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* OffingTheOffspring: Fatal magical accidents would increase if a child was proven to be a squib
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* OffingTheOffspring: Fatal magical accidents would increase if a child was proven to be a squibsquib. If the child between a Cabal woman and a homeschooled squib is magical, the squib mysteriously dies after the child's first proof of magic
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Lucius thinks the women of the Cabal should be grateful to him because he gives them whatever they want in reward for them birthing and "took them from poverty".
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Lucius thinks the women of the Cabal should be grateful to him because he gives them whatever they want in reward for them birthing and "took them from poverty". And he lets them see their own children.
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* FascistButInefficient: They find out the hard their society was tilted to the very top and very bottom when they have nobody to produce goods or take care of the things running behind the scenes. For example when the lifts stopped working, they realized the maintenance clerk, the technician and the regular repair company were gone.
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* FascistButInefficient: They find out the hard way their society was tilted to the very top and very bottom when they have nobody to produce goods or take care of the things running behind the scenes. For example when the lifts stopped working, they realized the maintenance clerk, the technician and the regular repair company were gone.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Lucius reasons that getting a concubine for Draco and later kidnapping several women and forcing them into reproductive slavery was necessary to continue the line of Malfoy
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Lucius reasons that getting a concubine for Draco and later kidnapping several women and forcing them into reproductive slavery was necessary to continue the line of MalfoyMalfoy and several other prominent families.
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* IndustrializedEvilIndustrializedEvil: the women of the Cabal are not to be harmed to not harm their pregnancy, they and their partners are given fertility potions to insure a quick conception. The Cabal are given a rest period of two years between pregnancy.
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecencyWantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Lucius thinks the women of the Cabal should be grateful to him because he gives them whatever they want in reward for them birthing and "took them from poverty".
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* XantosGambit
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: No one is bothered anymore if someone drops to the ground screaming clutching their arm. The Dark Lord finds it funny to torture people through their Dark Marks. Although the outside world was horrified and then Wizarding England could not get any immigrants.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Thanks
Thanks to the Death Eater's own haughtiness, they condemned themselves to a slow death with the whole world watching. [[spoiler: This trope is invoked by Lucius and the Death Eaters, they will attempt to neutralize the Dark Lord to kill him or deliver him to Potter.]]
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* PyrrhicVictory
PyrrhicVictory: Lucius now realizes their victory over the light is this. While they won, they condemned themselves to an insane ruler and are dying out from inbreeding.
*PyrrhicVillainy
PyrrhicVillainy: While to manage to temporarily stave off their decline, kidnapping those women trapped them in their own country.
*RacistGrandpa
RacistGrandpa: Lucius, especially now that he really is a grandfather
*RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvilRapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: What cements Lucius Malfoy as a RetiredMonster is that he doesn't understand why the world made such a big deal about their disappearance and believes the women should be ''grateful'' to him and that birthing and being pregnant isn't really that difficult.
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* SealedEvilInACan: After they kidnapped several women for reproductive slavery, the ICWICW puts a magical Net over England. They can't portkey, Floo or apparate without getting automatically sent to an ICW warehouse for intensive questioning.
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SelectiveObliviousness: The "accidental deaths" of squib children or squib adults.
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SexSlave: The women of the Cabal
*ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules:
ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules: The ICW agents, many former Aurors, will not be bribed.
*ScrewThisImOuttaHere
ScrewThisImOuttaHere: The modus oprendi of the Light Exodus, everyone that was Light-affiliated or plain didn't like the Death Eaters left England for good.
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ShootTheMessenger: The clerk and the ambassadors get crucioed when they confront Voldemort on particular issues.
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SuperBreedingProgram: The Cabal women were a last ditch effort for affluent purebloods to breed magically strong children.
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SuperHumanTrafficking: The Death Eaters kidnap young magically strong girls for reproductive slavery in the Cabal.
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SuperRegistrationAct: It is not mandatory to take the Dark Mark when they come of age.
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TangledFamilyTree: Purebloods tend to be very closely related, this works against them as now they are too inbred.
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TemptingFate: "We don't need the muggles or the mudbloods."
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* MandatoryMotherhood: It is imperative for the remaining pureblood to breed.
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* MandatoryMotherhood: It is imperative for the remaining pureblood to breed.breed, this is especially true for the Cabal, seeing it was the reason they were kidnapped.
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* BadFuture: For the Death Eaters, the economy is in shambles, their population is dying out, the international community locked them in their own country so they don't spread, under the rule of a mad dictator. For the Light side, this is averted as their way ''imrroved'' after they were exiled, have a prosperous economy and government and ultimately seen in the right.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Named dropped by Lucius, who hates the every truth of the saying. The Death Eaters wished for themselves a world were they were in charge and that they would never have to deal with muggleborn, blood traitors, squibs or muggles.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Named dropped by Lucius, who hates the every truth of the saying. The Death Eaters wished for themselves a world were they were in charge and that they would never have to deal with muggleborn, blood traitors, squibs or muggles.
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* BadFuture: For the Death Eaters, the economy is in shambles, their population is dying out, the international community locked them in their own country so they don't spread, under the rule of a mad dictator. For the Light side, this is averted as their way ''imrroved'' lives ''improved'' after they were exiled, have a prosperous economy and government and ultimately seen in the right.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Named dropped by Lucius, who hates the every truth of thesaying.saying and calls it trite. The Death Eaters wished for themselves a world were they were in charge and that they would never have to deal with muggleborn, blood traitors, squibs or muggles.
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* TheConspiracy: The higher ranks of Death Eater that Voldemort never finds out about their population decline and their attempts to avert it.
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* TheConspiracy: The higher ranks of Death Eater makes sure that Voldemort never finds out about their population decline and their attempts to avert it.
* EngagementChallenge: Lucius only permitted Leonidas's squib son to marry a [[SonOfAWhore daughter muggleborn Cabal concubine]] if they produced a magically strong child. Which they did, so they married. Although this has its own consequences
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* HeroicBastard: Leonidas is born from the union of a Cabal woman and Draco
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* HeroicBastard: Leonidas is born from the union of a Cabal woman pureblood concubine and Draco
* ImplausibleDeniability: Lucius and the other Death Eater deny that they kidnapped several women despite that there was a lot of evidence, although it helps that Voldemort was offended when he was asked and crucioed the ambassadors
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[[spoiler: MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: All the Death Eaters are so sick of Voldemort's madness and cruelty that they're planning to attack him all at once to either kill him or deliver him to Harry Potter to kill.]]
*TheMistressTheMistress: The Cabal women serve as concubines.
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RoyalHarem: Lucius styles the cabal as one, despite the women being worshipped reproductive slaves.
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* DeconstructionFicDeconstructionFic: It takes the pureblood methodology and Death Eater government to its logical conclusion.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Lucius doesn't understand the concepts of close-familial relationships, sees his own descendants as assets rather than people and only muggleborns valuable to prevent inbreeding.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Lucius doesn't understand the concepts of close-familial relationships, sees his own descendants as assets rather than people and only thinks that muggleborns are valuable to prevent inbreeding.
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* FascistButInefficient: They find out the hard their society was tilted to the very top and very bottom when they have nobody to produce goods or take care of the things run behind the scenes. When the lifts stopped working, they realized the maintenance clerk, the technician and the regular repair company were gone.
* FantasticRacism: It's present, but Voldemort's rule of Wizarding England discredited
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* ExactWords: They '''cannot'' get involved with the muggle world. A couple of families tried to invest in the muggle world or open businesses there ended losing their magic.
* FascistButInefficient: They find out the hard their society was tilted to the very top and very bottom when they have nobody to produce goods or take care of the thingsrun running behind the scenes. When For example when the lifts stopped working, they realized the maintenance clerk, the technician and the regular repair company were gone.
* FantasticRacism: It's present, but science and Nazi Germany discredited eugenics, Voldemort'srule of Wizarding England discreditedsingle-handily discredited pureblood ideology. As Lucius puts it:
--->We believed that the magic of muggleborns was a mistake - as if magic would grant her gift in error… what hubris! We were happy, eager even, to agree to the removal of every muggleborn from Britain for as long as we, or our descendents, ruled. We didn't want them and were happy to have them take care of the problem for us. The mudbloods, halfbloods, and that worst of abominations - the squib-born; would be gone and we wouldn't have to lift a finger. They would sweep in yearly and gather them up, with their families. We eagerly agreed and signed, binding ourselves, and our descendents, to that travesty. The world now knows that muggleborns are magic's gift. They are created to strengthen and diversify the blood and keep magic alive and strong.
* FascistButInefficient: They find out the hard their society was tilted to the very top and very bottom when they have nobody to produce goods or take care of the things
* FantasticRacism: It's present, but science and Nazi Germany discredited eugenics, Voldemort's
--->We believed that the magic of muggleborns was a mistake - as if magic would grant her gift in error… what hubris! We were happy, eager even, to agree to the removal of every muggleborn from Britain for as long as we, or our descendents, ruled. We didn't want them and were happy to have them take care of the problem for us. The mudbloods, halfbloods, and that worst of abominations - the squib-born; would be gone and we wouldn't have to lift a finger. They would sweep in yearly and gather them up, with their families. We eagerly agreed and signed, binding ourselves, and our descendents, to that travesty. The world now knows that muggleborns are magic's gift. They are created to strengthen and diversify the blood and keep magic alive and strong.
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* ItIsBeyondSavingItIsBeyondSaving: Leonidas gave up on Wizarding England and refuses to have to do anything with it.
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* MagicallyBindingContract: the Rites of Parlay set the terms for Light's surrender and exile. The terms were that no one Light-sided will step foot in Wizarding England ever again. The Light will come every year to take the muggleborn and halfbloods with the families, along with any squib-born. They have to plan their Exile themselves.
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* MagicallyBindingContract: the Rites of Parlay set the terms for Light's surrender and exile. The terms were that no one Light-sided will step foot in Wizarding England ever again. The Light will come every year to take the muggleborn and halfbloods with the families, along with any squib-born.squib-born they can find. They have to plan their Exile themselves. \n The Dark are not allowed to interfere with any muggles or muggleborns.
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MailOrderBride: A sign of Wizarding England growing worse is that more people are refusing to give foreign brides to them. Dolohov attempted to get a young Russian pureblood for her family to back out when they heard about England.
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RetiredMonster: Lucius has his regrets, he only regrets how he did them not that he did them
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* VillainousBreakdown
VillainousBreakdown: Voldemort goes more and more crazy the more he sees Potter and the Order of Phoenix succeed.
*WickedStepmother
WickedStepmother: While not wicked, Pansy and Leonidas never bonded with Leonidas frequently visiting his own mother.
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WifeHusbandry: The younger women of the Cabal were groomed to get used to their reproductive slavery quicker
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* GeniusLoci: They thought it was myth but the Heart of Hogwarts also left in Light exodus.
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* HeirClubForMen: Pansy and Draco had a difficult time conceiving due to the male selection spells. She was only able to bear a daughter which resulted in Lucius buying a concubine for Draco
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* HeirClubForMen: Pansy and Draco had a difficult time conceiving due to the male selection spells. She was only able to bear a daughter which resulted in Lucius buying a concubine for DracoDraco. Both Malfoy men took concubines to sire more children to ensure their continuance of their line.
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* HumiliationConga
HumiliationConga: Nothing goes right for the Dark side.
*IAmNotMyFather
IAmNotMyFather: Leonidas wants to be nothing like his father and grandfather
*IDidWhatIHadToDo
IDidWhatIHadToDo: Lucius reasons that getting a concubine for Draco and later kidnapping several women and forcing them into reproductive slavery was necessary to continue the line of Malfoy
*IWantGrandkids
IWantGrandkids: and Lucius will ensue them anyway possible.
*LawOfInverseFertility
LawOfInverseFertility: Less and less Dark families are able to have children and less are able to have children with magic. Defied with the Light, they are a having a prosperity baby boom.
*KnowWhenToFoldThem
KnowWhenToFoldThem: instead of fighting the Death Eater, Harry chose to surrender which eliminated Light casualities while having the Death Eater dig their own graves.
*MagicallyBindingContract MagicallyBindingContract: the Rites of Parlay set the terms for Light's surrender and exile. The terms were that no one Light-sided will step foot in Wizarding England ever again. The Light will come every year to take the muggleborn and halfbloods with the families, along with any squib-born. They have to plan their Exile themselves.
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GoodIsNotDumb: After Dumbledore dies, Harry surrenders right away to be spared a war. It was thought that he was cowardly when really he brokered the best deal possible and left the Death Eaters to die out by declining birth rates or Voldemort.
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GoodIsNotSoft: Lucius believes that Dumbledore would've been horrified by the deal as it leaves so many Death Eaters and Dark families out to die
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GuileHero: Harry is called almost Slytherin in planning since he spares his people a war with a treaty that crippled his enemies short and long-term and earns the adoration of the Light by buying several islands in the Pacific to inhabit after their Exodus.
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HeirClubForMen: Pansy and Draco had a difficult time conceiving due to the male selection spells. She was only able to bear a daughter which resulted in Lucius buying a concubine for Draco
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FantasticRacism: It's present, but Voldemort's rule of Wizarding England discredited
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FutureLoser: While the Malfoys are nominally powerful and are still quite wealthy, they are resorted to desperate measures to continue their line.
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GildedCage: The women of Cabal live in luxurious mansions, have their every whim pampered and given whatever they want...but they can't leave at risk of Voldemort finding out and can't see their own children if someone else adopted them.
*GiveHimANormalLifeGiveHimANormalLife: The Rites of Parlay ensures that muggleborn and their families and squib orphans are taken to the new Wizarding Society in their islands in the Pacific so they wouldn't be killed by Death Eaters.
** The clerk in change of the Hogwarts List disguises his grandson as an orphaned squib-born to get him out of England.
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* TheMigrationTheMigration: All the Light and their supports moved to Indonesia and other assorted tropical islands and reformed their society there and progressed socially and economically.
* ReleasedToElsewhere: Subverted as the Rites of Parlay ensure that muggleborns and squib-born ''are'' taken to elsewhere (by elsewhere they mean the new Hogwarts in Indonesia) so they won't be killed by Death Eaters.
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TheCassandra: The clerk in charge of the Hogwarts List noticed that squibs don't show up on the list to get their Hogwarts Letter. He kept trying to address the problem but ended up getting crucioed for his trouble.
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CassandraTruth: The clerk points out that their population is declining as fewer and fewer names show up in the Hogwarts letter listing.
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TheConspiracy: The higher ranks of Death Eater that Voldemort never finds out about their population decline and their attempts to avert it.
*ControlFreak
ControlFreak: Voldemort introduced a number of draconian laws to control every aspect of people's lives, such as making it mandatory to take the Dark Mark when one comes of age.
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CrapsackWorld: Wizarding England in a nutshell.
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DefectorFromDecadence: Leonidas Malfoy
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DeliberateValuesDissonance: Lucius doesn't understand the concepts of close-familial relationships, sees his own descendants as assets rather than people and only muggleborns valuable to prevent inbreeding.
*DespotismJustifiesTheMeans
DespotismJustifiesTheMeans: The Death Eaters only took over for the sake of power only to realize too late they have no one to lord over and they are now under the Dark Lord's mercy.
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DystopiaIsHard: Wizarding England under the Dark Lord has no resources nor economy, their laws are too draconian to attract any immigrants and their population is slowly dying out.
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ElephantInTheLivingRoom: No one wants to talk about how they are becoming too inbred and people are becoming magically weaker with each generation and that they're slowly dying off.
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EvilParentsWantGoodKids: Lucius is proud of Leonidas, even though the latter wants nothing to do with them.
*EverybodyLivesEverybodyLives: Implied that all the people on the side of Light survives and have many, many descendents.
* FascistButInefficient: They find out the hard their society was tilted to the very top and very bottom when they have nobody to produce goods or take care of the things run behind the scenes. When the lifts stopped working, they realized the maintenance clerk, the technician and the regular repair company were gone.
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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4356667/1/Wish-Carefully Wish Carefully]] opens with an elderly Lucius Malfoy reminiscing on the deal brokered at Dumbledore's death that lead to the deterioration to of Wizarding England.
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* ArtisticLicenseEconomics:ArrangedMarriage: the marriages are arranged according to the wealth and fertility of the family. Many of the female descendents of the Cabal faced this.
* ArtisticLicenseEconomics: When all the Light and their supporters were exiled, the business's consumer bases was gone and most of the producers left with them. Most of the remaining Purebloods deluded themselves that they would soon have a smaller more efficient economy. By the time Lucius is dying of old age, they still haven't recovered.
* ArtisticLicenseEconomics: When all the Light and their supporters were exiled, the business's consumer bases was gone and most of the producers left with them. Most of the remaining Purebloods deluded themselves that they would soon have a smaller more efficient economy. By the time Lucius is dying of old age, they still haven't recovered.
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BabyFactory: Eight magically powerful girls from ages 13 to 25 known as the Cabal were kidnapped to be bred among the higher ranks of the Death Eaters. The girls are continuously bred until the end of their fertile years, its implied that many of the women don't get to see their children unless the child themself wants to see them.
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BadFuture: For the Death Eaters, the economy is in shambles, their population is dying out, the international community locked them in their own country so they don't spread, under the rule of a mad dictator. For the Light side, this is averted as their way ''imrroved'' after they were exiled, have a prosperous economy and government and ultimately seen in the right.
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BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Named dropped by Lucius, who hates the every truth of the saying. The Death Eaters wished for themselves a world were they were in charge and that they would never have to deal with muggleborn, blood traitors, squibs or muggles.
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BeingEvilSucks: It most certainly does suck to be a Death Eater.
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BreakTheHaughty: It happens on a society scale
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TheCaligula: Voldemort, unsurprisingly. He uses the Dark Mark to torture random Death Eaters at anything and killed people for wearing glasses.
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ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Everyone hates Voldemort [[spoiler: to point that the Malfoys and others are gathering together to either kill Voldemort themselves or to deliver him to Harry Potter to kill him for them.]]
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