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* AdaptationalJerkass: Cyrus doesn't believe that Pokémon has emotions so he feels free to kill them without a second thought.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Cyrus doesn't believe that Pokémon has emotions have emotions, so he feels free to kill them without a second thought.
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* ChildSoldiers: Team Galactic has members as young as thirteen in its ranks. Mitsumi is even younger than Saturn, being seven when she begins her training.
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* ChildSoldiers: Team Galactic has members as young as thirteen year old Saturn in its ranks. Mitsumi is even younger than Saturn, being seven when she begins her training.
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* TrainingFromHell: Cyrus' method of training is this way. For example, he has an injured 7-year old Mitsumi run over 100 feet and back continuously for hours.
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* TrainingFromHell: Cyrus' method of training is this way. For example, he has had an injured 7-year old Mitsumi run over 100 feet and back continuously for hours.
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* DeadFic: The story is unfinished and last updated in 2012.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Cyrus doesn't believe that Pokémon has emotions so he feels free to kill them without a second thought.
* HarmfulToMinors: When Mitsumi asks what Pokémon are, Cyrus stabs a Staraptor in the throat in front of her.
* HarmfulToMinors: When Mitsumi asks what Pokémon are, Cyrus stabs a Staraptor in the throat in front of her.
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* RRatedOpening: The story starts with Mitsumi nearly being murdered by a Snover.
* TrainingFromHell: Cyrus' method of training is this way. For example, he has an injued 7-year old Mitsumi run over 100 feet and back continuously for hours.
* TrainingFromHell: Cyrus' method of training is this way. For example, he has an injued 7-year old Mitsumi run over 100 feet and back continuously for hours.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
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* ChildSoldiers: Team Galactic has members as young as thirteen in its ranks. Mitsumi is even younger than Saturn, being seven when she begins her training.
* ParentalAbandonment: Mitsumi was left on her own after her parents died.
* RescueIntroduction: Cyrus met Mitsumi when he rescued her from being killed by a Snover.
* TykeBomb: Cyrus raised Mitsumi as the "Ultimate Weapon" for his cause.
* ChildSoldiers: Team Galactic has members as young as thirteen in its ranks. Mitsumi is even younger than Saturn, being seven when she begins her training.
* ParentalAbandonment: Mitsumi was left on her own after her parents died.
* RescueIntroduction: Cyrus met Mitsumi when he rescued her from being killed by a Snover.
* TykeBomb: Cyrus raised Mitsumi as the "Ultimate Weapon" for his cause.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8280953/1/Beautiful-Light Beautiful Light]]'' by [=BaltoTails=] is a fanfic based off of ''Manga/PokemonDiamondAndPearlAdventure''.
Mitsumi was taken in by Team Galactic at age seven and raised as the perfect weapon. She grew up viewing their leader, Cyrus, as a father figure. As she matures, Mitsumi begins to realize that Galactic isn't as noble as she had thought. She hates what they've done to her and tries to atone.
''Beautiful Light'' is a story based off of Mitsumi's character arc.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
Mitsumi was taken in by Team Galactic at age seven and raised as the perfect weapon. She grew up viewing their leader, Cyrus, as a father figure. As she matures, Mitsumi begins to realize that Galactic isn't as noble as she had thought. She hates what they've done to her and tries to atone.
''Beautiful Light'' is a story based off of Mitsumi's character arc.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
