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** During their stay and Asshai, Ygritte found a job working as a lamplighter in town. From Brienne's perspective, she has no idea how she got that job as a foreigner, but nobody bothers to explain it.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Applies to all bastard characters, since they get their surname from (usually) their father's bending, not the region they grow up in.
** Jon Snow become Jon Frost, as his alleged father (Ned Stark) is an icebender. Some characters call him ''Jon Fyre'' when they want him to know they know his real father is firebender Rhaegar.
** Ramsay Snow becomes Ramsay Gore, being the son of a bloodbender.
** Robert's bastards Gendry Waters and Mya Stone become Gendry and Mya Soil.
** Upon being bastardized, Joffrey, Myrcella and Tommen are given the surname Stone.
** Aegon IV's bastards, upon being born, were named Voyd, due to him being regarded as a nonbender at the time. After he revealed himself as a lightningbender and legitimized them all, several adopted the name Blackfyre, as opposed to the traditional bastard surname Lightfyre. Exceptions are Bloodraven (who kept the Voyd name) and Shiera (who went by Fyrestar in honor of her firebender mother).
** Averted with the Sand Snakes, since their father is a sandbender.
** Jon Snow become Jon Frost, as his alleged father (Ned Stark) is an icebender. Some characters call him ''Jon Fyre'' when they want him to know they know his real father is firebender Rhaegar.
** Ramsay Snow becomes Ramsay Gore, being the son of a bloodbender.
** Robert's bastards Gendry Waters and Mya Stone become Gendry and Mya Soil.
** Upon being bastardized, Joffrey, Myrcella and Tommen are given the surname Stone.
** Aegon IV's bastards, upon being born, were named Voyd, due to him being regarded as a nonbender at the time. After he revealed himself as a lightningbender and legitimized them all, several adopted the name Blackfyre, as opposed to the traditional bastard surname Lightfyre. Exceptions are Bloodraven (who kept the Voyd name) and Shiera (who went by Fyrestar in honor of her firebender mother).
** Averted with the Sand Snakes, since their father is a sandbender.
** Melisandre, whose role in canon lies somewhere between anti-hero and anti-villain, seems to be fully on the good side.
** [[spoiler: Shiera Fyrestar]], who was TheVamp is canon, seems to have become a nice lady who genuinely wants to take part of the Avatar's cause.
** [[spoiler: Shiera Fyrestar]], who was TheVamp is canon, seems to have become a nice lady who genuinely wants to take part of the Avatar's cause.
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** The Brotherhood Without Banners only show up in Harrenhal arc, being quickly PutOnABus when they follow Jon's instructions to go to the Wall.
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* LibraryEpisode: chapter 71 (Brienne V) counts as this, since most of the chapter's plot is about Brienne, Ashara and Quentyn navigating through the Asshai'i library to [[DoingResearch find more about the lands beyond the Five Forts]].
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* MrExposition: the past Avatars count as this. Also, [[spoiler: Melisandre and Shiera in Asshai]].
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** Chapter 70 (Asha II): [[spoiler: Euron Greyjoy has allied himself with Vaatu and other dark spirits, aiming to capture the Avatar and steal his powers.]]
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*** Later, [[spoiler: Shiera]] introduces herself as the last [[spoiler: energybender]].
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** Chapter 71 reveals [[spoiler: Shiera Seastar/Fyrestar]] is alive and well.
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* WhamEpisode: Jon VII. After doing some training in Dorne, hearing of [[spoiler: Robert's assassination]] has team Avatar split up.
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** Asha II. After accidentally ending up in Sothyros, Asha is greeted by someone saying, "My dear niece!"
** Asha II. After accidentally ending up in Sothyros, Asha is greeted by someone saying, "My dear niece!"
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* BodyHorror: Euron Greyjoy's EyepatchOfPower.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Euron Greyjoy [[spoiler: made a deal with Vaatu: if he captured the Avatar, he'd gain his powers.]]
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* EyepatchOfPower: A dark version with Euron Greyjoy. [[spoiler: His eyepatch covers a hole from where emerges a dark and lethal spirit.]]
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* NotWhereTheyThought: Asha's ship is taken far from her intended destination. [[NightmareFuel Disaster and tragedy ensue.]]
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** While discussing evil spirits, Ashara tells Aegon she thinks that, in the Spirit World, [[Literature/TheFourGospels a thousand years are like a day, and a day is like a thousand years]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After a near-miss with an assassination attempt, [[spoiler:Margaery decides being Queen is no longer worth it, grabs her daughter Arwyn, and promptly ditches King's Landing with Varys's help]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After a near-miss [[NearMisses near-miss]] with an assassination attempt, [[spoiler:Margaery decides being Queen is no longer worth it, grabs her daughter Arwyn, and promptly ditches King's Landing with Varys's help]].
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actually, aeron makes a cameo at the start of theon's return, and catelyn didn't exactly DENY the existence of Euron and Victorian
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* LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler:Jaime is released from his Night's Watch vows after his death and revival at the Wall.]]
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** Cersei II: While the awakening of dragons is similar to canon version of events, it has worldwide effects that affect the plot, as it enhances all benders in the fire spectrum. [[spoiler: Varys and Aegon, two secret lightningbenders, have their chi unsealed; Edric Dayne loses control of his suddenly incresed lavabending and covers Starfall in lava, killing several people and himself; Jon activates the Avatar State in a life-threating situation.]]
** Theon III: Theon, Jaime and Robar Royce go fetch Bran, Benjen, Hodor and the Reed siblings from Bloodraven's cave. Wights invade the cave and attack them as they run away. [[spoiler: Jaime is fatally injured, but is saved when Theon uses bloodbending to restart his heart in magical version of CPR.]]
*** The following chapter (Jaime VI) deals with the aftermath and may also count as this, since [[spoiler: Lord Commander Mormont considers Jaime died and, therefore, is free from his vows to the Night's Watch]].
** Theon III: Theon, Jaime and Robar Royce go fetch Bran, Benjen, Hodor and the Reed siblings from Bloodraven's cave. Wights invade the cave and attack them as they run away. [[spoiler: Jaime is fatally injured, but is saved when Theon uses bloodbending to restart his heart in magical version of CPR.]]
*** The following chapter (Jaime VI) deals with the aftermath and may also count as this, since [[spoiler: Lord Commander Mormont considers Jaime died and, therefore, is free from his vows to the Night's Watch]].
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** Cersei II: While the awakening of dragons is similar to canon version of events, it has worldwide effects that affect the plot, as it enhances all benders in the fire spectrum. [[spoiler: Varys and Aegon, two secret lightningbenders, have their chi unsealed; Edric Dayne loses control of his suddenly incresed increased lavabending and covers Starfall in lava, killing several people and himself; Jon activates the Avatar State in a life-threating situation.situation. And after witnessing the hatching, Cersei renounces her ambitions to be a queen again, and instead decides to fully commit herself to Dany's cause as [[NumberTwo her new Hand of the Queen]].]]
** Theon III: Theon, Jaime and Robar Royce go fetch Bran, Benjen, Hodor and the Reed siblings from Bloodraven's cave. Wights invade the cave and attack them as they runaway.away, killing Jojen. [[spoiler: Jaime is fatally injured, but is saved when Theon uses bloodbending to restart his heart in magical version of CPR.]]
*** The following chapter (Jaime VI) deals with the aftermath and may also count as this, since [[spoiler: Lord Commander Mormont considers Jaime died and, therefore, is free from his vows to the Night's Watch]]. With Bran now stretching his Spirit powers, he gives half of Team Avatar new directions: go meet Jon [[spoiler: and Arya]] in Lys.
** Theon III: Theon, Jaime and Robar Royce go fetch Bran, Benjen, Hodor and the Reed siblings from Bloodraven's cave. Wights invade the cave and attack them as they run
*** The following chapter (Jaime VI) deals with the aftermath and may also count as this, since [[spoiler: Lord Commander Mormont considers Jaime died and, therefore, is free from his vows to the Night's Watch]]. With Bran now stretching his Spirit powers, he gives half of Team Avatar new directions: go meet Jon [[spoiler: and Arya]] in Lys.
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* AdaptionalUpbringingChange: Jon grows up in the Wall after his firebending is revealed, raised mostly by his uncle Benjen and his tutor Aemon.
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* AdaptationSecrecyDowngrade: Jon's real parentage and Jaime/Cersei are revealed very early on.
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** Hou-Ting and Wu, characters from ALoK, play significant roles in ''Aang's'' story. Both are dead by the time Korra rises as the Avatar.
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* AdaptationSecrecryDowngrade: Jon's real parentage and Jaime/Cersei are revealed very early on.
** House Martell's secret alliance with House Targaryen is revealed far sooner than in canon.
** House Martell's secret alliance with House Targaryen is revealed far sooner than in canon.
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** Kyoshi is the immediate predecessor to Jon as Avatar, succeeding Roku, Aang, and Korra. In canon, all three of them were her successors, with her being the direct predecessor to Roku.
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** Hou-Ting and Wu, characters from ALoK, play significant roles in ''Aang's'' story. Both are dead by the time Korra rises as the Avatar.
** Kyoshi is the immediate predecessor to Jon as Avatar, succeeding Roku, Aang, and Korra. In canon, all three of them were her successors, with her being the direct predecessor toRoku. Roku.
** The Night King was not a Lord Commander of the NW who married a corpse queen (like in the books) nor is he a human transfigured by Children of the Forest (like in the show). [[spoiler: He is the result of a fusion between an evil spirit and Wu, the Bloodstone Emperor, after he was betrayed and killed by the spirits he allied himself with.]]
* AdaptationDistillation: Daenerys' arc is rushed at the start both for readers' sake and to conform to changes previously established.
** Kyoshi is the immediate predecessor to Jon as Avatar, succeeding Roku, Aang, and Korra. In canon, all three of them were her successors, with her being the direct predecessor to
** The Night King was not a Lord Commander of the NW who married a corpse queen (like in the books) nor is he a human transfigured by Children of the Forest (like in the show). [[spoiler: He is the result of a fusion between an evil spirit and Wu, the Bloodstone Emperor, after he was betrayed and killed by the spirits he allied himself with.]]
* AdaptationDistillation: Daenerys' arc is rushed at the start both for readers' sake and to conform to changes previously established.
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* AdaptationalProtagonist: Jon, who shares the spotlight with many other characters, gets the sole protagonist title.
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* RelationshipCompression: Jaime and Brienne get together a few months after their meeting. Justified as in their interaction have been way more amicable since the beginning (Jaime never insults her, and Brienne is open to see him in a new light after learning he's the Avatar's friend) and Jaime has already fallen out of love with Cersei by then.
** [[PlayingWithATrope Played with]] Jon/Ygritte. In the text, they meet in one chapter and are dating in the next. In the story's time, however, at least one year passed by before they got together, and the two chapters are separated by a 3-year time skip.
** [[PlayingWithATrope Played with]] Jon/Ygritte. In the text, they meet in one chapter and are dating in the next. In the story's time, however, at least one year passed by before they got together, and the two chapters are separated by a 3-year time skip.
