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* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway, Lyall zerself is actually a NobleWolf).]]

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* PronounTrouble: [[spoiler:Lyall is gender-neutral, and goes by ze/zer/zer pronouns - despite the fact that the equivalent in German linguistics is ''es'', not ''ze''. Since Dolly's natural tongue indicates that she was made in Scotland, though, and Lyall therefore must have been made at the same time, we can let it slide. Dolly sometimes slips up and uses 'it' instead of ze, while Sly persisted for a while in calling zer Ze-Sir instead of Lyall, since he was the one most confused about the existence of that particular gender identity.]]
* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway, Lyall zerself is actually a NobleWolf).]]NobleWolf)]]
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* WallOfText: Deliberately done in Chapter 10. Lilo's just [[spoiler:picked up a pen for only the second time that fic and is caught in the onsweep of potential communication and drawing and writing, much to his delight,]] so the over-1,000-word section is 'bunched up' accordingly, though still in sub-paragraphs. The fight scene in Chapter 4 is formatted similarly, but not for as long a stretch.

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* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not the exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4! An author's note likened it to a mixed up domino bridge.

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* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not the exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4! 4, which in turn sets off other character developments. An author's note likened it to a mixed up domino bridge.



* MoralDissonance: Inverted to some extent with Sly, backed with WhatTheHellHero. Sly has no qualms about using his "sparks" to cause harm to the toys he needs to fight, even if Dolly has expressly said he's not to. He also doesn't mind giving pretty sever shocks to Lilo in order to aid his powers. But when it comes to [[spoiler:doing the same thing to Dub, in a piecemeal form of electroshock therapy, which we know from canon is the only way his character arc can proceed?]]

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* MoralDissonance: Inverted to some extent with Sly, backed with WhatTheHellHero. Sly has no qualms about using his "sparks" to cause harm to the toys he needs to fight, even if Dolly has expressly said he's not to. He also doesn't mind giving pretty sever severe shocks to Lilo in order to aid his powers. But when it comes to [[spoiler:doing the same thing to Dub, in a piecemeal form of electroshock therapy, which we know from canon is the only way his character arc can proceed?]]



* [[OnlySaneMan Only Neurotypical Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub [[spoiler:(pre-Chapter 13's HeroicBSOD, anyway)]]; despite having been in an asylum for the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:

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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Neurotypical Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub [[spoiler:(pre-Chapter 13's HeroicBSOD, AngstComa, anyway)]]; despite having been in an asylum for the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:



* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in Theatre/{{Fame}}]]. ** Chapter 14 also includes a thinly-veiled shout-out to another Die Anstalt fanfic, "Sparkles and the Great Escape".

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* ShipTease: Kroko and Dolly seem to be getting a couple - most notably so far: "sweetie".
* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in Theatre/{{Fame}}]]. ** Chapter 14 also includes a thinly-veiled shout-out to another Die Anstalt fanfic, "Sparkles and the Great Escape".

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* Callback / ChekhovsGun: Dr Spieler mentions in the narration of Chapter 1 that she had two therapeutic setbacks in her early days of taking over from Kindermann: an "incident with the hypodermic needle", and "trouble with the Halo-Stop-Ultra". Later, in Chapter 4, Dr Wood takes inspiration from the first to aid his fighting style (albeit with a stick), and in Chapter 14, it's revealed that Kroko had enough of the latter to [[spoiler:necessitate electroshock therapy, which the others use as a springboard to help revive the then-catatonic Dub]].

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* Callback {{Callback}} / ChekhovsGun: Dr Spieler mentions in the narration of Chapter 1 that she had two therapeutic setbacks in her early days of taking over from Kindermann: an "incident with the hypodermic needle", and "trouble with the Halo-Stop-Ultra". Later, in Chapter 4, Dr Wood takes inspiration from the first to aid his fighting style (albeit with a stick), and in Chapter 14, it's revealed that Kroko had enough of the latter to [[spoiler:necessitate electroshock therapy, which the others use as a springboard to help revive the then-catatonic Dub]].



--> Dolly: [You really think I'm going to willingly trigger myself by walking out in front of a dog with Dub in, what, a wheelbarrow or something, so he can catch my fear?]
--> Sly: [No! I think Dub would be in a wagon, not a wheelbarrow. I don't even know what is a wheelbarrow.]

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--> Dolly: [You really think I'm going to willingly trigger myself by walking out in front of a dog with Dub [[spoiler:Dub]] in, what, a wheelbarrow or something, so he can catch my fear?]
--> Sly: [No! I think Dub [[spoiler:Dub]] would be in a wagon, not a wheelbarrow. I don't even know what is a wheelbarrow.]



* MotorMouth: Sly again, in Chapters 1 and 14 especially.



* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in Theatre/{{Fame}}.]]

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* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in Theatre/{{Fame}}.]]Theatre/{{Fame}}]]. ** Chapter 14 also includes a thinly-veiled shout-out to another Die Anstalt fanfic, "Sparkles and the Great Escape".



** Overlaps with SongFic slightly come Chapter 12, wherein the associated song is a lyrical-overlay, for lack of a better word, written and sung by the author herself.

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** Overlaps with SongFic slightly come Chapter 12, wherein the associated song is a lyrical-overlay, for lack of a better word, FilkSong written and sung by the author herself.

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* Callback / ChekhovsGun: Dr Spieler mentions in the narration of Chapter 1 that she had two therapeutic setbacks in her early days of taking over from Kindermann: an "incident with the hypodermic needle", and "trouble with the Halo-Stop-Ultra". Later, in Chapter 4, Dr Wood takes inspiration from the first to aid his fighting style (albeit with a stick), and in Chapter 14, it's revealed that Kroko had enough of the latter to [[spoiler:necessitate electroshock therapy, which the others use as a springboard to help revive the then-catatonic Dub]].



** One chapter on, Sly also has one of these, only in a more tense circumstance.
--> Dolly: [You really think I'm going to willingly trigger myself by walking out in front of a dog with Dub in, what, a wheelbarrow or something, so he can catch my fear?]
--> Sly: [No! I think Dub would be in a wagon, not a wheelbarrow. I don't even know what is a wheelbarrow.]



* MoralDissonance: Inverted to some extent with Sly, backed with WhatTheHellHero. Sly has no qualms about using his "sparks" to cause harm to the toys he needs to fight, even if Dolly has expressly said he's not to. He also doesn't mind giving pretty sever shocks to Lilo in order to aid his powers. But when it comes to [[spoiler:doing the same thing to Dub, in a piecemeal form of electroshock therapy, which we know from canon is the only way his character arc can proceed?]]
--> Sly: [No, I can't [[spoiler:give sparks to Dub]]. I don't want to. It's wrong.]



** Dr Wood: [[spoiler:MasterOfIllusion, at stage 4]]
** [[spoiler: Lyall: SuperStrength, at stage 4.]]

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** Dr Wood: [[spoiler:MasterOfIllusion, at stage 4]]
mid-stage-5 transition]]
** [[spoiler: Lyall: SuperStrength, SuperStrength; doesn't really have 'stages' in that ze was not a recognized separate identity at stage 4.]]fic's beginning]]



* TalkingToThemself: Sly manages to hash out his internal conflict and realize his immoral behaviour... with his miniature hallucination of a mouse.



* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:On some level, Dr. Wood honestly believes he's helping the Claw Association, but Chapter 9 also beats in that he's also doing it for emotional validation and the belief he should be God.]]

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:On some level, Dr. Wood honestly believes he's helping others via the Claw Association, but Chapter 9 also beats in that he's also doing it for emotional validation and the belief he should be God.]]

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** [[spoiler: Lyall: SuperStrength, at stage 4.]]



* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway, Lyall himself is actually a NobleWolf).]]

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* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway, Lyall himself zerself is actually a NobleWolf).]]

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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Kroko gets this feeling most of the time, since his flight is a minor advantage compared to the others. [[spoiler:So does Dub, at least once.]]

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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:On some level, Dr. Wood honestly believes he's helping the Claw Association, but Chapter 9 also beats in that he's also doing it for emotional validation and the belief he should be God.]]
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Kroko gets this feeling most of the time, since his flight is a minor advantage compared to the others. [[spoiler:So does Dub, at least once.]]
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* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway)]]

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* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway)]]anyway, Lyall himself is actually a NobleWolf).]]

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this; one revision removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit" and "seem", amongst other changes. But linguistic leifmotifs are still commonplace, particularly likening Dub's physical attraction to Wood to a "chill".

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this; one revision removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit" and "seem", amongst other changes. But linguistic leifmotifs leitmotifs are still commonplace, particularly likening Dub's physical attraction to Wood to a "chill"."chill".
* TheBigDamnKiss: Half-exploited half-invoked by Dub. [[spoiler:The fact that he and Wood were at a fireworks show is mere [[NewYearHasCome convenient timing]], but it was his idea for it to be '''exactly''' when the biggest firework exploded, and his power that allowed that to come to pass...]]



* DramaticIrony: For those who have played the game, the fanfic runs on this. For novices, it's more like [[Foreshadowing]].

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* DramaticIrony: For those who have played the game, the fanfic runs on this. For novices, it's more like [[Foreshadowing]].{{Foreshadowing}}.



* [[spoiler:ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: Played for Drama, in that it's the up-to-that-point SecretWeapon doing it.]]



** TheBigGuy to be: [[spoiler:Lyall]]

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** TheBigGuy to be: in training: [[spoiler:Lyall]]



* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not the exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!

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* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not the exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!4! An author's note likened it to a mixed up domino bridge.



* [[spoiler:NowOrNeverKiss]]



** Dub: N/A, at stage 1 [[spoiler:(actually the ability to [[TimeStandsStill pause time]], making him a valuable SecretWeapon)]]

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** Dub: N/A, at stage 1 [[spoiler:(actually the ability to [[TimeStandsStill pause time]], making him a valuable SecretWeapon)]]but no one knew that before the end of Chapter 2)]]



* ScheduleSlip: One that lasted fourteen months, no less.



* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes UsefulNotes/{{Hinduism}}, Shiva, to be exact), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.
* TitleDrop: Twice, of the original canon. The only name Sly is able to propose for the group in Chapter 5 is "Parapluesch", and in Chapter 10, [[spoiler:one of the things Lilo writes during his spree is ''Die Anstalt''.]]

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* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes UsefulNotes/{{Hinduism}}, Shiva, to be exact), specifically Shiva), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.
* TitleDrop: Twice, of the original canon. The only name Sly is able to propose for the group in Chapter 5 is "Parapluesch", "Paraplüsch", and in Chapter 10, [[spoiler:one of the things Lilo writes during his spree is ''Die Anstalt''.]]
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this; one revision removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit" and "seem", amongst other changes.

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this; one revision removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit" and "seem", amongst other changes. But linguistic leifmotifs are still commonplace, particularly likening Dub's physical attraction to Wood to a "chill".



* PrecisionFStrike: In Chapter 12, after Sly manages to kick off a RantInducingSlight.

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* PrecisionFStrike: In Chapter 12, after Sly manages to kick off trigger a RantInducingSlight.



** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England in this version [[FishOutOfWater and only knows a few German words]]. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active effort to help Dolly defy TranslatorBuddy.

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** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England (Manchester, to be exact) in this version [[FishOutOfWater and only knows a few German words]]. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active effort to help Dolly defy TranslatorBuddy.



* WarriorTherapist: Dr Wood

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* WarriorTherapist: Dr WoodWood, obviously.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In Chapter 13, Dr Wood explains to Dub the statistics of a submarine (in kilometres as opposed to miles) to prove a point about how being unaerodynamic isn't a detriment to speed and performance. Dub's response?
--> "Ooh, you work in the metric system! I like-y."



* DatingCatwoman: Not exactly this as of Chapter 7, but more textual than FoeRomanceSubtext too.

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* DatingCatwoman: Not exactly this as of Chapter 7, but more textual than FoeRomanceSubtext too. [[spoiler:Became this properly in Chapter 13.]]
* DramaticIrony: For those who have played the game, the fanfic runs on this. For novices, it's more like [[Foreshadowing]].



* [[OnlySaneMan Only Neurotypical Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub; despite having been in an asylum for the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:
--> "Toys without problems [[DramaticIrony don't tend to be found in asylums]]."

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* [[spoiler:NowOrNeverKiss]]
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Neurotypical Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub; Dub [[spoiler:(pre-Chapter 13's HeroicBSOD, anyway)]]; despite having been in an asylum for the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:
--> "Toys without problems [[DramaticIrony don't tend to be found in asylums]].asylums."



* ShownTheirWork: Chapter 13 has this in spades, specifically regarding certain aspects of German culture.



* YourMindMakesItReal: [[spoiler:The closest trope that comes to describing one of the techniques Wood wants to perfect. One of his long-term goals is to combine this with an inverted LotusEaterMachine.]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Dub gets called out on a phenomenally idiotic (if naive emotion-driven) decision in Chapter 13.
* YourMindMakesItReal: [[spoiler:The closest trope that comes to describing one of the techniques Wood wants to perfect.perfect, and has pretty much perfected as of Chapter 13. One of his long-term goals is to combine this with an inverted LotusEaterMachine.]]
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* TitleDrop: Twice, of the original canon. The only name Sly is able to propose for the group in Chapter 5 is "Parapluesch", and in Chapter 10, [[spoiler:one of the things Lilo writes during his spree is ''Die Anstalt''.]]
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* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes UsefulNotes/Hinduism, Shiva, to be exact), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.

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* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes UsefulNotes/Hinduism, UsefulNotes/{{Hinduism}}, Shiva, to be exact), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.
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* [[spoiler:SavageWolves (to Dolly anyway)]]
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* TheNicknamer: [[spoiler:Lyall.]] Names so far: Dolly = "Doll", Sly = "snake boy", Dr Wood = "Woodster". Lilo and Dub, [[spoiler:ze]] just refers to as their species. "Doll" has been the most consistent.
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* [[spoiler:EverythingsWorseWithWolves]]
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* PrecisionFStrike: In Chapter 12, after Sly manages to kick off a [[RantInducingSlight]].

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* PrecisionFStrike: In Chapter 12, after Sly manages to kick off a [[RantInducingSlight]].RantInducingSlight.



* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes [[UsefulNotes/Hinduism]]), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.

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* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes [[UsefulNotes/Hinduism]]), UsefulNotes/Hinduism, Shiva, to be exact), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.

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* [[spoiler:EverythingsWorseWithWolves]]



** TheSmartGuy and TheBigGuy: Lilo

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** TheSmartGuy and TheBigGuy: LiloTheSmartGuy: Lilo
** TheBigGuy to be: [[spoiler:Lyall]]



* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!

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* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not the exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!



* PrecisionFStrike: In Chapter 12, after Sly manages to kick off a [[RantInducingSlight]].
--> Dolly: [How is that my fucking problem?]



* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes [[UsefulNotes/Hinduism Shiva]]), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.

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* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly (who explicitly invokes [[UsefulNotes/Hinduism Shiva]]), [[UsefulNotes/Hinduism]]), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.



* ViolentGlaswegian: Dolly has a [[FunetikAksent Scottish accent]] when not speaking German.

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* ViolentGlaswegian: Dolly has a [[FunetikAksent Scottish accent]] accent when not speaking German.German, a FunetikAksent to boot. This is actually [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded the hell out of]] in Chapter 12:
--> Dolly: Look, Ah dornt like it either, but [the German language] jist doesnae work 'at way. We've bin '''ower''' thes.
--> Dub: Says she who says "over" as "ower".
--> Dolly: Leave mah accent out ay thes, ye ass!


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** Overlaps with SongFic slightly come Chapter 12, wherein the associated song is a lyrical-overlay, for lack of a better word, written and sung by the author herself.
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* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoilers:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!

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* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoilers:(the [[spoiler:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this; in a recent revision, they removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit", "seem" and others in an attempt to kill the time resulting from ScheduleSlip.

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this; in a recent revision, they one revision removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit", "seem" bit" and others in an attempt to kill the time resulting from ScheduleSlip."seem", amongst other changes.



* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: [[PsychoElectro Sly]]. Downplayed and justified, given thought disorder is one of the expanded symptoms of his condition. Specializes in [[{{Neologism}} Neologisms]].

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: [[PsychoElectro Sly]].Sly. Downplayed and justified, given thought disorder is one of the expanded symptoms of his condition. Specializes in [[{{Neologism}} Neologisms]].



* ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: Crosses between the two. In recent chapters, despite there being [[ThereAreNoTherapists no currently accessible therapists]], the toys have been making what would be deemed therapeutic process in a similar, but not exact, way as they do in canon. Most notably, in Chapter 10, Lilo skips Stage 3 of this therapy after oscillating between 1 and 2 for a while to go straight to Stage 4 [[spoilers:(the one with the rectus trementis)]], which actually kick-starts Sly's slide from his own stage 3 to 4!



* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub; despite having been in an asylum for the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:

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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Neurotypical Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub; despite having been in an asylum for the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:



* ScheduleSlip: One that lasted fourteen months, no less.



* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly, none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.

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* ThankTheMaker / OhMyGods!: Zigzagged. Usually the toys invoke God and Goddamn in the traditional way, but other times they say Steiff instead, in a reference to Steiff being the first company to create stuffed toys en masse. At one point, Dolly even says "For the love of Beanie Babies". Justified because, aside from Sly, Sly (who explicitly invokes [[UsefulNotes/Hinduism Shiva]]), none of the toys in canon really ''have'' a belief system.



** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England in this version [[FishOutOfWater and only knows a few German words]]. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active attempt to help Dolly defy TranslatorBuddy.

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** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England in this version [[FishOutOfWater and only knows a few German words]]. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active attempt effort to help Dolly defy TranslatorBuddy.



* VirtualSoundtrack: On the LJ copy, each post has a certain song outlined in the 'Music' qualifier; on AO3, this is recreated in the author's notes. The soundtrack is also accompanied with a moodlet to show the central character and overall theme of each chapter, for example: Chapter 2 - conflict.

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* VirtualSoundtrack: On the LJ copy, each post has a certain song outlined in the 'Music' qualifier; on AO3, this is recreated in the author's notes. The soundtrack is also accompanied with a moodlet to show the central character and overall theme of each chapter, chapter: for example: example, Chapter 2 - 2's theme is conflict.
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''A Posse Ad Esse'' is an AlternateUniverseFic for obscure web game DieAnstalt. Specifically, an AU where the six main characters all gain superpowers. Considering these characters are all disabled cuddly toys (five patients and a doctor, to be exact), the inevitable result is conflict, confusion and a different kind of therapy: experience.

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''A Posse Ad Esse'' is an AlternateUniverseFic for obscure web game DieAnstalt.''VideoGame/DieAnstalt''. Specifically, an AU where the six main characters all gain superpowers. Considering these characters are all disabled cuddly toys (five patients and a doctor, to be exact), the inevitable result is conflict, confusion and a different kind of therapy: experience.



--> Dolly: [Wood's the only one with any horrible [[hottip:intent: Absicht]], so it's safe to-]
--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[hottip:view: Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the wrong sense of the word for the context]], he can't see us through the hood.]

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--> Dolly: [Wood's the only one with any horrible [[hottip:intent: Absicht]], intent [[note]]Absicht[[/note]], so it's safe to-]
--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[hottip:view: Ansicht, view [[note]]Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the wrong sense of the word for the context]], context[[/note]], he can't see us through the hood.]
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** Sly: [[ShockAndAwe Electricity]] [[RideTheLightning combined with]] SuperSpeedster, at stage 3

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** Sly: [[ShockAndAwe Electricity]] [[RideTheLightning combined with]] SuperSpeedster, SuperSpeed, at stage 3
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It can be found [[http://posseesse.livejournal.com here]].

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It can be found on LiveJournal [[http://posseesse.livejournal.com here]].
here]]. Recently given an [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/729464/chapters/1354969 AO3 backup]] as well.



* MaxTrope: Dub's [[TheGhost unseen but oft-mentioned owner]], unnamed in canon, is here given the name of - well - [[CaptainObvious Max]]. [[spoiler:Given Dub's [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation slightly retooled backstory]], this can come across as DevelopingDoomedCharacters.]]

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* MaxTrope: Dub's [[TheGhost unseen but oft-mentioned owner]], unnamed in canon, is here given the name of - well - [[CaptainObvious Max]]. [[spoiler:Given Dub's [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation slightly retooled retooled-mostly-by-accident backstory]], this can come across as DevelopingDoomedCharacters.]]



* VirtualSoundtrack: in the Music section of each chapter, since it's on LiveJournal.

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* VirtualSoundtrack: On the LJ copy, each post has a certain song outlined in the Music section 'Music' qualifier; on AO3, this is recreated in the author's notes. The soundtrack is also accompanied with a moodlet to show the central character and overall theme of each chapter, since it's on LiveJournal.for example: Chapter 2 - conflict.
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* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in {{Fame}}.]]

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* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in {{Fame}}.Theatre/{{Fame}}.]]

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* BilingualBonus: An obscure one for the sake of a joke in Chapter 10.

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* BilingualBonus: An obscure slightly complicated one for the sake of a joke in Chapter 10.



--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[hottip:view: Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the word in the wrong sense]], he can't see us through the hood.]

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--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[hottip:view: Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the word in the wrong sense]], sense of the word for the context]], he can't see us through the hood.]



* FlatWhat and BigWhat: One right after the other in Chapter 6, courtesy of Sly.



* LiteralMinded: Kroko, as in canon.

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* LiteralMinded: Kroko, as in canon. Lilo and Sly also fall into this sometimes.



* MaxTrope: Dub's [[TheGhost unseen but oft-mentioned owner]], unnamed in canon, is here given the name of - well - [[CaptainObvious Max]]. [[spoiler:Given Dub's [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation slightly retooled backstory]], this can come across as DevelopingDoomedCharacters for DramaticIrony purposes.]]

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* MaxTrope: Dub's [[TheGhost unseen but oft-mentioned owner]], unnamed in canon, is here given the name of - well - [[CaptainObvious Max]]. [[spoiler:Given Dub's [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation slightly retooled backstory]], this can come across as DevelopingDoomedCharacters DevelopingDoomedCharacters.]]
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Toy]]: Applied more literally than usual to Dub; despite having been in an asylum
for DramaticIrony purposes.]]the best part of six months, he persists in his belief that he didn't need to be admitted there. But, as Dr Wood puts it:
--> "Toys without problems [[DramaticIrony don't tend to be found in asylums]]."



* {{Trigger}}: Dolly carries over her adverse reaction to dog bones, and fear of dogs in general, from the original canon. Kroko's aquaphobia also shows signs of this. These have both hindered and helped the team over the course of the fic.
* VillainEpisode: Dr Wood gets Chapter 9 to himself post-[[FaceHeelTurn Heel-Turn]].

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* {{Trigger}}: Dolly carries over her adverse reaction to dog bones, and fear of dogs in general, from the original canon. Kroko's aquaphobia also shows signs of this.this, since it leads to a couple of panic attacks. These have both hindered and helped the team over the course of the fic.
* VillainEpisode: Dr Wood gets Chapter 9 to himself post-[[FaceHeelTurn Heel-Turn]].Official Heel Turn]].



* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Kroko gets this feeling most of time, since his flight is a minor advantage compared to the others. [[spoiler:So does Dub, at least once.]]

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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Kroko gets this feeling most of the time, since his flight is a minor advantage compared to the others. [[spoiler:So does Dub, at least once.]]
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--> Dolly: [Wood's the only one with any horrible [[Hottip:intent: Absicht]], so it's safe to-]
--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[Hottip:view Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the word in the wrong sense]], he can't see us through the hood.]

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--> Dolly: [Wood's the only one with any horrible [[Hottip:intent: [[hottip:intent: Absicht]], so it's safe to-]
--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[Hottip:view [[hottip:view: Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the word in the wrong sense]], he can't see us through the hood.]

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this by removing redundant instances of "a little", "a bit", "seem" and others in an attempt to kill the time resulting from ScheduleSlip.

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this by removing this; in a recent revision, they removed redundant instances of "a little", "a bit", "seem" and others in an attempt to kill the time resulting from ScheduleSlip.ScheduleSlip.
* BilingualBonus: An obscure one for the sake of a joke in Chapter 10.
--> Dolly: [Wood's the only one with any horrible [[Hottip:intent: Absicht]], so it's safe to-]
--> Sly: [He doesn't ''have'' a [[Hottip:view Ansicht, a Malapropism both by spelling and by way of Sly using the word in the wrong sense]], he can't see us through the hood.]
--> Dolly: [Yes he can, and I said intent, not view.]



* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' of all things is name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in {{Fame}}.]]

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* ShoutOut: While the original was rife with shout-outs to deep or otherwise psychological works, the author makes those in this more contemporary. In Chapter 9, ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and SuperTed of all things is are name-dropped, and [[spoiler:the writingasm scene]] in Chapter 10 has shades of [[spoiler:the "I WILL READ" scene in {{Fame}}.]]
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* AltumVidetur: The title of the story, and of each chapter, [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming are all Latin phrases]], some more recognizable than others, that indicate the content within. (EG: ''A posse ad esse'' means 'from being able to being'.) Overlaps with PretentiousLatinMotto for the particularly obscure ones.

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* AltumVidetur: The title of the story, and of each chapter, [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming are all Latin phrases]], some more recognizable than others, that indicate the content within. (EG: ''A posse ad esse'' means 'from being able to being'.) Overlaps with PretentiousLatinMotto for the particularly obscure ones.ones (Incepto Ne Desistam, anyone?).



* ApologizesALot: Kroko, sometimes Dolly in a sadder mood. Most [[{{Egregious}} egregiously]] done in Chapter 8, where he says "sorry" three times in the space of 139 words.

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* ApologizesALot: Kroko, sometimes Dolly in a sadder mood. Most [[{{Egregious}} egregiously]] done in Chapter 8, where 6, when he says "sorry" three allegedly manages to say sorry for yelling at Lilo forty times in the space of 139 words.three minutes.



** Lilo: GravityMaster, between stages 1 and 2

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** Lilo: GravityMaster, GravityMaster with shades of BarrierWarrior, between stages 1 and 2



* SuddenlyVoiced

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* SuddenlyVoicedSuddenlyVoiced (a necessity)



** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England and only knows a few German words, resulting in him being a FishOutOfWater. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active attempt to defy TranslatorBuddy for Dolly.

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** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England in this version [[FishOutOfWater and only knows a few German words, resulting in him being a FishOutOfWater. words]]. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active attempt to help Dolly defy TranslatorBuddy for Dolly.TranslatorBuddy.

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-->"[Kroko. Lilo. Dolly. Sly. There is little point in me beating about the bush: all of us (...) the majority of us have gained, for lack of a better word, superpowers.]"

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-->"[Kroko. Lilo. Dolly. Sly. There is little point in me beating about the bush: all of us (...) the majority of us have gained, for lack of a better word, superpowers.]"



* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this by removing redundant instances of "a little", "a bit", "seem" and "look like".

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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: The author has been making an active attempt to avert this by removing redundant instances of "a little", "a bit", "seem" and "look like".others in an attempt to kill the time resulting from ScheduleSlip.



** CloudcuckoolandersMinder: Depending on the situation, Kroko or Dolly can operate as this.



* MaxTrope: Dub's [[TheGhost unseen but oft-mentioned owner]], unnamed in canon, is here given the name of - well - [[CaptainObvious Max]].

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* MaxTrope: Dub's [[TheGhost unseen but oft-mentioned owner]], unnamed in canon, is here given the name of - well - [[CaptainObvious Max]]. [[spoiler:Given Dub's [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation slightly retooled backstory]], this can come across as DevelopingDoomedCharacters for DramaticIrony purposes.]]



* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 has been a long time in coming...



** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England and only knows a few German words.

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** SwitchToEnglish: ...Dr Wood and Dolly's English dialogue. This, and their speaking it at all, is a necessity both for characters and readers, since Dub is actually from England and only knows a few German words. words, resulting in him being a FishOutOfWater. Mind you, he has been attempting to learn more of the to-him-foreign language in an active attempt to defy TranslatorBuddy for Dolly.

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