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Angel's Breath is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of [=Anime224=], and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]], with the reboot [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11448575/1/Angel-s-Breath-Reloaded here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.
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Angel's Breath is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]], with the reboot [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11448575/1/Angel-s-Breath-Reloaded here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.
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Angel's Breath is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfiction based on the completely original, titular guild, written by Master Of Anime224, [=Anime224=], and it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10349519/1/Angel-s-Breath here]], with the reboot [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11448575/1/Angel-s-Breath-Reloaded here]]. It follows the different members of the guild throughout their adventures, and adds a cynical tint to the shounen setting.
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--> Ryusuke: You think you can fight me? You're missing an arm. I'll end this in one blow.
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--> Rhea: You're coming with us.
--> Ryusuke: I remember agreeing to no such thing. *beat* You can't force me into this.
--> Rhea: *Smirks*
--> *Cut to Ryusuke on a train* "I hate you."
--> Ryusuke: I remember agreeing to no such thing. *beat* You can't force me into this.
--> Rhea: *Smirks*
--> *Cut to Ryusuke on a train* "I hate you."
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--> Ryusuke:
'''Ryusuke:''' I remember agreeing to no such thing. *beat* You can't force me into
--> Rhea: *Smirks*
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'''Rhea:''' *Smirks*\\
*Cut to Ryusuke on a
'''Ryusuke:''' "I hate you."
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* HeroicSecondWind: Florence in her second fight against Akara.
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* HeroicSecondWind: HeroicSecondWind:
** Florence in her second fight against Akara.
** Florence in her second fight against Akara.
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** A few to the Literature/JackReacher novels:
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** A few to the Literature/JackReacher ''Literature/JackReacher'' novels:
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----> Ryusuke: Rule one: don't question the coat.
----> Celeste: I thought rule one was don't break the furniture?
----> Ryusuke: That's rule four.
----> Celeste: Isn't rule four if in doubt, be sarcastic?
----> Ryusuke: No, that's rule two.
----> Celeste: You have too many rules.
* ShutUpHannibal: Ryusuke gives a particularly awesome one to [[spoiler: Evan]] in chapter 19. Combined with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids.
-> [[spoiler: Ryusuke: Shut the hell up! Heaven? Don't make me laugh, there's no such thing! You're just a spoiled child after an ideal world that can never exist! You want to kill liars? There will always be more! You want to rid the world of treachery, to make it a place where only the honest can live, is that right? Don't be so fucking naive! That world can never exist! Within humanity, there will always exist evil, because without it, good can't exist either! So get your head out of your ass!]]
----> Celeste: I thought rule one was don't break the furniture?
----> Ryusuke: That's rule four.
----> Celeste: Isn't rule four if in doubt, be sarcastic?
----> Ryusuke: No, that's rule two.
----> Celeste: You have too many rules.
* ShutUpHannibal: Ryusuke gives a particularly awesome one to [[spoiler: Evan]] in chapter 19. Combined with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids.
-> [[spoiler: Ryusuke: Shut the hell up! Heaven? Don't make me laugh, there's no such thing! You're just a spoiled child after an ideal world that can never exist! You want to kill liars? There will always be more! You want to rid the world of treachery, to make it a place where only the honest can live, is that right? Don't be so fucking naive! That world can never exist! Within humanity, there will always exist evil, because without it, good can't exist either! So get your head out of your ass!]]
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----> Celeste:
Celeste:''' I thought rule one was don't break the
----> Ryusuke:
'''Ryusuke:''' That's rule
----> Celeste:
'''Celeste:''' Isn't rule four if in doubt, be
----> Ryusuke:
'''Ryusuke:''' No, that's rule
----> Celeste:
'''Celeste:''' You have too many rules.
* ShutUpHannibal: Ryusuke gives
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-> "I've changed rule one. Talking is ''not'' a free action."
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: On the side of good we have Angel's Breath, a guild containing individuals like Ryusuke, Styles and Wisteria, who all wear their anti-heroism on their sleeves, along with Celeste, Florence, Dean and Cyrus, who might seem [[IdealHero ideal]] but have hidden depths. Even Rhea, by far the best contender for an IdealHero in the series has anti-heroic traits. On the side of Devil's Rage we have reprehensible individuals like Akara, who's just a psycho. If not for the HeelFaceTurn then the series would be in the territory of GrayAndGreyMorality on virtue of villains like Ryo, Anialise, Evan and many more, who are, at worst, WellIntentionedExtremist AntiVillains.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: On the side of good we have Angel's Breath, a guild containing individuals like Ryusuke, Styles and Wisteria, who all wear their anti-heroism on their sleeves, along with Celeste, Florence, Dean and Cyrus, who might seem [[IdealHero ideal]] but have hidden depths. Even Rhea, by far the best contender for an IdealHero in the series has anti-heroic traits. On the side of Devil's Rage we have reprehensible individuals like Akara, who's just a psycho. If not for the HeelFaceTurn then the series would be in the territory of GrayAndGreyMorality on virtue of villains like Ryo, Anialise, Evan and many more, who are, at worst, WellIntentionedExtremist AntiVillains.{{Anti Villain}}s.
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!! [Angel's Breath] contains examples of:
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* ShoutOut: To ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'':
-> Celeste: Ryusuke, let's see ya grit those teeth!
** Also a few to the JackReacher novels:
-> Celeste: Ryusuke, let's see ya grit those teeth!
** Also a few to the JackReacher novels:
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** To ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'':
-> ---> Celeste: Ryusuke, let's see ya grit those teeth!
**Also a A few to the JackReacher Literature/JackReacher novels:
** To ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'':
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*** Also the rules, which they banter about in chapter 20:
---> Ryusuke: Rule one: don't question the coat.
---> Celeste: I thought rule one was don't break the furniture?
---> Ryusuke: That's rule four.
---> Celeste: Isn't rule four if in doubt, be sarcastic?
---> Ryusuke: No, that's rule two.
---> Celeste: You have too many rules.
---> Ryusuke: Rule one: don't question the coat.
---> Celeste: I thought rule one was don't break the furniture?
---> Ryusuke: That's rule four.
---> Celeste: Isn't rule four if in doubt, be sarcastic?
---> Ryusuke: No, that's rule two.
---> Celeste: You have too many rules.
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*** Also the The rules, which they banter about in chapter 20:
---> ----> Ryusuke: Rule one: don't question the coat.
---> ----> Celeste: I thought rule one was don't break the furniture?
---> ----> Ryusuke: That's rule four.
---> ----> Celeste: Isn't rule four if in doubt, be sarcastic?
---> ----> Ryusuke: No, that's rule two.
---> ----> Celeste: You have too many rules.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Evan Mae, without a doubt. Chapter 19 shows us exactly why.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Evan Mae, without a doubt. Chapter 19 shows us exactly why.
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* ShoutOut: To TengenToppaGurrenLagann:
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* ShoutOut: To TengenToppaGurrenLagann:''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'':
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Celeste to Ryusuke, in a ShoutOut to TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Celeste to Ryusuke, in a ShoutOut to TengenToppaGurrenLagann.''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann''.
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* GenreSavvy: Ryusuke counts. Even lampshaded in chapter 20 when [[spoiler:Jessop]] tells him he has no chance of winning. His reply? He's never lost when someone tells him that. He knows what happens when you [[TemptingFate say things like that]].
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* LampshadeHanging: Being GenreSavvy, Ryusuke is usually the invoker of this trope.
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* LampshadeHanging: Being GenreSavvy, Ryusuke is usually the invoker of this trope.
