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** 'Punking Doflamingo' and 'Settling The Score' may just be the crowners. [[spoiler: Rocinante is [[UnPerson turned into a toy]] by Doflamingo, and the effects are immediate. Kuzan forgets his lover while in the middle of his RoaringRampageOfRescue, abruptly wondering why he was so angry. Law, in the middle of fighting Tashigi and Smoker, suddenly rips out their hearts and tortures them because he no longer has any reason to feel even slightly positive towards Marines. Law becomes far more emotionaly unstable and, upon realising his memories have been tampered with, is terrified at the the inexplicable change and that he is now a noticeably worse person. Doflamingo takes great delight in torturing Rocinante by threatening to ''molest'' Law when he captures him. Then Kuzan is tricked into fighting Law, and nearly freezes his adoptive son to death while planning to hand him over to Doflamingo, who's made sure to give Rocinante a good vantage point to witness the whole thing.]] Jesus ''christ''.
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** 'Punking Doflamingo' and 'Settling The Score' may just be the crowners. [[spoiler: Rocinante is [[UnPerson turned into a toy]] by Doflamingo, and the effects are immediate. Kuzan forgets his lover while in the middle of his RoaringRampageOfRescue, abruptly wondering why he was so angry. Law, in the middle of fighting Tashigi and Smoker, suddenly rips out their hearts and tortures them because he no longer has any reason to feel even slightly positive towards Marines. Law becomes far more emotionaly unstable and, upon realising realizing his memories have been tampered with, is terrified at the the inexplicable change and that he is now a noticeably worse person. Doflamingo takes great delight in torturing Rocinante by threatening to ''molest'' Law when he captures him. Then Kuzan is tricked into fighting Law, and nearly freezes his adoptive son to death while planning to hand him over to Doflamingo, who's made sure to give Rocinante a good vantage point to witness the whole thing.]] Jesus ''christ''.
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* {{Autocannibalism}}: [[spoiler: Vinsmoke Reiju is fed her own kidney by Law.]]
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* ButtMonkey: Reiju [[spoiler: She pisses of Hancock, who holds her prisoner until the Straw-Hearts come. Then she is fed her own kidney by Law after stomping on his BerserkButton, then she is kept a hostage in Punk Hazard by Whitebeard pirates, who make sure to rub her family's failures and defeat in her face. Finally, she is dismissed by the world at large once her father is imprisoned.]]
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** When pondering on Judge's SmallNameBigEgo attitude Charlotte Linlin states that the only Vinsmoke with credibility in the New World is Sanji and she does not understand why Judge and the rest of his spawn are so intent on antagonizing him when they should be courting his favor.
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* PrideBeforeAFall: All of the official Vinsmokes are too full of themselves and when they suffer for it it is cathartic.
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** Also the Vinsmoke clan and the Germa 66. True, they might be a force to be reckoned in the Blues and perhaps Paradise. But to any New World established power they are just upstart weaklings that just happen to have some useful specializations. Judge in particular seems to view himself as an equal partner to Charlotte Linlin but she considers him just a very dim and arrogant pawn and is happy to sick the Straw Hearts and New Whitebeards on him.
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* ToDumbToLive: Reiju purposefully antagonizes someone known as the Surgeon of Death. [spoiler: Luckily for her they have more use of her alive so Law restrains himself to merely forcing her kidney down her own throat.]]
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* IncestSubtext: [[spoiler: Doflamingo towards Law. Granted, Law is adopted, but it kinda falls apart when you remember Doflamingo 1) knew Law when the latter was ''ten'' and 2) is evil incarnate.]]
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* IncestSubtext: [[spoiler: Doflamingo towards Law. Granted, Law is adopted, but it kinda falls apart when you remember Doflamingo 1) knew Law when the latter was ''ten'' ''[[{{Squick}} ten]]'' and 2) is evil incarnate.]]
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* IncestSubtext: [[spoiler: Doflamingo towards Law. Granted, Law is adopted, but it kinda falls apart when you remember Doflamingo 1) knew Law when the latter was ''ten'' and 2) is evil incarnate.]]
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* CreepyUncle: See VillainousCrush below.
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'''Ace:''' ''(defensively)''' ''(defensively)'' Maybe it's an asexual siren. We're in the New World, would it surprise you?
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* VillainousCrush: [[spoiler:It is ''strongly'' implied that [[IncestSubtext Doflamingo is attracted to Law]]. Needless to say, the rest of Law's (adoptive) family do not take it well]].
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* VillainousCrush: [[spoiler:It is ''strongly'' implied that [[IncestSubtext Doflamingo is attracted to Law]]. Even creepier, he knew Law when he was ''ten''. Needless to say, the rest of Law's (adoptive) family do not take it well]].
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* FlippingTheBird: Law's signature, naturally. It even ends up being the picture on his bounty poster. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Rocinante's reaction is priceless.]]
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* FlippingTheBird: Law's signature, naturally. It even ends up being the picture on his bounty poster. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Rocinante's reaction is priceless.]]
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Can be found at https://archiveofourown.org/series/366521
[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/366521 here]].
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** Kuzan has done far more morally ambiguous things than kill a neutralized prisoner because his boyfriend asked him, and when that prisoner has hurt Law he's willing to admit it loudly enough that Rocinante gets the hint.
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** Kuzan has done far more morally ambiguous things than kill a neutralized prisoner because his boyfriend asked him, and when that prisoner has hurt Law he's willing to admit it loudly enough that Rocinante gets the hint. [[spoiler:Learning about Doflamingo's heavily implied VillainousCrush on Law makes him immediately request that the former be given to Sadi-chan upon arrival to Impel Down]].
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* GildedCage: When still under Rocinante's custody, Law lived in an isolated Marine base in North Blue. He could run around and had any medical textbook he could wished for, but was constantly watched by Kuzan - a Vice-Admiral at the time - and couldn't leave, officially because his fruit made him prime material for kidnapping. Oh, and the Government expected he would nicely play along with their plans after killing his entire city.
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* IJustWantToBeFree: After three years spent cloisetered away for his potential, Law really, really has ''issues'' about being locked up. When confronted to the possibility of being captured and brought back under Marine custody, he outright prepares himself to ''cut his own head off''.
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* LivingMacGuffin: The Government treated Law more as a valuable commodity than a human being. Even now, they are reluctant to kill him, aiming to capture and keep him secluded until his eventual breakdown to exploit his powers.
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* TakeAThirdOption: When the Marine Corps learn about Ace and Luffy's parentage, Garp realizes he will have to give them for execution or run away in a bid for protecting the kids. He instead chooses to entrust his grandsons to Shanks.
** Law fully knew he would be locked up forever by the Government if he refused to join the Marine, so he escaped from the base he was living in.
** Law fully knew he would be locked up forever by the Government if he refused to join the Marine, so he escaped from the base he was living in.
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A series written by Keerea set in an AU where the Marines get too close to finding Ace and Luffy, so he calls up Shanks and gives his permission for the Emperor to steal his grandsons. Shanks agrees, and Ace, Sabo and Luffy grow up under the somewhat dubious care of the Red Hair Pirates.
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A series written by Keerea set in an AU where the Marines get too close to finding Ace and Luffy, so he Garp calls up Shanks and gives his permission for the Emperor to steal his grandsons. Shanks agrees, and Ace, Sabo and Luffy grow up under the somewhat dubious care of the Red Hair Pirates.
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** Ace insists he has not adopted Momonosuke. That doesn't stop him from firebombing the hell out of [[spoiler: Jack]] when he attacks the kid in 'Dibs On The Dinosaur'.
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* MomentKiller: Luffy, repeatedly.
** Bartolomeo in 'The Usefulness Of Fans', when Law and Luffy are trying to have a discussion about their relationship.
** Bartolomeo in 'The Usefulness Of Fans', when Law and Luffy are trying to have a discussion about their relationship.
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* EnthrallingSiren: Upon Luffy and Momonosuke insisting they hear a voice calling out when no one else can in 'The Unmentioned Elephant', Ace theorizes it could be a siren.
--> '''Law:''' ...A siren targeting only a prepubescent child and a sex-repulsed teenager?\\
'''Ace:''' ''(defensively)''' Maybe it's an asexual siren. We're in the New World, would it surprise you?
--> '''Law:''' ...A siren targeting only a prepubescent child and a sex-repulsed teenager?\\
'''Ace:''' ''(defensively)''' Maybe it's an asexual siren. We're in the New World, would it surprise you?
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** Ace and Marco semi-adopt Momonosuke in 'No, We're Not Adopting! (Or Kidnapping!)'. Momo then has a panic attack and runs out into the frozen side of Punk Hazard, entirely alone and without properly insulating clothing.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: Eustass Kid's reaction when he encounters a hungover Shanks in 'Just Kidding Around'. He seems to regard Benn's relationship with Shanks in a DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu light, as well. Benn is mildly annoyed.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: Eustass Kid's reaction when he encounters a hungover Shanks in 'Just Kidding Around'. He His crew seems to regard Benn's relationship with Shanks in a DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu light, as well. Benn is mildly annoyed.
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* EpicFail: Ace and Luffy's attempts at mopping in 'Pirates vs. Preteens'. It is lampshaded in a later story:
--> '''Izo:''' How does one...fail at ''mopping?'' I just...''how?''\\
'''Marco:''' Never underestimate a D. At anything. Even failure.
--> '''Izo:''' How does one...fail at ''mopping?'' I just...''how?''\\
'''Marco:''' Never underestimate a D. At anything. Even failure.
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* FlippinngTheBird: Law's signature, naturally. It even ends up being the picture on his bounty poster. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Rocinante's reaction is priceless.]]
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* FlippinngTheBird: FlippingTheBird: Law's signature, naturally. It even ends up being the picture on his bounty poster. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Rocinante's reaction is priceless.]]
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8 EyeScream: [[spoiler: Sanji]] loses an eye fighting Vinsmoke Judge. He considers it WorthIt.
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* FlippinngTheBird: Law's signature, naturally. It even ends up being the picture on his bounty poster. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Rocinante's reaction is priceless.]]
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* FlippinngTheBird: Law's signature, naturally. It even ends up being the picture on his bounty poster.
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8 EyeScream: [[spoiler: Sanji]] loses an eye fighting Vinsmoke Judge. He considers it WorthIt.
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* ForgotICouldFly: While in a fight and competing to see 'who can defeat the most marines while seriously injuring the fewest?' in 'The Tigers and The Judge', Ace is sulking due to his fire not being very suited for winning. Marco reminds him that he has Conqueror's Haki, and Ace sheepishly uses it.
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** On the other hand, Fujitora is a bad match for Kizaru, since strong enough gravity can bend light.
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** A major component of Law's plans include keeping Luffy distracted for as long as possible before he inevitably notices what's going on and throws the whole thing off the rails.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: As in canon, Fujitora.
** Smoker does the same in 'The Tigers And The Judge'. He saves the day, [[spoiler: but unlike Fujitora, is not powerful enough to get away with it without consequences.]]
** Smoker does the same in 'The Tigers And The Judge'. He saves the day, [[spoiler: but unlike Fujitora, is not powerful enough to get away with it without consequences.]]
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--> ''Jim the Germa 66 agent really just wished they’d pick something. Between the Phoenix and Fire Fist working out their relationship drama, Smoker being passive aggressive with the pirates, and Cat Burglar constantly poking him with her stick he was pretty sure things would get embarrassing when he cracked over them trying to decide how to make him crack!''
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: In 'The Tigers And The Judge', Smoker, Tashigi, Nami, Vivi, and Marco break a captured enemy entirely on accident, by making him listen to them argue for several hours on ''how'' to break him.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: In 'The Tigers And The Judge', Smoker, Tashigi, Nami, Vivi, and Marco break a captured enemy entirely on accident, by making him listen to them argue with each other for several hours on ''how'' to break him.hours.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: In 'The Tigers And The Judge', Smoker, Tashigi, Nami, Vivi, and Marco break a captured enemy entirely on accident, by making him listen to them argue for several hours on ''how'' to break him.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Ace and Smoker are forced to work together in 'The Tigers And The Judge'. Then they must cross the Alabastan desert together, a journey that takes five days. Everyone else in the group afterwards refers to it as 'The Road Trip From Hell'.
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* FakedKidnapping: Vivi masterminds her own kidnapping in 'The Tigers And The Judge' to [[spoiler: prevent Vinsmoke Judge from using his diplomat disguise to assassinate her.]] Since her father, her guards, and the Straw Hats are all in on it, things go relatively smoothly.
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* RunningGag:
** Shanks using 'dad' as a verb.
** Sabo and Koala getting [[CoitusInterruptus interrupted.]]
** People questioning how Marco can talk in bird form.
** Shanks calling Marco random bird species.
** Law being creepy.
** Shanks using 'dad' as a verb.
** Sabo and Koala getting [[CoitusInterruptus interrupted.]]
** People questioning how Marco can talk in bird form.
** Shanks calling Marco random bird species.
** Law being creepy.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: All sorts of weirdness is accepted easily, but ''everyone'' is confused about how Marco can talk in bird form.
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* BerserkButton: Rocinante is essentially a walking BerserkButton for Doflamingo due to their...''[[CainAndAbel complicated]]'' [[EtTuBrutus relationship]]. Rocinante takes advantage of it in 'Settling The Score', which is particualarly impressive [[spoiler: due to being [[UnPerson turned into a toy]] at the time and Doflamingo not remembering him.]]
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* BerserkButton: Rocinante is essentially a walking BerserkButton for Doflamingo due to their...''[[CainAndAbel complicated]]'' [[EtTuBrutus [[EtTuBrute relationship]]. Rocinante takes advantage of it in 'Settling The Score', which is particualarly impressive [[spoiler: due to being [[UnPerson turned into a toy]] at the time and Doflamingo not remembering him.]]
