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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Itachi's been raising cain and causing well-intentioned havoc thanks to his summer camp, leaving several teams of very-tough graduates. His punishment? He's now the sensei of Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Itachi's been raising cain and causing well-intentioned havoc thanks to his summer camp, leaving several teams of very-tough graduates. His punishment? He's now the sensei of Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura.Sakura.
*CoolSword: Samehada, natch. Zabuza gives Kubikiribocho to Kisame for Tenten since he was going to die killing Gato anyways. He's now aiming to get permission to go out and kill another Swordsman to get their sword for Neji and round out the team, since Lee gets Samehada when Kisame dies. Since they're ninja swords with various abilities, all are definitely this.
*CoolSword: Samehada, natch. Zabuza gives Kubikiribocho to Kisame for Tenten since he was going to die killing Gato anyways. He's now aiming to get permission to go out and kill another Swordsman to get their sword for Neji and round out the team, since Lee gets Samehada when Kisame dies. Since they're ninja swords with various abilities, all are definitely this.
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**Neji and fate. He's gotten past it enough to attempt to make jokes on it.
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* CurbStompBattle: Kisame vs. Zabuza in Wave, where it's even lampshaded that he already knows all of Zabuza's best moves and how to handle them. Zabuza then tries to make it about the genin, to which Kisame notes that through watching him over the summers they've pretty much learned to handle Zabuza's more likely techniques like the Water Prison. It makes Haku's fake hunter-ninja stint even more of a save than in canon.
* HighlyVisibleNinja: It's noted that genin are more concerned with looking non-threatening to the civilians who hire them, thus excusing their slightly more wild senses of style than chunin and jonin.
** Kisame admits to being one on purpose: he knows how to use Silent Killing as well as Zabuza if not better, but he finds it boring compared to what he can do with his flashier stuff.
** Kisame admits to being one on purpose: he knows how to use Silent Killing as well as Zabuza if not better, but he finds it boring compared to what he can do with his flashier stuff.
* MundanemadeAwesome: Due to living in apartments all his life, Naruto is impressed that Tazuna's family home has ''two floors all to itself.'' Tenten then ups the ante by revealing her house actually has three floors.
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** After Mizuki starts what could be a StartOfDarkness, Kisame notes that his condition would be referred to in Mist as "The Emo" which leads to "Rage, resentment, crazy plots against your pals, possibly joining up with insane plotters" referencing both Sasuke and Mizuki's canon paths and the fandom tendency to call Sasuke emo.
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** After Mizuki starts what could be a StartOfDarkness, Kisame notes that his condition would be referred to in Mist as "The Emo" which leads to "Rage, resentment, crazy plots against your pals, possibly joining up with insane plotters" referencing both Sasuke and Mizuki's canon paths involving Orochimaru and the fandom tendency to call Sasuke emo.
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** Noriko and Shisui are somehwere between this and SitcomArchNemesis.
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* CassandraTruth: Chapter 9 his Mizuki do this totally on accident when trying to distract Kabuto, where he blabs about the Uchiha's current status in the village, their and others' problems with Danzou, and something surprisingly similar to the original coup plan (shocking the older uchiha nearby). He actually doesn't know that much about any of the three due to his low security clearance as a chunin, thus making it this trope to himself, too. When Sasuke and Naruto find out way later how close to right he was about the coup, they're both shocked.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru agrees with Iruka that Jiraiya's smut is a terrible excuse for literature, and is also horrified when he finds out people think he wants Sasuke's body in a non-platonic way.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Nearly everyone who shows up in the prologue, excluding Mikoto whose came in the third chapter. Iruka is the OnlySaneMan, Itachi has CloudCuckoolander tendencies, Kisame is on the side of good but still a BloodKnight, Anko's a flirt, Kakashi is chill and loves his orange books...
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru agrees with Iruka that Jiraiya's smut is a terrible excuse for literature, and is alsohorrified ''horrified'' when he finds out people think he wants Sasuke's body in a non-platonic way.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru agrees with Iruka that Jiraiya's smut is a terrible excuse for literature, and is also
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 9, where Kabuto ends up exposed as a spy and Naruto (along with Sasuke) learns about the Kyuubi years earlier than canon. Fittingly it's less zany than other chapters.
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** Danzou only has Shisui's eye and not a store of extra Shraingan due to the massacre not occurring. [[spoiler: His over-reliance on the former allows Mizuki and Iruka to beat him once they figure out a way around it.]]
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* OddFriendship: Itachi and pretty much anyone he's friends with, especially Kisame. Ino and Shino form one as well.
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* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Noriko is entirely capable of handling Itachi's odder tendencies and is willing to do things like give him two years heads' up for he first official date since she knows he has NoSocialSkills. He seems to simply be happy she's not a brainless fangirl and instead someone he can call a friend and rely on in a fight.
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* CargoShip: Mizuki and Giant Shuriken, Shuriken and Kisame and Samehada.Samehada are both joked about in-universe. Neither man is amused.
* CatsAreMean: There is an entire chapter dedicated to Team 7's Tora-catching efforts. They eventually dub him more horrible than the Kyuubi could ever hope to be.
* CatsAreMean: There is an entire chapter dedicated to Team 7's Tora-catching efforts. They eventually dub him more horrible than the Kyuubi could ever hope to be.
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** The Kyuubi. even after Naruto becomes a ninja it's only slightly involved in Wave and only starts chatting during the chunin exams when it senses Shukaku.
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** The Kyuubi. even Even after Naruto becomes a ninja it's only slightly involved in Wave and only starts chatting during the chunin exams when it senses Shukaku.Shukaku.
* EmbarrassingNickname: The Kyuubi is rechristened "K-kun" by Naruto and his teammates as they agree Tora is a far greater monster. This later extends to the whole Konoha 12, leading to Lee then referring to Shukaku with the same affectionate suffix.
* EmbarrassingNickname: The Kyuubi is rechristened "K-kun" by Naruto and his teammates as they agree Tora is a far greater monster. This later extends to the whole Konoha 12, leading to Lee then referring to Shukaku with the same affectionate suffix.
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* ForWantOfANail: The main one is the delay of the Uchiha coup by the Sandaime using Itachi's recruitment of Kisame to hint that he considers Itachi a good successor (despite Itachi personally having no interest). This causes the coup to eventually [[spoiler: get turned into an inter-clan civil war years later when Naruto is noted as the preferred successor.]]
** Mizuki is stopped from turning evil, which leads to him reading some files when he was helping Iruka out and deciding to look into an old classmate, leading to them accidentally making said classmate, [[TheMole Kabuto]], paranoid in thinking his cover was blown, leading to Naruto finding out about the Kyuubi at age nine while Kabuto flees the leaf.
** The presence of the Uchiha clan means Orochimaru was unwilling to kill the Fourth Kazekage since it would deprive the invasion of a powerful force. The Kazekage tries to tip things in their favor by hiring an Akatsuki team, accidentally complicating things for both sides. [[spoiler: Which leads to Sasori and Kakuzu dying while Orochimaru is too tired to use Edo Tensei against the Hokage.]]
** A rivalry with Itachi formed over many years of border patrol clashes kept Deidara in Iwa longer, since he and Onoki bonded over how much they dislike Uchiha.
** Mizuki is stopped from turning evil, which leads to him reading some files when he was helping Iruka out and deciding to look into an old classmate, leading to them accidentally making said classmate, [[TheMole Kabuto]], paranoid in thinking his cover was blown, leading to Naruto finding out about the Kyuubi at age nine while Kabuto flees the leaf.
** The presence of the Uchiha clan means Orochimaru was unwilling to kill the Fourth Kazekage since it would deprive the invasion of a powerful force. The Kazekage tries to tip things in their favor by hiring an Akatsuki team, accidentally complicating things for both sides. [[spoiler: Which leads to Sasori and Kakuzu dying while Orochimaru is too tired to use Edo Tensei against the Hokage.]]
** A rivalry with Itachi formed over many years of border patrol clashes kept Deidara in Iwa longer, since he and Onoki bonded over how much they dislike Uchiha.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Outside of Itachi being forced to teach Team 7, all the team are exactly the same.
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* ShoutOut: Two of the [[spoiler: former ROOT kids]] with noted BelligerentSexualTension are named [[Manga/DeathNote Eru and Raito.]]
** Naruto reads a pirate manga and Iruka once goes shopping at [[Manga/OnePiece King Luffy's Krafts]].
** Naruto reads a pirate manga and Iruka once goes shopping at [[Manga/OnePiece King Luffy's Krafts]].
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted, and Itachi is determined to try and get Neji to see one, however once Gai is Neji's sensei the therapists assume ''Gai'' wants the therapy and all run away.
** Iruka and Mizuki are later made into therapists [[spoiler: for the liberated ROOT kids and even later Orochimaru]] though Mizuki doesn't take it all that seriously.
** Iruka and Mizuki are later made into therapists [[spoiler: for the liberated ROOT kids and even later Orochimaru]] though Mizuki doesn't take it all that seriously.
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* ActionGirl: Most female ninja in Konoha. Often happily commented on by Kisame, who thinks it's awesome.
** The Kyuubi. even after Naruto becomes a ninja it's only slightly involved in Wave and only starts chatting during the chunin exams when it senses Shukaku.
** Post-invasion the Sand Siblings have the pastime of doing this during Suna's council meetings. Temari is horrified when Kankuro's comments on it inspire Elder Chiyo to ''actually eat popcorn'' during an important meeting.
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** For a long time, whether or not Iruka actually did have a crush on someone and was very good at hiding it or was just yanking the Official Couple's chains. [[spoiler: He did, on Kakashi.]]
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* SeriousBusiness: The gossip that Uchiha Itachi is dating ''someone'' was so talked-about in Konoha that spies reported on it and it almost reached the Raikage's desk. Itachi was mortified.
** Art, to Deidara. He's horrified to find out that the piece he bought at auction for his sensei was made by an Uchiha.
** Art, to Deidara. He's horrified to find out that the piece he bought at auction for his sensei was made by an Uchiha.
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* AlmightyMom: Mikoto has her moments.
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** Itachi himself is perfectly fine with causing chaos if it's for a good cause.
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* NeverMessWithGranny: Uchiha Elder Mira and her friend villager Elder Koharu.
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Itachi chooses a different path and arranges for several academy children to receive extra training.training via "ninja summer camp". Can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8560313/1/The-Somewhat-Cracked-Mind-of-Uchiha-Itachi here.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru agrees with Iruka that Jiraiya's smut is a terrible excuse for literature, and is also horrified when he finds out people think he wants Sasuke in a non-platonic way.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru agrees with Iruka that Jiraiya's smut is a terrible excuse for literature, and is also horrified when he finds out people think he wants Sasuke Sasuke's body in a non-platonic way.
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** Deidara stays in Iwa due to first bonding with his teacher Onoki over how much they hate dealing with Uchiha and later when he finds out Onoki's Dust Release blows things up amazingly. This means when Akatsuki tries to recurit recruit him forcibly, Onoki declares war.
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* LoopholeAbuse: How Itachi managed to pull off the extra training program. Clan kids are allowed to be taught extra things by family members while still in the academy. Nothing says those kids can't bring along a friend or dozen to that training, nor that the family members can't ask ''their'' friends for assistance.
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* AnimalCompanion: Sakura tames a park squirrel she names Cappy (Sasuke recused it from choking on a plastic cap with surgery) and Naruto omes up with seals to let her summon him. He's very useful and even helps her beat Hinata in the finals since his limbs are too tiny to easily disable.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru agrees with Iruka that Jiraiya's smut is a terrible excuse for literature, and is also horrified when he finds out people think he wants Sasuke in a non-platonic way.
* EvilPlan: Orochimaru had his canon one of wanting Sasuke's body [[spoiler: but he also wanted to force both Sasuke and Itachi to get the Mangekyo so he could get the Eternal Mangekyo to get the Rinnegan to unlock the secrets of ninjutsu itself.]] The plan has issues when it seems Sasuke is having trouble getting the Sharingan in the first place, and Orochimaru is overjoyed when he finds out the kid finally did it.
* EvilPlan: Orochimaru had his canon one of wanting Sasuke's body [[spoiler: but he also wanted to force both Sasuke and Itachi to get the Mangekyo so he could get the Eternal Mangekyo to get the Rinnegan to unlock the secrets of ninjutsu itself.]] The plan has issues when it seems Sasuke is having trouble getting the Sharingan in the first place, and Orochimaru is overjoyed when he finds out the kid finally did it.
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* MistakenForPedophile: Orochimaru is horrified when Jiriaya explains what people think he wants to do with Sasuke.
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** Hidan. It blows his attempt to recruit Deidara.
* CargoShip: Mizuki and Giant Shuriken, Kisame and Samehada. Neither man is amused.
* CargoShip: Mizuki and Giant Shuriken, Kisame and Samehada. Neither man is amused.
* CloudCuckoolander: Itachi, as noted by the title, is a bit off. During the invasion the kids wonder if he's finally fully cracked [[spoiler: after he starts laughing when he sees a bunch of genin kill two members of Akatsuki]]. He's okay, though.
* EnemyMine: Iwa and Konoha in order to interrogate Hidan's head by mind-reading. Lampshaded since Deidara thought he was StatingTheSimpleSolution by asking why they didn't just hire a Yamanaka in the first place.
--> “…You do know Konoha has been our enemy for generations, right?” one interrogator asked.
** Orochimaru proposes one with Itachi when Akatsuki's trying to kill them both. Itachi refuses since Orochimaru wants his brother.
--> “…You do know Konoha has been our enemy for generations, right?” one interrogator asked.
** Orochimaru proposes one with Itachi when Akatsuki's trying to kill them both. Itachi refuses since Orochimaru wants his brother.
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* TheGambler: ''The entire police force'' during the chunin preliminaries, due to budget cuts. Thanks to knowing about the Konoha kids, they make a killing.
* MeleeATrois: Itachi vs. Orochimaru vs. Sasori and Kakuzu during the invasion. Several of the Konoha 12 and Gaara arrive to back up Itachi, though he lasts for a long time on his own.
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* NoSocialSkills: Itachi's are rather poor, often leading to him deferring to Iruka in social situations. It's so bad Noriko gives him ''two years'' advance notice for their first real date, just to make sure he's had time to think it over. He's goo with kids, though.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Orochimaru might have had a chance against Itachi if the Fourth Kazekage hadn't hired Akatsuki as invaison backup. Sasori and Kakuzu both want him dead too much to let him be, leading to a MeleeATrois.
** Also to Orochimaru for not killing him, though he wanted another high-class ninja due to Itachi, Shisui, and the other Uchiha still being around.
* NoSocialSkills: Itachi's are rather poor, often leading to him deferring to Iruka in social situations. It's so bad Noriko gives him ''two years'' advance notice for their first real date, just to make sure he's had time to think it over. He'sgoo good with kids, though.
** Also to Orochimaru for not killing him, though he wanted another high-class ninja due to Itachi, Shisui, and the other Uchiha still being around.
* NoSocialSkills: Itachi's are rather poor, often leading to him deferring to Iruka in social situations. It's so bad Noriko gives him ''two years'' advance notice for their first real date, just to make sure he's had time to think it over. He's
* TheRival: Deidara and Itachi keep running into each other on missions, though they don't know each other's exact names (Itachi knows him as "the crazy Iwa nin" and Deidara as "that insufferable Uchiha). When they finally meet outside of combat, it's funny.
** The police force's bureaucratic and budget woes.
* SentientWeapon: Samehada. She's a girl and likes Lee, meaning he gets her if Kisame dies. She also argues with Kisame a lot.
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* StationsOfTheCanon: Through the chunin exams, excluding how Naruto learns Kage Bushin since he doesn't fail. Afterwards Tsunade is only retrieved after Team Seven kidnaps Orochimaru (with no Sasuke retrieval needed) and then it really goes OffTheRails since the author has declined to include a timeskip ''at all'' and the Kage Council gets called three years early.
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* StationsOfTheCanon: Through the chunin exams, excluding how Naruto learns Kage Bushin since he doesn't fail. Afterwards Tsunade is only retrieved after Team Seven kidnaps Orochimaru (with no Sasuke retrieval needed) and then it really goes OffTheRails since the author has declined to include a timeskip ''at all'' and the Kage Council gets called three years early.early, by Onoki of all people.
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** The Sand Siblings make one slightly earlier than canon. Very slightly.
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Danzou was not sure if this was going on or not during his conversation with Iruka and Mizuki, and tried very hard not to reveal anything they might not actually know. It didn't help.
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Danzou was not sure if this was going on or not during his conversation with Iruka and Mizuki, and tried very hard not to reveal anything they might not actually know. It didn't help.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Tsume arranges one between Sakura and Kiba when she sees Sakura's taijutsu skills. They just sort of go with it, since they can decide to dissolve it once they're both fifteen or chunin, whichever is first.
* Badass: Prety much [[WorldOfBadass everyone]].
** BadassBookworm: Iruka, Sakura, and Itachi.
** TookALevelInBadass: Iruka and Mizuki compared to canon. Sakura sooner than in canon.
* Badass: Prety much [[WorldOfBadass everyone]].
** BadassBookworm: Iruka, Sakura, and Itachi.
** TookALevelInBadass: Iruka and Mizuki compared to canon. Sakura sooner than in canon.
* TheChessmaster: Shikamaru and Mikoto both in the same chapter, with him knowing she's using him but not really caring since he likes her plan too. Mikoto later helps Itachi out after all three of his students make the finals.
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* CreepyChild:Apparently Kisame was one.one, according ton himself.
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* DemotedToExtra: Kakashi, since he's not Team 7's sensei. [[spoiler: At least not until after the Kage summit.]]
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** TheChick: Tsubaki
** SixthRanger: Kakashi, Gai, Kurenai, and Anko all get turns.
* TheGadfly: Shisui seems to be this. At one point he claims he is Itachi's fiancé.
** SixthRanger: Kakashi, Gai, Kurenai, and Anko all get turns.
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** SixthRanger: Kakashi, Gai, Kurenai, Shisui, and Anko all get turns.
* TheGadfly: Shisui seems to be this. At one point he claimshe ''he'' is Itachi's fiancé.
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** Deidara stays in Iwa due to first bonding with his teacher Onoki over how much they hate dealing with Uchiha and later when he finds out Onoki's Dust Release blows things up amazingly. This means when Akatsuki tries to recurit him forcibly, Onoki declares war.
** Deidara stays in Iwa due to first bonding with his teacher Onoki over how much they hate dealing with Uchiha and later when he finds out Onoki's Dust Release blows things up amazingly. This means when Akatsuki tries to recurit him forcibly, Onoki declares war.
* LoveTriangle: Sakura with Lee and Kiba. Slight one with Tenten, Neji, and Kankuro.
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** After Mizuki starts what could be a StartOfDarkness, Kisame notes that his condition would be reffered referred to in Mist as "The Emo" which leads to "Rage, resentment, crazy plots against your pals, possibly joining up with insane plotters" referencing both Sasuke and Mizuki's canon paths and the fandom tendency to call Sasuke emo.emo.
* NeverLiveItDown: In-universe, Sasuke accidentally blowing up an opponent's heart. He was ''trying'' to rupture a tendon.
* NoSocialSkills: Itachi's are rather poor, often leading to him deferring to Iruka in social situations. It's so bad Noriko gives him ''two years'' advance notice for their first real date, just to make sure he's had time to think it over. He's goo with kids, though.
* OCStandIn: Noriko Uchiha for Itachi's canon girlfriend. She's his fiance, a chunin, and an archer. Her main role in the story is as a CoolBigSis to the Konoha 12 and Sasuke and TheRival to Shisui. She and Itachi mostly spend their date money on ninja tools and hide out under a genjutsu until their parents think the date's probably over.
* NeverLiveItDown: In-universe, Sasuke accidentally blowing up an opponent's heart. He was ''trying'' to rupture a tendon.
* NoSocialSkills: Itachi's are rather poor, often leading to him deferring to Iruka in social situations. It's so bad Noriko gives him ''two years'' advance notice for their first real date, just to make sure he's had time to think it over. He's goo with kids, though.
* OCStandIn: Noriko Uchiha for Itachi's canon girlfriend. She's his fiance, a chunin, and an archer. Her main role in the story is as a CoolBigSis to the Konoha 12 and Sasuke and TheRival to Shisui. She and Itachi mostly spend their date money on ninja tools and hide out under a genjutsu until their parents think the date's probably over.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka and Mizuki to Naruto. Mizuki even threatens a nurse with giant shuriken for ignoring him when Naruto is clearly sick.
** Itachi to Sasuke. Therefore he is very upset about Orochimaru's apparent obsession with his brother.
* BloodKnight: Kisame calls himself such in the first chapter. Mizuki has shades as well, since his usual response to a situation is giant shuriken.
* CombatMedic: Sasuke. He's actually better at using medical techniques to harm than he intends to be.
** Itachi to Sasuke. Therefore he is very upset about Orochimaru's apparent obsession with his brother.
* BloodKnight: Kisame calls himself such in the first chapter. Mizuki has shades as well, since his usual response to a situation is giant shuriken.
* CombatMedic: Sasuke. He's actually better at using medical techniques to harm than he intends to be.
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* FiveManBand: Formed by the summer camp counselors:
** TheLeader: Itachi
** The Lancer: Mizuki, sometimes Iruka
** TheSmartGuy: Iruka
** TheBigGuy; Kisame
** TheChick: Tsubaki
** SixthRanger: Kakashi, Gai, Kurenai, and Anko all get turns.
** TheLeader: Itachi
** The Lancer: Mizuki, sometimes Iruka
** TheSmartGuy: Iruka
** TheBigGuy; Kisame
** TheChick: Tsubaki
** SixthRanger: Kakashi, Gai, Kurenai, and Anko all get turns.
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** Itachi himself is perfectly fine with causing chaos if it's for a good cause.
* HeelFaceTurn: Mizuki, more accurately he's prevented from making a FaceHeelTurn in the first place.
** Kisame, due to being recruited by Itachi right when he was considering leaving Kiri.
* HeelFaceTurn: Mizuki, more accurately he's prevented from making a FaceHeelTurn in the first place.
** Kisame, due to being recruited by Itachi right when he was considering leaving Kiri.
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** After Mizuki starts what could be a StartOfDarkness, Kisame notes that his condition would be reffered to in Mist as "The Emo" which leads to "Rage, resentment, crazy plots against your pals, possibly joining up with insane plotters" referencing both Sasuke and Mizuki's canon paths and the fandom tendency to call Sasuke emo.
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* RuleOfFunny: WordOfGod is that the fic will run on this more than anything else, as a reaction to how dark and sad canon was getting when the fic was started.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Itachi is weaker than canon due to not having the Mangekyo Sharingan. Still a top-class ninja, though.
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training. Can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8560313/1/The-Somewhat-Cracked-Mind-of-Uchiha-Itachi here.]]
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* MythologyGag: When Sasuke asks Itachi what would happen to Shisui if he revealed to Ino, Sakura and Shino the identity of his girlfriend, he states:
-->"Itachi: “Then, little brother, I may just have to plot against him, and maybe kill him and make it look like suicide if things go too far.”
-->"Kiba: "…That was weirdly specific."
-->"Itachi: “Then, little brother, I may just have to plot against him, and maybe kill him and make it look like suicide if things go too far.”
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* SneezeCut: It happens to Deidara when Itachi talks about him to the children.
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* OnceKilledAManWithANoodleImplement: ''Ninja''. Bound to come up.
-->Shikamaru: "Whoa…I think my mom just killed a guy with her sandal…"
-->Shikamaru: "Whoa…I think my mom just killed a guy with her sandal…"
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* DeadpanSnarker: Quite a few. Itachi has quite a few moments. Actually, everyone seems to have their moment at some point.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Quite a
* TheGadfly: Shisui seems to be this. At one point he claims he is Itachi's
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CreepyChild: Apparently Kisame was one.
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InsanityImmunity: Iruka seems quite stable compared to those he frequently hangs out with. Kurenai once said Itachi was sane but he disagreed.
-->Itachi:"Now who said anything about sanity? Now if you want sanity, I'm sure Iruka can give you sanity."
-->Itachi:"Now who said anything about sanity? Now if you want sanity, I'm sure Iruka can give you sanity."
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InsanityImmunity: Iruka seems quite stable compared to those he frequently hangs out with. Kurenai once said Itachi was sane but he disagreed.
-->Itachi:"Now who said anything about sanity? Now if you want sanity, I'm sure Iruka can give you sanity."
-->Itachi:"Now who said anything about sanity? Now if you want sanity, I'm sure Iruka can give you sanity."
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DeadpanSnarker: Quite a few.
TheGadfly: Shushi seems to be this. At one point he claims he is Itachi's fiancé.
TheGadfly: Shushi seems to be this. At one point he claims he is Itachi's fiancé.
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LoopholeAbuse: How Itachi managed to pull off the extra training program.
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PassThePopcorn: Itachi at one point states his in this sort of mood.
PassThePopcorn: Itachi at one point states his in this sort of mood.
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-->"Itachi didn't kill the clan, instead he and his friends are teaching the next generation to drive them (and maybe the rest of Konoha) crazy. Won't that be fun?"
Itachi chooses a different path and arranges for several academy children to receive extra training.
Itachi chooses a different path and arranges for several academy children to receive extra training.
