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* BilingualBonus: Several of the main character's cards are this:
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'''Note:''' Any spoilers up to and including SPZ Chapter 12 are unhidden.
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* ThemeNaming: The [[HumongousMecha four mecha cards]] names come from a portmanteau of a famous sword and their respective elements: Thunder Mech Excalibolt (Excalibur), Ice Mech Arondrift (Arondite), Lava Mech Galatinder (Galatine) and Earth Mech Damocliff (the sword of Damocles).
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* ThemeNaming: The [[spoiler: four]] [[HumongousMecha four mecha cards]] cards']] names come from a portmanteau of a famous sword and their respective elements: Thunder Mech Excalibolt (Excalibur), Ice [[spoiler:Ice Mech Arondrift (Arondite), Lava Mech Galatinder (Galatine) and Earth Mech Damocliff (the sword of Damocles).]]
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SP and Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ are two fanfiction stories written by author Aarikku on the well-known card game forum Pojo, based on the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' moreso than the Anime or Manga, as it features none of the original characters, and it's actually located in what is basically a version of our world... with more card games.
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SP and Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ are two fanfiction stories written by author Aarikku on the well-known card game forum Pojo, based on the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' moreso than the Anime or Manga, as it features none of the original characters, and it's actually located is set in what is basically a version of our world... with more card games.
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ is a sequel series set in the same Universe, about five years after the events of SP. It tells the story of Lance Lawrence, a bored RidiculouslyAverageGuy who works at a card shop and just wants to get some excitement into his life. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He gets his wish]] when the [[ClassyCatBurglar Black Widow]], a famous card thief, steals a valuable card from the shop. She challenges Lance to duel her at the end of the [[DebutQueue team-based]] [[TournamentArc World-Wide Grand Tournament]].
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ is a sequel series set in the same Universe, about five years after the events of SP. It tells the story of Lance Lawrence, a bored RidiculouslyAverageGuy who works at a card shop and just wants to get some excitement into his life. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He gets his wish]] when the [[ClassyCatBurglar Black Widow]], a famous card thief, steals a valuable card from the shop. She challenges Lance to duel her at the end of the [[DebutQueue [[EveryoneMeetsEveryone team-based]] [[TournamentArc World-Wide Grand Tournament]].
* FreudianTrio: With Ray as the Id, Lilith as the Superego and Julian as the Ego.
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** Jack's ''Tenor Narwhal Blaora'' comes from the icelandic word for balloon.
** Linlan's ''Armored Panda Zhuxiong'' comes from the chinese word ''Zhu Xiong'', which means bamboo bear, or [[ADogNamedDog panda]].
** Kevin's ''Warlock Octopus Samudra'' is named after the telugu word for sea. The ''Giant Tentacle'' monsters are named after the eight Hinduist tantric chakras (Sahasrara, Ajna, Vishudda, Anahata, Manipura, Swadisthana, Muladhara and Bindu).
** Several of Cassandra's and Amber's cards include GratuitousSpanish.
* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower, or Resolve, could actually be used to generate electricity (usually when dueling). It's actually what powers a great deal of the {{Steampunk}} in the series (although it's made very clear that Resolve engines are a rare luxury at best).
** Linlan's ''Armored Panda Zhuxiong'' comes from the chinese word ''Zhu Xiong'', which means bamboo bear, or [[ADogNamedDog panda]].
** Kevin's ''Warlock Octopus Samudra'' is named after the telugu word for sea. The ''Giant Tentacle'' monsters are named after the eight Hinduist tantric chakras (Sahasrara, Ajna, Vishudda, Anahata, Manipura, Swadisthana, Muladhara and Bindu).
** Several of Cassandra's and Amber's cards include GratuitousSpanish.
* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower, or Resolve, could actually be used to generate electricity (usually when dueling). It's actually what powers a great deal of the {{Steampunk}} in the series (although it's made very clear that Resolve engines are a rare luxury at best).
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** Jack's ''Tenor Narwhal Blaora'' comes from the icelandic Icelandic word for balloon.
** Linlan's ''Armored Panda Zhuxiong'' comes from thechinese Chinese word ''Zhu Xiong'', which means bamboo bear, or [[ADogNamedDog panda]].
** Kevin's ''Warlock Octopus Samudra'' is named after thetelugu Telugu word for sea. The ''Giant Tentacle'' monsters are named after the eight Hinduist tantric chakras (Sahasrara, Ajna, Vishudda, Anahata, Manipura, Swadisthana, Muladhara and Bindu).
** Several of Cassandra'sand Amber's cards phoenixes include GratuitousSpanish.
GratuitousSpanish. Her ace card is ''Evanescent Phoenix Escarlata''.
* FiveManBand: Team V has five [[spoiler:(later six)]] members. Lance is TheLeader, Jack is TheLancer (at least at first), Kevin is TheSmartGuy, and Linlan and Cassandra are combinations of TheChick and TheBigGuy. There's also [[spoiler:Tara, who joins later as TheSixthRanger.]]
* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower,or called Resolve, could actually be used to generate electricity (usually when dueling). It's actually what powers a great deal of the {{Steampunk}} in the series (although it's made very clear that Resolve engines are a rare luxury at best).
** Linlan's ''Armored Panda Zhuxiong'' comes from the
** Kevin's ''Warlock Octopus Samudra'' is named after the
** Several of Cassandra's
* FiveManBand: Team V has five [[spoiler:(later six)]] members. Lance is TheLeader, Jack is TheLancer (at least at first), Kevin is TheSmartGuy, and Linlan and Cassandra are combinations of TheChick and TheBigGuy. There's also [[spoiler:Tara, who joins later as TheSixthRanger.]]
* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower,
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** Several of Cassandra's phoenixes include GratuitousSpanish. Her ace card is ''Evanescent Phoenix Escarlata''.
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** Several of Cassandra's phoenixes and Amber's cards include GratuitousSpanish. Her ace card is ''Evanescent Phoenix Escarlata''.GratuitousSpanish.
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ is a sequel series set in the same Universe, about five years after the events of SP. It tells the story of Lance Lawrence, a bored RidiculouslyAverageGuy who works at a card shop and just wants to get some excitement into his life. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He gets his wish]] when the [[ClassyCatBurglar Black Widow]], a famous card thief, steals a valuable card from the shop. She challenges Lance to duel her at the end of the [[EveryoneMeetsEveryone team-based]] [[TournamentArc World-Wide Grand Tournament]].
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ is a sequel series set in the same Universe, about five years after the events of SP. It tells the story of Lance Lawrence, a bored RidiculouslyAverageGuy who works at a card shop and just wants to get some excitement into his life. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He gets his wish]] when the [[ClassyCatBurglar Black Widow]], a famous card thief, steals a valuable card from the shop. She challenges Lance to duel her at the end of the [[EveryoneMeetsEveryone [[DebutQueue team-based]] [[TournamentArc World-Wide Grand Tournament]].
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SP and Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ are two fanfiction stories written by author Aarikku on the well-known card game forum Pojo, based on the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' moreso than the Anime or Manga, as it features none of the original characters, and it's actually located in what is basically a version of our world... with card games.
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SP and Yu-Gi-Oh! SPZ are two fanfiction stories written by author Aarikku on the well-known card game forum Pojo, based on the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' moreso than the Anime or Manga, as it features none of the original characters, and it's actually located in what is basically a version of our world... with more card games.
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* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower, or Resolve, could actually be used to generate electricity (usually when dueling). It's actually what powers a great deal of the {{Steampunk}} in the series.
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* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower, or Resolve, could actually be used to generate electricity (usually when dueling). It's actually what powers a great deal of the {{Steampunk}} in the series.series (although it's made very clear that Resolve engines are a rare luxury at best).
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* HeroicResolve: Turned into a FRIGGIN ENERGY SOURCE. During the five year gap between SP and SPZ, scientists discovered that human willpower, or Resolve, could actually be used to generate electricity (usually when dueling). It's actually what powers a great deal of the {{Steampunk}} in the series.
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*** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
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*** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a another FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
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*** The Black Widow plays a Dark deck, and she's also a WomanInBlack.
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** In SP, Ray is a HotBlooded FieryRedhead with a Sun-based deck, while Lilith is a WomanInBlack who plays a Moon-based deck.
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** In SP, Ray is a HotBlooded FieryRedhead with a Sun-based deck, while Lilith is a WomanInBlack with RavenHairIvorySkin who plays a Moon-based deck.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Happens to a great deal of the characters:
** Lance plays a Thunder deck, and is blond.
** Linlan plays a Nature deck and usually wears green.
** Kevin plays a Water deck and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair has blue hair]].
** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
** Lance plays a Thunder deck, and is blond.
** Linlan plays a Nature deck and usually wears green.
** Kevin plays a Water deck and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair has blue hair]].
** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Happens to several characters, in both series.
** In SP, Ray is a HotBlooded FieryRedhead with a Sun-based deck, while Lilith is a WomanInBlack who plays a Moon-based deck.
** In SPZ:
*** Lance plays a Thunder deck, and is blond.
*** Linlan plays a Nature deck and usually wears green.
*** Kevin plays a Water deck and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair has blue hair]].
*** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
** In SP, Ray is a HotBlooded FieryRedhead with a Sun-based deck, while Lilith is a WomanInBlack who plays a Moon-based deck.
** In SPZ:
*** Lance plays a Thunder deck, and is blond.
*** Linlan plays a Nature deck and usually wears green.
*** Kevin plays a Water deck and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair has blue hair]].
*** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Happens to a great deal of the characters:
** Lance plays a Thunder deck, and is blond.
** Linlan plays a Nature deck and usually wears green.
** Kevin plays a Water deck and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair has blue hair]].
** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
** Lance plays a Thunder deck, and is blond.
** Linlan plays a Nature deck and usually wears green.
** Kevin plays a Water deck and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair has blue hair]].
** Cassandra plays a Fire deck, and she's a FieryRedhead who also wears a red dress.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Ray's the red to Lilith's blue.
** The Ambrosia sisters can also count, with Nephele being the red to Demetria's blue.
** The Ambrosia sisters can also count, with Nephele being the red to Demetria's blue.
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* RedOniBlueOni: In SP, Ray's the red to Lilith's blue. The Ambrosia sisters can also count, with Nephele being the red to Demetria's blue.
** In SPZ, Cassandra's the red to Kevin's blue.
** In SPZ, Cassandra's the red to Kevin's blue.
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** The Ambrosia sisters can also count, with Demetria being the red to Nephele's blue.
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** The Ambrosia sisters can also count, with Demetria Nephele being the red to Nephele's Demetria's blue.
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[CastingAShadow anima]].
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's Ray and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[CastingAShadow anima]].
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays a [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[CastingAShadow anima]].
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays a [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[CastingAShadow anima]].
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[AnIcePerson anima]].
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays a [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[AnIcePerson Lun]][[CastingAShadow anima]].
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* RedOniBlueOni: Ray's the red to Lilith's blue.
** The Ambrosia sisters can also count, with Demetria being the red to Nephele's blue.
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* SolarAndLunar: Ray's and Lilith's Decks. Ray plays [[KillItWithFire Sol]][[LightEmUp animus]]. Lilith plays [[MakingASplash Lun]][[AnIcePerson anima]].
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SP is a short story of 10 chapters, while SPZ is updated weekly and is currently on its third arc. The author generally assumes that the reader is at least familiar with the rules and cards of the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' and only provides deep explanation on the effects of fan-made cards, so a prospect reader should get informed about the basic rules and real-life cards. If the reader can get past this, however, they'll be rewarded with a story full of [[SelfDeprecation self-depreciative humor]] and interesting characters.
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SP is a short story of 10 chapters, while SPZ is updated weekly and is currently on its third arc. The author generally assumes that the reader is at least familiar with the rules and cards of the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' and only provides deep explanation on the effects of fan-made cards, so a prospect potential non-Yu-Gi-Oh! familiar reader should get informed about the basic rules and real-life cards. If the reader can get gets past this, however, they'll be rewarded with a story full of [[SelfDeprecation self-depreciative humor]] and interesting characters.
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* ThemeNaming: The [[HumongousMech four mech cards]] names come from a portmanteau of a famous sword and their respective elements: Thunder Mech Excalibolt (Excalibur), Ice Mech Arondrift (Arondite), Lava Mech Galatinder (Galatine) and Earth Mech Damocliff (the sword of Damocles).
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* ThemeNaming: The [[HumongousMech [[HumongousMecha four mech mecha cards]] names come from a portmanteau of a famous sword and their respective elements: Thunder Mech Excalibolt (Excalibur), Ice Mech Arondrift (Arondite), Lava Mech Galatinder (Galatine) and Earth Mech Damocliff (the sword of Damocles).
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* ThemeNaming: The [[HumongousMech four mech cards]] names come from a portmanteau of a famous sword and their respective elements: Thunder Mech Excalibolt (Excalibur), Ice Mech Arondrift (Arondite), Lava Mech Galatinder (Galatine) and Earth Mech Damocliff (the sword of Damocles).
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** It's somewhat hilarious that characters react with incredulity towards corn flakes (which were introduced around that era), but have no problem with motorcycles, computers or other complex machinery.
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** [[HilariousInHindsight It's somewhat hilarious]] that characters react with incredulity towards corn flakes (which were introduced around that era), but have no problem with motorcycles, computers or other complex machinery.
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** [[HilariousInHindsight It's somewhat hilarious]] hilarious that characters react with incredulity towards corn flakes (which were introduced around that era), but have no problem with motorcycles, computers or other complex machinery.
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** [[HilariousInHindsight It's somewhat hilarious]] that characters react with incredulity towards corn flakes (they were introduced around that era), but have no problem with motorcycles, computers or other complex machinery.
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** [[HilariousInHindsight It's somewhat hilarious]] that characters react with incredulity towards corn flakes (they (which were introduced around that era), but have no problem with motorcycles, computers or other complex machinery.
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SP is a short story of 10 chapters, while SPZ is updated weekly and is currently on its third arc. The author generally assumes that the reader is at least familiar with the rules and cards of the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' and only provides deep explanation on the effects of fan-made cards. If the reader can get past this, however, they'll be rewarded with a story full of [[SelfDeprecation self-depreciative humor]] and interesting characters.
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SP is a short story of 10 chapters, while SPZ is updated weekly and is currently on its third arc. The author generally assumes that the reader is at least familiar with the rules and cards of the ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh Card Game}}'' and only provides deep explanation on the effects of fan-made cards, so a prospect reader should get informed about the basic rules and real-life cards. If the reader can get past this, however, they'll be rewarded with a story full of [[SelfDeprecation self-depreciative humor]] and interesting characters.
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SP is set in the Victorian era, and features pro duelists [[HotBlooded Ray Ashford]] and [[IceQueen Lilith Huron]] teaming up under the orders of [[TheObiWan Julian Nobel]] to collect a set of extremely rare cards called [[EldritchAbomination Eldricytes]]. HilarityEnsues.
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Yu-Gi-Oh! SP is set in the Victorian era, and features pro duelists [[HotBlooded Ray Ashford]] and [[IceQueen Lilith Huron]] teaming up under the orders of [[TheObiWan Julian Nobel]] to collect a set playset of extremely rare cards called [[EldritchAbomination Eldricytes]]. HilarityEnsues.
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* BilingualBonus: Most Several of the main character's cards are this:
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* BilingualBonus: Most of the main character's boss cards are this:
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* BilingualBonus: Most of the main character's boss cards are this: