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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called Nagisa Shingetsu, [[VisualNovel/Super Danganronpa 2 Nagito]], and [[Anime/Puella Magi Madoka Magica Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.
** Whether this counts as RougeAnglesOfSatin or this trope is uncertain, but the author also calls Kou Matsuoka '[[VisualNovel/Super Danganronpa 2 Ko Maeda]]suoka' at some point because 'I forgot hwo to spell her last name becuase its 3 in the morning and im to lazy to google it lol'. She also calls Kou 'Ko' frequently, a fandom nickname for the same character whose name got inserted into Kou's above.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called Nagisa Shingetsu, [[VisualNovel/Super Danganronpa 2 [[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Nagito]], and [[Anime/Puella Magi Madoka Magica [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.
** Whether this counts as RougeAnglesOfSatin or this trope is uncertain, but the author also calls Kou Matsuoka '[[VisualNovel/Super Danganronpa 2 '[[VisualNovel/SuperDanganronpa2 Ko Maeda]]suoka' at some point because 'I forgot hwo to spell her last name becuase its 3 in the morning and im to lazy to google it lol'. She also calls Kou 'Ko' frequently, a fandom nickname for the same character whose name got inserted into Kou's above.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called Nagisa Shingetsu, [[VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}Nagito]], and [[Anime/{{Puella Magi Madoka Magica}}Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.
** Whether this counts as RougeAngelsOfSatin or this trope is uncertain, but the author also calls Kou Matsuoka '[[VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}Ko Maeda]]suoka' at some point because 'I forgot hwo to spell her last name becuase its 3 in the morning and im to lazy to google it lol'. She also calls Kou 'Ko' frequently, a fandom nickname for the same character whose name got inserted into Kou's above.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called Nagisa Shingetsu, [[VisualNovel/{{Super [[VisualNovel/Super Danganronpa 2}}Nagito]], 2 Nagito]], and [[Anime/{{Puella [[Anime/Puella Magi Madoka Magica}}Nagisa Magica Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.
** Whether this counts as RougeAngelsOfSatin RougeAnglesOfSatin or this trope is uncertain, but the author also calls Kou Matsuoka '[[VisualNovel/{{Super '[[VisualNovel/Super Danganronpa 2}}Ko 2 Ko Maeda]]suoka' at some point because 'I forgot hwo to spell her last name becuase its 3 in the morning and im to lazy to google it lol'. She also calls Kou 'Ko' frequently, a fandom nickname for the same character whose name got inserted into Kou's above.



* PrecisionFStrike: "Dont you recognize me bitch? It's me... [[spoiler:NAGISA MOMOE]]"

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* PrecisionFStrike: "Dont you recognize me bitch? [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch bitch]]? It's me... [[spoiler:NAGISA MOMOE]]"

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The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and involving herself in a murder investigation.

The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, a Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.

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The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and Matsuoka (and later getting a crush on Haru); involving herself in a murder investigation.

investigation; getting institutionalized; and having a run-in with the yakuza.

The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, a Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.
''Morganite'' and a newer Black Butler one called "Blackest of Nights". So far, the grammar has only gotten worse from the editing.



* AccidentalMisnaming: Nagisa Hazuki has been mistakenly called Nagisa Shingetsu, [[VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}Nagito]], and [[Anime/{{Puella Magi Madoka Magica}}Nagisa Momoe]] by the author by this point, though these mistakes seem almost too contrived to be accidental, though [=SonicXKimmy172=] does blame the first 'Nagisa' slip on her beta reader.
** Whether this counts as RougeAngelsOfSatin or this trope is uncertain, but the author also calls Kou Matsuoka '[[VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}Ko Maeda]]suoka' at some point because 'I forgot hwo to spell her last name becuase its 3 in the morning and im to lazy to google it lol'. She also calls Kou 'Ko' frequently, a fandom nickname for the same character whose name got inserted into Kou's above.



** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa.

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** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa. [[spoiler: And the scene of her murder looks almost identical to the scene of Mahiru Koizumi's murder in VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}, as well.]]



** Apparently, Kimmy Sakura, a twelve year old from Canada, is such a great investigator that she qualified to be sent to Japan to investigate a serial killer case, although the only connection that she's made so far is that it could be [[spoiler:another long-lost cousin of Azusa's.]]
* KilledOffScreen: [[spoiler: Apparently Anzu Sayaka got murdered at some point between her first appearance in a flashback and the 'present time' of the fic, but the reader got no details of the murder other than that it was perpetrated by the same person who caused all of the other deaths in the fic.]]



** [[spoiler: Somehow, this isn't the ONLY LongLostRelative she has, either, as it seems that she has a long lost cousin who she's not only never heard of, but who is claimed to be the murderer of Azusa's parents, Aunt Homura, Anzu, and the arsonist who started the fire that killed Akira's parents.]]



** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s other OC from her DeviantArt account that makes a cameo in Chapter 8 (Kimmy Sakura) has blond hair and pink bangs.

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** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s other OC the preteen detective from her DeviantArt account that makes a cameo in Chapter 8 (Kimmy Sakura) Canada, Kimmy Sakura, has blond hair and pink bangs.bangs.
* PrecisionFStrike: "Dont you recognize me bitch? It's me... [[spoiler:NAGISA MOMOE]]"


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* {{Understatement}}: According to Haru, the yakuza, who were swinging around guns and shouting violent threats in the middle of a hospital just seconds earlier, "looked like trouble". [[PlotHole And that's ignoring how Haru wasn't even there when the yakuza were threatening Azusa...]]
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** In Chapter 17, there's another VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}} example with a new OC called Masehiko who acts, and judging from his description and one of the shadows on the chapter cover, even looks like Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu. Hell, he's even from the yakuza!Unsurprisingly, he is one of Akira's OCs.

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** In Chapter 17, there's another VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}} example with a new OC called Masehiko who acts, and judging from his description and one of the shadows on the chapter cover, even looks like Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu. Hell, he's even from the yakuza!Unsurprisingly, yakuza! Unsurprisingly, he is one of Akira's OCs.
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** In Chapter 17, there's another VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}} example with a new OC called Masehiko who acts, and judging from his description and one of the shadows on the chapter cover, even looks like Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu. Hell, he's even from the yakuza!

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** In Chapter 17, there's another VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}} example with a new OC called Masehiko who acts, and judging from his description and one of the shadows on the chapter cover, even looks like Fuyuhiko Kuzuryuu. Hell, he's even from the yakuza!yakuza!Unsurprisingly, he is one of Akira's OCs.

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with ten chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with ten seventeen chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].


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** In Chapter 13, when she finally swims, she hits her head on the bottom of the pool somehow and would have drowned if not for Haru's intervention. [[BlatantSarcasm What a great swimmer she is! Truly she must be the best on the swim team.]]

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** In Chapter 13, when she finally swims, she hits her head on the bottom of the pool somehow and would have drowned if not for Haru's intervention. [[BlatantSarcasm [[SarcasmMode What a great swimmer she is! Truly she must be the best on the swim team.]]

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* DeathByOriginStory: Apparently the murderer of Azusa's parents are set to be revealed in the future, but as of now, it's unexplained and is used as nothing more than an additional reason for Azusa to angst about how terrible her life is.

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* DeathByOriginStory: Apparently the murderer of Azusa's parents are is set to be revealed in the future, but as of now, it's the murder is unexplained and is used as nothing more than an additional reason for Azusa to angst about how terrible her life is.


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** In Chapter 13, when she finally swims, she hits her head on the bottom of the pool somehow and would have drowned if not for Haru's intervention. [[BlatantSarcasm What a great swimmer she is! Truly she must be the best on the swim team.]]


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** For some reason, Makoto is becoming this now that it's been shown that Azusa's getting a crush on Haru. In his own words, he doesn't want her to "play with my boyfriends emotions like a kid in a toy store."
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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. Everything seemed to be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the only long-lasting effect appearing to be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.(Coincidentally ([[ExecutiveMeddling or not]]), Chapter 12 is also the first chapter since Chapter 7 which [=AkiTommichan=] hasn't 'proofread.)

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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. Everything seemed to be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the only long-lasting effect appearing to be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.(Coincidentally ([[ExecutiveMeddling or not]]), Chapter 12 is also the first chapter since Chapter 7 which [=AkiTommichan=] hasn't 'proofread.'proofread'.)
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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. [[spoiler:Everything seemed to be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the only lost-lasted effect appearing to be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.]]

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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. [[spoiler:Everything Everything seemed to be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the only lost-lasted long-lasting effect appearing to be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.]](Coincidentally ([[ExecutiveMeddling or not]]), Chapter 12 is also the first chapter since Chapter 7 which [=AkiTommichan=] hasn't 'proofread.)

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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. It's uncertain as to whether this will stick until the end. [[note]]Though the fic certainly would get better if the bad OCs this fic has to offer were suddenly locked in a school and ordered by a homicidal bear to begin murdering each other...[[/note]]

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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. It's uncertain as [[spoiler:Everything seemed to whether this will stick until be forgotten following Chapter 11, though, with the end. [[note]]Though the fic certainly would get better if the bad OCs this fic has only lost-lasted effect appearing to offer were suddenly locked in a school and ordered by a homicidal bear to begin murdering each other...[[/note]]be Akira's status as Azusa's new roommate.]]


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* InformedAbility: It's said that Azusa used to be the best swimmer on her swim team, but as of now, we have yet to see her swim ''at all'', well or otherwise. Akira also shared this trait at first until she swum in Chapter 12 and apparently swum better than Azusa could ever hope to.
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* GenreShift: The fic abruptly goes from being a slice of life story centered around a flat SympathySue to [[spoiler: a strange VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} fanfiction in which a character is murdered and the characters from Free, along with OCs created by the author, try to solve the murder single handed, without any police intervention or investigation that has any meaning]] starting from Chapter 10. It's uncertain as to whether this will stick until the end. [[note]]Though the fic certainly would get better if the bad OCs this fic has to offer were suddenly locked in a school and ordered by a homicidal bear to begin murdering each other...[[/note]]
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** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa.

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** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa.



* MadeMyselfSad: Azusa is known to burst tears randomly whenever she remembers her parents. This tends to be, more often than not, in the middle of conversations.

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* MadeMyselfSad: Azusa is known to burst into tears randomly whenever she remembers her parents. This tends to be, more often than not, in the middle of conversations.
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* DemotedToExtra: Most of the main cast may as well not exist, as much more focus is being put on Azusa, Rin, and all of the other random OCs the author inserted.


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* MadeMyselfSad: Azusa is known to burst tears randomly whenever she remembers her parents. This tends to be, more often than not, in the middle of conversations.
* MoodWhiplash: An extreme example occurs in Chapter 10 in which [[spoiler:Aunt Homura is found murdered in Akira's home, her skull having been bashed in by a baseball bat.]] This comes just after Azusa and Rin were just hanging out on what could be considered their second date (the first one, which happened at a 7-Eleven, of all places, doesn't really count).
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* {{Moe}}: "Belle was 17 years old. She was new and very clumsy, but she was also moe."
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* AngstWhatAngst: Compared to the waterworks display that Azusa gives us whenever her parents are brought up, her friend Akira seems mostly acceptant of the fire that orphaned her ten years ago to an almost uncaring degree.



* CanonDefilement: There are too many examples to ''begin'' listing.



* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt Homura "[[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]]" is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]



* {{Wangst}}: Azusa cries at the drop of a pin often without any sort of prompting. She could be having a pleasant conversation with someone and then suddenly remember her parents and spontaneously burst into tears.
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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]] is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]] Homura "[[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]]" is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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A great chapter-by-chapter critique of it done by the Tumblr blog character-critique-central (which is updated upon the upload of each new chapter) can be found [[http://character-critique-central.tumblr.com/ here.]]



* CanonDefilement: There are too many examples to ''begin'' listing.
* DeathByOriginStory: Apparently the murderer of Azusa's parents are set to be revealed in the future, but as of now, it's unexplained and is used as nothing more than an additional reason for Azusa to angst about how terrible her life is.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest
* DirtyOldMan: The maids in Azusa's mansion are forced to wear revealing French maid outfits because "papa liked that kind of stuff o.o". {{Squick}}.



* ImplausibleHairColor: Azusa's hair is half black and half blond. This is explained as being natural.

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* {{Fangirl}}: Azusa repeatedly says that she's a {{yaoi}} fangirl and gets a {{nosebleed}} every time she sees a half-naked boy. Considering [[Anime/{{Free}} the anime this fic is based on]], she must lose a lot of blood on a daily basis. [[FridgeLogic Maybe that's why she's so overemotional.]]
* ImplausibleHairColor: Azusa's hair is half black and half blond. This is explained as being natural.natural because her mom had black hair and her dad had blond hair.


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* LongLostRelative: It's amazing that Azusa never even ''heard'' of the Tachibanas until the beginning of the fic.
* LoveAtFirstSight: Directly upon seeing so much as a ''picture'' of Rin Matsuoka, Azusa is infatuated. [[StalkerWithACrush Not to mention the way that she breaks into his school to watch him swim.]]


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* MostFanficWritersAreGirls


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* {{Tsundere}}: "I'll consdier it." Rin said while still blushing. "But its not like I like you or anything baka!!" In the same paragraph, the trope is lampshaded directly when Azusa calls Rin a tsundere.


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* {{Yandere}}: This trope is {{lampshaded}} when Azusa says that she doesn't want to seem like one when approaching Rin in Chapter 6. This doesn't work, though, considering that she was literally [[StalkerWithACrush stalking him]] and asking for details about him from those around him, both of which are things that yanderes are known to do.

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* AngstWhatAngst: Compared to the waterworks display that Azusa gives us whenever her parents are brought up, her friend Akira seems mostly acceptant of the fire that orphaned her ten years ago to an almost uncaring degree.



* EmbarrassingMiddleName: Azusa's middle name is Kimber, [[EpicFail which is actually a surname, not a given name.]]



* ExoticEyeDesigns: Azusa has a little pink heart in her right eye, which she apparently used to be bullied for.



* ImplausibleHairColor: Azusa's hair is half black and half blond. This is explained as being natural.
** Somehow, the tips of Akira's hair are still burnt from a fire she was involved in ten years ago. According to Azusa, "they would be there, for the rest of her life."
* ImprobableHairStyle: One of Azusa's pigtails is ''way'' shorter than the other. She mentions that this is because someone tore out a chunk of her hair a year prior to the story, but if that's the case, then why didn't she get a haircut? Why does she keep her hairstyle lopsided like that?



* RougeAnglesOfSatin: '''''Makto.'''''



* RougeAnglesOfSatin: '''''Makto.'''''

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: '''''Makto.'''''{{Shotacon}}: Nagisa is described as a 'blond shota' on more than one occasion.
* {{Wangst}}: Azusa cries at the drop of a pin often without any sort of prompting. She could be having a pleasant conversation with someone and then suddenly remember her parents and spontaneously burst into tears.
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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, Fukawa]] is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* AmbiguouslyBrown: "Anzu had dark skin (Im not rasist or anything im just saiyng that she has dark skin!!)"
* BuffySpeak: Anzu has hair "like that crossdresser from that one game with the wierd title that i forgot but way longer".



* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}}, specifically) while Akira states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.

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* PurpleProse: Though most of the fic is full of BeigeProse at its best, the outfit descriptions are written in an obnoxious display of this trope to the point where ''entire paragraphs'' of clothing descriptions could simply be skipped without anything essential being lost from the story.
* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}}, specifically) while Akira [=AkiTommichan=] states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.

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The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and [[spoiler:involving herself in a murder investigation]].

The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, A Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.

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The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and [[spoiler:involving involving herself in a murder investigation]].investigation.

The fic began getting 'revisions' from [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, A a Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.



* DramaticEllipsis: So many...that you'll begin...to question...your own sanity...



* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/DanganRonpa Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/DanganRonpa [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]]]
* {{Expy}}: Belle Lockhart, a maid who is introduced in Chapter 5, acts exactly like Mikan Tsumiki from VisualNovel/{{Super Danganronpa 2}}. When this was pointed out by reviewers, [=SonicXKimmy172=] had to ask in the author's note for Chapter 6 [[TooDumbToLive what anime she was from.]]
** Another Danganronpa expy includes Akira's Aunt Homura, who is an exact expy of Touko Fukawa from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}}, but this one can be more easily explained as it it's stated by [=SonicXKimmy172=] that the character was made by [=AkiTommichan=], who is a known fan of Danganronpa.
* {{Moe}}: "Belle was 17 years old. She was new and very clumsy, but she was also moe."



* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{DanganRonpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically) while Akira states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: ''''Makto.''''

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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{DanganRonpa}} VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, Literature/{{Hibike Euphonium}}, specifically) while Akira states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: ''''Makto.'''''''''Makto.'''''
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: After the fic begins getting revised by [=AkiTommichan=], comma splices begin appearing everywhere to the point where they appear even more than the ellipses used to.
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The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and involving herself in a murder investigation.

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The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and involving [[spoiler:involving herself in a murder investigation.investigation]].



* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/DanganRonpa Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media Aunt (Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/DanganRonpa Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]
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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa Fukawa}}, as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa Fukawa}}, Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/DanganRonpa Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]



* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically) while Akira states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.

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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} VisualNovel/{{DanganRonpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically) while Akira states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.
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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]], VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa Fukawa}}, as she is sometimes called, called by readers, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called, is particularly egregious), and the plot began going in a very strange direction once [[spoiler:Aunt Homura was murdered]], changing the genre out of nowhere.
* MulticoloredHair: Azusa's hair is black with blond tips, which is shoddily explained as being because her mother had black hair and her father was blond.

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* ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa [[VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called, is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot began going in a very strange direction once derails almost entirely when [[spoiler:Aunt Homura was murdered]], changing the genre gets murdered out of nowhere.
nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.]]
* MulticoloredHair: Azusa's hair is black with blond tips, which is shoddily explained as being because [[PatchworkKids her mother had black hair and her father was blond.blond]].


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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: ''''Makto.''''

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by SonicXKimmy172 that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with ten chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by SonicXKimmy172 [=SonicXKimmy172=] that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with ten chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].



The fic began getting 'revisions' from SonicXKimmy172's friend named AkiTommichan starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, A Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.

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The fic began getting 'revisions' from SonicXKimmy172's [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s friend named AkiTommichan [=AkiTommichan=] starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, A Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.



* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on SonicXKimmy172's part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that SonicXKimmy172 claims to have no knowledge of which Akira claims on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts to be among her favorite games and animes (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically).

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* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on SonicXKimmy172's part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being ExecutiveMeddling: After [=AkiTommichan=] began revising things in the same as the name fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new OCs started appearing which were carbon copies of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two other characters from works that SonicXKimmy172 claims to have no knowledge of which Akira claims on her Fanfiction random media (Aunt Homura [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa Fukawa]], as she is sometimes called, is particularly egregious), and DeviantArt accounts to be among her favorite games and animes (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically).the plot began going in a very strange direction once [[spoiler:Aunt Homura was murdered]], changing the genre out of nowhere.



** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and SonicXKimmy172's other OC from her DeviantArt account that makes a cameo in Chapter 8 (Kimmy Sakura) has blond hair and pink bangs.

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** Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and SonicXKimmy172's [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s other OC from her DeviantArt account that makes a cameo in Chapter 8 (Kimmy Sakura) has blond hair and pink bangs.bangs.
* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on [=SonicXKimmy172=]'s part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that [=SonicXKimmy172=] claims to have no knowledge of (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically) while Akira states on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts that she likes both of these works.



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* EmoTeen: Azusa is an extreme example of this trope and, debatably, so is her friend Akira.

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* EmoTeen: Azusa is an extreme example of this trope and, debatably, so is her friend Akira.Akira.
* SelfInsertFic: While it can be argued as to whether or not Azusa Tachibana is a self-insert on SonicXKimmy172's part, her friend Akira Tomuson is an obvious one. Not only is her name only a few letters away from being the same as the name of the person who made her (Akira Thompson), but she is explicitly stated as looking like two characters from works that SonicXKimmy172 claims to have no knowledge of which Akira claims on her Fanfiction and DeviantArt accounts to be among her favorite games and animes (Aoi Asahina from VisualNovel/{{Danganronpa}} and Sapphire 'Midori' Kawashima from Literature/{{HibikeEuphonium}}, specifically).
* MulticoloredHair: Azusa's hair is black with blond tips, which is shoddily explained as being because her mother had black hair and her father was blond.
**Similarly, Akira's hair goes from blond to black because the tips got burned in a fire that happened ten years ago, and SonicXKimmy172's other OC from her DeviantArt account that makes a cameo in Chapter 8 (Kimmy Sakura) has blond hair and pink bangs.
*YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Every OC introduced either has technicolor hair or hair that gradients in an impossible way. Along with the examples for MulticoloredHair, Aunt Homura is described as having purple hair.
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''Chlorine Grown Roses'' is a Anime/{{Free}} fanfic written by SonicXKimmy172 that was posted to DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net on December 22, 2015. It is still ongoing, with ten chapters having been posted at the time of writing this. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11686052 here]].

The story follows a fifteen-year-old orphan named Azusa Kimber Tachibana, the American-born cousin of Makoto Tachibana. After having lived in isolation in her mansion in the United States since her parents were murdered in her very home, she was sent a letter from said cousin with a plane ticket to Japan attached. From thereon, we see Azusa take to life in Iwatobi, which includes but is not limited to: fangirling over the swim team (before joining it herself); befriending the canon characters; throwing herself into a relationship with Rin Matsuoka; remodeling the Tachibana's guest room without their permission; finding her friend that she used to interact with online, Akira Tomuson, after she transferred to her school; and involving herself in a murder investigation.

The fic began getting 'revisions' from SonicXKimmy172's friend named AkiTommichan starting from Chapter 7, who, in turn, has her own fanfiction, A Steven Universe fanfiction titled ''Morganite''.

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!! ''Chlorine Grown Roses'' contains examples of:
* EmoTeen: Azusa is an extreme example of this trope and, debatably, so is her friend Akira.

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