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* ArmorPericingQuestion: It doesn't have much of an effect the first time she's asked, but later on[[spoiler: Starlight reconsiders and joins Luna's team after she remembers the question under different circumstance]].
-->'''Princess Luna''': “Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes,[[spoiler: Starlight?]]”

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* ArmorPericingQuestion: ArmorPiercingQuestion: It doesn't have much of an effect the first time she's asked, but later on[[spoiler: Starlight on [[spoiler:Starlight reconsiders and joins Luna's team after she remembers the question under different circumstance]].
-->'''Princess Luna''': “Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes,[[spoiler: Starlight?]]”comes, [[spoiler:Starlight?]]”
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* ArmorPericingQuestion: It doesn't have much of an effect the first time she's asked, but later on[[spoiler: Starlight reconsiders and joins Luna's team after she remembers the question under different circumstance]].
-->'''Princess Luna''': “Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes,[[spoiler: Starlight?]]”
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** Trixie is in the middle of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E6NoSecondPrances The Humble and Penatent Trixie's Equestrian Applogy Tour]] when she's first introduced.

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** Trixie is in the middle of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E6NoSecondPrances The Humble and Penatent Penitent Trixie's Equestrian Applogy Tour]] when she's first introduced.
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* MoreExpendableThanYou: [[spoiler: This is essentially Starlight's reason for joining the team, she considers the Elements of Harmony too important to lose compared with herself]].
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** Starlight [[spoiler: initially]] refuses to join the team since [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E26TheCutieRemarkPart2 she feels guilty for destroying Equestria several times over]] and doesn't consider herself worthy.
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* CallBack: Several concerning each character during their introductions.
** The [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife Bugbear attack]] serves as the catalyst for the team's formation by Luna.
** Trixie is in the middle of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E6NoSecondPrances The Humble and Penatent Trixie's Equestrian Applogy Tour]] when she's first introduced.
** Bon Bon's past as a [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife secret agent]] comes back to haunt her.
** Lightning Dust is dealing with the aftermath of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E7WonderboltsAcademy Wonderbolts Academy]].
** Sonata Dusk, while she and the Sirens are seeking revenge for the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]], inadvertently finds herself back in Equestria after falling through one of the portals depicted in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames Friendship Games]].
** Ember is struggling as the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E5GauntletOfFire new Dragon Lord]].
** Therapsid played a role in the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 invasion of Canterlot]].
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Sonata ''constantly'' uses human terminology, even after she becomes a pony.
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!!The Undesirables contains examples of:

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!!The Undesirables !!''The Undesirables'' contains examples of:
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* GildedCage: Therapsid's prison cell, while not luxurious, is very comfortable, and he's kept supplied with his every need.


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* ThatCameOutWrong: Flash Sentry realizes he accidentally engaged in FantasticRacism when he said that nothing good came from outside Equestria, and Shining pointed out that both the Crystal Empire and Thorax are from outside Equestria.
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* RecruitingTheCriminal: Therapsid, whose been a prisoner in Canterlot since the changeling invasion in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 A Canterlot Wedding]].

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* RecruitingTheCriminal: Therapsid, whose been a prisoner in Canterlot since the changeling invasion in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 A Canterlot Wedding]].Wedding]], joins Luna's team in order to be released.
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* RecruitingTheCriminal: Therapsid, whose been a prisoner in Canterlot since the changeling invasion in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart2.

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* RecruitingTheCriminal: Therapsid, whose been a prisoner in Canterlot since the changeling invasion in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart2.[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 A Canterlot Wedding]].
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* RecruitingTheCriminal: Therapsid, whose been a prisoner in Canterlot since the changeling invasion in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart2.

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* BigGood: While Princess Celestia can be considered as this in the main series, Luna takes up the role here due to her the story's focus on her.

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* BigGood: While Princess Celestia can be considered as this in the main series, Luna takes up the role here due to her the story's focus on her.


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* CultureClash: Ember has a bit of trouble getting used to pony culture.
* ForgivenButNotForgotten: Luna states this is the case regarding her feelings towards Therapsid.
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Therapsid is happy to betray his species, having realized that what they did was wrong. Plus, they abandoned him after the invasion.
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* BigGood: While Princess Celestia can be considered as this in the main series, Luna takes up the role here due to her the story's focus on her.

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* WhosOnFirst: Luna briefly gets into this with Lightning Dust, due to a combination of Lightning being drunk and Luna using the RoyalWe.

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* WhosOnFirst: Luna briefly gets into this with Lightning Dust, Dust due to a combination of Lightning being drunk Dust's drunkenness and Luna using Luna's use of the RoyalWe.Main/RoyalWe, leading to the following exchange.
-->'''Princess Luna:''' As We were saying, I-
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' Who's We?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Me.
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' You?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Aye!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' I?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Yes!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' Me?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' SILENCE!
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* WasItAllWorthIt: Lightning has since realized that throwing away her chance at joining the Wonderbolts just for petty revenge for getting demoted wasn't really worth it.

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* WasItAllWorthIt: WasItReallyWorthIt: Lightning has since realized that throwing away her chance at joining the Wonderbolts just for petty revenge for getting demoted wasn't really worth it.
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* WasItWorthIt: Lightning has since realized that throwing away her chance at joining the Wonderbolts just for petty revenge for getting demoted wasn't really worth it.

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* WasItWorthIt: WasItAllWorthIt: Lightning has since realized that throwing away her chance at joining the Wonderbolts just for petty revenge for getting demoted wasn't really worth it.

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* AvengersAssemble

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* AvengersAssembleAvengersAssemble: Luna gathers a RagtagBunchOfMisfits to defend Equestria.



* RefusalOfTheCall: Starlight is the only pony who flat-out refuses to be a part of Luna's plan, since she feels unworthy of protecting Equestria after destroying it in countless timelines.
** [[spoiler:This lasts all of four chapters.]]

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* RefusalOfTheCall: Starlight is the only pony who flat-out refuses to be a part of Luna's plan, since she feels unworthy of protecting Equestria after destroying it in countless timelines.
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timelines. [[spoiler:This lasts all of four chapters.]]



* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society.

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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society.society.
* WasItWorthIt: Lightning has since realized that throwing away her chance at joining the Wonderbolts just for petty revenge for getting demoted wasn't really worth it.
* WhosOnFirst: Luna briefly gets into this with Lightning Dust, due to a combination of Lightning being drunk and Luna using the RoyalWe.
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** [[spoiler:This lasts all of four chapters.]]

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* NoodleIncident: Luna's solo exploits against various threats prior to forming the team, one of which led to her finding her opossum companion, Tiberius.
* {{Proud Warrior Race|Guy}}: The Dragons. The fact that the Dragon Lord is only considered the most supreme member of their race as long as they continue to show just how powerful they are is what drives Ember to join Luna's cause.



* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society.
* [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Proud Warrior Race]]: The Dragons. The fact that the Dragon Lord is only considered the most supreme member of their race as long as they continue to show just how powerful they are is what drives Ember to join Luna's cause.

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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society.
* [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Proud Warrior Race]]: The Dragons. The fact that the Dragon Lord is only considered the most supreme member of their race as long as they continue to show just how powerful they are is what drives Ember to join Luna's cause.
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* SpySpeak: The sign/countersign variant is utilised by Bon Bon at one point.
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* [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority Dragon Lord Ember]]: The youthful Princess of the Dragon Lands with leadership issues.
* [[TokenEvilTeammate Therapsid the Changeling]]: A prisoner who took part in the Invasion of Canterlot.

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* [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority Dragon Lord Ember]]: The youthful but inexperienced Princess of the Dragon Lands with leadership issues.
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* [[TokenEvilTeammate Therapsid the Changeling]]: A former prisoner who took part in the Invasion of Canterlot.
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society.

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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society.society.
* [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Proud Warrior Race]]: The Dragons. The fact that the Dragon Lord is only considered the most supreme member of their race as long as they continue to show just how powerful they are is what drives Ember to join Luna's cause.

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[[RagtagBunchOfMisfits The ragtag bunch of misfits]] include:

* [[DarkIsNotEvil Princess Luna]]: The repentant sister of Celestia who dedicates herself to Equestria's protection.

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[[RagtagBunchOfMisfits The ragtag bunch of misfits]] include:

* [[DarkIsNotEvil Princess Luna]]: The repentant sister of Celestia who dedicates herself to Equestria's protection.
This RagtagBunchOfMisfits includes:



* [[AffablyEvil Sonata Dusk:]] A once magical Siren, now stranded earth pony teenager.
* [[NominalHero Special Agent Sweetie Drops]]: Or 'Bon Bon' as she prefers to be called.

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* [[AffablyEvil Sonata Dusk:]] Dusk]]: A once magical Siren, now stranded earth Earth pony teenager.
* [[NominalHero Special Agent Sweetie Drops]]: Or 'Bon Bon' as she prefers to be called.A disgruntled government operative who has retired under the name "Bon Bon".



!! The Undesirables contains examples of:
* TheAlcoholic: Lightning Dust
* {{Animorphism}} / InvoluntaryShapeshifting: Sonata [[spoiler: is turned into a pony upon returning to Equestria due to the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]] rendering her fully human.]]

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!! The !!The Undesirables contains examples of:
* TheAlcoholic: Lightning Dust
Dust has turned to the bottle ever since she dropped out of Wonderbolt Academy.
* {{Animorphism}} / InvoluntaryShapeshifting: {{Animorphism}}: Sonata [[spoiler: is turned into a pony upon returning to Equestria due to after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]] rendering Rocks]]'' rendered her fully human.]]



* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] [[spoiler:kidnaps]] Starlight Glimmer.
* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: [[spoiler: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society]].

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* RefusalOfTheCall: Starlight is the only pony who flat-out refuses to be a part of Luna's plan, since she feels unworthy of protecting Equestria after destroying it in countless timelines.
* SecretTestOfCharacter: To test Trixie's worth, Luna puts her into a dream where she is attacked by an inexplicably evil Twilight Sparkle. Trixie [[KnowWhenToFoldEm not only realizes she's outmatched from the start]] (which is all Luna was testing her for), she instinctively runs to get Twilight's friends for a solution.
* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] [[spoiler:kidnaps]] kidnaps Starlight Glimmer.
* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: [[spoiler: Sonata returns back to Equestria after a thousand years absence and has trouble adjusting to Equestrian society]].society.
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* AvengersAssemble
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* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] [spoiler:kidnaps]] Starlight Glimmer.

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* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] [spoiler:kidnaps]] [[spoiler:kidnaps]] Starlight Glimmer.
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* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] [spoiler:kidnaps]] Starlight Glimmer.
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* {{Animorphism}}: Sonata [[spoiler: is turned into a pony upon returning to Equestria due to the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]] rendering her fully human.]]

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* {{Animorphism}}: {{Animorphism}} / InvoluntaryShapeshifting: Sonata [[spoiler: is turned into a pony upon returning to Equestria due to the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]] rendering her fully human.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Eat your heart out Avengers.]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:Eat your heart out hearts out, Avengers.]]

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