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* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: After the ponies spent a sol grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet."

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* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: To create an instance of WorldsBestCharacter: After the ponies spent a sol sol, on Mars, grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet."


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* WorldsBestCharacter: By way of an OverlyNarrowSuperlative. After the ponies spent a sol, on Mars, grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet."
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* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: After the ponies spent a sol grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet."

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-- Dragonfly during the adaptation of Music/SpaceOddity.

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-- Dragonfly during the adaptation of Music/SpaceOddity.''Music/SpaceOddity''.



* TeethFlying: On Sol 90, after the crew stop Cherry Berry from resigning, notably through Fireball restraining her, she tells him to report to the medic for injuries... before giving him an uppercut hard enough to break a tooth. The dragon is less distressed by the pain than by the fact a pony broke his tooth, which he would never hear the end of it in the Dragonlands.
* TemptingFate: Any time one of the crew suggests that things are looking up, Murphy raises his head to snicker. After a few incidents, [[GenreSavvy they learn to be more judicious about their statements]].
* TranslatorMicrobes: Starlight has a spell that allows limited translation between English and Equestrian, but it has problems dealing with metaphors and technical jargon. This and the limited availability of magic makes learning English a priority for the Equestrians.



* TemptingFate: Any time one of the crew suggests that things are looking up, Murphy raises his head to snicker. After a few incidents, [[GenreSavvy they learn to be more judicious about their statements]].
* TranslatorMicrobes: Starlight has a spell that allows limited translation between English and Equestrian, but it has problems dealing with metaphors and technical jargon. This and the limited availability of magic makes learning English a priority for the Equestrians.
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* GoshDarnItToHeck: Mark catches himself thinking "darn" rather than "damn" and wonders if he's been around the ponies for too long, despite regular exposure to Cherry's SirSwearsALot outbursts and Alien Troll Queen Spitfire. A few minutes later, however, he's back to his usual colorful vocabulary, so it was probably just a brief lapse.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Dr. Shields cites Mark's lack of snark as one symptom of the crew's exhaustion following Dragonfly's indisposition.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** The other equestrians notice that Dragonfly has stopped her usual "silly changeling" routine and are concerned that it may be concealing a more serious problem.
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* GenreSavvy: Mark is snapped out of his catatonic state when placed in a situation common to many Sci-fi/horror movies:
--> "When you see an egg or a pod or a cocoon or anything like that in a space cave, especially if it's black, you leave it the fuck alone!!"



* HurricaneOfPuns: Mark occasionally indulges in his log. e.g. Sol 251 commentary on "rock farms":
-->I must ask to see one of these "rock farms" they keep talking about. I bet they grow some smashing pumpkins along their black-eyed peas and red hot chili peppers. (And I know, somewhere, a music historian is groaning that this entry is a bunch of korn.)
* IWantMyJetpack: For all Mark's remarks about how the Equestrians are insane, he also states that they're exploring space the way humans ''should'' have, dang it!
-->They're not wasting time with their space program. One day they just decided, "Let's go to space!" And from that day they threw everything they had at it -- magic, science, courage, and political will. For most of my lifetime we had the science and the courage, but not the will. Now we've got it back. Don't give it up again.



* IWantMyJetpack: For all Mark's remarks about how the Equestrians are insane, he also states that they're exploring space the way humans ''should'' have, dang it!
-->They're not wasting time with their space program. One day they just decided, "Let's go to space!" And from that day they threw everything they had at it -- magic, science, courage, and political will. For most of my lifetime we had the science and the courage, but not the will. Now we've got it back. Don't give it up again.

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* DisasterDominoes: The chain of events leading to the Equestrians getting stuck on Mars. Bonus points for contributing to the storm that strands Mark as well.
** Also, [[spoiler: the outcome of the launch of the Ares IV MAV, rechristened ''Phoenix''.]]

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* DisasterDominoes: DisasterDominoes:
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The chain of events leading to the Equestrians getting stuck on Mars. Bonus points for contributing to the storm that strands Mark as well.
** Also, [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the outcome of the launch of the Ares IV MAV, rechristened ''Phoenix''.]]



* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: After Dragonfly has cocooned herself, the others ask home for help getting her out again. What follows is Chrysalis's [[spoiler:half sarcasm, half test]] prescription to wake her up again:
-->Procedure for reviving Dragonfly. Take one stick. Apply vigorously to side of cocoon while shouting the following chant: wake up you lazy drone, [[EmotionEater quit draining people in your sleep]], don't you know [[AppealToWorseProblems larvae are starving in Mareitania?]] Repeat as needed until desired results are achieved. Over.

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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: GetAHoldOfYourselfMan:
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After Dragonfly has cocooned herself, the others ask home for help getting her out again. What follows is Chrysalis's [[spoiler:half sarcasm, half test]] prescription to wake her up again:
-->Procedure --->Procedure for reviving Dragonfly. Take one stick. Apply vigorously to side of cocoon while shouting the following chant: wake up you lazy drone, [[EmotionEater quit draining people in your sleep]], don't you know [[AppealToWorseProblems larvae are starving in Mareitania?]] Repeat as needed until desired results are achieved. Over.



* HumansAreSmelly: Especially after a couple of weeks in close quarters with extremely limited hygene facilities.

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* HumansAreSmelly: Especially after a couple of weeks in close quarters with extremely limited hygene hygiene facilities.



* IWantMyJetpack: For all Mark's remarks about how the Equestrians are insane, he also states that they're exploring space the way humans ''should'' have, dang it!
-->They're not wasting time with their space program. One day they just decided, "Let's go to space!" And from that day they threw everything they had at it- magic, science, courage, and political will. For most of my lifetime we had the science and the courage, but not the will. Now we've got it back. Don't give it up again.
* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: Mark's general reaction to Equestrian space flight after he learns a bit more about their unbelievably rapid space race.



* InterdimensionalTravelDevice: Unintended consequence of failure to limit the Sparkle Drive's collision avoidance system to just 3 dimensions. Later used purposefully for the search-and-rescue mission. The Mirror Portal to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]] universe also makes a brief appearance.

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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: Mark's general reaction to Equestrian space flight after he learns a bit more about their unbelievably rapid space race.
* InterdimensionalTravelDevice: Unintended consequence of failure to limit the Sparkle Drive's collision avoidance system to just 3 three dimensions. Later used purposefully for the search-and-rescue mission. The Mirror Portal to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]] Girls]]'' universe also makes a brief appearance.



* IWantMyJetpack: For all Mark's remarks about how the Equestrians are insane, he also states that they're exploring space the way humans ''should'' have, dang it!
-->They're not wasting time with their space program. One day they just decided, "Let's go to space!" And from that day they threw everything they had at it -- magic, science, courage, and political will. For most of my lifetime we had the science and the courage, but not the will. Now we've got it back. Don't give it up again.



* {{Mana}}: A critical limiting factor in how much the ponies can contribute to survival on Mars. Life generates mana, which can be collected and stored in purpose-made batteries. So food production not only supplies needed calories for consumption, but also mana which can then be used to enhance Earth Pony agricultural abilities (Yay, more food!), cast useful spells, or enchant objects (like more batteries, or a replacement Sparkle Drive crystal).

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* {{Mana}}: A critical limiting factor in how much the ponies can contribute to survival on Mars. Life generates mana, which can be collected and stored in purpose-made batteries. So food production not only supplies needed calories for consumption, but also mana which can then be used to enhance Earth Pony earth pony agricultural abilities (Yay, more food!), cast useful spells, or enchant objects (like more batteries, or a replacement Sparkle Drive crystal).



* TheMultiverse: Not just CSP Equestria and Mars. Exploration probes sent to locate the castaways find their way to several other alternate Equestrias (including Equestria Girls) and universes containing Transformers, Gundams...

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* TheMultiverse: Not just CSP Equestria and Mars. Exploration probes sent to locate the castaways find their way to several other alternate Equestrias (including Equestria Girls) ''Equestria Girls'') and universes containing Transformers, Gundams...



** Mark sets up an encounter with a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eric_and_the_Dread_Gazebo Dread Gazebo]]. Starlight's cleric Charms it and adds it to the party.

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** Mark sets up an encounter with a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eric_and_the_Dread_Gazebo Dread Gazebo]]. Starlight's cleric Charms charms it and adds it to the party.



-->“Earth needs more princesses,” Starlight Glimmer said.\\
“For the eighty-seventh time,” Mark sighed, “it does not.”

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-->“Earth -->"Earth needs more princesses,” princesses," Starlight Glimmer said.\\
“For "For the eighty-seventh time,” time," Mark sighed, “it "it does not."



--> ''Can you say,'' oh shit? ''Sure, I knew you could. And I’ll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.''

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--> ''Can -->Can you say,'' oh shit? ''Sure, say, "oh shit?" Sure, I knew you could. And I’ll I'll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.''



-->Don't ask us why we sing\\
It's just a pony thing\\

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-->Don't -->''Don't ask us why we sing\\
It's just a pony thing\\thing''\\



* TWordEuphemism: Mark attempts to document one of Cherry’s SirSwearsalot incidents in his log:
--> I’m sure that in among the angry horse noises was the F-bomb, the S-bomb, one or two Q-bombs and a Silent-J-bomb.

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* TWordEuphemism: Mark attempts to document one of Cherry’s Cherry's SirSwearsalot incidents in his log:
--> I’m -->I'm sure that in among the angry horse noises was the F-bomb, the S-bomb, one or two Q-bombs and a Silent-J-bomb.

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* ShowWithinAShow:
** CSP: The ''Look At It!'' documentary covering CSP Mission 9, complete with Changeling-positive commercial spots.
** The Maretian: ''The Watney and Company Report'' on CNN provides some idea of how things are seen on Earth from outside NASA.



* ShowWithinAShow: The ''Look At It!'' documentary covering CSP Mission 9, complete with Changeling-positive commercial spots.


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* ForeignQueasine: The Vehicle Assembly Supervisor at Jiuquan contemplates subjecting Mitch Henderson to this (“...the traditional dishes of our back-country work force...”); Mitch has been expressing his anxiety by trying to boss around the Chinese engineers working to complete the ''Sleipnir'' 5 resupply rocket.
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* EveryoneKnowsMorse: Well, at least Dragonfly, Twilight, Spike, and Drying Paint (the duty watchmare at Cape Friendship) know the pony equivalent. Mark initially needs a cheat sheet for his Morse messages.

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* EveryoneKnowsMorse: Well, at least Dragonfly, Twilight, Spike, and Drying Paint (the duty watchmare at Cape Friendship) Friendship, and former telegraph operator) know the pony equivalent. Mark initially needs a cheat sheet for his Morse messages.

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* EveryoneKnowsMorse: Well, at least Dragonfly, Twilight, and Drying Paint (the duty watchmare at Cape Friendship) know the pony equivalent. Mark initially needs a cheat sheet for his Morse messages.

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* EveryoneKnowsMorse: Well, at least Dragonfly, Twilight, Spike, and Drying Paint (the duty watchmare at Cape Friendship) know the pony equivalent. Mark initially needs a cheat sheet for his Morse messages.


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* TWordEuphemism: Mark attempts to document one of Cherry’s SirSwearsalot incidents in his log:
--> I’m sure that in among the angry horse noises was the F-bomb, the S-bomb, one or two Q-bombs and a Silent-J-bomb.
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* Lol69: Sol 69 is when sex-related terms language lessons happen.

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Most tropes applying to the source material(s) are also in effect unless otherwise noted.

!!!Tropes common to all stories

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!!!Tropes common to all storiesmultiple stories:



* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: Multiple stories:
** ''Changeling Space Program'': From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/15/changeling-space-program/chapter-12-mission-20-keep-her-alive-and-show-her-a-good-time "Mission 20"]]:
---> Conclusions from flight: [[spoiler:The passengers]] said in the survey they weren’t [[spoiler:afraid of heights]] or [[spoiler:closed spaces]]. Too bad we didn’t ask about [[spoiler:heights]] AND [[spoiler:closed spaces]].
** ''The Maretian'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/29/the-maretian/sol-43 "Sol 43"]]:
---> my mind is still blown by the fact that Morgan Freeman was once young. And, apparently, a hippie. Or a beatnik. Or a hippie beatnik. Or something.



* {{Flight}}: Magical:
** Pegasai
** Changelings
** Griffins



* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/15/changeling-space-program/chapter-12-mission-20-keep-her-alive-and-show-her-a-good-time Chapter 12]]:
--> Conclusions from flight: [[spoiler:The passengers]] said in the survey they weren’t [[spoiler:afraid of heights]] or [[spoiler:closed spaces]]. Too bad we didn’t ask about [[spoiler:heights]] AND [[spoiler:closed spaces]].

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-->“Is it a mutiny when the crew is forcing the captain to keep giving orders?” Dragonfly asked.
-->“Yes!!” Cherry Berry snapped.

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-->“Is it a mutiny when the crew is forcing the captain to keep giving orders?” Dragonfly asked.
-->“Yes!!”
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“Yes!!”
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* SoapPunishment: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/27/the-maretian/sols-40-41 Sols 40-41]]:
--> ''Can you say,'' oh shit? ''Sure, I knew you could. And I’ll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.''
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** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E19ToChangeAChangeling Pharynx]] is mentioned as a potential Hive Viceroy. (More competent than the incumbent, but his paranoia is a significant negative.)

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** In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/16/changeling-space-program/chapter-13-mission-21-somewhat-worse-than-average-accidents Chapter 16]] of ''Changeling Space Program'', as a reference to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E19ToChangeAChangeling Pharynx]] Pharynx]], who appeared in the show... He is mentioned as a potential Hive Viceroy. (More competent than the incumbent, but his paranoia is a significant negative.)

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* AlternateContinuity: As CSP was begun before the season 6 finale ("[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E25ToWhereAndBackAgainPart1 To Where and Back Again]]") aired, the entire "skittle-bug" plotline is treated as one of Chrysalis' bad dreams.

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* AlternateContinuity: As CSP was begun before the season 6 finale ("[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E25ToWhereAndBackAgainPart1 To Where and Back Again]]") aired, the entire "skittle-bug" plotline is treated as one of Chrysalis' bad dreams.dreams, as related in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/14/changeling-space-program/interlude-what-might-not-have-been-or-do-astromares-dream-of-rocket-propelled-penguins Chapter 14 of Changeling Space Program]].


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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/15/changeling-space-program/chapter-12-mission-20-keep-her-alive-and-show-her-a-good-time Chapter 12]]:
--> Conclusions from flight: [[spoiler:The passengers]] said in the survey they weren’t [[spoiler:afraid of heights]] or [[spoiler:closed spaces]]. Too bad we didn’t ask about [[spoiler:heights]] AND [[spoiler:closed spaces]].

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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: Starlight initially considers Disco to be "excellent breaking-edge music".



* BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Both Mark and NASA resort to this. Mark raids the Carl Sagan Memorial Station on Mars to collect ''Pathfinder'''s radio transceiver (and the ''Sojourner'' rover). NASA pulls its terrestrial duplicate out of the Smithsonian for their engineers to work on.

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* BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Both Mark and NASA resort to this. Mark raids the Carl Sagan Memorial Station on Mars to collect ''Pathfinder'''s radio transceiver most of the ''Pathfinder'' probe (and the ''Sojourner'' rover). NASA pulls its terrestrial duplicate out of the Smithsonian for their engineers to work on.


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* GreenAroundTheGills: As a consequence of Spitfire's "Crunch, crunch, crunch" prank, Mark goes a slightly palid green. Somewhat more impressively, so does Cherry Berry, [[ThroughAFaceFullOfFur through her bright pink coat]].
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** Changeling Space Program Mission Control is based on the [=NASA=] model.

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** Changeling Space Program Mission Control is based on the [=NASA=] NASA model.



* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: On Sol 7, Mark describes Cherry Berry. (emphasis added)
--> The first of these little horse alien things is pink- pink like your kid sister’s ''Pretty Pansy Princess Playroom'' Set-

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The first of these little horse alien things is pink- pink -- pink like your kid sister’s sister's ''Pretty Pansy Princess Playroom'' Set- Set.



* BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Both Mark and [=NASA=] resort to this. Mark raids the Carl Sagan Memorial Station on Mars to collect ''Pathfinder'''s radio transceiver (and the ''Sojourner'' rover). [=NASA=] pulls its terrestrial duplicate out of the Smithsonian for their engineers to work on.

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* BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Both Mark and [=NASA=] NASA resort to this. Mark raids the Carl Sagan Memorial Station on Mars to collect ''Pathfinder'''s radio transceiver (and the ''Sojourner'' rover). [=NASA=] NASA pulls its terrestrial duplicate out of the Smithsonian for their engineers to work on.
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* BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Both Mark and [=NASA=] resort to this. Mark raids the Carl Sagan Memorial Station on Mars to collect ''Pathfinder'''s radio transceiver (and the ''Sojourner'' rover). [=NASA=] pulls its terrestrial duplicate out of the Smithsonian for their engineers to work on.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: On Sol 7, Mark describes Cherry Berry. (emphasis added)
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* EldritchAbomination: They stop the efforts to locate the astronauts with extradimensional probes cold. There are a few close calls with attracting the attention of dangerous beings, such as when a Decepticon nearly gets their hands on a probe. But the final line is when they encounter an entity where even the ''saved video'' of it is enough to come to life and being attacking everypony's minds... until it's driven off by the local dimensional counterpart of Pinkie Pie. Who is ''also'' an eldritch abomination, albeit a relatively friendly one. At that point the program is immediately shut down and they have to explore other options to find the correct dimensional coordinates.



* GeniusLoci: ''Maybe.'' Mars certainly gives the impression of being actively hateful and malevolent, and aiming deadly storms or other mishaps at them whenever it gets enough mana from the castaway's experiments to do so. And Dragonfly certainly begins to sense malevolence from it as part of her growing ability to sense the emotions of inanimate objects... that may ''also'' be all in her head. And it's also possible that storms and atmospheric effects and the difficulty of spaceflight are simply a side effect of magic in this universe. Between this and the general effect's of Murphy's Law, as well as the fact that NASA ''really'' doesn't want to come out and say "We think Mars is evil and wants our astronauts dead", it stays ambiguous leaning slightly in favor.

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* GeniusLoci: ''Maybe.'' Mars certainly gives the impression of being actively hateful and malevolent, and aiming deadly storms or other mishaps at them whenever it gets enough mana from the castaway's experiments to do so. And Dragonfly certainly begins to sense malevolence from it as part of her growing ability to sense the emotions of inanimate objects... that may ''also'' be all in her head. And it's also possible that storms and atmospheric effects and the difficulty of spaceflight are simply a side effect of magic in this universe. Between this and the general effect's effects of Murphy's Law, as well as the fact that NASA ''really'' doesn't want to come out and say "We think Mars is evil and wants our astronauts dead", it stays ambiguous leaning slightly in favor.
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* GeniusLoci: ''Maybe.'' Mars certainly gives the impression of being actively hateful and malevolent, and aiming deadly storms or other mishaps at them whenever it gets enough mana from the castaway's experiments to do so. And Dragonfly certainly begins to sense malevolence from it as part of her growing ability to sense the emotions of inanimate objects... that may ''also'' be all in her head. And it's also possible that storms and atmospheric effects and the difficulty of spaceflight are simply a side effect of magic in this universe. Between this and the general effect's of Murphy's Law, as well as the fact that NASA ''really'' doesn't want to come out and say "We think Mars is evil and wants our astronauts dead", it stays ambiguous leaning slightly in favor.
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* FlyingBrick: The real-life aviation sense of the trope gets a name check in Chapter 10:
-->Mission 12 flew like a flaming brick, but that suited Dragonfly fine. She liked flying a brick. Keeping a brick pointed where you wanted it to go was a challenge.

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* RetroRocket: Twilight Sparkle's favorite [[AwesomeButImpractical test-bed vehicle]] and prototype for her vision of the future of space travel, ''Amicitas''. It's essentially a three-fin cigar rocket with a flattened bottom to turn it into a space shuttle-like vessel that lands on a runway instead of on its tail.

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* RetroRocket: Twilight Sparkle's favorite [[AwesomeButImpractical test-bed vehicle]] vehicle and prototype for her vision of the future of space travel, ''Amicitas''. It's essentially a three-fin cigar rocket with a flattened bottom to turn it into a space shuttle-like vessel that lands on a runway instead of on its tail.
** In ''Changeling Space Program'' the ship makes two flights, becoming the first crewed vehicle to orbit Equus's (primary) moon.
** The third flight of ''Amicitas'' and its aftermath is the entire premise of ''The Maretian''.
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* {{Angrish}}: Unlike Cherry Berry, Chrysalis lapses into this when confronted with particularly blatant displays of idiocy.
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* FailsafeFailure: At the beginning, ''Amicitas'' loses all but its two emergency mana batteries to a failure cascade. The systems which would have prevented this all depended on the same [[BackgroundMagicField]] that the ship ran on.

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* FailsafeFailure: At the beginning, ''Amicitas'' loses all but its two emergency mana batteries to a failure cascade. The systems which would have prevented this all depended on the same [[BackgroundMagicField]] [[BackgroundMagicField ambient mana]] that the ship ran on. No mana = no failsafes = no batteries.
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* IsThisThingStillOn: On Sol 426 the castaways test voice radio communication with ''Hermes''. While waiting for message turnaround, Mark and Fireball have a long conversation about quitting the astronaut biz. (This while rescue is still over four months away.) Their mikes are hot for all of it. And because of lightspeed lag, they don't find out for ''over nine minutes''. Mark backpedals immediately once he finds out.
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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAliens: Mark's general reaction to Equestrian space flight after he learns a bit more about their unbelievably rapid space race.

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* BoxAndStickTrap: For a test launch of a magic-powered launch system, Mark Watney has improvised a deadfall "switch" that reminds Dragonfly of one of these. Dragonfly hates them because they're stupid... but they still work anyway. Including on [[TooDumbToLive other members of her own species]].


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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAliens: Mark's general reaction to Equestrian space flight after he learns a bit more about their unbelievably rapid space race.

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