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* DisproportionateRetribution: Astrum has his own entire race killed and his planet destroyed by humans just because they fear that the Siphoners could be a threat to them. Astrum's response is to KillEmAll and destroy the entire universe along with it.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: Just as Astrum successfully managed to steal the Shard of Evil from Hunson, he ended up getting back stabbed by the lone evil Finn and his shard stolen. Given who [[OmnicidalManiac Astrum]] is, you wouldn't really sympathize with him.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Just as Astrum successfully managed to steal the Shard of Evil from Hunson, he ended up getting back stabbed by the lone evil Finn and his shard stolen. Given who [[OmnicidalManiac Astrum]] is, you wouldn't really sympathize with him.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Finn lose his right arm as a result of the Lich's attempt of TakingYouWithMe.
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* BlatantLies: When Jake asks why Finn's lips are burnt due to kissing Flame Princess earlier without the Flame Shield, he makes up a lie about how he fell down into the floor of the Fire Kingdom. Nobody is convinced of his lie.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 472,554 words (And is nearing completion) but for Adventure Time standards, it is one of the longest fan fictions in the archive.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 472,554 finished at 496,903 words (And is nearing completion) but for Adventure Time standards, it is one of the longest fan fictions in the archive.
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* ContinuityNod: When Finn came in contact with the [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Origin]], he mentions about "ruining his relationship with FP even further, let friends die, get cursed, and gets taken advantage of by a selfish father".
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* ContinuityNod: When Finn came in contact with the [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Origin]], he mentions about "ruining "[[Recap/AdventureTimeS5E47RedThrone ruining his relationship with FP even further, further]], [[Recap/AdventureTimeS5E20James let friends die, die]], [[Recap/AdventureTimeS5E45BladeOfGrass get cursed, cursed]], and [[Recap/AdventureTimeS6E2EscapeFromTheCitadel gets taken advantage of by a selfish father".father]]".
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: One of Finn's main test to allow access to the Citadel is to survive for centuries within a temporal space and see if he could survive with his sanity intact. His first attempt fails as he became mad at 732 years out of 800 while he succeeds in his second attempt with the help of Flame Princess despite having to stay an extra 1600 years within the dimension.
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: One of Finn's main test to allow access to the Citadel is to survive for centuries within a temporal space and see if he could survive with his sanity intact. His first attempt fails as he became mad at 732 years out of 800 while he succeeds in his second attempt with the help of Flame Princess despite having to stay an extra 1600 years within the dimension.dimension[[note]]He would have surrendered 1365 years in without her help[[/note]].
* HeelFaceTurn: After convinced by Finn to let out all of his anger, Astrum ended up realizing that what he did was wrong and in the end, decides to try and make up for all of his mistakes.
* HeelFaceTurn: After convinced by Finn to let out all of his anger, Astrum ended up realizing that what he did was wrong and in the end, decides to try and make up for all of his mistakes.
* TheLostLenore: Because of Ferrum's actions two years before the start of the story, he ended up scaring his lover Flara away never to be seen again. [[spoiler: Until he ended up being taken in by his lover and reconciles their mistakes when the martians invaded]].
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* SoleSurvivor: Flame Princess use Finn's fear of the ocean to repel them all from the Nightosphere and ended up retreating, except for a single Finn that somehow managed to overcome his fear of the ocean and steal the shard from Astrum.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Because Flame King has a good amount of evil energy, Finn ended up having an evil side within him as a result of Ferrum's transmutation which becomes active when either Finn battles or tries to kiss Flame Princess.
* TheLostLenore: Because of Ferrum's actions two years before the start of the story, he ended up scaring his lover Flara away never to be seen again. [[spoiler: Until he ended up being taken in by his lover and reconciles their mistakes when the martians invaded]].
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Because Flame King has a good amount of evil energy, Finn ended up having an evil side within him as a result of Ferrum's transmutation which becomes active when either Finn battles or tries to kiss Flame Princess.
* TheLostLenore: Because of Ferrum's actions two years before the start of the story, he ended up scaring his lover Flara away never to be seen again. [[spoiler: Until he ended up being taken in by his lover and reconciles their mistakes when the martians invaded]].
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* RealityEnsues:
** When PB tries to apologize for talking badly about the Flame King, Flame Princess reassures her that his HeroicSacrifice does excuse his other acts such as his poor treatment of his daughter and his people but not his own wife.
** A similar case happens in an alternate world where despite Flame Princess saving Bubblegum and Jake from their death, it still doesn't redeem the fact that FP burned Finn's right arm in her anger and responds PB to her appropriately:
--> '''Alternate PB''': This changes nothing.
--> '''Alternate FP''': It wasn't meant to.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Downplayed, as even though at the start of the story that Finn and Ferrum are close friends, we are told that they met each other at some point between the "Earth and Water" and this fan fiction.
* SoleSurvivor: Flame Princess use Finn's fear of the ocean to repel them all from the Nightosphere and ended up retreating, except for a single Finn that somehow managed to overcome his fear of the ocean and steal the shard from Astrum.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Because Flame King has a good amount of evil energy, Finn ended up having an evil side within him as a result of Ferrum's transmutation which becomes active when either Finn battles or tries to kiss Flame Princess.
* TakingYouWithMe: Just as [[spoiler: The Lich]] is about to experience his final defeat, he attempts to take Finn along with him. Astrum instead takes the blow for him.
* TurnTheOtherCheek: Finn seems to forgive everyone, even the ones who dealt personal blows on him such as Cosmic Owl and Astrum himself. Of course, all those take place after he confront the issues he is currently experiencing and put them to rest (FP slapping him and help him get over the "Frost and Fire" incident started by Cosmic Owl, Finn meeting with his deceased parents whom Astrum kills and reconciles with them) so once he forgave himself, he has the capacity to forgive others for their misdoings.
** When PB tries to apologize for talking badly about the Flame King, Flame Princess reassures her that his HeroicSacrifice does excuse his other acts such as his poor treatment of his daughter and his people but not his own wife.
** A similar case happens in an alternate world where despite Flame Princess saving Bubblegum and Jake from their death, it still doesn't redeem the fact that FP burned Finn's right arm in her anger and responds PB to her appropriately:
--> '''Alternate PB''': This changes nothing.
--> '''Alternate FP''': It wasn't meant to.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Downplayed, as even though at the start of the story that Finn and Ferrum are close friends, we are told that they met each other at some point between the "Earth and Water" and this fan fiction.
* SoleSurvivor: Flame Princess use Finn's fear of the ocean to repel them all from the Nightosphere and ended up retreating, except for a single Finn that somehow managed to overcome his fear of the ocean and steal the shard from Astrum.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Because Flame King has a good amount of evil energy, Finn ended up having an evil side within him as a result of Ferrum's transmutation which becomes active when either Finn battles or tries to kiss Flame Princess.
* TakingYouWithMe: Just as [[spoiler: The Lich]] is about to experience his final defeat, he attempts to take Finn along with him. Astrum instead takes the blow for him.
* TurnTheOtherCheek: Finn seems to forgive everyone, even the ones who dealt personal blows on him such as Cosmic Owl and Astrum himself. Of course, all those take place after he confront the issues he is currently experiencing and put them to rest (FP slapping him and help him get over the "Frost and Fire" incident started by Cosmic Owl, Finn meeting with his deceased parents whom Astrum kills and reconciles with them) so once he forgave himself, he has the capacity to forgive others for their misdoings.
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* ContinuityNod: When Finn came in contact with the [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Origin]], he mentions about "ruining his relationship with FP even further, let friends die, get cursed, and gets taken advantage of by a selfish father".
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: One of Finn's main test to allow access to the Citadel is to survive for centuries within a temporal space and see if he could survive with his sanity intact. His first attempt fails as he became mad at 732 years out of 800 while he succeeds in his second attempt with the help of Flame Princess despite having to stay an extra 1600 years within the dimension.
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* BetaCouple: Ferrum and Flara as the beta to Finn and Flame Princess.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: Flame Princess ended up replacing Jake in this fan fiction as the second most important character while Ferrum replaces Princess Bubblegum as the tritagonist of this fiction.
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* ArcWords: To quote from Princess Bubblegum, "responsibility demands sacrifice".
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* ActionGirl: Without the efforts of Flame Princess, Finn would have not managed to continue on with his journey across the multiverse.
* ArcWords:To quote from "Mistakes aren't supposed to burden you; they're supposed to shape you".
* ArmorPiercingSlap: Flame PrincessBubblegum, "responsibility slaps Finn a lot, whether she demands sacrifice".to know what Finn is hiding from her or trying to get his attention.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Flame Princess
* BattleCouple: Finn and Flame Princess fight Astrum's oppositions together and they are consistently good at that.
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* BigBad: Astrum the siphoner.
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* BigBad: Astrum the siphoner. However, he is not the FinalBoss, that title goes to [[spoiler: The Lich]].
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: The Lich from the series is demoted into a material for the Shard of Evil for the present BigBad after he is defeated by Finn and Sentin.
* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 464,161 words (And is nearing completion) but for Adventure Time standards, it is one of the longest fan fictions in the archive.
* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 464,161 words (And is nearing completion) but for Adventure Time standards, it is one of the longest fan fictions in the archive.
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: DemotedToExtra: The Lich from the series is demoted from the KnightOfCerebus BigBad of canon ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' into a material for the Shard of Evil for the present BigBad after he is defeated by Finn and Sentin.
Sentin early on. [[spoiler: Although this is later subverted as by the endgame, he immediately decides to hijack the plot and serve as the FinalBoss of this fan fiction]].
* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached464,161 472,554 words (And is nearing completion) but for Adventure Time standards, it is one of the longest fan fictions in the archive.
* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached
* HijackedByGanon: [[spoiler: Just as Finn and his friends finally managed to quell Astrum's rage and convince him to make a HeelFaceTurn, The Lich suddenly decides to reappear after he is thought to have been converted into a Shard of Evil]].
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** WhenHeSmiles: [[spoiler: However after Finn managed to quell Astrum's rage and hatred, he is seen smiling for the first time which Solara even lampshades herself]].
* SoleSurvivor: Flame Princess use Finn's fear of the ocean to repel them all from the Nightosphere and ended up retreating, except for1 a single Finn that somehow managed to overcome his fear of the ocean and steal the shard from Astrum.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Using their Harmonic Catalyst, Jake and Ice King uses music to directly fight Prismo and free him from the Shard's control.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Using their Harmonic Catalyst, Harmony's Origin, Jake and Ice King uses music to directly fight Prismo and free him from the Shard's control.
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* BenevolentGenie: The orb of Citadel can read into a person's mind and grants the wish that the person exactly desires no matter how vague the wish is.
* ConservationOfNinjutsu: While multiple evil Finns that invade the Nightosphere are a big trouble for the heroes, the sole survivor of the invasion is much more of a threat than the other Finns put together.
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* FusionDance: The Harmonic Catalyst is a fusion alchemy that fuses anyone who is distributed with the power if infinity.
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* FusionDance: The Harmonic Catalyst is a fusion alchemy that fuses anyone who is distributed with Using the power if infinity.of Infinity aka Harmony's Origin allows anyone to join together in order to achieve greater power.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Just as Astrum successfully managed to steal the Shard of Evil from Hunson, he ended up getting back stabbed by the lone evil Finn and his shard stolen. Given who [[OmnicidalManiac Astrum]] is, you wouldn't really sympathize with him.
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* MyGreatestFailure: For Ferrum, letting his emotions out of control (and essentially break one of the most important rules of alchemy) at seeing the criminals harm his lover Flara, resulting in him destroying the Fire Kingdom dam along with a handful of fire elementals. This resulted in Ferrum scaring away Flara and put him on probation by the Fire Kingdom authorities for two years.
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* SoleSurvivor: Flame Princess use Finn's fear of the ocean to repel them all from the Nightosphere and ended up retreating, except for 1 Finn that somehow managed to overcome his fear of the ocean and steal the shard from Astrum.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Because Flame King has a good amount of evil energy, Finn ended up having an evil side within him as a result of Ferrum's transmutation which becomes active when either Finn battles or tries to kiss Flame Princess.
* TheLostLenore: Because of Ferrum's actions two years before the start of the story, he ended up scaring his lover Flara away never to be seen again. [[spoiler: Until he ended up being taken in by his lover and reconciles their mistakes when the martians invaded]].
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Because Flame King has a good amount of evil energy, Finn ended up having an evil side within him as a result of Ferrum's transmutation which becomes active when either Finn battles or tries to kiss Flame Princess.
* TheLostLenore: Because of Ferrum's actions two years before the start of the story, he ended up scaring his lover Flara away never to be seen again. [[spoiler: Until he ended up being taken in by his lover and reconciles their mistakes when the martians invaded]].
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* ArcWords: To quote from Princess Bubblegum, "responsibility demands sacrifice".
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Shards of Evil that is claimed by Astrum, are used to corrupt and empower the deities with dark powers.
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Shards of Evil that is claimed by Astrum, are used to corrupt and empower the deities with dark powers.
* BroughtDownToNormal: Using a magical lantern, Ash absorbs the powers of the entire gang (Sans Flambo) to the point that they rely on Finn to guide them.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 464,161 words (And is nearing completion).
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 464,161 words (And is nearing completion).completion) but for Adventure Time standards, it is one of the longest fan fictions in the archive.
* FusionDance: The Harmonic Catalyst is a fusion alchemy that fuses anyone who is distributed with the power if infinity.
* HeroicSacrifice: Just as Ferrum is about to transmute his own life for Finn, Flame King offers himself to be the one sacrificed instead, stating that he would like to apologize to his wife in the afterlife.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: In the universe where Jake and Ice King are trapped in, Princess Bubblegum is genuinely in love with Finn ([[spoiler: Since Marceline does not exist, at least, until Ice King wishes for her]]). However, when being offered a wish, Bubblegum immediately uses that wish to free Finn and his love interest Flame Princess of any boundaries separating them.
* TheMatchmaker: Remembering how the kiss between Finn and Flame Princess in his universe managed to nearly tore the world apart, Jake decides to pair them up in an alternate universe in hopes to use its power to destroy the prism rails that made it aloft.
* FusionDance: The Harmonic Catalyst is a fusion alchemy that fuses anyone who is distributed with the power if infinity.
* HeroicSacrifice: Just as Ferrum is about to transmute his own life for Finn, Flame King offers himself to be the one sacrificed instead, stating that he would like to apologize to his wife in the afterlife.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: In the universe where Jake and Ice King are trapped in, Princess Bubblegum is genuinely in love with Finn ([[spoiler: Since Marceline does not exist, at least, until Ice King wishes for her]]). However, when being offered a wish, Bubblegum immediately uses that wish to free Finn and his love interest Flame Princess of any boundaries separating them.
* TheMatchmaker: Remembering how the kiss between Finn and Flame Princess in his universe managed to nearly tore the world apart, Jake decides to pair them up in an alternate universe in hopes to use its power to destroy the prism rails that made it aloft.
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* PerpetualFrowner: Astrum is never directly seen smiling, unlike your typical villains. He is always seen being enraged or impatient whenever he goes.
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* PerpetualFrowner: Astrum is never directly seen smiling, unlike your typical villains. He is always seen being enraged or impatient whenever he goes.goes towards his goals.
* ThePowerOfRock: Using their Harmonic Catalyst, Jake and Ice King uses music to directly fight Prismo and free him from the Shard's control.
* ThePowerOfRock: Using their Harmonic Catalyst, Jake and Ice King uses music to directly fight Prismo and free him from the Shard's control.
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** Jake and Ice King are trapped in a world where Marceline does not appear in this timeline ([[spoiler: Actually she does appear, after they depart]]), Finn and Flame Princess never met, and Bubblegum is in love with Finn himself. Unfortunately, the entire inhabitants are imprisoned under the shadows of Prismo.
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** Jake and Ice King are trapped in a world where Marceline does not appear in this timeline ([[spoiler: Actually she does appear, after they depart]]), thank to Ice King's wish]]), Finn and Flame Princess never met, and Bubblegum is in love with Finn himself. Unfortunately, the entire inhabitants are imprisoned under the shadows of Prismo.Prismo.
* VictorGainsLosersPowers: Once Astrum managed to kill a person, he immediately absorbs whatever power that person possesses along with their appearance.
* WorldHalfFull: In the universe that Bubblegum and Marceline are trapped in, the mushroom bomb never exploded which as a result, gives humanity a second chance to rebuild their own planet.
* VictorGainsLosersPowers: Once Astrum managed to kill a person, he immediately absorbs whatever power that person possesses along with their appearance.
* WorldHalfFull: In the universe that Bubblegum and Marceline are trapped in, the mushroom bomb never exploded which as a result, gives humanity a second chance to rebuild their own planet.
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* BigBad: Astrum.
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* BigBad: Astrum.Astrum the siphoner.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: The Lich from the series is demoted into a material for the Shard of Evil for the present BigBad after he is defeated by Finn and Sentin.
* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 464,161 words (And is nearing completion).
* MeaningfulName:
** Ferrum is the latin word of the element Iron, a fitting name for an alchemist like him.
** Solara is simply the abbreviation of solar, aka sun given that she is in fact [[spoiler: The first star and the first being to have ever existed]].
* DiscOneFinalBoss: The Lich from the series is demoted into a material for the Shard of Evil for the present BigBad after he is defeated by Finn and Sentin.
* {{Doorstopper}}: Downplayed, as the fan fiction currently reached 464,161 words (And is nearing completion).
* MeaningfulName:
** Ferrum is the latin word of the element Iron, a fitting name for an alchemist like him.
** Solara is simply the abbreviation of solar, aka sun given that she is in fact [[spoiler: The first star and the first being to have ever existed]].
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* PerpertualFrowner: Astrum is never directly seen smiling, unlike your typical villains. He is always seen being enraged or impatient whenever he goes.
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* PerpertualFrowner: OriginalCharacters: The author introduced multitudes of OCs that appeared throughout the story starting with the alchemist Ferrum along with the Ancestral Flame. It then snowballs from here on as more and more characters are introduced.
* PerpetualFrowner: Astrum is never directly seen smiling, unlike your typical villains. He is always seen being enraged or impatient whenever hegoes.goes.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Due to Astrum machinations, the Adventure Time gang is separated into different universes each with a shard-equipped deity hunting them down.
** Finn and Flame Princess are trapped in a universe where Flint becomes the main adventurer with Cosmic Owl hunting them down. [[spoiler: However, it is later revealed that Flint is in fact, the son of Finn and Flame Princess that exists in their alternate universe]].
** Bubblegum and Marceline are trapped in a world where the mushroom bomb failed to explode and humanity is given a chance to rebuild their life. However, with Death stalking the planet, it will not be easy.
** Jake and Ice King are trapped in a world where Marceline does not appear in this timeline ([[spoiler: Actually she does appear, after they depart]]), Finn and Flame Princess never met, and Bubblegum is in love with Finn himself. Unfortunately, the entire inhabitants are imprisoned under the shadows of Prismo.
* PerpetualFrowner: Astrum is never directly seen smiling, unlike your typical villains. He is always seen being enraged or impatient whenever he
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Due to Astrum machinations, the Adventure Time gang is separated into different universes each with a shard-equipped deity hunting them down.
** Finn and Flame Princess are trapped in a universe where Flint becomes the main adventurer with Cosmic Owl hunting them down. [[spoiler: However, it is later revealed that Flint is in fact, the son of Finn and Flame Princess that exists in their alternate universe]].
** Bubblegum and Marceline are trapped in a world where the mushroom bomb failed to explode and humanity is given a chance to rebuild their life. However, with Death stalking the planet, it will not be easy.
** Jake and Ice King are trapped in a world where Marceline does not appear in this timeline ([[spoiler: Actually she does appear, after they depart]]), Finn and Flame Princess never met, and Bubblegum is in love with Finn himself. Unfortunately, the entire inhabitants are imprisoned under the shadows of Prismo.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9677795/1/The-Citadel-of-Truth The Citadel of Truth]] is an WesternAnimation/AdventureTime fan fiction created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5120924/Ooobserver Ooobserver]] that centers around the pairing between Finn and Flame Princess.
Having lingering feelings for the queen, Finn unsuccessfully tries to enter the Citadel and disperse the barrier between him and the Flame Princess. However, with support from his girl and his personal blacksmith [[OriginalCharacter Ferrum]], Finn tries once more to conquer the trials of the Citadel, only for him to discover a whole new world filled with people that he never knew before, including an ancient evil set out to conquer the universe...
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Having lingering feelings for the queen, Finn unsuccessfully tries to enter the Citadel and disperse the barrier between him and the Flame Princess. However, with support from his girl and his personal blacksmith [[OriginalCharacter Ferrum]], Finn tries once more to conquer the trials of the Citadel, only for him to discover a whole new world filled with people that he never knew before, including an ancient evil set out to conquer the
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* TheAssimilator: This is Astrum's special power; he gains the appearance and power of the person that he recently killed.
* BigBad: Astrum.
* OfficialCouple: Finn and Flame Princess hook up quite early in the series, the focus on this fan fiction is eliminating the borders that encompasses between them.
* PerpertualFrowner: Astrum is never directly seen smiling, unlike your typical villains. He is always seen being enraged or impatient whenever he goes.
* YearInsideHourOutside: 800 years inside the Citadel's Time Room is the equivalent to 10 minutes in the outside world.
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Having lingering feelings for the queen, Finn unsuccessfully tries to enter the Citadel and disperse the barrier between him and the Flame Princess. However, with support from his girl and his personal blacksmith [[OriginalCharacter Ferrum]], Finn tries once more to conquer the trials of the Citadel, only for him to discover a whole new world filled with people that he never knew before, including an ancient evil set out to conquer the universe...
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9677795/1/The-Citadel-of-Truth The Citadel of Truth]] is an WesternAnimation/AdventureTime fan fiction created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5120924/Ooobserver Ooobserver]] that centers around the pairing between Finn and Flame Princess.
Having lingering feelings for the queen, Finn unsuccessfully tries to enter the Citadel and disperse the barrier between him and the Flame Princess. However, with support from his girl and his personal blacksmith [[OriginalCharacter Ferrum]], Finn tries once more to conquer the trials of the Citadel, only for him to discover a whole new world filled with people that he never knew before, including an ancient evil set out to conquer the universe...
Having lingering feelings for the queen, Finn unsuccessfully tries to enter the Citadel and disperse the barrier between him and the Flame Princess. However, with support from his girl and his personal blacksmith [[OriginalCharacter Ferrum]], Finn tries once more to conquer the trials of the Citadel, only for him to discover a whole new world filled with people that he never knew before, including an ancient evil set out to conquer the universe...
