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* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: The first chapter of the reboot has Ryusuke throw one of these at Rhea after mercy killing a young girl and decapitating the man who was torturing her.


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** Ryusuke also throws one at Rhea in the first chapter of the reboot.

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Angel's Breath is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.

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Angel's Breath is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]], with the reboot [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11448575/1/Angel-s-Breath-Reloaded here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.


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* MercyKill: In the first chapter of the reboot, Ryusuke does this to a young girl with no chance of survival.


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* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: The first chapter of the reboot has Ryusuke throw one of these at Rhea after mercy killing a young girl and decapitating the man who was torturing her.
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** Lucina Cypher. Her nickname is [[LouisCypher Lu.]]
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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.

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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: On the side of good we have Angel's Breath, a guild containing individuals like Ryusuke, Styles and Wisteria, who all wear their anti-heroism on their sleeves, along with Celeste, Florence, Dean and Cyrus, who might seem [[IdealHero ideal]] but have hidden depths. Even Rhea, by far the best contender for an IdealHero in the series has anti-heroic traits. On the side of Devil's Rage we have reprehensible individuals like Akara, who's just a psycho. If not for the HeelFaceTurn then the series would be in the territory of GrayAndGreyMorality on virtue of villains like Ryo, Anialise, Evan and many more, who are, at worst, WellIntentionedExtremist AntiVillains.

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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Ryusuke suffers from this. Epitomised by:
--> Delia: And here I thought you were one of the heroes, here to vanquish evil from the world.
--> Ryusuke: You thought wrong.

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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Ryusuke suffers from this. Epitomised by:
--> Delia: And here I thought you were one of
this in spades. He's constantly berating himself for being weak and useless, even to the heroes, here point of being so broody he's happy to vanquish evil take a punch from the world.
--> Ryusuke: You thought wrong.
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* LampshadeHanging: Being GenreSavvy, Ryusuke is usually the invoker of this trope.
* MadeOfIron: Literally everyone. Celeste is able to keep fighting despite being [[spoiler:stabbed in the gut]] and Rhea is fighting just a couple of days after a freakin' [[spoiler:HEART ATTACK! Although in that case she is nowhere near her full ability and the strain she puts on her body nearly kills her, and she would be dead if not for Ryusuke's timely intervention.]]
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* BeigeProse: Used sparingly and to fantastic effect. It ramps up the tension in several situations. The best example would be in chapter 22, when the line "and then [[spoiler:X died]]" is used three times. Twice followed by "except she didn't".
** Ryusuke also speaks in this occasionally.


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* GenreSavvy: Ryusuke counts. Even lampshaded in chapter 20 when [[spoiler:Jessop]] tells him he has no chance of winning. His reply? He's never lost when someone tells him that. He knows what happens when you [[TemptingFate say things like that]].


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* GilliganCut: One in chapter 14:
--> Rhea: You're coming with us.
--> Ryusuke: I remember agreeing to no such thing. *beat* You can't force me into this.
--> Rhea: *Smirks*
--> *Cut to Ryusuke on a train* "I hate you."


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* SaidBookism: Notably averted. The author has no aversion to using the word 'said', when he's not using action tags anyway, which is a lot of the time, although he's slowly getting better. That's not to say that the said bookisms aren't used, but when they are, they are generally used well. Although Ryusuke does have a habit of sighing his speech [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness earlier on]]. And people do still smile some sentences, although these could very well be action tags gone wrong, given the author's fondness for them.
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* ShoutOut: To TengenToppaGurrenLagann:
-> Celeste: Ryusuke, let's see ya grit those teeth!
** Also a few to the JackReacher novels:
*** In chapter 20, Ryusuke says that people who fight to achieve the moral victory piss him off, as he and Celeste fight to piss on the other guy's grave.
*** Also the rules, which they banter about in chapter 20:
---> Ryusuke: Rule one: don't question the coat.
---> Celeste: I thought rule one was don't break the furniture?
---> Ryusuke: That's rule four.
---> Celeste: Isn't rule four if in doubt, be sarcastic?
---> Ryusuke: No, that's rule two.
---> Celeste: You have too many rules.


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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Subverted. Ryusuke and Celeste share banter ''in the middle of a battle'', and end up taking the full brunt of an attack from [[spoiler: Jessop]]. They were asking for it, really. Lampshaded by Ryusuke.
-> "I've changed rule one. Talking is ''not'' a free action."
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Evan Mae, without a doubt. Chapter 19 shows us exactly why.

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* BadassBoast: Ryusuke's PreMortemOneLiner to [[spoiler: Evan]] in chapter 19 definitely falls into this category. Bonus points for actually ''doing'' it.
-> Ryusuke: You think you can fight me? You're missing an arm. I'll end this in one blow.



* BelligerentSexualTension: Eiko and Nui. Florence and Cyrus. It's there, and blindingly obvious in the latter case by the end of chapter 17.

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* BelligerentSexualTension: Eiko and Nui. Florence and Cyrus. It's there, and blindingly obvious in the latter case by the end of chapter 17.18.
* BigDamnHeroes: Ryusuke shows up just in time to [[spoiler: stop Celeste being killed in chapter 19 by cutting off Evan's arm.]]


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* ShutUpHannibal: Ryusuke gives a particularly awesome one to [[spoiler: Evan]] in chapter 19. Combined with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids.
-> [[spoiler: Ryusuke: Shut the hell up! Heaven? Don't make me laugh, there's no such thing! You're just a spoiled child after an ideal world that can never exist! You want to kill liars? There will always be more! You want to rid the world of treachery, to make it a place where only the honest can live, is that right? Don't be so fucking naive! That world can never exist! Within humanity, there will always exist evil, because without it, good can't exist either! So get your head out of your ass!]]
* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: See above.


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: See ShutUpHannibal above for example. [[spoiler: Evan]] also delivers one to Celeste in the same chapter.
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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.

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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found here: https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.
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* BeliggerentSexualTension: Eiko and Nui. Florence and Cyrus. It's there, and blindingly obvious in the latter case by the end of chapter 17.

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* BeliggerentSexualTension: BelligerentSexualTension: Eiko and Nui. Florence and Cyrus. It's there, and blindingly obvious in the latter case by the end of chapter 17.
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*BeliggerentSexualTension: Eiko and Nui. Florence and Cyrus. It's there, and blindingly obvious in the latter case by the end of chapter 17.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Ryusuke suffers from this. Epitomised by:
--> Delia: And here I thought you were one of the heroes, here to vanquish evil from the world.
--> Ryusuke: You thought wrong.
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* BadassLongcoat: Bane. Ryusuke also qualifies, mentioning that he has a total of nine of THE SAME COAT, and getting upset whenever they get destroyed, which has become a RunningGag. The one time it doesn't upset him sees him use the destroyed coat to blind his opponent in a dazzling display of [[CombatPragmatist pragmatism]]. It doesn't work.
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* AerithAndBob: We have names like Bane, Ryusuke, Rhea, Eiko, Lucina, Nui and Puzzlebox... alongside names like Dean, Rosa and Anna.


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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All chapters from chapter 4 onwards appear to be named after rock and metal songs. There are also small captions before the chapter begins with lyrics from the song used in the title, which can be related in some way to events in the chapter.


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* MeaningfulName: Ryusuke Yugure and Rhea Yokoshima. Yugure loosely translates from Japanese as "Twilight", whilst Yokoshima translates as "Devious One", probably referencing some of the more mischievous aspects of her personality. Also, Eiko Haverj means "Eternal long-lived child".
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Averted. When Delia calls Rhea Ryusuke's girlfriend, he doesn't say a word against it, when one would think he'd be quick to make the point that she really isn't.


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* TheTease: Rhea seems to be becoming this to Ryusuke.

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* GoodIsNotNice: Ryusuke [[spoiler:tortures Ana for information]]
* GoodIsNotSoft: Rhea, who is among the most idealistic of the protagonists, is also one of the strongest. This could also be applied to the entire guild, given that there seem to members who are at least good at something combat related. Subverted when Ryusuke [[spoiler:fights Delia, and gets trounced without her putting in much effort at all. All of the Angel's Breath team against the dark Guild searching for the Unspoken Treasure, but none more so that Ryusuke vs. Delia.]]

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* GoodIsNotNice: Ryusuke [[spoiler:tortures Ana for information]]
* GoodIsNotSoft: Rhea, who is among the most idealistic of the protagonists, is
information.]] He also one of the strongest. This could also be applied to the entire guild, given that there seem to members who are at least good at something combat related. Subverted when Ryusuke [[spoiler:fights Delia, and gets trounced without her putting in much effort at all. All of the Angel's Breath team against the dark Guild searching for the Unspoken Treasure, but none more so that Ryusuke vs. Delia.]]has quite a few JerkAss moments.



* HeroicSecondWind: Florence in her second fight against Akara. [[CombatSadomasochist She enjoys it too.]]

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* HeroicSecondWind: Florence in her second fight against Akara. [[CombatSadomasochist She enjoys it too.]]

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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath. It deconstructs the typical Shounen [[ThePowerOfFriendship Power of Friendship]] tone of Fairy Tail to create a cynical, seinen-esque story laced with anti-heroes and pragmatism. The story is still ongoing and in its infancy, and updates on Mondays.

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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath. It deconstructs follows the typical Shounen [[ThePowerOfFriendship Power different members of Friendship]] tone of Fairy Tail to create a cynical, seinen-esque story laced with anti-heroes the guild throughout their adventures, and pragmatism. The story is still ongoing and in its infancy, and updates on Mondays.adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.



** Dean gets one against Deva.



* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVsCynicism: Launching into the first major arc, this story seems to be leaning heavily towards cynicism. However, it's still early days, so it could yet become victim to ReverseCerebusSyndrome or become a CerebusRollercoaster.

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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVsCynicism: Launching into the first major arc, this story seems to be leaning heavily slightly towards cynicism. However, it's still early days, so it could yet become victim to ReverseCerebusSyndrome or become a CerebusRollercoaster.


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* TakeThat: WordOfGod states that Dean seeing the faces of all his comrades before his Second Wind against Deva is one of these to the original summary on this page that mentioned the story deconstructing ThePowerOfFriendship. They tell the readers not to make assumptions.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: The entire reason Dean gets a HeroicSecondWind against Deva.
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* CurbStompBattle: All of the Angel's Breath team in the first fight against Markus and co.

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* CurbStompBattle: All of the Angel's Breath team sans Rhea and Celeste are subject to this in the first fight against Markus and co.
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* CurbStompBattle: All of the Angel's Breath team in the first fight against Markus and co.


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* HeroicSecondWind: Florence in her second fight against Akara. [[CombatSadomasochist She enjoys it too.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutChthulhu: Dean [[spoiler: takes out Jörmungandr, the World Serpent with one attack. Justified in that it's only a summoning of Deva's Deity Soul: Loki, and is thus constrained by his power.]]

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* DidYouJustPunchOutChthulhu: DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Dean [[spoiler: takes out Jörmungandr, the World Serpent with one attack. Justified in that it's only a summoning of Deva's Deity Soul: Loki, and is thus constrained by his power.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutChthulhu: Dean [[spoiler: takes out Jörmungandr, the World Serpent with one attack. Justified in that it's only a summoning of Deva's Deity Soul: Loki, and is thus constrained by his power.]]

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* CombatPragmatist: Ryusuke when he [[spoiler:beats Ana]]. Celeste against [[spoiler:Cali]] counts too.

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* CombatPragmatist: Ryusuke when he [[spoiler:beats Ana]]. and Celeste against [[spoiler:Cali]] counts too. so far.



* MadeOutToBeAJerkass: Ryusuke suffers this after he'd had enough of Cyrus' Jerkassery during his HeroicBSOD. [[EasilyForgiven It doesn't last long, though.]]

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* MadeOutToBeAJerkass: Ryusuke suffers this after he'd had enough of Cyrus' Jerkassery during his HeroicBSOD. [[EasilyForgiven It doesn't last long, though.]]
* MaleGaze: A scene between Ryusuke and Rhea in chapter 9 has her stripping almost entirely naked. [[CovertPervert He can't look away]].
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** The Cynic: Ryusuke

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** The Cynic: TheCynic: Ryusuke
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** TheOptimist: Rhea
** TheRealist: Celeste
** TheCynic: Ryusuke
** TheApathetic: Styles

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** TheOptimist: The Optimist: Rhea
** TheRealist: The Realist: Celeste
** TheCynic: The Cynic: Ryusuke
** TheApathetic: The Apathetic: Styles

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* FlatEarthAtheist: Ryusuke basically admits to being this.


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* InformedLoner: Ryusuke shows shades of this.


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* SociopathicHero: Styles, particularly as he [[PayEvilUntoEvil doesn't mind killing]]
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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224. It deconstructs the typical Shounen [[ThePowerOfFriendship Power of Friendship]] tone of Fairy Tail to create a cynical, seinen-esque story laced with anti-heroes and pragmatism. The story is still ongoing and in its infancy, and updates on Mondays.

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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224.Anime224, and it can be found here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath. It deconstructs the typical Shounen [[ThePowerOfFriendship Power of Friendship]] tone of Fairy Tail to create a cynical, seinen-esque story laced with anti-heroes and pragmatism. The story is still ongoing and in its infancy, and updates on Mondays.
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Angel's Breath is a FairyTail fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224. It deconstructs the typical Shounen [[ThePowerOfFriendship Power of Friendship]] tone of Fairy Tail to create a cynical, seinen-esque story laced with anti-heroes and pragmatism. The story is still ongoing and in its infancy, and updates on Mondays.
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* AntiHero: Ryusuke would qualify, as would Styles. Wisteria's introspections show shades of this, but perhaps YMMV on that.
* BeautyIsBad: Ana and Delia are both antagonists, and both described as being attractive. Also, The Wanderer.
* CombatPragmatist: Ryusuke when he [[spoiler:beats Ana]]. Celeste against [[spoiler:Cali]] counts too.
* DeadpanSnarker: Ryusuke, Dean and Cyrus. They all come out with some deadpan and hilarious lines.
* FlatEarthAtheist: Ryusuke basically admits to being this.
* FourPhilosophyEnsemble:
** TheOptimist: Rhea
** TheRealist: Celeste
** TheCynic: Ryusuke
** TheApathetic: Styles
* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Celeste to Ryusuke, in a ShoutOut to TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
* GoodIsNotNice: Ryusuke [[spoiler:tortures Ana for information]]
* GoodIsNotSoft: Rhea, who is among the most idealistic of the protagonists, is also one of the strongest. This could also be applied to the entire guild, given that there seem to members who are at least good at something combat related. Subverted when Ryusuke [[spoiler:fights Delia, and gets trounced without her putting in much effort at all. All of the Angel's Breath team against the dark Guild searching for the Unspoken Treasure, but none more so that Ryusuke vs. Delia.]]
* HeadbuttingHeroes: Ryusuke and Celeste really don't get along.
* HeroicBSOD: Ryusuke suffers a minor one after [[spoiler:losing to Delia]]
* HumansAreBastards: In Styles' mind, anyway. He also considers that HumansAreTheRealMonsters.
* KnightTemplar: Styles. Big time, he doesn't care how other people see his actions, so long as he believes they're right.
* MadeOutToBeAJerkass: Ryusuke suffers this after he'd had enough of Cyrus' Jerkassery during his HeroicBSOD. [[EasilyForgiven It doesn't last long, though.]]
* PragmaticHero: Ryusuke, without a doubt.
* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVsCynicism: Launching into the first major arc, this story seems to be leaning heavily towards cynicism. However, it's still early days, so it could yet become victim to ReverseCerebusSyndrome or become a CerebusRollercoaster.

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