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--> ''In the dark, six voices dwindle. They drift, forgetting life and love and hope, eaten away by time and void.''\\
''And then, suddenly, there was colour. ''
''And then, suddenly, there was colour. ''
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''And then, suddenly, there was colour.
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* SpiritAdvisor: Once he learns to perceive them, the Mane Six take on this role for Spike.
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--> ''In the dark, six voices dwindle. They drift, forgetting life and love and hope, eaten away by time and void. And then, suddenly, there was colour. ''
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--> ''In the dark, six voices dwindle. They drift, forgetting life and love and hope, eaten away by time and void. And ''\\
''And then, suddenly, there was colour. ''
''And then, suddenly, there was colour. ''
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Apparently [[spoiler:being in the Elements of Harmony]] and being in darkness has caused the mane six to forget almost everything.
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body.]]
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Apparently [[spoiler:being [[spoiler:Being in the Elements of Harmony]] and being in darkness has caused the mane six to forget almost everything.
**[[spoiler:Apparently when [[spoiler:When invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body.]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39051/The-Jewellery-Box The Jewellery Box]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic by Determafidd.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39051/The-Jewellery-Box The Jewellery Box]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic by Determafidd.
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--> ''In the dark, six voices dwindle. They drift, forgetting life and love and hope, eaten away by time and void. And then, suddenly, there was colour. ''
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Meanwhile, a 500-year-old Spike must use the Elements of Harmony to defend Equestria. The problem is, he doesn't know how to use them.
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* ICannotSelfTerminate: Before accepting the Elements of Harmony, Spike makes Celestia promise to kill him if becomes a mindless hoarding dragon.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: [[spoiler: Spike is *still* in his baby dragon form, even after 500 years because he fears going mindless if he lets his greed go out of control]]
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: [[spoiler: Spike is *still* in his baby dragon form, even after 500 years because he fears going mindless if he lets his greed go out of control]]control
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* AndIMustScream: What the Mane 6 are going through at the beginning of the story. [[spoiler: Implied that this will happen to Spike if he doesn't properly grow up.]]
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* ComicalOverreacting: Rarity reacts to being [[spoiler: a necklace for 500 years rather badly. Mostly because she's only an accessory.]]
* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Discord caused Luna to become Nightmare Moon again and then took Nightmare Moon's power for himself becoming Nightmare Discord.]]
* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Discord caused Luna to become Nightmare Moon again and then took Nightmare Moon's power for himself becoming Nightmare Discord.]]
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* HearingVoices: The Mane 6 start out at the beginning of the story as disembodied voices. [[spoiler: Spike hears them initially after taking the Elements of Harmony. Later on he learns to speak to them properly, but worries that this is a side effect of his greed growth.]]
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: [[spoiler: Spike is *still* in his baby dragon form, even after 500 years because he fears going mindless if he lets his greed go out of control]]
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* SealedGoodInACan: The Elements of Harmony [[spoiler: contain [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment the Elements of Harmony]] ]]
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Spike mourns the loss of his friends [[spoiler: because they died hundreds of years ago. His desire to have them back is what triggers his greed growth again, but because he feels he can never really have them back he retains his rational mind.]]
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Spike mourns the loss of his friends [[spoiler: because they died hundreds of years ago. His desire to have them back is what triggers his greed growth again, but because he feels he can never really have them back he retains his rational mind.]]
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** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
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** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]body.]]
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Apparently [[spoiler:being in the Elements of Harmony]] and being in darkness has caused the mane six to forget almost everything.
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: apparently [[spoiler:being in the Elements of Harmony]] and being in darkness has caused the mane six to forget almost everything.
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: apparently [[spoiler:being in the Elements of Harmony]] and being in darkness has caused the mane six to forget almost everything.
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
** [[spoiler:Apparently when invoked, they stop being floating consciousnesses and have some ethereal body]]
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* InfoDump: A frustrated Pinkie Pie snaps and dumps some info on Spike.
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* InfoDump: A frustrated Pinkie Pie snaps and dumps some info on Spike.Spike.
* ResignedToTheCall: Spike is quite reluctant on taking on the mantel of Equestria's guardian.
* ResignedToTheCall: Spike is quite reluctant on taking on the mantel of Equestria's guardian.
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* GrowingUpSucks: Spike has put off growing up for four hundred years because of this.
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* GrowingUpSucks: Spike has put off growing up for four hundred years because of this.this.
* InfoDump: A frustrated Pinkie Pie snaps and dumps some info on Spike.
* InfoDump: A frustrated Pinkie Pie snaps and dumps some info on Spike.
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* GrowingUpSucks: spike has put off growing up for four hundred years because of this.
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* TheChosenOne: Spike is the only one who can use the Elements of Harmony.
* GrowingUpSucks:spike Spike has put off growing up for four hundred years because of this.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39051/The-Jewellery-Box The Jewellery Box]]'' is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic by Determafidd.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39051/The-Jewellery-Box The Jewellery Box]]'' is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic by Determafidd.
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39051/The-Jewellery-Box The Jewellery Box]]''' is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic by Determafidd.
"In the dark, six voices dwindle. They drift, forgetting life and love and hope, eaten away by time and void. And then, suddenly, there was colour. "
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* GrowingUpSucks: spike has put off growing up for four hundred years because of this.
"In the dark, six voices dwindle. They drift, forgetting life and love and hope, eaten away by time and void. And then, suddenly, there was colour. "
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* GrowingUpSucks: spike has put off growing up for four hundred years because of this.
