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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Spike gets really vicious when [[spoiler: Punch attempts to bite Twilight. The mane six are shacken by how violently Spike dealt with him.]]
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** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]], [[Series/PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[Franchise/{{X-Men}} The H-Ponies]]...
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** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]], [[Series/PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings [[Literature/LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[Franchise/{{X-Men}} The H-Ponies]]...
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** The behaviour of the drunken pony Beer Belly is similar to that of [[TheSimpsons Homer Simpson]] in the crossover episode with TheXFiles.
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** The story itself is a humourous take on {{Castlevania}}, ''Franchise/{{Castlevania}}'', especially with the chapter titles. Pinkie even breaks open a wall to get some donuhts out.
** The behaviour of the drunken pony Beer Belly is similar to that of [[TheSimpsons Homer Simpson]] in the crossover episode withTheXFiles.Series/TheXFiles.
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** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]], [[Series/PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[XMen [[Franchise/{{X-Men}} The H-Ponies]]...
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** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]], [[PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[XMen The H-Ponies]]...
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** When Twilight's horn glows [[spoiler: to call Spike for help, when Punch is holding her hostage]], the rythem of the glows is [[MightyMorphinPowerRangers [[Series/MightyMorphinPowerRangers the tune the Green Ranger plays to summon the Dragonzord]].
** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]],[[PowerRangersMysticForce [[Series/PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[XMen The H-Ponies]]...
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** The villians are all based on well known characters from Vampire based pop culture. Dracalion is obviously Count {{Dracula}}, Punch Spike and Fallen Angel are based on Spike and Angel from BuffyTheVampireSlayer, and Twilight Eclipse and Sulky Swan are a spoof of Edward and Bella from TheTwilightSaga.
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** The villians are all based on well known characters from Vampire based pop culture. Dracalion is obviously Count {{Dracula}}, Punch Spike and Fallen Angel are based on Spike and Angel from BuffyTheVampireSlayer, Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer, and Twilight Eclipse and Sulky Swan are a spoof of Edward and Bella from TheTwilightSaga.
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** "Pinkie, [[RedDwarf I know we all have something to bring to this discussion, but from now on, I think the thing you should bring, is silence.]]"
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* AssShove: After [[spoiler: Eclipse]] ruins her mane, she uses her magic to shove a lightning bolt up his ass.
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* SadisticChoice: Rainbow Dash does one to Eclipse: [[spoiler: release her friends, or Dash will hurt Sulky. Thanks to Sulky's excessive whining, Dash throws her out a window.]]
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* SadisticChoice: Rainbow Dash does one to Eclipse: [[spoiler: release her friends, or Dash will hurt Sulky. Thanks to Sulky's excessive whining, Dash She throws her Sulky out a window.the window before Eclipse could decide.]]
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* BerserkButton: For all that is good and holy, do ''not'' ruin Rarity's mane. On a more serious note, Applejack's button seems to be Apple Bloom getting hurt. Spike's attack on [[spoiler: Punch]] also shows that he takes threats on [[spoiler: Twilight]] ''very'' seriously.
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* BerserkButton: For all that is good and holy, do ''not'' ruin Rarity's mane. On a more serious note, Applejack's button seems to be Apple Bloom getting hurt. Spike's attack on [[spoiler: Punch]] also shows that he takes threats on against [[spoiler: Twilight]] ''very'' seriously.
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* "TheReasonYouSuck"Speech: Pinkie gives one to Sulky.
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* TerribleTrio: Eclipse, Fallen and Punch.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Apple Jack's cider, considering that this fic was written long before Super Cider Squeezy 600.
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** There's also a book called [[LadyChatterlysLover Filly Chatterly's Lover]].
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Spike gets really vicious when [[Spoiler: Punch attempts to bite Twilight. The mane six are shacken by how violently Spike dealt with him.]]
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** There's also a book called [[LadyChatterlysLover Filly Chatterly's Lover]].
** When Twilight's horn glows [[Spoiler: to call Spike for help, when Punch is holding her hostage]], the rythem of the glows is [[MightyMorphinPowerRangers the tune the Green Ranger plays to summon the Dragonzord]].
** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]], [[PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[XMen The H-Ponies]]...
** When Twilight's horn glows [[Spoiler: to call Spike for help, when Punch is holding her hostage]], the rythem of the glows is [[MightyMorphinPowerRangers the tune the Green Ranger plays to summon the Dragonzord]].
** Some of the names the Mane Six think up, when trying to decide on a Super Hero Team Name: [[SuperSentai Chibi Sentai Umaranger/Little Taskforce Horse Rangers]], [[PowerRangersMysticForce Power Rangers Mystic Horse]], [[LordOfTheRings The Fellowship/Fillyship Of The Horseshoe]], [[XMen The H-Ponies]]...
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** The villians are all based on well known characters from Vampire based pop culture. Dracalion is obviously CountDracula, Punch Spike and Fallen Angel are based on Spike and Angel from BuffyTheVampireSlayer, and Twilight Eclipse and Sulky Swan are a spoof of Edward and Bella from TheTwilightSaga.
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** The villians are all based on well known characters from Vampire based pop culture. Dracalion is obviously CountDracula, Count {{Dracula}}, Punch Spike and Fallen Angel are based on Spike and Angel from BuffyTheVampireSlayer, and Twilight Eclipse and Sulky Swan are a spoof of Edward and Bella from TheTwilightSaga.TheTwilightSaga.
* The story itself is a humourous take on {{Castlevania}}. Pinkie even breaks open a wall to get some donuhts out.
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A group of obnoxious and perverted Vampire ponies have invaded Ponyville, hell bent on reviving the Equestrian version of Count Dracula and bothering girls. the dogged Twilight leads an expedition to give these villians a one way ticket to boot-hill.
Can be read on FF.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7316203/1/Castle_Ponyvania Here]]
!!Tropes appearing in this fic
* AdultFear: Fallen Angel raiding the cuite mark crusader's tree house and kidnapping Apple Bloom.
* AllAnimalsAreDogs: The werewolf pony.
* EpicFail: Every single attempt Eclipse makes to hit on Twilight.
* HilariousInHindsight: Apple Jack's cider, considering that this fic was written long before Super Cider Squeezy 600.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Spike gets really vicious when [[Spoiler: Punch attempts to bite Twilight. The mane six are shacken by how violently Spike dealt with him.]]
* PostKissCatatonia: Spike has a breif one, before snapping out of it and giving Twilight a WhatTheHellHero exclamation.
* ShoutOut: LOTS.
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Can be read on FF.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7316203/1/Castle_Ponyvania Here]]
!!Tropes appearing in this fic
* AdultFear: Fallen Angel raiding the cuite mark crusader's tree house and kidnapping Apple Bloom.
* AllAnimalsAreDogs: The werewolf pony.
* EpicFail: Every single attempt Eclipse makes to hit on Twilight.
* HilariousInHindsight: Apple Jack's cider, considering that this fic was written long before Super Cider Squeezy 600.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Spike gets really vicious when [[Spoiler: Punch attempts to bite Twilight. The mane six are shacken by how violently Spike dealt with him.]]
* PostKissCatatonia: Spike has a breif one, before snapping out of it and giving Twilight a WhatTheHellHero exclamation.
* ShoutOut: LOTS.
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