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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Schmuck-O discusses the potential InUniverse fan service factor of Asuka's Comicbook/{{Supergirl}} two-piece "cheerleader" outfit, and pretty much declares it to be an important part of her {{Tsundere}} mentality (likes people she loves to have a good look at her body, but hates perverts). Asuka dislikes him stereotyping her like that.
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* {{Tsundere}}: A DiscussedTrope in the story. A radio ShockJock has some not so kind things to say regarding it.
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* {{Tsundere}}: A DiscussedTrope in the story. A radio ShockJock has some not so kind things to say regarding it.it and Asuka doesn't feels good about being stereotyped in such a fashion.
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* AttackPatternAlpha: The story never explicitly says whether "The Supergirl Roadstop" is this or an example of street slang, although the moment where it's mentioned and Asuka's subsequent (and practiced) reactions at least imply that some people use it in such a fashion.
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* AttackPatternAlpha: The story never explicitly says whether "The Supergirl Comicbook/{{Supergirl}} Roadstop" is this or an example of street slang, although the moment where it's mentioned and Asuka's subsequent (and practiced) reactions at least imply that some people use it in such a fashion.
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* ShoutOut[=/=]TheCameo: The ShockJock "Schmuck-O" appears on another SharedUniverse on DeviantArt, "Angel Falls", and was used with his creator's permission.
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* ShoutOut[=/=]TheCameo: The ShockJock "Schmuck-O" appears on another SharedUniverse on DeviantArt, Website/DeviantArt, "Angel Falls", and was used with his creator's permission.
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* TheAllegedCar: The car Callum steals to get away from Chicago. Old enough that HassleFreeHotwire is a viable option (the narrative mentions that this was something Callum explicitly was looking for on the car he stole, however), the brakes are bad, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and the radio dial is fragile]].
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* TheAllegedCar: The car Callum steals to get away from Chicago. Old enough that HassleFreeHotwire is a viable option (the narrative mentions that this was something Callum explicitly was looking for on the car he stole, however), stole) however, the brakes are bad, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and the radio dial is fragile]].
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* ShockJock: "Schmuck-O", the radio jock on the station that the car's radio is stuck to. Also has traces of DumbassDJ (having "Hold On, I'm Comin'" on a continuous loop as background music, for example).
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* {{Tsundere}}: A DiscussedTrope in the story. A radio shockjock has some not so kind things to say regarding it.
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* AttackPatternAlpha: The story never explicitly says whether "The Supergirl Roadstop" is this or an example of street slang, although the moment where it's mentioned and Asuka's subsequent (and practiced) reactions at least imply that some people use it in such a fashion.
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* TheAllegedCar: The car Callum steals to get away from Chicago. Old enough that HassleFreeHotwire is a viable option (the narrative mentions that this was something Callum explicitly was looking for on the car he stole, however), the brakes are bad, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and the radio dial is fragile]].
* FlashStep: Valkyrie pulls this move off when she plays "Supergirl Roadstop" with Callum-one second the road is clear, the next the super girl is right in the middle of the road and in the way of the car, several feet away.
* FlashStep: Valkyrie pulls this move off when she plays "Supergirl Roadstop" with Callum-one second the road is clear, the next the super girl is right in the middle of the road and in the way of the car, several feet away.
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* ItWontTurnOff: Callum tries to turn off the radio (or at least change the station) when the radio jock becomes too annoying for him. The radio dial simply snaps off on his grip, leaving him unable to do either thing.
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* PedestrianCrushesCar: Invoking the possibility of this trope happening for intimidation is what the "Supergirl Roadstop" is all about. When Valkyrie determines that Callum won't stop the car because he ''can't'', she resorts to other tactics, however.
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* ASimplePlan: All Callum wants is to get as far away from Chicago as possible and get to Canada. The complications were 1) having a superheroine out to get him and 2) unknowingly stealing a ''very'' lousy car.
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* {{Trainstopping}}: A minor example. The [[PedestrianCrushesCar usual tactic]] is avoided, though, with Asuka letting the car hit her unimpeded (and thus she places herself on its hood) and then using her flight ability and SuperStrength to gradually slow it to a stop.
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* HellholePrison: According to Josh Callum, Fox River Prison is one of these.
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* HellholePrison: According to Josh Callum, [[Series/PrisonBreak Fox River Prison Prison]] is one of these.
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* TitleDrop: [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment It's all Callum can say for a while]], after Valkyrie saves him from crashing.
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''[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CLINE-OH-CRAP-157161787 CLINE: Oh, Crap...]]'' is a one-shot story that occurs on the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse. It focuses on Asuka "Valkyrie" Sohryu as she has to help round up escaped prisoners following a battle with an alternate of the Hulk.
Currently under construction. Please add tropes as you see them!
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!!This story has the following Tropes:
* HarmlessVillain: Josh Callum. No real ambitions, not trying to rule the world. Just trying to save his own life and get as far away from a HellholePrison as possible.
* HellholePrison: According to Josh Callum, Fox River Prison is one of these.
* OhCrap: It's in the title, so this should go without saying. This particular OhCrap comes into play when Valkyrie tracks down Josh Callum in his stolen car and tries to play "Supergirl Roadstop" with him. Only problem, the car's brakes don't work...
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When an alternate of the Hulk broke down the walls of Fox River Prison, Josh Callum decided to get as far away from there as possible. Wise choice, given what a Hulk can do.
* {{Tsundere}}: A DiscussedTrope in the story. A radio shockjock has some not so kind things to say regarding it.
Currently under construction. Please add tropes as you see them!
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!!This story has the following Tropes:
* HarmlessVillain: Josh Callum. No real ambitions, not trying to rule the world. Just trying to save his own life and get as far away from a HellholePrison as possible.
* HellholePrison: According to Josh Callum, Fox River Prison is one of these.
* OhCrap: It's in the title, so this should go without saying. This particular OhCrap comes into play when Valkyrie tracks down Josh Callum in his stolen car and tries to play "Supergirl Roadstop" with him. Only problem, the car's brakes don't work...
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When an alternate of the Hulk broke down the walls of Fox River Prison, Josh Callum decided to get as far away from there as possible. Wise choice, given what a Hulk can do.
* {{Tsundere}}: A DiscussedTrope in the story. A radio shockjock has some not so kind things to say regarding it.
