact, this is getting to the point where some readers want Kim to bring her BackFromTheDead (though this may just be because Azusa x Akira is a very popular ship among fans of the fic).]]
* DeathByOriginStory: Apparently the murderer of Azusa's parents, to date, have never been seen alive in the story. Even in a flashback before their murder, they were working away from home and were never seen or heard. The only purpose they've ever served is to [[SympathySue make Azusa sympathetic]] and give her something to {{Wangst}} about.
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parents is set to are similarly dead by the time Azusa meets her, as are Hitomi's. There could be revealed even more dead parents between all of the OCs, for all we know.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: As mentioned above, nearly every OC
in the future, but as story that isn't an {{Expy}} of now, some sort has dead parents to the murder is unexplained and is used as nothing more than an additional reason for Azusa to angst about how terrible her life is.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest
point where it's almost laughable in its own right.



** In fact, in later chapters, even ''Rin'' has less of a purpose in the story than the OCs, especially after Azusa gets sent to the psych ward. Oddly enough, the only canon character with a role prominent to the plot is Nagisa, and that's only because he's in the yakuza as [[WebAnimation/FiftyPercentOff Thugisa]], and even then, he hasn't been seen since Chapter 17.



* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: One of Hitomi's friends is named Luna Moon, which translates to 'Moon Moon'.



* EmoTeen: Azusa is an extreme example of this trope and, debatably, so is her friend Akira.
* ExoticEyeDesigns: Azusa has a little pink heart in her right eye, which she apparently used to be bullied for.

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* EmoTeen: Azusa is an extreme example of this trope and, debatably, so is trope, along with Hitomi and most of her friend Akira.
friends.
* ExoticEyeDesigns: Azusa has a little pink heart in her right eye, which she apparently used to be bullied for. for, and Hitomi's eyes gradient from light blue to pink. Additionally, Conchita's eyes seem to be pink and green.



** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa. [[spoiler: And the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Mahiru Koizumi's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}, as well.]]
** One last Dangan Ronpa expy includes Masehiko Kuzuru. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu, and even resembles him a bit.

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** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa. VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}. [[spoiler: And Additionally, the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Mahiru Koizumi's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}, 2}}.]] Akira herself acts a lot of like Aoi Asahina, as well.]]
well, and the character is cited as one of the inspirations for Akira's appearance and personality.
** One last Dangan Ronpa Danganronpa expy includes Masehiko Kuzuru. Kurusu. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu, Kuzuryuu, and even resembles him a bit.bit. This resemblance is further proven by the revision of Chapter 20's cover image, which was edited to further resemble Kuzuryuu.
** While less egregious than the rest of the examples listed here, Kimmy Sakura is beginning to look like an expy of Kyouko Kirigiri, who is also from Danganronpa.
* {{Fainting}}: Azusa has fainted or passed out more times than is probably healthy for a human being, [[spoiler: made worse when, while fainting after hearing that the mastermind behind the unfortunate incidents plaguing her life could be her cousin Chiasa, she somehow manages to kill Akira.]]



* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. Everything seemed to be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the only long-lasting effect appearing to be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.(Coincidentally ([[ExecutiveMeddling or not]]), Chapter 12 is also the first chapter since Chapter 7 which [=AkiTommichan=] hasn't 'proofread'.)
* {{GratuitousFrench}}: In chapter 18, [[spoiler: Azusa meets a girl named Hitomi Styles in the mental hospital she has been interned in who studies at "L'eau de rose Boarding School"]].
* ImplausibleHairColor: Azusa's hair is half black and half blond. This is explained as being natural because her mom had black hair and her dad had blond hair.

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** Hitomi's friend Conchita Fuentes is known for fangirling over the extremely egregious couple of Yami Yagami and Shatter Nymphnight, along with Hitomi herself and Azusa.
* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from in Chapter 10. Everything seemed to be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the only long-lasting effect appearing to be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.(Coincidentally ([[ExecutiveMeddling or not]]), Chapter 12 is also roommate.
** After this,
the first chapter since Chapter 7 which [=AkiTommichan=] hasn't 'proofread'.)
* {{GratuitousFrench}}: In chapter 18,
story becomes some sort of crime thriller with Azusa having a run-in with the yakuza, [[spoiler: who reveal that her LongLostRelative Chiasa Tachibana holds a high position in their ranks and is responsible for most all of the unfortunate things that have befallen Azusa and her companions]]. One begins to question what the Free fandom has to do with the story by this point.
* GRatedMentalIllness: Azusa was interred into the mental hospital because she had 'at least three mental illnesses', which were not detailed. Whatever they were, however, required her to be in a straitjacket when she first arrived to the hospital.
* GratuitousFrench: In Chapter 18,
Azusa meets a girl named Hitomi Styles in the mental hospital she has been interned in who studies studied at "L'eau de rose Rose Boarding School"]].
School". The name translates to 'Rose Water Boarding School', but more hilariously, L'eau de Rose is a kind of perfume.
* ImplausibleHairColor: Azusa's hair is half black and half blond. [[PatchworkKids This is explained as being natural because her mom had black hair and her dad had blond hair.hair]].



** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case, although the only connection that she's made so far is that it could be [[spoiler:another long-lost cousin of Azusa's.]]
* KilledOffScreen: [[spoiler: Apparently Anzu Sayaka got murdered at some point between her first appearance in a flashback and the 'present time' of the fic, but the reader got no details of the murder other than that it was perpetrated by the same person who caused all of the other deaths in the fic.]]

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** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case, although the only connection case. She has yet to do anything that an adult detective couldn't do, as so far all she's made so far done is that it could be [[spoiler:another add almost nothing to [[spoiler: the investigation of Homura Tomuson's murder]], [[spoiler: name Chiasa Tachibana (a long-lost cousin of Azusa's.Azusa) as the main suspect behind most all misfortunes in the fic]], attempt (and fail) to interrogate Masehiko to get information about the yakuza (and she probably would have killed him in the process, [[spoiler: if Azusa hadn't of let him go free]]), and [[{{Expy}} be a ripoff of]] [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Kyouko Kirigiri]].
** Hitomi Styles says that she has 'majic powers', but besides a vague description of how they were used to kill her parents in an accident, they have yet to be explained or seen again.
** Masehiko claims that he could easily murder Hitomi, Kimmy, and Azusa, but has yet to do anything particularly threatening [[spoiler: past throwing a shoe at Azusa's head hard enough to knock her unconscious.]] This claim is made even more hilarious when one considers that he, a high ranking member of the yakuza, was taken down and restrained by a ''twelve year old girl''.
* KilledOffScreen: [[DeceasedParentsAreTheBest Azusa's, Akira's, and Hitomi's parents, naturally.
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* KilledOffScreen: ** [[spoiler: Apparently Anzu Sayaka got murdered at some point between her first appearance in a flashback and the 'present time' of the fic, but the reader got no details of the murder other than that it was perpetrated by the same person who caused all of the other deaths in the fic.]]]]
* [[spoiler: KillTheOnesYouLove]]: [[spoiler: Azusa kills Akira in a fit of rage after hearing that her long lost cousin Chiasa Tachibana may be the one who killed her parents.]]
** This overlaps with SelfMadeOrphan for Hitomi Styles, who killed her parents by accident in a Ferris wheel accident using her 'majic powers'.



* MoodWhiplash: An extreme example occurs in Chapter 10 in which [[spoiler:Aunt Homura is found murdered in Akira's home, her skull having been bashed in by a baseball bat.]] This comes just after Azusa and Rin were just hanging out on what could be considered their second date (the first one, which happened at a 7-Eleven, of all places, doesn't really count).

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* MoodWhiplash: An extreme example occurs in Chapter 10 in which [[spoiler:Aunt Homura is found murdered in Akira's home, her skull having been bashed in by a baseball bat.]] This comes just after Azusa and Rin were just hanging out on what could be considered their second date (the first one, which happened at a 7-Eleven, date; it was certainly no time for something of all places, doesn't really count).''this'' caliber.



** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and the preteen detective from Canada, Kimmy Sakura, has blond hair and pink bangs.

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** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and the preteen detective from Canada, Kimmy Sakura, has blond hair and pink bangs.bangs, and Hitomi Styles has blonde hair with pink highlights. Among her friends, Luna Moon's hair gradients from platinum blonde to black and at one point, Yami Yagami gets orange highlights in his hair (there may regularly be black highlights in his hair, but with Kim's atrocious art style, it's hard to tell).
* OutOfCharacterMoment: Azusa acts ''extremely'' out of character when [[spoiler: letting Masehiko out of the psych ward]], to the point where she even swears and tells him to shut up when he says mean things. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment It comes out of seemingly nowhere and after that, Azusa never acts like that again or even acknowledges that she acted in that way.]]



* PurpleProse: Though most of the fic is full of BeigeProse at its best, the outfit descriptions are written in an obnoxious display of this trope to the point where ''entire paragraphs'' of clothing descriptions could simply be skipped without anything essential being lost from the story.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: '''''Makto.'''''
* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}}, specifically) while [=AkiTommichan=] states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.

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* PurpleProse: Though most of the fic is full of BeigeProse at its best, the outfit descriptions are written in an obnoxious display of this trope to the point where ''entire paragraphs'' of clothing descriptions could simply be skipped without anything essential being lost from the story.
story. Even more annoyingly, recent chapters have had ''seven or eight'' clothing descriptions all in one block of text thanks to the existence of Hitomi's friends.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: '''''Makto.'''''
Makoto perhaps gets the worst of this, with his name being spelled as Makto, Makotot, and [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs Maktoto]], but beyond him, most every character has had his or her name misspelled on at least one occasion.
** Perhaps even worse than Makoto, however, is Nagisa. As mentioned above, has his name spelled wrong at least once in almost all of his appearances.
* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the screen name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi of, Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}}, specifically) while [=AkiTommichan=] states Euphonium}} specifically.
** Hitomi Wish Styles is apparently based
on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both a friend of these works.Kim's known as 'Hitomi-chan'.



* TokenRomance: Besides Azusa being shipped with not just one but ''two'' canon characters, we have a forced homosexual couple in Yami Yagami and Shatter Nymphnight. They're constantly fangirled over and fawned over by everyone around them, even the author. This has gotten to the point where many have accused Kim of being a homophobe for fetishising gay men, which Kim vehemently denies.



** Masehiko acts like a stereotypical tsundere when [[spoiler: Azusa releases him from the psych ward]], even going so far as to assume that she's doing it so that he'll owe her something.



* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Every OC introduced either has technicolor hair or hair that gradients in an impossible way. Along with the examples for MulticoloredHair, Aunt Homura is described as having purple hair.

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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Every OC introduced either has technicolor hair or hair that gradients in an impossible way. Along with the examples for MulticoloredHair, Aunt Homura is described as having has purple hair.hair, Belle Lockhart literally has blue hair, and Yami Yagami's hair is a weird shade of forest green.

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**One last Dangan Ronpa expy includes Masehiko Kuzuru. He acts almost identical to Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu, and even resembles him a bit.



* HeroOfAnotherStory: To an extent. Masehiko, whose last name has been confirmed as Kuzuru, is pratically [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu]] by this point. This troper genuinely wouldn't be surprised if he revealed himself to actually be Fuyuhiko.

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 19 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. However, the author has been grounded, so the fanfiction will be on a temporary hiatus. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 19 20 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. However, the author has been grounded, so the fanfiction will be on a temporary hiatus. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].



** In Chapter 17, there's another VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}} example with a new OC called Masehiko who acts, and judging from his description and one of the shadows on the chapter cover, even looks like Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu. Hell, he's even from the yakuza! Unsurprisingly, he is one of Akira's OCs.


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* HeroOfAnotherStory: To an extent. Masehiko, whose last name has been confirmed as Kuzuru, is pratically [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu]] by this point. This troper genuinely wouldn't be surprised if he revealed himself to actually be Fuyuhiko.
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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 19 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 19 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. However, the author has been grounded, so the fanfiction will be on a temporary hiatus. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].



* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Every OC introduced either has technicolor hair or hair that gradients in an impossible way. Along with the examples for MulticoloredHair, Aunt Homura is described as having purple hair.

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with 18 19 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].
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*{{GratuitousFrench}}: In chapter 18, [[spoiler: Azusa meets a girl named Hitomi Styles in the mental hospital she has been interned in who studies at "L'eau de rose Boarding School"]].
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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with seventeen chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with seventeen 18 chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].
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**In Chapter 16, the author accidentally calls Chiasa Tachibana (yet another OC) Chiaki. It's downplayed in chapter 17 when in the author's note she mentions that Chiasa was originally going to be called Chiaki.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called Nagisa Shingetsu, [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], and [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called [[VideoGame/AbsoluteDespairGirls Nagisa Shingetsu, Shingetsu]], [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], and [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.

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