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* OverlyPreparedGag: Refer to the ForrestGump joke above. There was around three months of setup for that. Also the hella-copter pun below, which was being set up [[UpToEleven nearly half a year]]. Totallynotabrony loves the LongGame.
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* OverlyPreparedGag: Refer to the ForrestGump joke above.in the ComedicSociopathy entry. There was around three months of setup for that. Also the hella-copter pun below, which was being set up [[UpToEleven nearly half a year]]. Totallynotabrony loves the LongGame.
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** Colombia was perfectly happy to fulfill her role of starting a presidential debate for Valiant, then blowing her brains out when her task was accomplished. Like above, this is because she was programmed to be happy with this state of affairs.
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* AGodAmI / AnswersToTheNameOfGod: After coming back from space Valiant claims to be God. And now after his [[spoiler: apparent death]] whenever someone says "Thank God" there is a booming "You're welcome" from the sky in Valliant's voice.
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* AGodAmI / AnswersToTheNameOfGod: After coming back from space Valiant claims to be God. And now after his [[spoiler: apparent death]] whenever someone says "Thank God" there is a booming "You're welcome" from the sky in Valliant's Valiant's voice.
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* NoodleIncident: We never see exactly what happened in this story's version of EquestriaGirls, but it left Sunset Shimmer [[BrokenBird broken]] for half of season 4.
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* NoodleIncident: We never see exactly what happened in this story's version of EquestriaGirls, ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'', but it left Sunset Shimmer [[BrokenBird broken]] for half of season 4.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Non-soul selling type. [[spoiler: Braeburn makes up a villain as part of a plan to get Tin Mare to let him remove her personality locks. He gets Sir Win's help.]] Sir Win {{Lampshades}} this.
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* DealWithTheDevil: DealWithTheDevil:
** Non-soul selling type. [[spoiler: Braeburn makes up a villain as part of a plan to get Tin Mare to let him remove her personality locks. He gets Sir Win's help.]] Sir Win {{Lampshades}}this.this.
** [[spoiler: Valiant came BackFromTheDead by making a deal with the most [[GodsNeedPrayerBadly believed in]] diety he could find: Santa Claus.]]
** Non-soul selling type. [[spoiler: Braeburn makes up a villain as part of a plan to get Tin Mare to let him remove her personality locks. He gets Sir Win's help.]] Sir Win {{Lampshades}}
** [[spoiler: Valiant came BackFromTheDead by making a deal with the most [[GodsNeedPrayerBadly believed in]] diety he could find: Santa Claus.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite his own claims and what you'd see reading this page, Valiant does care for his friends and tries to protect Equestria. He's just not too concerned over things like collateral damage.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite his own claims and what you'd see assume from reading this page, Valiant does care for his friends and tries to protect Equestria. He's just not too concerned over things like collateral damage.
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** There was also the time during Keep Calm and Flutter on that multiple characters commented on Valiant's [[UnstoppableRage homicidal rage]] against Discord using the recorder the entire story is apparently told through.
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* DoorStopper: As of September 2016 the story is at 328,000 words. Also, words per chapter has slowly drifted up since season three, with only a few chapters having less than 2000 words at least. And that's not even getting into all the side stories listed above.
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* ComicallyInvincibleHero: Valiant has been: struck by lightning twice in the same day, survived serious alcohol poisoning, fell from the sky to punch Sombra in the face, cut his way out of a hydra's stomach, the list goes on and on. [[spoiler: It took Heaven and Hell working together to put him down.]]
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* ComicallyInvincibleHero: Valiant has been: struck by lightning twice in the same day, survived serious alcohol poisoning, fell from the sky to punch Sombra in the face, cut his way out of a hydra's stomach, the list goes on and on. [[spoiler: It took Heaven Heaven, Hell, and Hell a communist unicorn working together to put him down.]]
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* BattleCouple: Valiant and Sunset. Trixie and Daring when they are not... [[GirlOnGirlIsHot busy]]. Also Guinness and Rainbow, assuming Rainbow didn't make him stay home and keep an eye on the kids.
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* BattleCouple: Valiant and Sunset. Trixie and Daring when they are they're not... [[GirlOnGirlIsHot busy]]. Also Guinness and Rainbow, assuming Rainbow didn't make him stay home and keep an eye on the kids.
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* AntiHero: Plymoth Valiant. He's killed countless ponies, hijacked an American battleship, ordered to have an admitted {{Jerkass}} castrated because he disliked him, yet has saved Equestria repeatedly, even if some consider his methods a tad, [[MurderIsTheBestSolution extreme]].
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* AntiHero: Plymoth Valiant. He's killed countless ponies, hijacked an American battleship, warship, ordered to have an admitted {{Jerkass}} castrated because he disliked him, yet has saved Equestria repeatedly, even if some consider his methods a tad, tad [[MurderIsTheBestSolution extreme]].
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* BattleCouple: Valiant and Sunset. Trixie and Daring when their not... [[GirlOnGirlIsHot busy]]. Also Guinness and Rainbow, assuming Rainbow didn't make him stay home and keep an eye on the kids.
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* BattleCouple: Valiant and Sunset. Trixie and Daring when their they are not... [[GirlOnGirlIsHot busy]]. Also Guinness and Rainbow, assuming Rainbow didn't make him stay home and keep an eye on the kids.
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* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: Twilight has repeatedly been this, both with Valiant and more recently with Cordoba. Results are, mixed.
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** The monstrosity airframe has survived being crashed into stuff, gone through a forest fire, and been left underwater long enough for the crusaders to figure out how to fish it out.
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* LostTechnology: Inevitable as Valiant never shared plans for anything with anyone, and his [[HeroWithBadPublicity reputation]] means many ponies tend to regard his stuff as, "Touch it and something horrible will happen."
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* LostTechnology: Inevitable as Valiant never shared plans for anything with anyone, anyone and his [[HeroWithBadPublicity reputation]] means many ponies tend to regard his stuff as, as "Touch it and something horrible will happen."
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* NuclearWeaponsTaboo: Averted due to Equestria having no real concept of wmds. A [[NoodleImplements nuclear bomb and a shipping container of bacon]] were launched at the moon, creating an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot artificial alicorn political candidate.]]
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* NuclearWeaponsTaboo: Averted due to Equestria having no real concept of wmds. [=WMDs=]. A [[NoodleImplements nuclear bomb and a shipping container full of bacon]] were launched at the moon, creating an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot artificial alicorn political candidate.]]
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* SlidingScaleOfRobotIntelligence: Tin Mare rates around 3, being very similar to a normal pony, if said pony spoke in MachineMonotone, could be uploaded into a [[IncrediblyLamePun hella-copter]], and was equipped with [[MoreDakka lots of guns]].
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* SlidingScaleOfRobotIntelligence: Tin Mare rates around 3, being very similar to a normal pony, if said pony spoke in MachineMonotone, could be uploaded into a [[IncrediblyLamePun hella-copter]], hella-copter]] and was equipped with [[MoreDakka lots of guns]].
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** Valiant wanted to try to make a cyborg, and Braeburn was already missing several limbs. Unfortunately for Braeburn, his opinions on the surgery were ignored.
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** Valiant wanted to try to make a cyborg, cyborg and Braeburn was already missing several limbs. Unfortunately for Braeburn, his opinions on the surgery were ignored.
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** Also Wind Rider's Wonderbolts. And presumably more as it was stated Valiant's death created a large power-vacuum in Equestria
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** Also Wind Rider's Wonderbolts. And presumably more as it was stated Valiant's death [[spoiler: death]] created a large power-vacuum in EquestriaEquestria.
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler: Cracker/Celestia and Cheese/Luna.]]
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''More Dreams'', updated during a hiatus or to explain something in the main story.
''Wet Dreams'', which is Valiant and the Mane Six exploring on their boats.
''The Adventures of Trixie if Her Father was a Badass Alien'', which shows what Trixie was doing while Valiant was in space.
''The Adventures of Cyborg Braeburn'', a comedy about Braeburn dealing with being turned into a robot.
''The Vampire Cheerilee'' spinoff series.
''Wet Dreams'', which is Valiant and the Mane Six exploring on their boats.
''The Adventures of Trixie if Her Father was a Badass Alien'', which shows what Trixie was doing while Valiant was in space.
''The Adventures of Cyborg Braeburn'', a comedy about Braeburn dealing with being turned into a robot.
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* NuclearWeaponsTaboo: Averted due to Equestria having no real concept of WMDs. A [[NoodleImplements nuclear bomb and a shipping container of bacon]] were launched at the moon, creating an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot artificial alicorn political candidate.]]
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* NuclearWeaponsTaboo: Averted due to Equestria having no real concept of WMDs.wmds. A [[NoodleImplements nuclear bomb and a shipping container of bacon]] were launched at the moon, creating an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot artificial alicorn political candidate.]]
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* TrulySingleParent: [[spoiler: Cordoba is a robot built by Valiant who identifies as his daughter.]]
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RoboticReveal: [[spoiler: Cordoba is a robot]]
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RoboticReveal: [[spoiler: Cordoba is a robot]]
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* OurPresidentsAreDifferent: Because the current candidate is a red white and blue alicorn with an American-sized manhood and is trying to get elected President in a monarchy. [[spoiler: And when faced with the threat of President Valiant, Celestia closed the loophole allowing ponies to run for the position in the first place]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: Non-soul selling type. [[spoiler: Braeburn makes up a villain as part of a plan to get Tin Mare to let him remove her personality locks. He gets Sir Win's help. Sir Win {{Lampshades}} this.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: Non-soul selling type. [[spoiler: Braeburn makes up a villain as part of a plan to get Tin Mare to let him remove her personality locks. He gets Sir Win's help. ]] Sir Win {{Lampshades}} this.]]
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* EverybodyWantsTheHermaphrodite: Averted. No one wants to be around Colombia and her ''[[GagPenis massive package]]''.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Valiant will occasionally add in little comments about the Mane 6 into his narration. He still tells the full story, averting UnreliableNarrator, but he will make his opinion crystal clear about what's going on.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Valiant will occasionally add in little comments about the Mane 6 into his narration. He still tells the full story, averting UnreliableNarrator, but he will make his opinion crystal clear about what's going on.
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* EverybodyWantsTheHermaphrodite: Averted. No one wants to be around Colombia and her ''[[GagPenis massive package]]''.
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* FirstPersonSmartass: Valiant will occasionally add in little comments about the Mane 6 into his narration. He still tells the full story, averting UnreliableNarrator, but he will make his
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* EverybodyWantsTheHermaphrodite: Averted. No one wants to be around Colombia and her [[GagPenis ''massive'' package]].
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* EverybodyWantsTheHermaphrodite: Averted. No one wants to be around Colombia and her [[GagPenis ''massive'' package]].''[[GagPenis massive package]]''.
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* EverybodyWantsTheHermaphrodite: Averted. No one wants to be around Colombia and her [[GagPenis ''massive'' package]].
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: A [[RunningGag time honored]] tradition of this story is having the {{Jerkass}} background characters of an episode meet horrible fates by Valiant or his family. Highlights include Sunset killing the puppet guy from Inspiration Manifestation, Countess Coloratura's manager getting [[GroinAttack castrated]], and Cordoba [[OffWithHisHead decapitating]] the gold-toothed pony from Gift Of The Maud Pie.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: A [[RunningGag time honored]] tradition of this story is having the {{Jerkass}} background characters of an episode meet horrible fates by Valiant or his family. Highlights include Sunset killing the puppet guy from Inspiration Manifestation, Countess Coloratura's manager Svengallop getting [[GroinAttack castrated]], and Cordoba [[OffWithHisHead decapitating]] the gold-toothed pony from Gift Of The Maud Pie.Pie.
* LastNameBasis: Valiant. He hasn't been called Plymouth since he came up with the name.
* LastNameBasis: Valiant. He hasn't been called Plymouth since he came up with the name.
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* CreepyTwins: The Black Twins, though they're more evil than outright creepy, but it still applies.
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** There was also the time during Keep Calm and Flutter on that multiple character commented on Valiant's [[UnstoppableRage homicidal rage]] against Discord using the recorder the entire story is apparently told through.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13723/a-dream A Dream]]'' is a former self insert turned crackfic Human in Equestria story written by totallynotabrony. The story chronicles the adventures of human turned earth pony Plymouth Valiant, a [[PatrioticFervor patriotic]], [[TheEngineer robot building]], [[TheAlcoholic tequila growing]], sociopath. The story is taken on an episodic basis coinciding with episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, with Valiant's effects on the plot steadily increasing over the seasons. While in the earliest chapters the changes where minimal, just a few snarky comments here and there, things slowly escalated to the events of Magical Mystery Cure and beyond, where now some episodes only have a single reference to the original plot.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13723/a-dream A Dream]]'' is a former self insert turned crackfic Human in Equestria story written by totallynotabrony.[[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial totallynotabrony]]. The story chronicles the adventures of human turned earth pony Plymouth Valiant, a [[PatrioticFervor patriotic]], [[TheEngineer robot building]], [[TheAlcoholic tequila growing]], sociopath. The story is taken on an episodic basis coinciding with episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, with Valiant's effects on the plot steadily increasing over the seasons. While in the earliest chapters the changes where minimal, just a few snarky comments here and there, things slowly escalated to the events of Magical Mystery Cure and beyond, where now some episodes only have a single reference to the original plot.
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** Sunset took up the narration job for the first half of season 5.
** There was also the time during Keep Calm and Flutter on that multiple character commented on Valiant's [[UnstoppableRage homicidal rage]] against Discord using the recorder the entire story is apparently told through.
** Sunset took up the narration job for the first half of season 5.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13723/a-dream A Dream]] ''A Dream'']] is a former self insert turned crackfic Human in Equestria story written by totallynotabrony. The story chronicles the adventures of human turned earth pony Plymouth Valiant, a [[PatrioticFervor patriotic]], [[TheEngineer robot building]], [[TheAlcoholic tequila growing]], sociopath. The story is taken on an episodic basis coinciding with episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, with Valiant's effects on the plot steadily increasing over the seasons. While in the earliest chapters the changes where minimal, just a few snarky comments here and there, things slowly escalated to the events of Magical Mystery Cure and beyond, where now some episodes only have a single reference to the original plot.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13723/a-dream ''A Dream'']] A Dream]] is a former self insert turned crackfic Human in Equestria story written by totallynotabrony. The story chronicles the adventures of human turned earth pony Plymouth Valiant, a [[PatrioticFervor patriotic]], [[TheEngineer robot building]], [[TheAlcoholic tequila growing]], sociopath. The story is taken on an episodic basis coinciding with episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, with Valiant's effects on the plot steadily increasing over the seasons. While in the earliest chapters the changes where minimal, just a few snarky comments here and there, things slowly escalated to the events of Magical Mystery Cure and beyond, where now some episodes only have a single reference to the original plot.
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A Dream is a former self insert turned crackfic Human in Equestria story written by totallynotabrony. The story chronicles the adventures of human turned earth pony Plymouth Valiant, a [[PatrioticFervor patriotic]], [[TheEngineer robot building]], [[TheAlcoholic tequila growing]], sociopath. The story is taken on an episodic basis coinciding with episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, with Valiant's effects on the plot steadily increasing over the seasons. While in the earliest chapters the changes where minimal, just a few snarky comments here and there, things slowly escalated to the events of Magical Mystery Cure and beyond, where now some episodes only have a single reference to the original plot.
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