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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Lance tries to take Latios, so obviously they try fighting back. His dragonite knocks Latios, Pikachu, and Charizard out in one hit. Fortunately, it's subverted right afterward where Latias gets a surprise attack in and disarms him by taking his pokeballs.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Lance tries to take Latios, so obviously they try fighting back. His dragonite Dragonite knocks Latios, Pikachu, and Charizard out in one hit. Fortunately, it's subverted right afterward where Latias gets a surprise attack in and disarms him by taking his pokeballs.]]
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** [[spoiler: Recently Jessie and Jame's after the incident with Rico have resigned from Team Rocket and have established respect among the Main crew.]]
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** [[spoiler: Recently Jessie and Jame's James, after the incident with Rico Rico, have resigned from Team Rocket and have established respect among the Main crew.]]
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5753031/1/A_New_Chance_At_Life A New Chance at Life]]'' ('''Completed but under minor rewrite''')
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It's also worth checking out the author's other stories: ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6575222/1/Gods_And_Mortals Gods And Mortals]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8068957/1/Stopping_The_Storm Stopping The Storm]]''.
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It's also worth checking out the author's other stories: story: ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6575222/1/Gods_And_Mortals Gods And Mortals]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8068957/1/Stopping_The_Storm Stopping The Storm]]''.
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The first story in the series, A New Chance at Life, was started in Feb. 16th 2010 and completed on May 26th 2011. The story starts at the end of [[Anime/PokemonHeroes Movie #5]], where [[OlympusMons Latios']] HeroicSacrifice is averted, so now the dragon is very much alive. Out of gratitude and a desire for adventure, Latios and his sister Latias decide to join Ash on his adventure. The story covers the remainder of Ash's journey's through the Johto Region (based on the author's [[WildMassGuessing belief regarding the location of Altomare]]), up until the conclusion of the Silver Conference and its immediate aftermath. It ends with a SequelHook leading up to our heroes' adventures in the Hoenn Region.
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The first story in the series, A New Chance at Life, was started in Feb. 16th 2010 and completed on May 26th 2011. The story starts at the end of [[Anime/PokemonHeroes Movie #5]], where [[OlympusMons Latios']] HeroicSacrifice is averted, so now the dragon is very much alive. Out of gratitude and a desire for adventure, Latios and his sister Latias decide to join Ash on his adventure. The story covers the remainder of Ash's journey's through the Johto Region (based on the author's [[WildMassGuessing belief regarding the location of Altomare]]), Alto Mare]]), up until the conclusion of the Silver Conference and its immediate aftermath. It ends with a SequelHook leading up to our heroes' adventures in the Hoenn Region.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5753031/1/A_New_Chance_At_Life A New Chance at Life]]'' ('''Completed''')
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* GenreSavvy: During Team Magma's raid on the Oldale Town ruins, one of the grunts worries about the possibility of a trainer in the Pokémon Centre above the ranks of most rookies - who might even have a Legendary Pokémon in his possession. [[TemptingFate His teammates brush him off]]. Unsurprisingly, he cries ProperlyParanoid when his totally-unlikely guess turns out to be true, and is much quicker to recognise their imminent defeat in a fight of "quality versus quantity".
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* BigBad:
** BigBadEnsemble: Maxie and Archie in "A New Chance For Adventure" (if the preview is to be believed).
** BiggerBad: Giovanni, who in contrast to canon has an active sub-plot; one which will play a role during the sequel.
** BigBadEnsemble: Maxie and Archie in "A New Chance For Adventure" (if the preview is to be believed).
** BiggerBad: Giovanni, who in contrast to canon has an active sub-plot; one which will play a role during the sequel.
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* BigBad:
**BigBadEnsemble: Maxie and Archie in "A New Chance For Adventure" (if the preview is to be believed).
** BiggerBad: Giovanni, who in contrast to canon has an active sub-plot; one which will play a role during the sequel.believed).
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** To further proof it, [[spoiler: He killed Rico after Ash ordered to let him live]]
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** Bianca ends up joining the cast in ANCFA.
** [[spoiler: Jessie and James end up robbed by Rico, but unlike in the main story, they end up begging for Ash's help. This forces them into [[HeelFaceTurn quitting Team Rocket]]]]
** [[spoiler: Jessie and James end up robbed by Rico, but unlike in the main story, they end up begging for Ash's help. This forces them into [[HeelFaceTurn quitting Team Rocket]]]]
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** Bianca ends up joining the cast in ANCFA.
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** Ash has a full team when he reaches Petalburg City (and isn't going to travel with May and Max full-time), among them [[spoiler:Pidgeot]]; so he battles and defeats Norman, earning the Balance Badge ''much'' sooner than in canon.
** [[spoiler: Jessie and James end up robbed by Rico, but unlike in the main story, they end up begging for Ash's help. This forces them into [[HeelFaceTurn quitting TeamRocket]]]]Rocket]].]]
** Ash has a full team when he reaches Petalburg City (and isn't going to travel with May and Max full-time), among them [[spoiler:Pidgeot]]; so he battles and defeats Norman, earning the Balance Badge ''much'' sooner than in canon.
** [[spoiler: Jessie and James end up robbed by Rico, but unlike in the main story, they end up begging for Ash's help. This forces them into [[HeelFaceTurn quitting Team
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* KnightOfCerebus: [[BigBad Giovanni]], whose scenes are much darker than the rest of the story (which retains the adventure/friendship themes primarily).
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Ash is very firm on this one when it's brought up as an option, and has to fight Latios to convince him to [[spoiler:not kill Rico for what he did to Larvitar... Even then, [[AntiHero Latios]] [[SubvertedTrope does]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch it]], albeit discreetly, because he cannot personally let the pain Larvitar endures thanks to Rico go unpunished.]]
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler:Rico had been mentioned as the one who bought Larvitar's mother from the Poacher Bros., which helps convince Ash and co. to track him and [[EnemyMine help Team Rocket along the way]], but when Ash's group finally catch up to him he's already sold her a while ago... to Team Magma. Needless to say, Larvitar is distraught and the others are furious.]]
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* MysteriousProtector:[[spoiler: Skailyn, a Shiny Rayquaza and friend of Latios and Latias, secretly aids the team in their rescue of Larvitar's mother from Rico, has one of her minions erase the memory of Officer jenny so Latios isn't charged with Rico's murder, and sets up a protective sphere(that they are unaware of) to shield them from the evil spirit that tried to kill them over a century ago.]]
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* MysteriousProtector:[[spoiler: Skailyn, a Shiny Rayquaza and friend of Latios and Latias, secretly aids the team in their rescue of Larvitar's mother from Rico, has one of her minions erase the memory of Officer jenny Jenny so Latios isn't charged with Rico's murder, and sets up a protective sphere(that sphere (that they are unaware of) to shield them from the evil spirit that tried to kill them over a century ago.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: At the end of ''Hunting the Hunter'', Ash and Officer Jenny are able to rescue Team Rocket's Pokemon, but arrive too late to save Larvitar's mother]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: At the end of ''Hunting the Hunter'', Ash and Officer Jenny are able to rescue Team Rocket's Pokemon, Pokemon and arrest Rico, but arrive too late to save Larvitar's mother]].
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* XanatosGambit: Giovanni engages in one. He allows Jessie, James, and Meowth to pursue Ash, and report where he is. If they capture Pikachu and the Eon Twins for him, he wins. If they don't, he can still figure out where Ash is if he wishes to take him down, or simply stay ahead of him and keep him out of his plans. [[spoiler: He never accounted for them to quit though.]]
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* XanatosGambit: Giovanni engages in one. He allows Jessie, James, and Meowth to pursue Ash, and report where he is. If they capture Pikachu and the Eon Twins for him, he wins. If they don't, he can still figure out where Ash is if he wishes to take him down, or simply stay ahead of him and keep him out of his plans. [[spoiler: He never accounted for imagined them to quit quitting though.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: At the end of ''Hunting the Hunter'', Ash and Officer Jenny are able to rescue Team Rocket's Pokemon, but arrive too late to save Larvitar's mother]].
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** This is already become evident in the sequel, with the appearance of Team Magma, the return of the evil entity that was apparently responsible for [[spoiler: the death of Latios and Latias' dad through a deadly soul curse]], and [[spoiler: Latios ''crushing one of the villains to death in cold blood'' after gloating about selling Larvitar's mother to Team Magma.]]
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** This is already become evident in the sequel, with the appearance of Team Magma, the return of the evil entity that was apparently responsible for [[spoiler: the death of Latios and Latias' dad through a deadly soul curse]], and [[spoiler: Latios ''crushing one of the villains to death in cold blood'' after gloating about selling Larvitar's mother to Team Magma.blood''.]]
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* XanatosGambit: Giovanni uses one. Continue to allow Jessie, James, and Meowth to pursue Ash, and report where he is. If they capture Pikachu and the Eon Twins for him, he wins. If they don't, he can still figure out where Ash is if he wishes to take him down, or simply stay ahead of him and keep him out of his plans. [[spoiler: He never accounted for them to quit though.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Annie and Oakley make it clear they will do whatever it takes to make Ash pay for ruining their plans
** The Fearow near Pallet Town eagerly desires to [[DisproportionateRetribution kill]] Ash, blaming him for all his troubles. [[spoiler: Pidgeot defeats him before he gets that chance though]].
** [[spoiler: Rico tries to knife Ash after being completely and soundly defeated. With Ash's Pokemon nearby, he fails completely]].
** Giovanni himself devotes some of his resources to tracking down Ash, and possibly defeating him.
* XanatosGambit: Giovanniuses engages in one. Continue to allow He allows Jessie, James, and Meowth to pursue Ash, and report where he is. If they capture Pikachu and the Eon Twins for him, he wins. If they don't, he can still figure out where Ash is if he wishes to take him down, or simply stay ahead of him and keep him out of his plans. [[spoiler: He never accounted for them to quit though.]]
** The Fearow near Pallet Town eagerly desires to [[DisproportionateRetribution kill]] Ash, blaming him for all his troubles. [[spoiler: Pidgeot defeats him before he gets that chance though]].
** [[spoiler: Rico tries to knife Ash after being completely and soundly defeated. With Ash's Pokemon nearby, he fails completely]].
** Giovanni himself devotes some of his resources to tracking down Ash, and possibly defeating him.
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* FamedInStory: After competing in the Silver Conference with Latios, Ash gains a lot of fame, fans ([[FanBoy especially Max]]), and the recognition he never got in canon, with various figures knowing him from Johto, or from the fact that he has Latios.
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* FamedInStory: After competing in the Silver Conference with Latios, Ash gains a lot of the fame, fans ([[FanBoy especially Max]]), and the recognition he never got in canon, with various figures from Johto to Hoenn knowing him from Johto, or from as the fact that he has kid with the Latios.
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* AttentionDeficitCreatorDisorder: After posting the first three chapters of ANCFA monthly, the story wasn't updated for over four months. This is because the author diverted his attention to his other stories - one a ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8068957/1/Stopping_The_Storm massive oneshot]]'' which grew beyond the predicted word count. With S.T.S. completed, he ''finally'' posted the new chapter.
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* TheDreaded: Amazingly, '''ASH''' gets this treatment, since he is now known after Johto as the "kid with the Latios." It is especially shown when Giovanni is given assignments to two of his agents, who also have a bone to pick. He is basically ordering them to infiltrate Team Aqua and Magma, but he also warns them to stay away from Ash unless they know they can win. To put that in perspective, Giovanni is more afraid of dealing with a kid ''not thirteen years of age'' then with infiltrating another criminal enterprise.
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* TheDreaded: Amazingly, '''ASH''' gets this treatment, since he is now known after Johto as the "kid with the Latios." It is especially shown when Giovanni is given assignments to two of his agents, who also have a bone to pick. He is basically ordering them to infiltrate Team Aqua and Magma, but he also warns them to stay away from Ash unless they know they can win. To put that in perspective, Giovanni is more afraid of dealing with a kid ''not thirteen years of age'' then with infiltrating another criminal enterprise.
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* EntitledBastard: Jessie and James end up begging Ash to rescue their Pokemon from. Initially everyone except [[AllLovingHero Ash]] and [[GenkiGirl Latias]] outright refused. But when they learn it was Rico they proceed to give chase, since he was the one who purchased Larvitar's mother. [[spoiler: It is defied later when after Ash returns their Pokemon, Brock lectures them on the fact that the kid who they've been chasing and trying to rob for years just saved their Pokemon, and it would be disgusting to ever try and rob him again. They end up resigning from Team Rocket.]]
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* EntitledBastard: Jessie and James end up begging Ash to rescue their Pokemon from. Initially everyone except [[AllLovingHero Ash]] and [[GenkiGirl Latias outright refused. But when they learn it was Rico they proceed to give chase, since he was the one who purchased Larvitar's mother. [[spoiler: It is defied later when after Ash returns their Pokemon, Brock lectures them on the fact that the kid who they've been chasing and trying to rob for years just saved their Pokemon, and it would be disgusting to ever try and rob him again. They end up resigning from Team Rocket.]]
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* EntitledBastard: Jessie and James end up begging Ash to rescue their Pokemon from. Initially everyone except [[AllLovingHero Ash]] and [[GenkiGirl Latias Latias]] outright refused. But when they learn it was Rico they proceed to give chase, since he was the one who purchased Larvitar's mother. [[spoiler: It is defied later when after Ash returns their Pokemon, Brock lectures them on the fact that the kid who they've been chasing and trying to rob for years just saved their Pokemon, and it would be disgusting to ever try and rob him again. They end up resigning from Team Rocket.]]
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* EntitledBastard:[[spoiler: Jessie and James end up begging Ash to rescue their Pokemon from. Initially everyone (except Ash and Latias) outright refuse. But when they learn it was Rico they proceed to give chase. It is defied later when after Ash returns their Pokemon, Brock forces them to face the fact that the kid who they've been chasing and trying to rob for years just saved their Pokemon, and it would be disgusting to ever try and rob him again. They end up resigning from Team Rocket.]]
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* EntitledBastard:[[spoiler: EntitledBastard: Jessie and James end up begging Ash to rescue their Pokemon from. Initially everyone (except Ash except [[AllLovingHero Ash]] and Latias) [[GenkiGirl Latias outright refuse. refused. But when they learn it was Rico they proceed to give chase. chase, since he was the one who purchased Larvitar's mother. [[spoiler: It is defied later when after Ash returns their Pokemon, Brock forces lectures them to face on the fact that the kid who they've been chasing and trying to rob for years just saved their Pokemon, and it would be disgusting to ever try and rob him again. They end up resigning from Team Rocket.]]
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [[spoiler: Giovanni realizes that one of his agents, if they manage to capture a Legendary Pokemon, could very well betray him, so he created a control panel that gives him absolute authority over any incarcerated Legendary, even the ones captured by other agents.]]
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* [[GenkiGirl Genki Dragoness]]: Latias, very much so.
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* XanatosGambit: Giovanni uses one. Continue to allow Jessie and James to pursue Ash, and report where he is. If they capture Pikachu and the Eon Twins for him, he wins. If they don't, he can still figure out where Ash is if he wishes to take him down, or simply stay ahead of him and keep him out of his plans.
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* XanatosGambit: Giovanni uses one. Continue to allow Jessie Jessie, James, and James Meowth to pursue Ash, and report where he is. If they capture Pikachu and the Eon Twins for him, he wins. If they don't, he can still figure out where Ash is if he wishes to take him down, or simply stay ahead of him and keep him out of his plans. [[spoiler: He never accounted for them to quit though.]]
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* StoryArc: A few of these are happening simultaneously:
** Larvitar's search for his mother.
** Team Rocket's plan for world domination
** Team Magma and Aqua's own respective plans for the world.
** [[spoiler: The return of the Father Latios and his attempt to capture his mortal enemy and reunite with his children.]]
** Larvitar's search for his mother.
** Team Rocket's plan for world domination
** Team Magma and Aqua's own respective plans for the world.
** [[spoiler: The return of the Father Latios and his attempt to capture his mortal enemy and reunite with his children.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Giovanni, and by extension the Team Rocket higher-ups receive this treatment. For the most part he stays in the shadows while the bumbling Team Rocket trio tries to rob people. Here, his experiments against Pokemon are given more prominence, like the creation of slave Pokemon, who are totally devoid of empathy and are raised to blindly follow their trainer. [[spoiler: And let's not forgot Project Incarceration.]]
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* TimeAbyss: Many of the older Legendaries have been around for millions of years. [[spoiler: A century in a Soul Dew doesn't really bother Father Latios as much as missing out on raising his children.]] The infant Lugia encountered in the Whirl Islands is alone older than human history.
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