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* UncannyValley: In-universe, Twilight is a little unnerved by the first golem she speaks to. A griffin is also scared away by the fact that all the golem troops on the airship are pretty much identical.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/107357/alchemical-empire Alchemical Empire]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[FanWorks/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction]] by [=NotActuallyThings=] (known here as ''Tropers/CommunistBeans''.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/107357/alchemical-empire Alchemical Empire]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[FanWorks/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction]] by [=NotActuallyThings=] (known here as ''Tropers/CommunistBeans''.
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* TheQuietOne: Could be said to be the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of standard golems; it's not so much that they rarely speak as it is their having extremely muted emotions. Equinculi have fairly normal emotional ranges, but somehow seem a little [[UncannyValley off]].
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* TheQuietOne: Could be said to be the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of standard golems; it's not so much that they rarely speak as it is their having extremely muted emotions. Equinculi have fairly normal emotional ranges, but somehow seem a little [[UncannyValley off]].off.
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''Alchemical Empire'' is an in-progress ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[FanWorks/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction]] by NotActuallyThings (known here as ''Tropers/CommunistBeans''.
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* [[ArtificialHuman Artificial Equine]]: Golems are essentially this; they are created artificially, but have free will... it's just that standard golem ponies are docile and generally willing to follow orders. Equinculi are psychologically more like normal beings.
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* [[ArtificialHuman Artificial Equine]]: ArtificialHuman: Golems are essentially this; they are created artificially, but have free will... it's just that standard golem ponies are docile and generally willing to follow orders. Equinculi are psychologically more like normal beings.
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''Alchemical Empire'' is an in-progress ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[FanWorks/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction]] by NotActuallyThings (known here as ''Tropers/CommunistBeans''.
It begins after the events of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure Season 3's finale]] with Celestia remembering someone or several someones they lost a long time ago, while Twilight goes on about golems and a strange airship makes its way for Equestria.
The story so far contains a few nods to FanFic/PonyPOVSeries and the author states there will be more, and that "certain mechanics" of the universe are adapted from it.
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!!AlchemicalEmpire contains examples of:
* [[ArtificialHuman Artificial Equine]]: Golems are essentially this; they are created artificially, but have free will... it's just that standard golem ponies are docile and generally willing to follow orders. Equinculi are psychologically more like normal beings.
* EmptyEyes: Golems have this, at least in a sense: they have colored irises, but no pupil. Besides not having an actual coat, this is one of the most visible signs that a pony is a golem. [[spoiler: Empress Aleph, on the other hand, has DullEyesOfUnhappiness with flat black pupils. Why this is has not yet been explained.]]
* {{Golem}}: Introduces and explores the concept in the FIM universe, with two varieties: regular golems and more advanced versions called Equinculi.
* MyGreatestFailure: Celestia regards the Nightmare Moon incident as this, but an earlier incident involving golems (strongly implied to be around the time of Discord's first defeat) seems to come a close second.
* TheQuietOne: Could be said to be the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of standard golems; it's not so much that they rarely speak as it is their having extremely muted emotions. Equinculi have fairly normal emotional ranges, but somehow seem a little [[UncannyValley off]].
* UncannyValley: In-universe, Twilight is a little unnerved by the first golem she speaks to. A griffin is also scared away by the fact that all the golem troops on the airship are pretty much identical.
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It begins after the events of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure Season 3's finale]] with Celestia remembering someone or several someones they lost a long time ago, while Twilight goes on about golems and a strange airship makes its way for Equestria.
The story so far contains a few nods to FanFic/PonyPOVSeries and the author states there will be more, and that "certain mechanics" of the universe are adapted from it.
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!!AlchemicalEmpire contains examples of:
* [[ArtificialHuman Artificial Equine]]: Golems are essentially this; they are created artificially, but have free will... it's just that standard golem ponies are docile and generally willing to follow orders. Equinculi are psychologically more like normal beings.
* EmptyEyes: Golems have this, at least in a sense: they have colored irises, but no pupil. Besides not having an actual coat, this is one of the most visible signs that a pony is a golem. [[spoiler: Empress Aleph, on the other hand, has DullEyesOfUnhappiness with flat black pupils. Why this is has not yet been explained.]]
* {{Golem}}: Introduces and explores the concept in the FIM universe, with two varieties: regular golems and more advanced versions called Equinculi.
* MyGreatestFailure: Celestia regards the Nightmare Moon incident as this, but an earlier incident involving golems (strongly implied to be around the time of Discord's first defeat) seems to come a close second.
* TheQuietOne: Could be said to be the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of standard golems; it's not so much that they rarely speak as it is their having extremely muted emotions. Equinculi have fairly normal emotional ranges, but somehow seem a little [[UncannyValley off]].
* UncannyValley: In-universe, Twilight is a little unnerved by the first golem she speaks to. A griffin is also scared away by the fact that all the golem troops on the airship are pretty much identical.
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