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I don't remember which fanfic, but I know I saw the exact sequence of how he intreact with the Mane 6 was almost entirely if not exact copy of thst fic.
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** This is due to the creator copying and pasting from another fanfic with a human OC in it.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2029/Trip-Of-A-Lifetime Trip Of A Lifetime]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFiction by Tailslover13. The story follows Josh Schwartz, a human from Earth who ends up in Equestria due to unknown circumstances. However, unlike traditional "Human In Equestria" stories, Josh has one very defining characteristic: he is a total JerkAss.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2029/Trip-Of-A-Lifetime Trip Of A Lifetime]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFiction ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFiction'' by Tailslover13. The story follows Josh Schwartz, a human from Earth who ends up in Equestria due to unknown circumstances. However, unlike traditional "Human In Equestria" stories, Josh has one very defining characteristic: he is a total JerkAss.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Twilight does this to Josh while he [[spoiler: twists Pinkie into a ball]], but he blows her off.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Twilight does this to Josh while he [[spoiler: twists Pinkie into a ball]], but he blows her off.off.
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It Got Worse de-wicking.
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The mane six take it upon themselves to try and help Josh get accustomed to life in Equestria until Princess Celestia can send him back home. However, the fact that Josh doesn't even believe in love, friendship, or anything like that may prove to be a difficult obstacle to overcome. [[ItGotWorse It gets worse]] when Josh is turned into a pony due to Poison Joke, making him even angrier.
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The mane six take it upon themselves to try and help Josh get accustomed to life in Equestria until Princess Celestia can send him back home. However, the fact that Josh doesn't even believe in love, friendship, or anything like that may prove to be a difficult obstacle to overcome. [[ItGotWorse It gets worse]] worse when Josh is turned into a pony due to Poison Joke, making him even angrier.
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* ShipTease: So far, Josh has been shipped with all of the mane six, as well as Zecora, and even (very briefly and subtly) with ''[[HoYay Spike]]''. And knowing the author, sooner or later, one of these is going to become an actual relationship.
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** Chapter 33. Zecora shows Josh [[spoiler: her scrapbook of her and her family]], and he immediately becomes furious. But when she psychoanalyzes him and virtually picks him apart with her words and intelligence, he comes extremely close to ignoring his principle of [[WouldNotHitAGirl not hitting girls]] and [[WouldHitAGirl assaulting her]].
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story starts out lightearted and funny, but with [[spoiler: the revelations about Josh's past]] and [[spoiler: his strange dreams]], it's slowly getting a darker plot.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: [[spoiler: Slowly but surely, Josh's JerkAss tendencies are decreasing more and more.]]
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: CharacterDevelopment: [[spoiler: Slowly but surely, Josh's JerkAss tendencies are decreasing more and more.]]
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: [[spoiler: Slowly but surely, Josh's JerkAss tendencies are decreasing more and more.]]
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** He also finds himself having to ''consciously try'' to be a jerk to Fluttershy. He backs down when she gives him a cute look. Subverted in [[spoiler: Chapter 29, where he seems to go right back to insulting Fluttershy naturally.
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** He also finds himself having to ''consciously try'' to be a jerk to Fluttershy. He backs down when she gives him a cute look. Subverted in [[spoiler: Chapter 29, where he seems to go right back to insulting Fluttershy naturally.naturally]].
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** He also finds himself having to ''consciously try'' to be a jerk to Fluttershy. He backs down when she gives him a cute look.
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** He also finds himself having to ''consciously try'' to be a jerk to Fluttershy. He backs down when she gives him a cute look. Subverted in [[spoiler: Chapter 29, where he seems to go right back to insulting Fluttershy naturally.
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** Well, he ''did'' try to be nice, at first.... before he promptly got laughed at and mocked for being the unfortunate victim of Slapstick Comedy.
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* OhCrap: Josh's reaction to [[spoiler: Applejack charging at him after he hurts Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash.]]
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* OhCrap: Josh's reaction to [[spoiler: Applejack charging at him after he hurts Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash. Also his reaction before getting promptly smacked down by Applejack again in the sleepover, as well as Derpy after he made fun of her "condition".]]
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* AmusingInjuries: Even [[spoiler: getting pushed off a cliff and flattened like a pancake]] doesn't leave any lasting impressions on Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
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* AmusingInjuries: Even [[spoiler: getting pushed off a cliff and flattened like a pancake]] doesn't leave any lasting impressions on Applejack and Rainbow Dash. [[spoiler: Neither does the Mane 6 and their experience with the "Pinkieball".]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: More like "even jerks have standards", but same idea. Josh finds the pony world exceptionally girly, but refuses to refer to it as "gay", knowing that word isn't supposed to be used as an insult.
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** The Cutie Mark Crusaders seem to be trying to ship Josh with [[spoiler: Applejack.]]
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* AmusingInjuries: Even [[spoiler: getting pushed off a cliff and flattened like a pancake]] doesn't leave any lasting impressions on Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[spoiler: Chapter 11 is titled ''Deception Is Bliss''. This alone makes it easy to tell Josh is faking it when he starts apologising.]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[spoiler: Chapter 11 is titled ''Deception Is Bliss''. This alone makes it easy to tell Josh is faking it when he starts apologising.apologizing.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Josh, as well as most canon examples.
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[spoiler: Chapter 11 is titled ''Deception Is Bliss''. This alone makes it easy to tell Josh is faking it when he starts apologising.]]
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* ShipperOnDeck: Josh temporarily ships Rainbow Dash with Twilight to distract the latter, and later with Fluttershy just out of frustration.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Josh temporarily ships Rainbow Dash with Twilight to distract the latter, and later with Fluttershy just out of frustration. [[spoiler: And eventually with Applejack, which leads to him deceiving them to push them off of a cliff.]]
