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* AboveTheInfluence: As much as Danny likes Kim and while he does enjoy some of the affection, he doesn't want to take advantage when she is under a love spell, preferring having her like him by her own choice.
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* AboveTheInfluence: As much as Danny likes Kim and while he does enjoy some of the affection, he doesn't want to take advantage when she is under a love spell, preferring having her like him by her own choice. Considering that he knows what it's like to be under an effect like that...
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-->'''Mrs. Rockwaller: Consuela Marie and Leonarda Patricia Rockwaller! Stop this at once!
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-->'''Mrs. Rockwaller: Rockwaller:''' Consuela Marie and Leonarda Patricia Rockwaller! Stop this at once!
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* FullNameUltimatum: Chapter 69 features Bonnie's sisters receiving one from their mother.
-->'''Mrs. Rockwaller: Consuela Marie and Leonarda Patricia Rockwaller! Stop this at once!
-->'''Mrs. Rockwaller: Consuela Marie and Leonarda Patricia Rockwaller! Stop this at once!
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* HeightAngst: Kim's villains and Bonnie comment on how much shorter Danny is then Kim. It gets annoying for him to the point where he threatens to harm Falsetto Jones for almost finishing that sentence.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Kim's Nana never has her first name revealed in the series or its film adaptation. In this story, her full name is Kimberly Joan Possible, meaning Kim was named after her.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In Chapter 66, Ron says Danny is "also ''[=NOT=]'' half-human and that little girl is his cousin and ''[=NOT=]'' his clone by his archenemy". After that, Danny isn't surprised "Kim doesn't have a secret identity".
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In Chapter 66, Part of Ron's inability to keep a secret, he gets too specific about what he's hiding.
** When Danny met Slim and Joss Possible, Ron says Danny has ''nothing'' to do with the other Danny who has a similar hairstyle and name. They figured it out fast, to Danny and Kim's frustration with Ron.
** When meeting Kim's Nana, Ron says Danny is "also ''[=NOT=]'' half-human and thatlittle girl Danielle is his cousin and ''[=NOT=]'' his clone by his archenemy". After that, Danny isn't surprised "Kim Kim doesn't have a secret identity".identity.
** When Danny met Slim and Joss Possible, Ron says Danny has ''nothing'' to do with the other Danny who has a similar hairstyle and name. They figured it out fast, to Danny and Kim's frustration with Ron.
** When meeting Kim's Nana, Ron says Danny is "also ''[=NOT=]'' half-human and that
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In Chapter 66, Ron says Danny is "also ''[=NOT=]'' half-human and that little girl is his cousin and ''[=NOT=]'' his clone by his archenemy". After that, Danny isn't surprised "Kim doesn't have a secret identity".
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* NeverMessWithGranny: Per Kim's suggestion, Danny spars with her Nana. Even in ghost form, Danny gets taken down rather quickly. Nana admits he's not the first superhero she's ever faced, and not the toughest either.
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* EloquentInMyNativeTongue: In Rufus's mind, he speaks in a deep, eloquent voice and mannerism.
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** Danny visiting Rufus's dreams was based on an episode of ''WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants''.
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* NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:Thirorex]] claims he wants to wipe out the human race to return the Earth to its rightful rulers, when in fact he's just a bully who likes to be in command, considering he isn't very empathetic to even his own kind.
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** In Chapter 60, [[spoiler:Kim learns Bonnie is using her sisters' credit cards and blackmails her into leaving Danny alone]].
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* HeadTurningBeauty: Kim is very attractive and most boys, including Danny, are drawn to her once they see her.
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* HelloNurse: Kim is very attractive and most boys, including Danny, are drawn to her once they see her.
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* CannotKeepASecret: When meeting Kim's Uncle Slim and cousin Joss, Danny and Kim had a cover story for him. Ron, unable to keep his mouth shut, unintentionally added in a hint that he's Danny Phantom. Slim and Joss realize it and Kim and Danny aren't happy with Ron for it.
-->'''Kim''': Ron! Secret identity, ''remember?!''
-->'''Ron''': ''(Defensively)'' I panicked! What was I supposed to say?
-->'''Danny''': Nothing! You were supposed to say ''NOTHING!''
-->'''Kim''': Ron! Secret identity, ''remember?!''
-->'''Ron''': ''(Defensively)'' I panicked! What was I supposed to say?
-->'''Danny''': Nothing! You were supposed to say ''NOTHING!''
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** Joss is excited to learn her new hero, Danny Phantom, is friends with her favorite cousin. She immediately starts pestering them on whether or not they are a couple.
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** Bonnie quickly loses any interest in Dash Baxter after watching him bully another student, admitting that even she has standards on who she dates.
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* EvenTheDogIsAshamed: Even Rufus thought it was pretty low of Ron to want Danny to overshadow Bonnie to make her agree to go out with him.
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* YouCanTalk: [[spoiler:The revelation that the Terakon race can talk caught everyone off guard.]]
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* DatingCatwoman: Downplayed, Danny's main interest is in Kim, but he does seem to share a mutual attraction to Ember.
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* TheUltimateLifeForm: According to Fright Knight, the Terakons had evolved and adapted to the point where they were a threat to literally every other life form on the planet, hence necestitating their original genocide.
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* TheUltimateLifeForm: UltimateLifeForm: According to Fright Knight, the Terakons had evolved and adapted to the point where they were a threat to literally every other life form on the planet, hence necestitating their original genocide.
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** During the first fight with the Terakon, Danny calls it ''Film/DragonHeart''.
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* TheUltimateLifeForm: According to Fright Knight, the Terakons had evolved and adapted to the point where they were a threat to literally every other life form on the planet, hence necestitating their original genocide.
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* {{Blackmail}}: How Dementor joins The Faction, threatening to reveal Drakken posted their plans on social media.
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* {{Blackmail}}: {{Blackmail}}:
** How Dementor joins The Faction, threatening to reveal Drakken posted their plans on socialmedia.media.
** In Chapter 56, [[spoiler:Bonnie learns Danny's secret and blackmails him into dating her once the Terakons are dealt with]].
** How Dementor joins The Faction, threatening to reveal Drakken posted their plans on social
** In Chapter 56, [[spoiler:Bonnie learns Danny's secret and blackmails him into dating her once the Terakons are dealt with]].
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** Motor Ed is not only still this Shego, but he also tries to hit on Spectra. Neither of them are fond of him.
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** Motor Ed is not only still this for Shego, but he also tries to hit on Spectra. Neither of them are fond of him.
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** Drakken had been spying on Kim during her in Amity Park, though he is appalled when Shego asks if he spies on her in the bathroom, using the series' phrase "SickAndWrong" to describe that.
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** Drakken had been spying on Kim during her stay in Amity Park, though he is appalled when Shego asks if he spies on her in the bathroom, using the series' phrase "SickAndWrong" to describe that.
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** In chapter 8, Dash throws a cooler full of grape juice at Kim that instead hits Danny in the gymnasium. Mr. Lancer and all the students are appalled by Dash's actions. Because he did something like that in full view of everyone, he in big trouble and punished for his actions; even Mr. Lancer who favors Dash is disgusted by him and decide to leave Kim to watch Dash so she can have his revenge on him.
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** In chapter 8, Dash throws a cooler full of grape juice at Kim that instead hits Danny in the gymnasium. Mr. Lancer and all the students are appalled by Dash's actions. Because he did something like that in full view of everyone, he he's in big trouble and punished for his actions; even Mr. Lancer who favors Dash is disgusted by him and decide to leave Kim to watch Dash so she can have his revenge on him.
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* HypotheticalCasting: Since this is a fanfiction and not an actual animated canon work, the author has his casting choices for the voices of original characters, [[spoiler:the Terakons]].
** Thirorex - Keith David
** Trescorn - Bill Faggerblakke
** Skyscreech - Steve Blum
** Scorex - Josh Keaton
** Slashfang - Charlie Adler
** Seastorm - David Sobolov
** Thirorex - Keith David
** Trescorn - Bill Faggerblakke
** Skyscreech - Steve Blum
** Scorex - Josh Keaton
** Slashfang - Charlie Adler
** Seastorm - David Sobolov
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* KnightOfCerebus: The original Terakon dragon is a powerful and frightening beast, moreso than any of Danny or Kim's bad guys. [[spoiler:Then his name, Thirorex, gets revealed, along with his sapience and own ambitions for world domination. He also kills the inhabitants of a lost island.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: Kim and Danny's villains getting together to revive an army of prehistoric dragons for world domination was bad. [[spoiler:What makes it worse is that it turns out the Terakons are sentient and the first one to be brought back to life, their king, has his own plans.]]
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* TheDragonsComeBack: The main plot becomes Vlad working with Danny and Kim's villains to revive an army of dragons called Terakons for world domination. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, the original reveals he's very much sentient and has his own plans.]]
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* BreathWeapon: Both the black and red Terakon have fire breath.
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* ImagineSpot: When Danny finds Kim at his front door, he imagines her confessing her love for him and they almost kiss.
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** When Danny finds Kim at his front door, he imagines her confessing her love for him and they almostkiss.kiss. He has another daydream while unintentionally spying on her at Middleton High.
** Kim has a brief daydream about going on a date with Danny after she starts to question her own feelings for him.
** Bonnie daydreams about a successful Danny romancing her over Kim, only to snap out of it when Tara notices.
** When Danny finds Kim at his front door, he imagines her confessing her love for him and they almost
** Kim has a brief daydream about going on a date with Danny after she starts to question her own feelings for him.
** Bonnie daydreams about a successful Danny romancing her over Kim, only to snap out of it when Tara notices.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Danny falls for Kim, who wasn't interested at first but grew attached to him. Kim's best friend is Ron, who has yet to realize his feelings for Kim yet. At the same time, Danny has a crush on Shego, who is too old and evil for him. Sam has hidden feelings for Danny, Paulina in interested in Danny Phantom, Bonnie has a growing interest in Danny Fenton, Danny believes a rumor that Star has a crush on him and Ember reveals she has a thing for him.
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** Hilariously averted and played with when Danny meets Professor Dementor. He is unimpressed with the supposed "top villain" and says he prefers Drakken, due to finding him being entertaining and having a "hot but evil" henchwoman.
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** Hilariously averted and played with when Danny meets Professor Dementor. He is unimpressed with the supposed "top villain" and says he prefers Drakken, due to finding him being more entertaining and having a "hot but evil" henchwoman.
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* Mego of Team Go finds it hard to believe dragons are a thing, even though Danny points out they have superpowers.
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: Team Go find it rather unsettling that Danny, who is 14, thinks their evil sister Shego is hot. Granted, they know he's too young and heroic for her, but they aren't fond of him thinking that.
