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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: Is joked about in posts on the thread, such as how Natalie could be lured into assassinating the [[BarrierMaiden God-Emperor]] by [[CharmPerson Luce]], as well as within Natalie's own self-talk at times, when she's trying to avoid responsibility for her actions.
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* DemonicPossession: Early on, Luce tries to pull this off on Nat. A quick visit to Skeryn's cryogenically-frozen [[AntiMagic Blank]] quickly dissuades her, and later in the story she decides Nat is much more interesting as a summoner than a bodysuit.
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* BewareMyStingerTail: Natalie gets one later on in the story.
* BlackComedy: comes up sometimes.
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* BewareMyStingerTail: Natalie gets one later on in Natalie's most useful and prominent mutation for most of the story.
*story is a dangerous bladed tail that can inflict stabbing and slashing wounds, feels pleasurable for her to use in combat (or against less equal victims), and comes with combat instincts. It's well-earned, considering she got it after [[spoiler: [[KickTheDog sacrificing a case]] of [[YourSoulIsMine Eldar Spirit Stones to Slaanesh]]]].
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%%* BlackComedy: comes up sometimes.
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* SelfInsertFic: Like ''many'' other Spacebattles fics, this is explicitly one from the outset. Natalie is the author, summoned via Warp shenanigans among several others to the Warhammer 40k universe.
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* BootCampEpisode: Fairly early in The aptly named "Boot Camp" story arc, where Natalie undergoes basic training under the story.Imperial Guard..
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* FairWeatherMentor: Downplayed with Skeryn. She ''does intend'' for Natalie to survive the large-scale ritual she's preparing her for, and would ''prefer'' to not have to directly mind-break and sculpt her psyche into shape for it, but she ''is'' prepared to do so and mostly sees Natalie as an amusement. See also her entry under SinkOrSwimMentor.
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* AffablyEvil: Skeryn, [[spoiler: and Natalie more and more]]more
* TheGadfly: Skeryn, mostly though not exclusively to Natalie. She starts out messing with Natalie by deliberately playing to Nat's expectations of her being a monster, then develops a habit of throwing Natalie into situations without giving her relevant information - or much information or preparation at all. Also, the constant cannibalism 'jokes' - and as Natalie notes, she likely can't call Skeryn's bluff, because she ''[[AffablyEvil probably isn't bluffing]]''.
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* SinkOrSwimMentor: Skeryn is a Downplayed example to Natalie. She ''does'' provide her with study materials and basic techniques on controlling the Warp, using Psyker powers, and invoking Warp rituals, but is aloof otherwise and ''very'' rarely directly teaches her anything. Also, she had her forcibly exposed to a Blank to get her to understand her nature as a Psyker, explicitly because she was too impatient to use slower methods. Last but certainly not least, the denial of information on her missions and the locales she sends Natalie to...
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* BerserkButton: Do NOT mess with Nat's tail.
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* BadBoss: Discussed with Skeryn, though no outright answer is ever given. Where ''does'' she get her ritual sacrifice victims; are they [[YouHaveFailedMe failed]] members of her crew, or simple kidnapping victims, or deliberately purpose-recruited, or...?
** Downplayed at the very least with her apathy towards Natalie and Luce's encounter aboard her ship involving several victims.
* BerserkButton: Do NOTmess with damage Nat's tail.
* BewareMyStingerTail:[[spoiler: Natalie]] Natalie gets one later on in the story.
** Downplayed at the very least with her apathy towards Natalie and Luce's encounter aboard her ship involving several victims.
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* CombatPragmatist: Natalie challenges a Khornate to a fight to the death, a warrior who fights honorably with melee weapons. The second the match starts? The warrior's legs are shot off by Simms, one of Natalie's ...Friends?
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* CombatPragmatist: Natalie challenges a Khornate quite deliberately embraces this, and will openly advocate for exploiting any advantage you can get to win a fight to the death, a warrior who fight.
** Nearly all of her fightshonorably with melee weapons. Khornates end in either psykery or other trickery, such as when she explicitly agrees to fight without using her Psyker powers. The second the match starts? The warrior's legs are shot off by Simms, [[ColdSniper Simms]], one of Natalie's ...Friends?
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* CyberPunk: The latest second to last arc involves a planet like this.this.
* DistractedByTheSexy: Exaggerated when Natalie's around Luce; Nat is completely unable to resist her seductive aura, especially when being touched by her.
* DistractedByTheSexy: Exaggerated when Natalie's around Luce; Nat is completely unable to resist her seductive aura, especially when being touched by her.
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* FutureMeScaresMe: [[spoiler: Past!Natalie is horrified to discover her present day self is a Chaos cultist.]]
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* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: [[SenseFreak Slaanesh]] certainly likes this trope; while nothing openly lewd happens onscreen, these themes crop up a ''lot''.
** Rituals done in Slaanesh's name usually both involve murders and prove highly pleasurable for Natalie.
** Her Slaanesh-gifted murdertail is also entirely ''too'' pleasurable for her to use.
** Nat's offscreen encounters with Luce seem to invariably be very sexual, very pleasurable, and involve a bodycount if not outright cannibalism.
** Skeryn trades for a number of artifacts, including a sword that induces intense pleasure in its victim, and of course decides to test it on Natalie.
** Rituals done in Slaanesh's name usually both involve murders and prove highly pleasurable for Natalie.
** Her Slaanesh-gifted murdertail is also entirely ''too'' pleasurable for her to use.
** Nat's offscreen encounters with Luce seem to invariably be very sexual, very pleasurable, and involve a bodycount if not outright cannibalism.
** Skeryn trades for a number of artifacts, including a sword that induces intense pleasure in its victim, and of course decides to test it on Natalie.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Skeryn, the Treachery of Flesh, Who Teaches Flesh Betrayal.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Skeryn, the Treachery of Flesh, Who Teaches Flesh Betrayal.
* ProtagonistJourneyToVillain: A rather accelerated version. As oft repeated here and on the thread, the corruption train has no brakes.
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* VillainProtagonist: Nat would probably be Natalie. Completing a murder-ritual under the villain threat of death or mind-breaking brainwashing is one thing, but she 100% had the choice to leave the [[spoiler: Eldar Spirit Stones]] right where they were, and not become involved in any other story.that affair, rather than ''deliberately sacrificing them to eternal torture and/or consumption by Slaanesh''.
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Be All My Sins is a [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 Warhammer40K]] Fanfic starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
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Be All My Sins is a [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 Warhammer40K]] Fanfic ''[[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 Warhammer 40K]]'' fanfic starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
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Be All My Sins is a [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TabletopGame/Warhammer40000/ [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 Warhammer40K]] Fanfic starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
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* HypocriticalHumor: Natalie's endless complaining about insane cultists.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Natalie ''starts out'' by choosing damnation over death, and from that point on seems to try and get out of her corruption... by getting ahead of her corruption. Though she still hangs on to many hang-ups.
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* CyberPunk: The latest arc involves a planet like this.
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* ComedicSociopathy: Skeryn.
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* VillainProtagonist: Nat would probably be the villain in any other story.story.
*VitriolicBestBuds: Dinola and Natalie regularly refer to each other as "freak" and "musclehead."
*VitriolicBestBuds: Dinola and Natalie regularly refer to each other as "freak" and "musclehead."
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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: It's 40K, so naturally this applies. Warp travel gives Nat nightmares and grates on her sanity.
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* ArmorIsUseless: Averted. Flak armor won't stop many weapons most of the time, but it will stop some weapons some of the time, making it a better combat option than shirtsleeves.
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* BerserkButton: Do NOT mess with Nat's tail.
* BlackComedy: comes up sometimes.
** See also Nat's discussion with Malcolm about using every tool that's available to you.
* DrivenToVillainy: it was a very short drive, but Nat's motive in joining Chaos was just to survive a bad situation.
* FacePalm: Dinola's reaction to a lot of Nat's antics. Natalie for much of the insanity of Chaos cultists and Imperials alike.
* GuileHero: Natalie.
* DrivenToVillainy: it was a very short drive, but Nat's motive in joining Chaos was just to survive a bad situation.
* FacePalm: Dinola's reaction to a lot of Nat's antics. Natalie for much of the insanity of Chaos cultists and Imperials alike.
* GuileHero: Natalie.
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* I'mAHumanitarian: IAmNotLeftHanded: Nat keeps promising not to "cheat" with sorcery in fights. Nat keeps lying, or finding other ways to cheat.
* ImAHumanitarian: Nat's reputation [[spoiler: and sort of true]]
* ImAHumanitarian: Nat's reputation [[spoiler: and sort of true]]
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* AffablyEvil: Skeryn, [[spoiler: and Natalie more and more]]
* BootCampEpisode: Fairly early in the story.
* HumanSacrifice: A major first step for the beginning cultist.
* I'mAHumanitarian: Nat's reputation [[spoiler: and sort of true]]
* KillItWithFire: One of Natalie's great strengths as a psyker is pyromancy. This tropes follows.
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* RunningGag: Natalie continues to get in situations or react in ways to convince others she is a cannibal, no matter how much she protests. [[spoiler: As time goes on it becomes a bit more true.]]
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* RunningGag: Natalie continues to get in situations or react in ways to convince others she is a cannibal, no matter how much she protests. [[spoiler: As time goes on it becomes a bit more true.]]]]
*VillainProtagonist: Nat would probably be the villain in any other story.
*VillainProtagonist: Nat would probably be the villain in any other story.
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* TheCorruption: Chaos in general and Luce in particular. The corruption train has no brakes.
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* OutsideTheBoxTactic: About to attack a large group of Khornate warrior and ambushed by orks? Propose a competition where whoever kills more of the enemy gets their ship.
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* OutsideTheBoxTactic: About to attack a large group of Khornate warrior warriors and ambushed by orks? Propose a competition where whoever kills more of the enemy gets their ship.
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* NaturalWeapon: Natalie also acquires some [[Spoiler: Claws by way of mutation.]]
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* RunningGag: Natalie continues to get in situations or react in ways to convince others she is a cannibal, no matter how much she protests. [[spoiler: As time goes on it becomes a bit more true]]true.]]
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The Fanfic can be found in the [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/be-all-my-sins-40k-si.388340/#post-21988516/ Spacebattles]] Creative forum.
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The Fanfic can be found in the [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/be-all-my-sins-40k-si.388340/#post-21988516/ 388340/ Spacebattles]] Creative forum.
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Be All My Sins is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TabletopGame/Warhammer40000/ Warhammer40K]] Self insert starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
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Be All My Sins is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TabletopGame/Warhammer40000/ Warhammer40K]] Self insert Fanfic starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
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* CombatPragmatist: Natalie challenges a Khornate to a fight to the death, a warrior who fights honorably with melee weapons. The second the match starts? The warrior's legs are shot off by Simms, one of Natalie's ...Friends?
* OutsideTheBoxTactic: About to attack a large group of Khornate warrior and ambushed by orks? Propose a competition where whoever kills more of the enemy gets the their ship.
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->''"Alright then. Well if you'll excuse me, I've got to go and find Luce before she eats someone without me."''
->''I stood up, clambered back over the table to Malcom's consternation, and then paused in the doorway as I was leaving. Something didn't seem right about what I'd just said.''
->''"I mean before she eats anyone. That is what I meant. Not the other thing."''
->''Yes. Exactly. Didn't want them getting the wrong, and totally spurious, idea.''
Be All My Sins is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TabletopGame/Warhammer40000/ Warhammer40K]] Self insert starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
The Fanfic can be found in the [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/be-all-my-sins-40k-si.388340/#post-21988516/ Spacebattles]] Creative forum.
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!! ''Be All My Sins'' provides examples of:
* RunningGag: Natalie continues to get in situations or react in ways to convince others she is a cannibal, no matter how much she protests. [[spoiler: As time goes on it becomes a bit more true]]
->''I stood up, clambered back over the table to Malcom's consternation, and then paused in the doorway as I was leaving. Something didn't seem right about what I'd just said.''
->''"I mean before she eats anyone. That is what I meant. Not the other thing."''
->''Yes. Exactly. Didn't want them getting the wrong, and totally spurious, idea.''
Be All My Sins is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TabletopGame/Warhammer40000/ Warhammer40K]] Self insert starring Natalie, a goth girl who gets dropped onto an imperial planet during a chaos attack. Things go about as well as expected. Soon captured, singled out and recruited, watch as her own morals decay and spiral out of control, like a slippery slope covered in blood and terror... and daemons.
The Fanfic can be found in the [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/be-all-my-sins-40k-si.388340/#post-21988516/ Spacebattles]] Creative forum.
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!! ''Be All My Sins'' provides examples of:
* RunningGag: Natalie continues to get in situations or react in ways to convince others she is a cannibal, no matter how much she protests. [[spoiler: As time goes on it becomes a bit more true]]
