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* {{Homage}}: The last scene in chapter 4 is actually a reference to the "Series/TwilightZone: Tower of Terror" ride at Disney parks. The building is called the "Heywood Tower Hotel" (as opposed to Hollywood Tower Hotel) and Luna uses the elevator to go directly to the dreamlands (as opposed to how the narrator for the Disney ride says the elevator will take riders "directly to the Twilight Zone").

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* {{Homage}}: The setting of the last scene in chapter 4 is actually a reference to the "Series/TwilightZone: Tower of Terror" ride at Disney parks. The building is called the "Heywood Tower Hotel" (as opposed to Hollywood Tower Hotel) and Luna uses the elevator to go directly to the dreamlands (as opposed to how the narrator for the Disney ride says the elevator will take riders "directly to the Twilight Zone").parks.
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The story now has a sequel: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/124884/a-hairier-problem-rise-of-the-furball A Hairier Problem: Rise of the Furball]]''.
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I remember the trap resetting itself.


* RubeGoldbergHatesYourGuts: In order to protect the Elements of Harmony better than the magic door Discord easily bypassed, Celestia ends up creating a rather elaborate deathtrap similar to a Rube Goldberg machine that would instantly kill anypony other than herself and Twilight Sparkle who tried to get the Elements by firing a large number of exploding crossbows to make the entire trap explode. It backfires spectacularly when Celestia and Luna need to get the Elements and Celestia finds disarming the trap is significantly harder than she thought.

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* RubeGoldbergHatesYourGuts: In order to protect the Elements of Harmony better than the magic door Discord easily bypassed, Celestia ends up creating a rather elaborate deathtrap similar to a Rube Goldberg machine that would instantly kill anypony other than herself and Twilight Sparkle who tried to get the Elements by firing a large number of exploding crossbows to make the entire trap explode.explode or reset. It backfires spectacularly when Celestia and Luna need to get the Elements and Celestia finds disarming the trap is significantly harder than she thought.
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** During a flashback sequence, when Sable Loam and Fair Vista are having lunch in a restaurant, they use the pseudonyms [[VideoGame/StoryOfTheBlanks Roneo and Starlet]].
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** A new pony in town, Sandalwood, is a deliberate AlternateUniverse version of DJ Martinez from ''[[Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl All-American Girl]]''

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** A new pony in town, Sandalwood, is a deliberate AlternateUniverse version of DJ Martinez from ''[[Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl All-American Girl]]''''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl''.
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** A new pony in town, Sandalwood, is a deliberate AlternateUniverse version of DJ Martinez from ''[[Fanfic/ShinzakurasAllAmericanGirl All-American Girl]]''

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** A new pony in town, Sandalwood, is a deliberate AlternateUniverse version of DJ Martinez from ''[[Fanfic/ShinzakurasAllAmericanGirl ''[[Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl All-American Girl]]''

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* AllPeriodsArePMS: Forced to try and explain her recent strange behavior, Applejack gives the reason as being this. Everypony believes her.
** MenstrualMenace: Later in the story [[spoiler: Applejack actually has to go though "the joys of marehood"]] and [[spoiler: her werewolf hormones end up causing every dog in town to chase her]].



* MenstrualMenace: Forced to try and explain her recent strange behavior, Applejack gives the reason as being an extremely bad case of this. Everypony believes her.
** Later this is subverted in the story when [[spoiler: Applejack actually has to go though "the joys of marehood"]] and [[spoiler: her werewolf hormones end up causing every dog in town to chase her]].
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Expanding who Fair Vista is.


* [[spoiler: GenerationXerox: Applejack looks strikingly similar to Fair Vista because she is a direct descendant. This is also why Applejack didn't become a mindless wolf: Fair Vista's genes were immune to the lobotomy that the lycanthropy usually causes, and Apple inherited that from her.]]

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* [[spoiler: GenerationXerox: Applejack looks strikingly similar to Fair Vista Vista, [[BigBad Stable Loam]]'s mate, because she is a direct descendant. This is also why Applejack didn't become a mindless wolf: Fair Vista's genes were immune to the lobotomy that the lycanthropy usually causes, and Apple inherited that from her.]]
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* [[spoiler: GenerationXerox: Applejack looks strikingly similar to Fair Vista because she is a direct descendant. This is also why Applejack didn't become a mindless wolf: Fair Vista's genes were immune to the lobotomy that the lycanthropy usually causes, and Apple inherited that from her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Twilight uses an apple and the chariot transformation spell from ''The Best Night Ever'' on the CMC's car so that everyone can help track down Applejack. The combination turns out to create a truck.]]

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** [[spoiler: Twilight uses an apple and the chariot transformation spell from ''The ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver The Best Night Ever'' Ever]]'' on the CMC's car so that everyone can help track down Applejack. The combination turns out to create a truck.]]



* CallForward: There's quite a few to the episode ''Magical Mystery Cure''.

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* CallForward: There's quite a few to the episode ''Magical ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure Magical Mystery Cure''.Cure]]'', mainly Star Swirl's book.
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** The narrator on Fluttershy's documentary on trees keeps repeating [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus "the Larch".]]
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** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[LetsPlay/{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], then wondering if that only works on elephants. Twilight yells at Pinkie, asking of she looks like a {{dwarf|Fortress}}.

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** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[LetsPlay/{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], area with lava]], then wondering if that only works on elephants. Twilight yells at Pinkie, asking of she looks like a {{dwarf|Fortress}}.
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Linking directly to Boatmurdered


** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], then wondering if that only works on elephants. Twilight yells at Pinkie, asking of she looks like a {{dwarf|Fortress}}.

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** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[{{Boatmurdered}} [[LetsPlay/{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], then wondering if that only works on elephants. Twilight yells at Pinkie, asking of she looks like a {{dwarf|Fortress}}.

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Adding another example to Awesome Personnel Carrier, as well as other minor tweaks.


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** Played straight later on when the vehicle Lyra and Sandalwood were building turns out to be much more reliable [[spoiler: and ends up being the means as to how the duo save Applejack from a crowd of dogs chasing her through town]]
* BodyHorror: Comes with the territory of involving werewolves, but even then [[spoiler: Applejack's first transformation into her wolf form is rather traumatic in the description from her view point]]

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** [[spoiler: Twilight uses an apple and the chariot transformation spell from ''The Best Night Ever'' on the CMC's car so that everyone can help track down Applejack. The combination turns out to create a truck.]]
* BodyHorror: Comes with the territory of involving werewolves, but even then [[spoiler: Applejack's first transformation into her wolf form is rather traumatic in the description from her view point]]point.]]



** [[spoiler: Applejack also initially thinks that being a werewolf could actually be pretty cool shortly after undergoing her first transformation.]]

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** [[spoiler: Applejack also initially thinks that being a werewolf could actually be pretty cool shortly after undergoing her first transformation. She slowly changes her mind, though.]]



* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: the werewolf in this case is a pony/wolf rather than the usual.
* PainfulTransformation: [[spoiler: Applejack's first change into her wolf-like form]]

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* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: the werewolf in this case is a pony/wolf rather than the usual.
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* PainfulTransformation: [[spoiler: Applejack's first change into her wolf-like form]]form.]]



** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], then wondering if that only works on elephants.

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** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], then wondering if that only works on elephants. Twilight yells at Pinkie, asking of she looks like a {{dwarf|Fortress}}.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/92460/a-hairy-problem A Hairy Problem]]'' by BlueBastard is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/92460/a-hairy-problem A Hairy Problem]]'' by BlueBastard [=BlueBastard=] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.



** In Chapter 17, it's revealed that [[spoiler: the parents were attacked by a werewolf Celestia thinks was Sable Loam, but they survived and are said to have become werewolves themselves. Somehow this ties into the mysterious circumstances of how they simply went into the woods one winter night and were found the next morning having apparently died in a fight with something]]

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** In Chapter 17, it's revealed that [[spoiler: the parents were attacked by a werewolf Celestia thinks was Sable Loam, but they survived and are said to have become werewolves themselves. Somehow this ties into the mysterious circumstances of how they simply went into the woods one winter night and were found the next morning having apparently died in a fight with something]]something.]]


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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: [[spoiler:In order for Applejack to break the werewolf curse on herself, she has to kill Sable Loam. In the end, she gladly does so.]]
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** She has a similar moment when sneaking around the Cutie Mark Crusaders as a wolf to avoid detection so she can change back into her pony form. She even imagines Scootaloo as a chicken once.
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** Pinkie once mentions getting rid of timberwolves by [[{{Boatmurdered}} pulling a lever and flooding the area]], then wondering if that only works on elephants.
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* CallForward: There's quite a few to the episode ''Magical Mystery Cure''.
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: Referenced by name in chapter 7.
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** In Chapter 17, it's revealed that [spoiler: the parents were attacked by a werewolf Celestia thinks was Sable Loam, but they survived and are said to have become werewolves themselves. Somehow this ties into the mysterious circumstances of how they simply went into the woods one winter night and were found the next morning having apparently died in a fight with something]]

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** In Chapter 17, it's revealed that [spoiler: [[spoiler: the parents were attacked by a werewolf Celestia thinks was Sable Loam, but they survived and are said to have become werewolves themselves. Somehow this ties into the mysterious circumstances of how they simply went into the woods one winter night and were found the next morning having apparently died in a fight with something]]

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** [[spoiler: Applejack also initially thinks that being a werewolf could actually be pretty cool shortly after undergoing her first transformation]]

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** [[spoiler: Applejack also initially thinks that being a werewolf could actually be pretty cool shortly after undergoing her first transformation]]transformation.]]



** The author has also hinted that even the reason the parents are dead is considerably more complex than that.

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** [[spoiler: Applejack eventually starts fearing this herself after she thinks Rainbow Dash's plot looks good enough to literally eat.]]
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*** Other characters from this story also get mentioned when their names show up in minor places (I.E. in a hotel guestbook).
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* AwesomePersonnelCarrier: subverted with the CMC's "car" which is anything but awesome and causes the events of the fic to occur through its crash.
** Played straight later on when the vehicle Lyra and Sandalwood were building turns out to be much more reliable [[spoiler: and ends up being the means as to how the duo save Applejack from a crowd of dogs chasing her through town]]


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** Later this is subverted in the story when [[spoiler: Applejack actually has to go though "the joys of marehood"]] and [[spoiler: her werewolf hormones end up causing every dog in town to chase her]].
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* InfoDump: Chapter 4

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* InfoDump: Chapter 44, also qualifies as LectureAsExposition.
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* AffectionateParody: Rarity tells Sandalwood that they'll get along fabulously, and indeed they do, when in the original fic Sandalwood is based on;''[[Fanfic/ShinzakurasAllAmericanGirl All-American Girl]]'', Sandalwood (a.k.a. DJ Martinez) and her birth mother Rarity absolutely hate each other.



* ShoutOut: A new pony in town, Sandalwood, is a deliberate AlternateUniverse version of DJ Martinez from ''[[Fanfic/ShinzakurasAllAmericanGirl All-American Girl]]''

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*** This makes the AffectionateParody reference of [[spoiler: Rarity and Sandalwood getting along "fabulously"]] even more wrong in context.



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* SchizoTech: Equestria now has a limited number of TV sets with accompanying VCR players and a small number of movies on tapes. It's implied only the princesses and the mane six have such devices due to them still being highly experimental, but even then Queen Chrysalis somehow managed to steal a TV and VCR for herself.

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* SchizoTech: Equestria now has a limited number of TV sets with accompanying VCR players and a small number of movies on tapes. It's implied only the princesses and the mane six have such devices due to them still being highly experimental, but even then Queen Chrysalis somehow managed to steal a TV and VCR for herself. At the same time video game cabinets have existed in Ponyville for quite a while in show canon.
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** Iron Will's "hunting" gear bears more than a passing resemblance to [[VideoGame/SplinterCell Sam Fisher's usual look]]
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* PredatoryBusiness: Subverted. Rich's Barnyard Bargains would appear to be this, but its owner Filthy Rich is described as not wanting to drive every small business in town into bankruptcy.

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* PredatoryBusiness: Subverted. Rich's Barnyard Bargains would appear to be this, but its owner Filthy Rich is described as not wanting to drive every small business in town into bankruptcy. Rich's main competition; Stallmart, on the other hand...
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* EasilyForgiven: Even though she got pinned to a wall and nearly choked out by a raging, short tempered Applejack, Sandalwood is quick to forgive her at a later luncheon where Applejack apologizes for the bad behavior.


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* SchizoTech: Equestria now has a limited number of TV sets with accompanying VCR players and a small number of movies on tapes. It's implied only the princesses and the mane six have such devices due to them still being highly experimental, but even then Queen Chrysalis somehow managed to steal a TV and VCR for herself.


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** One of the new restaurants in Ponyville is called [[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim The Bannered Mare]]


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* StarsAreSouls: Much like in the episode [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E9AppleFamilyReunion Apple Family Reunion]], a pair of shooting stars are implied to be the deceased Apple parents, except in this case Applejack outright says the stars are their parents looking down on them.

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