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* AMinorKidtroduction: The prologues to ''Don't Be Sorry'' starts with 13 year old Rose standing outside her sister's room in lingerie and a robe, and jumps to 17 year old Rose getting ready for school.
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''Sometimes all you can do is keep breathing'' is a Homestuck fanfic series by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/EzzyAlpha/pseuds/EzzyAlpha EzzyAlpha]]. It is an AU in which Rose and Roxy Lalonde are sisters, living in a city in New York with their mother. It is currently composed of two fics:
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''Sometimes all you can do is keep breathing'' is a Homestuck ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' fanfic series by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/EzzyAlpha/pseuds/EzzyAlpha EzzyAlpha]]. It is an AU in which Rose and Roxy Lalonde are sisters, living in a city in New York with their mother. It is currently composed of two fics:
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:''Don't Be Sorry''. Rose is happy with the Striders but she's separated from Roxy and apparently isn't even talking to her in the epilogue.]]
* BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to ''Don't Be Sorry''. Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
* BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to ''Don't Be Sorry''. Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:''Don't [[spoiler:In the ending of ''Don't Be Sorry''. Sorry'', Rose is happy with the Striders but she's separated from Roxy and apparently isn't even talking to her in the epilogue.]]
* BreakHerHeartToSaveHer:[[The [[spoiler:In the ending to ''Don't Be Sorry''. Sorry'', Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Their mother kicks them out.
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Titles go in italics, not boldface, and the second title doesn\'t need a double bullet point, just a single one. Also, Did Not Do The Research was never a trope, and it was perma-redlinked because of this misuse; do not link to it, ever. And also, Tear Jerker is a subjective trope and this is a Zero Context Example anyway. The trope name on its own conveys absolutely nothing.
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* '''Don't Be Sorry''': The first fic. Complete. In which Rose Lalonde has feelings for her older sister, who is favored by their mother. After Roxy taking her out to lunch, Rose ends up kissing her and finding out she returns her feelings. They start a sort of relationship. However, once their mother finds out about it, they run away to Houston, where Roxy's friend Dirk lives.
** '''You're Not Sorry''': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
** '''You're Not Sorry''': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
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* '''Don't ''Don't Be Sorry''': Sorry'': The first fic. Complete. In which Rose Lalonde has feelings for her older sister, who is favored by their mother. After Roxy taking her out to lunch, Rose ends up kissing her and finding out she returns her feelings. They start a sort of relationship. However, once their mother finds out about it, they run away to Houston, where Roxy's friend Dirk lives.
** '''You're * ''You're Not Sorry''': Sorry'': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: Roxy's car is important to the plot, being where they spend most of the fic. There are references to the backseat several times...Except the car is named as a Chevrolet, which is a two-seater.
** The author caught up on that and changed it to a BMW. Still pink tho.
** The author caught up on that and changed it to a BMW. Still pink tho.
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* TearJerker
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"Sometimes all you can do is keep breathing" is a Homestuck fanfic series by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/EzzyAlpha/pseuds/EzzyAlpha EzzyAlpha]]. It is an AU in which Rose and Roxy Lalonde are sisters, living in a city in New York with their mother. It is currently composed of two fics:
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:"Don't Be Sorry". Rose is happy with the Striders but she's separated from Roxy and apparently isn't even talking to her in the epilogue.]]
* BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to "Don't Be Sorry". Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
* CompletedFic: "Don't Be Sorry."
* BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to "Don't Be Sorry". Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
* CompletedFic: "Don't Be Sorry."
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:"Don't [[spoiler:''Don't Be Sorry".Sorry''. Rose is happy with the Striders but she's separated from Roxy and apparently isn't even talking to her in the epilogue.]]
* BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to"Don't ''Don't Be Sorry".Sorry''. Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
* CompletedFic:"Don't ''Don't Be Sorry."''
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapter titles in "Don't Be Sorry" are picked from the dialogue except for the Prologue and Epilogue.
** In "You're Not Sorry", all the titles start with You're not...
* LoveConfession: In the first chapter of "Don't Be Sorry" and opening of "You're Not Sorry"
** In "You're Not Sorry", all the titles start with You're not...
* LoveConfession: In the first chapter of "Don't Be Sorry" and opening of "You're Not Sorry"
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapter titles in "Don't ''Don't Be Sorry" Sorry'' are picked from the dialogue except for the Prologue and Epilogue.
** In"You're ''You're Not Sorry", Sorry'', all the titles start with You're not...
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* AMinorKidtroduction: The prologues to "Don't ''Don't Be Sorry" Sorry'' starts with 13 year old Rose standing outside her sister's room in lingerie and a robe, and jumps to 17 year old Rose getting ready for school.
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* ScheduleSlip: "Don't Be Sorry" didn't have a set schedule, but had a noticeable break between chapters 6 and 7 due to the author breaking her arm.
* SequelHook: The epilogue of "Don't Be Sorry" [[spoiler: with the mentions of going off to college as a new start]]
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* ScheduleSlip: "Don't ''Don't Be Sorry" Sorry'' didn't have a set schedule, but had a noticeable break between chapters 6 and 7 due to the author breaking her arm.
* SequelHook: The epilogue of"Don't ''Don't Be Sorry" Sorry'' [[spoiler: with the mentions of going off to college as a new start]]
* SequelHook: The epilogue of
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* "'Don't Be Sorry"': The first fic. Complete. In which Rose Lalonde has feelings for her older sister, who is favored by their mother. After Roxy taking her out to lunch, Rose ends up kissing her and finding out she returns her feelings. They start a sort of relationship. However, once their mother finds out about it, they run away to Houston, where Roxy's friend Dirk lives.
** "'You're Not Sorry"': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
** "'You're Not Sorry"': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
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* "'Don't '''Don't Be Sorry"': Sorry''': The first fic. Complete. In which Rose Lalonde has feelings for her older sister, who is favored by their mother. After Roxy taking her out to lunch, Rose ends up kissing her and finding out she returns her feelings. They start a sort of relationship. However, once their mother finds out about it, they run away to Houston, where Roxy's friend Dirk lives.
**"'You're '''You're Not Sorry"': Sorry''': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
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"Sometimes all you can do is keep breathing" is a Homestuck fanfic series by EzzyAlpha.[[http://archiveofourown.org/users/EzzyAlpha/pseuds/EzzyAlpha EzzyAlpha]]. It is an AU in which Rose and Roxy Lalonde are sisters, living in a city in New York with their mother. It is currently composed of two fics:
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[[http://archiveofourown.org/series/40193 here.]]
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"Sometimes all you can do is keep breathing" is a Homestuck fanfic series by EzzyAlpha. It is an AU in which Rose and Roxy Lalonde are sisters, living in a city in New York with their mother. It is currently composed of two fics:
*"'Don't Be Sorry"': The first fic. Complete. In which Rose Lalonde has feelings for her older sister, who is favored by their mother. After Roxy taking her out to lunch, Rose ends up kissing her and finding out she returns her feelings. They start a sort of relationship. However, once their mother finds out about it, they run away to Houston, where Roxy's friend Dirk lives.
**"'You're Not Sorry"': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
It can be read here.
!!This fic provides examples of:
*AlternateUniverseFic
*BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:"Don't Be Sorry". Rose is happy with the Striders but she's separated from Roxy and apparently isn't even talking to her in the epilogue.]]
*BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to "Don't Be Sorry". Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
*CompletedFic: "Don't Be Sorry."
*DidNotDoTheResearch: Roxy's car is important to the plot, being where they spend most of the fic. There are references to the backseat several times...Except the car is named as a Chevrolet, which is a two-seater.
**The author caught up on that and changed it to a BMW. Still pink tho.
*FlashBack: There is a flashback to when Rose moved in with her mother and Roxy in chapter 2.
*ForbiddenRomance
*ForWantOfANail: "You're Not Sorry" diverges from the original fic at the car scene when Roxy pushes Rose away.
**Referenced in the [[http://ezzyalpha.tumblr.com/post/45870176771/okay-im-actually-going-to-write-an-essay-on-it author's tumblr.]]
*IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapter titles in "Don't Be Sorry" are picked from the dialogue except for the Prologue and Epilogue.
** In "You're Not Sorry", all the titles start with You're not...
*LoveConfession: In the first chapter of "Don't Be Sorry" and opening of "You're Not Sorry"
**What Rose appeared to be trying in the prologue.
*LoveHurts
*AMinorKidtroduction: The prologues to "Don't Be Sorry" starts with 13 year old Rose standing outside her sister's room in lingerie and a robe, and jumps to 17 year old Rose getting ready for school.
*OhCrap: Rose realizing they didn't lock the door.
**[[spoiler: Their mother showing up at the end of chapter 7]]
** And earlier (chronologically) [[spoiler: Roxy finding out Dirk called her.]]
*ScheduleSlip: "Don't Be Sorry" didn't have a set schedule, but had a noticeable break between chapters 6 and 7 due to the author breaking her arm.
*SequelHook: The epilogue of "Don't Be Sorry" [[spoiler: with the mentions of going off to college as a new start]]
*[[BrotherSisterIncest Sister-Sister incest]]: Rose and Roxy are full genetic siblings, despite spending their early years apart.
*TearJerker
*TheUnfavorite: Rose.
*YouCantGoHome: Their mother kicks them out.
*"'Don't Be Sorry"': The first fic. Complete. In which Rose Lalonde has feelings for her older sister, who is favored by their mother. After Roxy taking her out to lunch, Rose ends up kissing her and finding out she returns her feelings. They start a sort of relationship. However, once their mother finds out about it, they run away to Houston, where Roxy's friend Dirk lives.
**"'You're Not Sorry"': An AU to the first fic, in which Roxy doesn't return Rose's feelings. Ongoing.
It can be read here.
!!This fic provides examples of:
*AlternateUniverseFic
*BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:"Don't Be Sorry". Rose is happy with the Striders but she's separated from Roxy and apparently isn't even talking to her in the epilogue.]]
*BreakHerHeartToSaveHer: [[The ending to "Don't Be Sorry". Roxy leaves Rose so she can be happier.]]
*CompletedFic: "Don't Be Sorry."
*DidNotDoTheResearch: Roxy's car is important to the plot, being where they spend most of the fic. There are references to the backseat several times...Except the car is named as a Chevrolet, which is a two-seater.
**The author caught up on that and changed it to a BMW. Still pink tho.
*FlashBack: There is a flashback to when Rose moved in with her mother and Roxy in chapter 2.
*ForbiddenRomance
*ForWantOfANail: "You're Not Sorry" diverges from the original fic at the car scene when Roxy pushes Rose away.
**Referenced in the [[http://ezzyalpha.tumblr.com/post/45870176771/okay-im-actually-going-to-write-an-essay-on-it author's tumblr.]]
*IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapter titles in "Don't Be Sorry" are picked from the dialogue except for the Prologue and Epilogue.
** In "You're Not Sorry", all the titles start with You're not...
*LoveConfession: In the first chapter of "Don't Be Sorry" and opening of "You're Not Sorry"
**What Rose appeared to be trying in the prologue.
*LoveHurts
*AMinorKidtroduction: The prologues to "Don't Be Sorry" starts with 13 year old Rose standing outside her sister's room in lingerie and a robe, and jumps to 17 year old Rose getting ready for school.
*OhCrap: Rose realizing they didn't lock the door.
**[[spoiler: Their mother showing up at the end of chapter 7]]
** And earlier (chronologically) [[spoiler: Roxy finding out Dirk called her.]]
*ScheduleSlip: "Don't Be Sorry" didn't have a set schedule, but had a noticeable break between chapters 6 and 7 due to the author breaking her arm.
*SequelHook: The epilogue of "Don't Be Sorry" [[spoiler: with the mentions of going off to college as a new start]]
*[[BrotherSisterIncest Sister-Sister incest]]: Rose and Roxy are full genetic siblings, despite spending their early years apart.
*TearJerker
*TheUnfavorite: Rose.
*YouCantGoHome: Their mother kicks them out.
