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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: Garon's concubines constantly plot against each other in bids to climb the social ladder (and thus get more power), leading to somewhat frequent murders to remove the competition. While Garon knows that his mistresses are killing each other and their children, they cover their tracks well enough that he's unable to prove anything, and thus he's unable to stop them. When the concubines aren't killing each other, they're engaged in PassiveAggressiveCombat and PolitenessJudo, making Nohr's court life an incredibly hostile environment.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: DecadentCourt: Garon's concubines constantly plot against each other in bids to climb the social ladder (and thus get more power), leading to somewhat frequent murders to remove the competition. While Garon knows that his mistresses are killing each other and their children, they cover their tracks well enough that he's unable to prove anything, and thus he's unable to stop them. When the concubines aren't killing each other, they're engaged in PassiveAggressiveCombat and PolitenessJudo, making Nohr's court life an incredibly hostile environment.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Garon and [[spoiler:Jeanette]] used to be good friends before he had an affair with her and got her pregnant. Being included in Nohr's DeadlyDecadentCourt twisted her mindset to the point where she decided that Katerina had to die.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Garon and [[spoiler:Jeanette]] used to be good friends before he had an affair with her and got her pregnant. Being included in Nohr's DeadlyDecadentCourt DecadentCourt twisted her mindset to the point where she decided that Katerina had to die.
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* DoesntKnowTheirOwnChild: While Garon is a [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative much better parent than most of his concubines]], he still has to have a journal to keep track of numerous children's personal info such as likes and dislikes.
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* DoesntKnowTheirOwnChild: While Garon is a [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative much better parent than most of his concubines]], he still has to have a journal to keep track of his numerous children's personal info such as likes and dislikes.
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* DoesntKnowTheirOwnChild: While Garon is a [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative much better parent than most of his concubines]], he still has to have a journal to keep track of numerous children's personal info such as likes and dislikes.
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* GoodParents: Since the concubines view their children as expendable tools, Garon tries to make up for it by being as good and loving a father as possible. He ensures that he spends some time with them every day, acts encouraging and friendly even when they do something bad, and keeps a journal about them with personal info (such as their likes, dislikes, etc.) so he can cater to them better.
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* GoodParents: GoodParents:
** Since the concubines view their children as expendable tools, Garon tries to make up for it by being as good and loving a father as possible. He ensures that he spends some time with them every day, acts encouraging and friendly even when they do something bad, and keeps a journal about them with personal info (such as their likes, dislikes, etc.) so he can cater to thembetter.better.
** Also in contrast to the concubines, Katerina is portrayed as a good and doting mother to Xander.
** Since the concubines view their children as expendable tools, Garon tries to make up for it by being as good and loving a father as possible. He ensures that he spends some time with them every day, acts encouraging and friendly even when they do something bad, and keeps a journal about them with personal info (such as their likes, dislikes, etc.) so he can cater to them
** Also in contrast to the concubines, Katerina is portrayed as a good and doting mother to Xander.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Katerina has to use a candlestick during the fight against her and Garon's assassins, as the couple was ambushed in bed.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Katerina has to use a candlestick during the fight against her and Garon's again a group of assassins, as she and Garon were attacked in the couple was ambushed in bed.middle of the night while sleeping.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Garon rightfully suspects that Penelope was murdered, but whoever committed the deed made it look like her death was just due to an unfortunate fall off of a balcony.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Garon rightfully suspects that Penelope was murdered, but whoever committed the deed made it look like her death was just due to caused by an unfortunate fall off of a balcony.
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* NoNameGiven: Elise's future mother shows up in the final chapter as Garon's bedmate, but she's only identified to as the troubadour assigned to Garon to help him out of his depression.
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* NoNameGiven: Elise's future mother shows up in the final chapter as Garon's bedmate, but she's only identified to as the some nameless troubadour assigned to Garon to help him out of his depression.
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Sinkhole. Rewriting.
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* FireKeepsItDead: Nohrian funerals involve immolating the deceased's body. The practice started untold years ago as a response to sorcerers attempting to learn how to resurrect humans, which itself was spurned by the discovery that wyverns could be reanimated with magic. The logic behind it is that one cannot revive a body that doesn't exist anymore. [[spoiler:However, this doesn't stop [[{{Necromancer}} Anankos]] from resurrecting the dead.]]
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* FireKeepsItDead: Nohrian funerals involve immolating the deceased's body. The practice started untold years ago as a response to sorcerers attempting to learn how to resurrect humans, which itself was spurned by the discovery that wyverns could be reanimated with magic. The logic behind it is that one cannot revive a body that doesn't exist anymore. [[spoiler:However, this [[spoiler:This doesn't stop [[{{Necromancer}} Anankos]] from resurrecting Anankos, who is able to reanimate Katerina despite the dead.fact that she was cremated.]]
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* FireKeepsItDead: Nohrian funerals involve immolating the deceased's body. The practice started untold years ago as a response to sorcerers attempting to learn how to resurrect humans, which itself was spurned by the discovery that wyverns could be reanimated with magic. The logic behind it is that one cannot revive a body that doesn't exist anymore.
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* FireKeepsItDead: Nohrian funerals involve immolating the deceased's body. The practice started untold years ago as a response to sorcerers attempting to learn how to resurrect humans, which itself was spurned by the discovery that wyverns could be reanimated with magic. The logic behind it is that one cannot revive a body that doesn't exist anymore. [[spoiler:However, this doesn't stop [[{{Necromancer}} Anankos]] from resurrecting the dead.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12036784/1/The-Lost-King The Lost King]]'' is an ongoing multi-chapter ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' fanfic by Creator/TheApocryphalOne. It is written as a companion piece to one of the author's previous works, ''FanFic/TheInvisiblePrincess'', taking place between Chapters 4 and 6 of that story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12036784/1/The-Lost-King net/s/12036784/1/ The Lost King]]'' is an ongoing a multi-chapter ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' fanfic by Creator/TheApocryphalOne. It is written as a companion piece to one of the author's previous works, ''FanFic/TheInvisiblePrincess'', taking place between Chapters 4 and 6 of that story.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with Garon killed and reanimated as a puppet of Anankos.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with Garon killed and reanimated as a puppet of puppet--a "Water Elemental"--of Anankos.
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* NoNameGiven: Elise's future mother shows up in the final chapter as Garon's bedmate, but she's only identified to as a the troubadour assigned to Garon to help him out of his depression.
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* NoNameGiven: Elise's future mother shows up in the final chapter as Garon's bedmate, but she's only identified to as a the troubadour assigned to Garon to help him out of his depression.
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* AntiVillain: Garon doesn't want to authorize the raids on Hoshido, but due to circumstances outside of his control, the only other option he has is to let his own people starve.
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* AntiVillain: AntiVillain:
** Garon doesn't want to authorize the raids on Hoshido, but due to circumstances outside of his control, the only other option he has is to let his own peoplestarve.starve.
** Chapter 7 reveals that Iago only serves Anankos out of fear and self-preservation, and he constantly has to justify his actions to himself.
** Garon doesn't want to authorize the raids on Hoshido, but due to circumstances outside of his control, the only other option he has is to let his own people
** Chapter 7 reveals that Iago only serves Anankos out of fear and self-preservation, and he constantly has to justify his actions to himself.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with Garon killed and reanimated as a puppet of Anankos.
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* HeroicBSOD: After Arete dies, Garon get depressed and stays in his room for a month.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Iago has to keep telling himself that everything he does for Anankos is absolutely necessary for his own survival.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Iago has to keep telling himself that everything he does for Anankos is absolutely necessary for his own survival.
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* NoNameGiven: Elise's future mother shows up in the final chapter as Garon's bedmate, but she's only identified to as a the troubadour assigned to Garon to help him out of his depression.
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** Chapter 5 has several ''Invisible Princess'' characters themselves showing up, including Duchess Hiromi, Sumeragi, Mikoto, and Kamui.
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* TraumaticHaircut: Azura has her hair forcibly cut short by several of her older step-siblings in Chapter 5, and is so traumatized she doesn't stop crying for hours.
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* PillowPistol: Garon keeps a dagger under his pillow in case he gets attacked in the middle of the night.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Garon and [[spoiler:Jeanette]] used to be good friends before he had an affair with her and got her pregnant. Being included in Nohr's DeadlyDecadantCourt twisted her mindset to the point where she decided that Katerina had to die.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Garon and [[spoiler:Jeanette]] used to be good friends before he had an affair with her and got her pregnant. Being included in Nohr's DeadlyDecadantCourt DeadlyDecadentCourt twisted her mindset to the point where she decided that Katerina had to die.
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She's confirmed to have let Katerina bleed to death. Rewriting.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Due to the [[DeadlyDecadentCourt nature]] of the court, everyone has their own agendas, everyone is trying to hide their agendas, and anything that might be an accident, also might not be.
** Did Penelope's mother commit suicide, or was she murdered and arranged to look like she did?
** Did Jeanette [[spoiler:genuinely try to save Katerina, or did she deliberately let her bleed to death]]?
** Did Penelope's mother commit suicide, or was she murdered and arranged to look like she did?
** Did Jeanette [[spoiler:genuinely try to save Katerina, or did she deliberately let her bleed to death]]?
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* AmbiguousSituation: Due to the [[DeadlyDecadentCourt nature]] of the court, everyone has their own agendas, everyone is trying to hide their agendas, and anything that might be an accident, also might not be.
**Did Penelope's mother Gertrude commit suicide, or was she murdered and arranged to by someone else who made it look like she did?
** Did Jeanette [[spoiler:genuinely trya suicide? Both are noted to save Katerina, or did she deliberately let her bleed to death]]?have been possible, and no concrete answer is given.
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'''This fic is written under the assumption that the reader has played A.) the ''Conquest'' and ''Revelation'' routes of ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'', and B.) the ''Hidden Truths'' DLC. As such, this page has unmarked spoilers for the game.'''
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'''This fic is written under the assumption that the reader has played A.) the ''Conquest'' and ''Revelation'' routes of ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'', and B.) the ''Hidden Truths'' DLC. As such, [[LateArrivalSpoiler this page has unmarked spoilers for the game.'''
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