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* InTheBlood: Before [[spoiler: Sirius is acquitted.]], most of the Hogwarts students assume this of Acquila.
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* PlotTwist: [[spoiler: Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
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The OC, Acqulia, is well written for the most part, and the story is quite lengthy, over a million words long in fact, chronicling years 1 through 3 of Hogwarts, with a sequel, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12386116/1/Black-Bond-II Bond II]]'', covering Years 4 through 7.
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The OC, Acqulia, is well written for the most part, and the story is quite lengthy, over a million words long in fact, chronicling years 1 through 3 of Hogwarts, with a sequel, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12386116/1/Black-Bond-II Black Bond II]]'', covering Years 4 through 7.
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Acqulia is well written for the most part, and the story is quite lengthy, over a million words and counting in fact, which is considerable considering it’s currently still finishing its equivalent of Year Three.
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* ExactWords: Sirius Grandaunt Cassiopeia says she may have pressed for a trial had she suspected he's innocent. He takes her wording (may) as a sign that she ''wouldn't''.
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: Peter Pettigrew kills Acquila's mother because she knows he's the real Secret-Keeper.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Sirius Black and Alastor Moody say Draco will become a Death Eater like his father in spite of Sirius being an example that it's not necessarily true and Moody already knowing of Sirius' innocence by that point. Narcissa calls Sirius out for this.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Sirius Black and Alastor Moody say Draco will become a Death Eater like his father in spite of Sirius being an example that it's not necessarily true and Moody already knowing of Sirius' innocence by that point. Narcissa calls Sirius out for this.
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Acqulia is well written for the most part, and the story is quite lengthy, over a million words and counting in fact, which is considerable considering it’s currently still finishing it’s equivalent of Year Three.
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Acqulia is well written for the most part, and the story is quite lengthy, over a million words and counting in fact, which is considerable considering it’s currently still finishing it’s its equivalent of Year Three.
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* ActionGirl, also BadassBookworm: Hermione, who isn’t petrified in Year Two, becomes this when she leads Ron and Neville to rescue Harry and Acquila in the Chamber of Secrets.
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* ActionGirl, also BadassBookworm: BadassBookworm variant: Hermione, who isn’t petrified in Year Two, becomes this when she leads Ron and Neville to rescue Harry and Acquila in the Chamber of Secrets.Secrets.
* TheAlcatraz: Azkaban, enough said.
* TheAlcatraz: Azkaban, enough said.
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* CharacterDevelopment: A lot of character’s go through this. Neville’s character Development from the books end up happening much earlier than in canon for example.
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* CharacterDevelopment: A lot of character’s characters go through this. Neville’s character Development CharacterDevelopment from the books end up happening much earlier than in canon for example.
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** The second is impacted by the first, but causes the most butterflies to form, and it's when Sirius escapes Azkaban in Harry’s first Year. [[spoiler:The fact that Peter Pettigrew is captured and Sirius gets his freedom also causes plenty of changes which make the later chapters quite different from canon.]] While Year Two has some minor similarities to canon, Year Three is wildly different.
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** The second is impacted by the first, but causes the most butterflies to form, and it's when Sirius escapes Azkaban in Harry’s first Year. [[spoiler:The [[spoiler: The fact that Peter Pettigrew is captured and Sirius gets his freedom also causes plenty of changes which make the later chapters quite different from canon.]] While Year Two has some minor similarities to canon, Year Three is wildly different.
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** The Chamber is still opened, [[spoiler:although the Basilisk is destroyed twice and Voldemort finds out the Horcruxes are destroyed.]]
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** The Chamber is still opened, [[spoiler:although [[spoiler: although the Basilisk is destroyed twice and Voldemort finds out the Horcruxes are destroyed.]]
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* InTheBlood: Before [[spoiler:Sirius is acquitted.]], most of the Hogwarts students assume this of Acquila.
* TheAlcatraz: Azkaban, enough said.
* GoldDigger: [[spoiler:Nigella Flint is this toward Sirius, but also a WomanScorned.]]
* LoveDodecahedron: Before they ultimately get together Acqulia and Harry like each other, but Acqulia also like’s Cedric Diggory, and Harry likes Daphne Greengrass, but throughout this all Draco Malfoy likes Acqulia, but she only thinks of him as a friend and a cousin.
* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler: Sort of. The story uses the concept of a Soul Bond, and the idea of a bonded pair reading minds, but unlike in most fics, it’s more hearing stray thoughts or emotions which can cause quite of bit of arguments and the like. Hary and Acqulia don’t actually have conversations in their minds.]]
* TheAlcatraz: Azkaban, enough said.
* GoldDigger: [[spoiler:Nigella Flint is this toward Sirius, but also a WomanScorned.]]
* LoveDodecahedron: Before they ultimately get together Acqulia and Harry like each other, but Acqulia also like’s Cedric Diggory, and Harry likes Daphne Greengrass, but throughout this all Draco Malfoy likes Acqulia, but she only thinks of him as a friend and a cousin.
* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler: Sort of. The story uses the concept of a Soul Bond, and the idea of a bonded pair reading minds, but unlike in most fics, it’s more hearing stray thoughts or emotions which can cause quite of bit of arguments and the like. Hary and Acqulia don’t actually have conversations in their minds.]]
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* InTheBlood: Before [[spoiler:Sirius [[spoiler: Sirius is acquitted.]], most of the Hogwarts students assume this of Acquila.
* TheAlcatraz: Azkaban, enough said.
* GoldDigger: [[spoiler:Nigella [[spoiler: Nigella Flint is this toward Sirius, but also a WomanScorned.]]
* LoveDodecahedron: Before they ultimately get together Acqulia and Harry like each other, but Acqulia alsolike’s likes Cedric Diggory, and Harry likes Daphne Greengrass, but throughout this all Draco Malfoy likes Acqulia, but she only thinks of him as a friend and a cousin.
* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler: Sort of. The story uses the concept of a Soul Bond, and the idea of a bonded pair reading minds, but unlike in most fics, it’s more hearing stray thoughts or emotions which can cause quite of bit of arguments and the like.Hary Harry and Acqulia don’t actually have conversations in their minds.]]
* LoveDodecahedron: Before they ultimately get together Acqulia and Harry like each other, but Acqulia also
* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler: Sort of. The story uses the concept of a Soul Bond, and the idea of a bonded pair reading minds, but unlike in most fics, it’s more hearing stray thoughts or emotions which can cause quite of bit of arguments and the like.
* PapaWolf: Sirius; he is quite protective of his daughter and godson.
* PlotTwist: [[spoiler: Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
* {{Revenge}}: Lots of cases of this:
** [[spoiler: Nigella Flint toward the late Regulus Black, choosing to take her revenge on his brother and niece.]]
** [[spoiler: Acquila toward Fenrir Greyback.]]
** Sirius toward Peter Pettigrew and also toward [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy for the death of his sister-in-law.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler: Acquila, who inherited her father’s temperament, seeks this on Fenrir Greyback.]]
* PlotTwist: [[spoiler: Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
* {{Revenge}}: Lots of cases of this:
** [[spoiler: Nigella Flint toward the late Regulus Black, choosing to take her revenge on his brother and niece.]]
** [[spoiler: Acquila toward Fenrir Greyback.]]
** Sirius toward Peter Pettigrew and also toward [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy for the death of his sister-in-law.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler: Acquila, who inherited her father’s temperament, seeks this on Fenrir Greyback.]]
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* SinsOfOurFathers: [[spoiler:Voldemort sends Greyback to bite Draco Malfoy in order punish Lucius Malfoy for the destruction of the Diary and for allowing himself to submit to Sirius’ blackmail of him.]]
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* SinsOfOurFathers: [[spoiler:Voldemort [[spoiler: Voldemort sends Greyback to bite Draco Malfoy in order punish Lucius Malfoy for the destruction of the Diary and for allowing himself to submit to Sirius’ blackmail of him.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:Sirius and Dumbledore's plan to find and destroy the Horcruxes is horribly foiled by Voldemort who has discovered that the truth of his horcruxes is out and moves all the ones he can get from their canon location.]]
* PapaWolf: Sirius, he is quite protective of his daughter and godson.
* PlotTwist: [[spoiler:Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
* {{Revenge}}: Lots of cases of this:
** [[spoiler:Nigella Flint toward the late Regulus Black, choosing to take her revenge on his brother and niece.]]
** [[spoiler:Acquila toward Fenrir Greyback.]]
** Sirius toward Peter Pettigrew and also toward [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy for the death of his sister-in-law.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Acquila, who inherited her father’s temperament, seeks this on Fenrir Greyback.]]
* PapaWolf: Sirius, he is quite protective of his daughter and godson.
* PlotTwist: [[spoiler:Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
* {{Revenge}}: Lots of cases of this:
** [[spoiler:Nigella Flint toward the late Regulus Black, choosing to take her revenge on his brother and niece.]]
** [[spoiler:Acquila toward Fenrir Greyback.]]
** Sirius toward Peter Pettigrew and also toward [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy for the death of his sister-in-law.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Acquila, who inherited her father’s temperament, seeks this on Fenrir Greyback.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:Sirius [[spoiler: Sirius and Dumbledore's plan to find and destroy the Horcruxes is horribly foiled by Voldemort who has discovered that the truth of his horcruxes is out and moves all the ones he can get from their canon location.]]
* PapaWolf: Sirius, he is quite protective of his daughter and godson.
* PlotTwist: [[spoiler:Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
* {{Revenge}}: Lots of cases of this:
** [[spoiler:Nigella Flint toward the late Regulus Black, choosing to take her revenge on his brother and niece.]]
** [[spoiler:Acquila toward Fenrir Greyback.]]
** Sirius toward Peter Pettigrew and also toward [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy for the death of his sister-in-law.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Acquila, who inherited her father’s temperament, seeks this on Fenrir Greyback.]]
* PapaWolf: Sirius, he is quite protective of his daughter and godson.
* PlotTwist: [[spoiler:Draco Malfoy is bitten by Fenrir Greyback under the orders of Voldermort, resulting in Draco becoming a werewolf.]]
** See also SinsOfOurFathers.
* {{Revenge}}: Lots of cases of this:
** [[spoiler:Nigella Flint toward the late Regulus Black, choosing to take her revenge on his brother and niece.]]
** [[spoiler:Acquila toward Fenrir Greyback.]]
** Sirius toward Peter Pettigrew and also toward [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy for the death of his sister-in-law.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Acquila, who inherited her father’s temperament, seeks this on Fenrir Greyback.
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* TragicMistake: [[spoiler: Sirius makes one when he uses truth serum on fellow auror Irene Summerby without her knowing in order to interogate her, believing her a spy for Voldemort. He turns out to tragically be wrong and ends up ruining his friendship with her. It's worsened when it turns out the reasons she was acting weird around him was because she had a crush on him, meaning he also seemingly any possible future romance with the other auror.]]
** The whole secret keeper affair with Peter Pettigrew and the Potter's can also count as an example of this.
* WomanScorned: [[spoiler:Nigella Flint is this, blaming the late Regulus Black, her ex-lover for all the troubles in her life, and thus deciding the take her revenge on Regulus’s brother, Sirius.]]
* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler:Well, sort of. Greyback kills Ophelia Smith, the matron at the orphanage where Acquila grew up, and the woman who Acquila viewed as a motherly figure. Acqulia is none too happy about this and wants revenge.]]
** The whole secret keeper affair with Peter Pettigrew and the Potter's can also count as an example of this.
* WomanScorned: [[spoiler:Nigella Flint is this, blaming the late Regulus Black, her ex-lover for all the troubles in her life, and thus deciding the take her revenge on Regulus’s brother, Sirius.]]
* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler:Well, sort of. Greyback kills Ophelia Smith, the matron at the orphanage where Acquila grew up, and the woman who Acquila viewed as a motherly figure. Acqulia is none too happy about this and wants revenge.]]
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* TragicMistake: [[spoiler: Sirius makes one when he uses truth serum on fellow auror Auror Irene Summerby without her knowing in order to interogate interrogate her, believing her a spy for Voldemort. He turns out to tragically be wrong and ends up ruining his friendship with her. It's worsened when it turns out the reasons she was acting weird around him was because she had a crush on him, meaning he also seemingly destroyed any possible future romance with the other auror.Auror.]]
** The whole secret keeper affair with Peter Pettigrew and thePotter's Potters can also count as an example of this.
* WomanScorned:[[spoiler:Nigella [[spoiler: Nigella Flint is this, blaming the late Regulus Black, her ex-lover for all the troubles in her life, and thus deciding the take her revenge on Regulus’s brother, Sirius.]]
* YouKilledMyFather:[[spoiler:Well, [[spoiler: Well, sort of. Greyback kills Ophelia Smith, the matron at the orphanage where Acquila grew up, and the woman who Acquila viewed as a motherly figure. Acqulia is none too happy about this and wants revenge.]]
** The whole secret keeper affair with Peter Pettigrew and the
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* TheBaroness: [[spoiler:Nigella Flint.]]
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* TheBaroness: [[spoiler:Nigella [[spoiler: Nigella Flint.]]
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* InTheBlood: Before [[spoiler:Sirius is acquited.]], most of the Hogwarts students assume this of Acquila.
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* InTheBlood: Before [[spoiler:Sirius is acquited.acquitted.]], most of the Hogwarts students assume this of Acquila.
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* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler:Sort of. The story uses the concept of a Soul Bond, and the idea of a bonded pair reading minds, but unlike in most fics, it’s more hearing stray thoughts or emotions which can cause quite of bit of arguments and the like. Hary and Acqulia don’t actually have the have conversation’s in their mind’s.]]
* OriginalCharacter: With a Fanfic as large as this, there happens to be quite a few OC's running around the place, and not just the two big one's like Acquila Black and her mother Athena [=McKinnon=]. A couple examples include Nigella Flint, Mopsy the House-Elf, Nathan Rosier, Irene Summerby, and Ophelia Smith just to name a few.
* OriginalCharacter: With a Fanfic as large as this, there happens to be quite a few OC's running around the place, and not just the two big one's like Acquila Black and her mother Athena [=McKinnon=]. A couple examples include Nigella Flint, Mopsy the House-Elf, Nathan Rosier, Irene Summerby, and Ophelia Smith just to name a few.
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* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler:Sort [[spoiler: Sort of. The story uses the concept of a Soul Bond, and the idea of a bonded pair reading minds, but unlike in most fics, it’s more hearing stray thoughts or emotions which can cause quite of bit of arguments and the like. Hary and Acqulia don’t actually have the have conversation’s conversations in their mind’s.minds.]]
* OriginalCharacter: With a Fanfic as large as this, there happens to be quite a fewOC's OCs running around the place, and not just the two big one's ones like Acquila Black and her mother Athena [=McKinnon=]. A couple examples include Nigella Flint, Mopsy the House-Elf, Nathan Rosier, Irene Summerby, and Ophelia Smith just to name a few.
* OriginalCharacter: With a Fanfic as large as this, there happens to be quite a few
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** See also *Plotwist.PlotTwist.
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** See also *SinsofOurFathers.SinsOfOurFathers.
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* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler:Well, sort of. Greyback kills Ophelia Smith, the matron at the orphanage where Acquila grew up, and the woman who Acquila viewed as a motherly figure. Acqulia is none too happy about this and wants revenge.]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler:Well, sort of. Greyback kills Ophelia Smith, the matron at the orphanage where Acquila grew up, and the woman who Acquila viewed as a motherly figure. Acqulia is none too happy about this and wants revenge.]]
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** The main one is the existence of Athena [=McKinnon=], which in turn results in the birth of Acqulia Black, who's very existence in the Harry Potter universe sets off some butterflies.
** The second is when Sirius escapes Azkaban in Harry’s first Year, [[spoiler:especially true when Peter Pettigrew is captured and Sirius gets his freedom.]] While Year Two has some minor similarities to canon, Year Three is wildly different.
** The second is when Sirius escapes Azkaban in Harry’s first Year, [[spoiler:especially true when Peter Pettigrew is captured and Sirius gets his freedom.]] While Year Two has some minor similarities to canon, Year Three is wildly different.
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** The main one is the existence of Athena [=McKinnon=], which which, coupled with the fact that Athena ends up together with Sirius, in turn results in the birth of Acqulia Black, who's very existence in the Harry Potter universe sets off some butterflies.
** The second is impacted by the first, but causes the most butterflies to form, and it's when Sirius escapes Azkaban in Harry’s firstYear, [[spoiler:especially true when Year. [[spoiler:The fact that Peter Pettigrew is captured and Sirius gets his freedom.freedom also causes plenty of changes which make the later chapters quite different from canon.]] While Year Two has some minor similarities to canon, Year Three is wildly different.
** The second is impacted by the first, but causes the most butterflies to form, and it's when Sirius escapes Azkaban in Harry’s first
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** The main one is the existence of Athena Mckinnon, which in turn results in the birth of Acqulia Black, who's very existence in the Harry Potter universe sets off some butterflies.
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** The main one is the existence of Athena Mckinnon, [=McKinnon=], which in turn results in the birth of Acqulia Black, who's very existence in the Harry Potter universe sets off some butterflies.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Regulus Black, who died trying to destroy the Locket Horcrux.
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* TragicMistake: [[spoiler: Sirius makes one when he uses truth serum on fellow auror Irene Summerby without her knowing in order to interogate her, believing her a spy for Voldemort. He turns out to tragically be wrong and ends up ruining his friendship with her and seemingly any possible future romance with the other auror.]]
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* TragicMistake: [[spoiler: Sirius makes one when he uses truth serum on fellow auror Irene Summerby without her knowing in order to interogate her, believing her a spy for Voldemort. He turns out to tragically be wrong and ends up ruining his friendship with her and her. It's worsened when it turns out the reasons she was acting weird around him was because she had a crush on him, meaning he also seemingly any possible future romance with the other auror.]]]]
**The whole secret keeper affair with Peter Pettigrew and the Potter's can also count as an example of this.
**The whole secret keeper affair with Peter Pettigrew and the Potter's can also count as an example of this.