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* BlandNameProduct: Tucker references a role-playing game called ''[[DungeonsAndDragons Castles and Creatures]]''.

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* BlandNameProduct: Tucker references a role-playing game called ''[[DungeonsAndDragons ''[[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Castles and Creatures]]''.

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** A [[BlackHumor darkly humorous]] one comes up when Number 9,998,383,750,000 is FINALLY called. Juno later even tells Betelgeuse off for the fact he wasn't in the Waiting Room when his number is actually finally called.



* PutOnABusToHell: Charlies and Delia are dead, not even leaving a ghost, before the first chapter even begins, Lydia implying that they also died in a car crash, except, in their case, they'd provided heavily for Lydia's future.



** ReasonableAuthorityFigure: They have the decency to re-examine their methods and are big enough to admit that she's right.

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** ReasonableAuthorityFigure: They have the decency to re-examine their methods and are big enough to admit that she's right. By the end of the story, it's strongly implied that, thanks to discussing the Netherworld with Betelgeuse and Lydia, they have completely reverted to only hunting ghosts who require it.



* RunningGag: Betelgeuse's tendency to read and write notes in Lydia's journal. She eventually gives up trying to keep him out and they have full conversations in the text.

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* RunningGag: Betelgeuse's tendency to read and write notes in Lydia's journal. She eventually gives up trying to keep him out and they have full conversations in the text. Several chapter summaries are done through this banter.



* SpellMyNameWithAnS: As he corrects in Lydia's journal, his name is "Betelgeuse," not "Film/{{Beetlejuice}}."

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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: As he corrects in Lydia's journal, his name is "Betelgeuse," not "Film/{{Beetlejuice}}.""Film/{{Beetlejuice}}", a reference to the [[InconsistentTerminology inconsistent naming]] even the franchise itself suffered from.



* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Lydia made her [[MythologyGag own poncho]]. {{Averted}} with Barbara, who claims not to have much skill when it comes to sewing.

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* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Lydia made her [[MythologyGag own poncho]]. with cloth Betelgeuse brought from the Netherworld. {{Averted}} with Barbara, who claims not to have much skill when it comes to sewing.



** FridgeBrilliance kicks in with the fact Cartoon!Lydia DOES look to be around 12-13 years old.



** The longer version of Lydia's incantation makes an appearance here.

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** The longer version of Lydia's incantation makes an appearance here.here, and it's implied that part of the events of the cartoon, including Lydia's random visits to the Netherworld, occurred during the time between this story and the main one.


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* RedHerring: It seems like Betelgeuse might be planning something involving Lydia's absent mother, due to the heavy emphasis on her in some of their conversations. Actually it's that he gets [[MagicalIncantation the rhyme that allowed everything from the cartoon to happen...]]
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler:The scene with Beej RefusingParadise to stay with Lydia seems to have been what the one offering Paradise was looking for]].
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* [[spoiler:ApocalypseHow]]: [[spoiler:Aunt Melinda's end goal is to cause a Class 0 for ghosts, using a supercharged ghost shield as a city-wide circle for an exorcism. However, as Betelgeuse notes, between a stable portal to the Ghost Zone and the possibility of any open doors to the Netherworld, there's a good possibility of the effect spilling over, upgrading it to an X-5.]]


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* PoorCommunicationKills: When Danny first asks Betelgeuse who his mortal bride is, the Ghost with the Most finds that Melinda's binding prevents him from saying Lydia's name, so he simply describes her to him. Unfortunately, the description he gives (dark-haired goth girl) sounds a lot like Sam. Danny [[BerserkButton doesn't]] [[LetsYouAndHimFight approve]]. It's only when Danny mentions Sam's name does Beej realize there's been a misunderstanding.
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* NoodleImplements[=/=]NoodleIncident: During Betelgeuse's ''first'' attempt to marry a mortal bride, ''his'' end of the bargain involved "possession, goats, torches, an angry mob, near certain doom, a scullery maid, a river, freaky trees, and something about a cursed coin."

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* NoodleImplements[=/=]NoodleIncident: During Betelgeuse's ''first'' attempt to marry a mortal bride, ''his'' end of the bargain bride involved "possession, goats, torches, an angry mob, near certain doom, a scullery maid, a river, freaky trees, and something about a cursed coin."" As in, that's what the mortal wanted him to ''fix'', and Betelgeuse fails to mention how he did it. [[spoiler:And the ingrate went and committed ''suicide'' during the wedding ceremony instead of holding up her end of the deal]].
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Turns out Betelgeuse has gotten ''really'' good at restricting his hauntings to AmusingInjuries, which is why there were no lasting repercussions from him flinging Charles and Otho off of a staircase, or Maxie and Sarah Dean through a ceiling. Explained further when Betelgeuse assures Danny that he won't kill Aunt Melinda; he dismisses it as "boring and too easy" and that [[MoralityPet Lydia would never forgive him]], but implies that the real problem is that though Juno and the CelestialBureaucracy allows and even encourages ghosts to scare the living senseless to keep them from breaking the {{Masquerade}}, lethal injury is ''the'' big no-no -- people murdered by ghosts tend to become ''really'' dangerous ghosts themselves -- [[spoiler:not that Sanduleak really cares. Betelgeuse went "juicing" with him exactly ''once'', thinking he'd found a kindred prankster, only to realize he'd gone on a wilding with ''UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper'' and sealing him in a well for the next century. Enforcing this rule on such a powerful ghost without being asked is why Juno and her superiors haven't done anything permanent to Betelgeuse]].

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* ThouShaltNotKill: Turns out Betelgeuse has gotten ''really'' good at restricting his hauntings to AmusingInjuries, which is why there were no lasting repercussions from him flinging Charles and Otho off of a staircase, or Maxie and Sarah Dean through a ceiling. Explained further when Betelgeuse assures Danny that he won't kill Aunt Melinda; he dismisses it as "boring and too easy" and that [[MoralityPet Lydia would never forgive him]], but implies that the real problem is that though Juno and the CelestialBureaucracy allows and even encourages ghosts to scare the living senseless to keep them from breaking the {{Masquerade}}, lethal injury is right up there with proving the existence of ghosts as ''the'' big no-no -- no-no, as people murdered by ghosts tend to become ''really'' dangerous dangerous(not to mention really ''pissed-off'') ghosts themselves -- [[spoiler:not that Sanduleak really cares. Betelgeuse went "juicing" with him exactly ''once'', thinking he'd found a kindred prankster, only to realize he'd gone on a wilding with ''UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper'' and sealing him in a well for the next century. Enforcing this rule on such a powerful ghost without being asked is why Juno and her superiors haven't done anything permanent to Betelgeuse]].

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* ThouShaltNotKill: Betelgeuse assures Danny that he won't kill Aunt Melinda. It's boring, it's too easy, Juno would nag him for years, and there's too much risk of them ending up with a ghost version of her. Also, [[MoralityPet Lydia frowns on killing]].

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* ThouShaltNotKill: Turns out Betelgeuse has gotten ''really'' good at restricting his hauntings to AmusingInjuries, which is why there were no lasting repercussions from him flinging Charles and Otho off of a staircase, or Maxie and Sarah Dean through a ceiling. Explained further when Betelgeuse assures Danny that he won't kill Aunt Melinda. It's boring, it's Melinda; he dismisses it as "boring and too easy, Juno would nag him for years, easy" and there's too much risk of them ending up with a ghost version of her. Also, that [[MoralityPet Lydia frowns would never forgive him]], but implies that the real problem is that though Juno and the CelestialBureaucracy allows and even encourages ghosts to scare the living senseless to keep them from breaking the {{Masquerade}}, lethal injury is ''the'' big no-no -- people murdered by ghosts tend to become ''really'' dangerous ghosts themselves -- [[spoiler:not that Sanduleak really cares. Betelgeuse went "juicing" with him exactly ''once'', thinking he'd found a kindred prankster, only to realize he'd gone on killing]].a wilding with ''UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper'' and sealing him in a well for the next century. Enforcing this rule on such a powerful ghost without being asked is why Juno and her superiors haven't done anything permanent to Betelgeuse]].



* ThouShaltNotKill: Turns out Betelgeuse has gotten ''really'' good at restricting his hauntings to AmusingInjuries, which is why there were no lasting repercussions from him flinging Charles and Otho off of a staircase, or Maxie and Sarah Dean through a ceiling. He points out that ghosts are very capable of annoying the hell out of the ghost that killed them, and while they are allowed and even encouraged to scare the living senseless to keep them from breaking the {{Masquerade}}, lethal injury is ''the'' big no-no -- [[spoiler:not that Sanduleak really cares. Betelgeuse went "juicing" with him exactly ''once'', thinking he'd found a kindred prankster, only to realize he'd gone on a wilding with ''UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper'' and sealing him in a well for the next century. Enforcing this rules on such a powerful ghost without being asked is why Juno and the rest of the CelestialBureaucracy haven't done anything permanent to Betelgeuse]].
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Turns out Betelgeuse has gotten ''really'' good at restricting his hauntings to AmusingInjuries, which is why there were no lasting repercussions from him flinging Charles and Otho off of a staircase, or Maxie and Sarah Dean through a ceiling. He points out that ghosts are very capable of annoying the hell out of the ghost that killed them, and while they are allowed and even encouraged to scare the living senseless to keep them from breaking the {{Masquerade}}, lethal injury is ''the'' big no-no -- [[spoiler:not that Sanduleak really cares. Betelgeuse went "juicing" with him exactly ''once'', thinking he'd found a kindred prankster, only to realize he'd gone on a wilding with ''UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper'' and sealing him in a well for the next century. Enforcing this rules on such a powerful ghost without being asked is why Juno and the rest of the CelestialBureaucracy haven't done anything permanent to Betelgeuse]].
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** Derrick considers [[spoiler: beating Betelgeuse into incoherence and throwing him into the swamp to slowly drown]] perfectly justified for what he believes happened to his sister, but when he realizes what ''actually'' happened ([[spoiler: she just got lost on her way home and Betelgeuse didn't harm her in the least, instead actually ''proposing'' to her]]), he's completely horrified by what he's done.

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** Derrick considers [[spoiler: beating Betelgeuse into incoherence and throwing him into the swamp to slowly drown]] perfectly justified for what he believes happened to his sister, but when he realizes what ''actually'' happened ([[spoiler: she ([[spoiler:she just got lost on her way home and Betelgeuse didn't harm her in the least, instead actually ''proposing'' to her]]), he's completely horrified by what he's done.done....though not enough to admit it.
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** Derrick considers [[spoiler: beating Betelgeuse into incoherence and throwing him into the swamp to slowly drown]] perfectly justified for what he believes happened to his sister, but when he realizes what ''actually'' happened ([[spoiler: she just got lost on her way home and Betelgeuse didn't harm her in the least, instead actually ''proposing'' to her]]), he's completely horrified by what he's done.

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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Apparently, if you've been in the Netherworld long enough, you get the option of moving on to whatever comes afterward. A ghost of Betelgeuse's acquaintance informs him of her intent to do just that. For his part, Betelgeuse isn't interested; there's still too much fun to be had where he is.



* TheGadfly: Betelgeuse is this at times, deliberately annoying other characters. He rarely does it with Lydia, however, so she's taken by surprise when he picks a quarrel with the Maitlands right in front of her. It turns out he has a reason; hers was an InconvenientSummons and he needs to get back to what he was doing.



* InTheNameOfTheMoon: Doubling with MythologyGag, Betelgeuse teaches Lydia the longer incantation. Instead of summoning him, [[spoiler:it brings her to the Netherworld]]. It's his belated birthday gift to her.



** The longer version of Lydia's incantation makes an appearance here.



* PracticalCurrency: As Betelgeuse explains it, the Netherworld operates on a barter system. Since its inhabitants don't need things like food and shelter, they instead trade in commodities which they want, like cigarettes and favors.

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* PracticalCurrency: As Betelgeuse explains it, the Netherworld operates on a barter system. Since its inhabitants don't need things like food and shelter, they instead trade in commodities which they want, like cigarettes and favors. In one episode, we see him exchange a package of chocolate striped cookies for a favor.

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* ThePowerOfTrust: Realizing that Lydia is not only kind to him but actually ''trusts'' him cements Betelgeuse's determination that this is "his girl" and he's going to look after her.



* ThePowerOfTrust: Realizing that Lydia is not only kind to him but actually ''trusts'' him cements Betelgeuse's determination that this is "his girl" and he's going to look after her.

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A stand-alone spinoff story, ''Just Say It'' (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12172544/1/Just-Say-It here]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8178547 here]]), was written for the ''[=BeetleBabes=]'' community's Halloween contest on DeviantArt. In this one-shot, Lydia is celebrating her first Halloween in Winter River, and her favorite poltergeist helps her carve some jack-o-lanterns.

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A stand-alone spinoff story, ''Just Say It'' (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12172544/1/Just-Say-It here]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8178547 here]]), was written for the ''[=BeetleBabes=]'' community's Halloween contest on DeviantArt. In this one-shot, set after the events of ''Say It Thrice'', Lydia is celebrating her first Halloween in Winter River, Amity Park, and her favorite poltergeist helps her carve some jack-o-lanterns.


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* AbnormalAmmo: Lydia and Betelgeuse finish the carving activity by hurling pumpkin guts at one another.
* AfterActionReport: Of a sort. It technically takes place after the events of ''Say It Thrice,'' but does little to reference that story.
* HalloweenEpisode
* PumpkinPerson: The jack-o-lantern that Betelgeuse so painstakingly carves turns out to be a rather impressive self-portrait.
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A stand-alone spinoff story, ''Just Say It'' (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12172544/1/Just-Say-It here]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8178547 here]]), was written for the ''[=BeetleBabes=]'' community's Halloween contest on DeviantArt. In this one-shot, Lydia is celebrating her first Halloween in Winter River, and her favorite poltergeist helps her carve some jack-o-lanterns.

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* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:Lydia, at the very end of the story, is essentially this. She's actually an emancipated minor, but she's living with and working for the Fentons, and it's clear from the way they treat her that they all consider her part of the family.]]

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* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:Lydia, at the very end of the story, is essentially this. She's actually an emancipated minor, EmancipatedChild, but she's living with and working for the Fentons, and it's clear from the way they treat her that they all consider her part of the family.]]


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** He has another bit of this near the end, when Juno asks if he's Lydia's HonoraryUncle or big brother figure or what; he very insistently says that he's her best friend, full stop.


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* HalloweenEpisode: Chapter 12, which sees Lydia carving jack-o-lanterns with Delia followed by watching a scary movie marathon at the theater with Beej.
* HeavySleeper: After she falls asleep at the movies on Halloween, Betelgeuse has to carry Lydia back to her house - by flying. She doesn't wake up even once.

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* OnlyFriend: As noted under InsistentTerminology, Lydia is this for Betelgeuse, which is why he considers her ''his.''



* PapaWolf: Betelgeuse to Lydia, who has become his {{protectorate}}; she even comments on it in the first chapter, when speaking of her exceedingly protective, slightly possessive "not-boyfriend."

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* PapaWolf: PapaWolf[=/=]{{Protectorate}}: Betelgeuse will pull out all the stops to Lydia, who has become his {{protectorate}}; defend Lydia from anything, even at tremendous risk to himself; she even comments on it in the first chapter, when speaking of her exceedingly protective, slightly possessive "not-boyfriend."
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* TalkativeLoon: [[spoiler:Aunt Melinda]] has essentially become this by the final chapter. Though since that scene is 99% narrative, we don't realize it represents a monologue until [[spoiler:Freakshow]], who's in the next cell, yells for someone to sedate [[spoiler:her]] again because "the dosage wore off and [[spoiler:she]] ''won't shut up.''"

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* IHaveManyNames: Sanduleak claims this about himself. One of his most commonly known names is [[spoiler: UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper.]]
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Lydia manages to do this for [[spoiler:Betelgeuse when he's under the influence of the Gem of Osiris. He's absolutely uncontrollable - but even in that state, he's somehow able to recognize that this girl is the one person he cannot bring himself to hurt.]]



* IHaveManyNames: Sanduleak claims this about himself. One of his most commonly known names is [[spoiler: UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper.]]
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Lydia manages to do this for [[spoiler:Betelgeuse when he's under the influence of the Gem of Osiris. He's absolutely uncontrollable - but even in that state, he's somehow able to recognize that this girl is the one person he cannot bring himself to hurt.]]
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* PortalDoor: The ghost portal that connects the Ghost Zone to the Fenton's basement. Betelgeuse tries to use it to escape without having have his [[SpeakOfTheDevil name spoken]] [[RuleOfThree three times]]. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out quite like he was hoping.]]

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* PortalDoor: The ghost portal that connects the Ghost Zone to the Fenton's Fentons' basement. Betelgeuse tries to use it to escape without having have his [[SpeakOfTheDevil name spoken]] [[RuleOfThree three times]]. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out quite like he was hoping.]]



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Lydia delivers one to the Fenton parents on their treatment and views concerning ghosts. And while they can easily write off her more emotional arguments as being the result of misplaced sympathy, they pay closer attention when she points out that just making assumptions, rather than using the scientific method to determine whether ghosts could be considered people, is [[SeriousBusiness bad scientific practice]].

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Lydia delivers one to the Fenton parents on their treatment and views concerning ghosts. And while While they can easily write off her more emotional arguments as being the result of misplaced sympathy, they pay closer attention when she points out that just making assumptions, rather than using the scientific method to determine whether ghosts could be considered people, is [[SeriousBusiness bad scientific practice]].
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* {{Backstory}}: Sanduleak's backstory reveals he's [[spoiler: JackTheRipper.]]

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* {{Backstory}}: Sanduleak's backstory reveals he's [[spoiler: JackTheRipper.UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper.]]



* IHaveManyNames: Sanduleak claims this about himself. One of his most commonly known names is [[spoiler:JackTheRipper.]]

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* IHaveManyNames: Sanduleak claims this about himself. One of his most commonly known names is [[spoiler:JackTheRipper.[[spoiler: UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper.]]



* JackTheRipper: [[spoiler:Sanduleak turns out to be the serial killer himself]].

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* JackTheRipper: UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper: [[spoiler:Sanduleak turns out to be the serial killer himself]].



* SlashedThroat: Sanduleak's preferred method of dealing with people, which makes sense since he's [[spoiler: JackTheRipper.]]

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* SlashedThroat: Sanduleak's preferred method of dealing with people, which makes sense since he's [[spoiler: JackTheRipper.UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper.]]



* VictorianLondon: Sanduleak was originally from this time period when he was alive [[spoiler: because he was JackTheRipper]].

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* VictorianLondon: Sanduleak was originally from this time period when he was alive [[spoiler: because he was JackTheRipper]].UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper]].
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* AlienGeometry: In her report, Maddie Fenton remarks that structure of the Ghost Zone does not reflect normal forms of geometry and physics. Instead, it appears to be closer to a Moebius Loop or a Klein bottle, but not quite.

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* AlienGeometry: AlienGeometries: In her report, Maddie Fenton remarks that structure of the Ghost Zone does not reflect normal forms of geometry and physics. Instead, it appears to be closer to a Moebius Loop or a Klein bottle, but not quite.
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** SecretKeeper: When she does reveal it to the Maitlands, they reluctantly agree to be this, on the condition that she will tell them immediately if he does anything inappropriate.
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* RitualMagic: Seems to be the preferred strategy for dealing with ghosts from the Netherworld. Anyone can use it if they know the right words, have a physical object connected to the ghost in question, and have a strong enough will to overcome the ghost's power. Or a AmplifierArtifact.

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* RitualMagic: Seems to be the preferred strategy for dealing with ghosts from the Netherworld. Anyone can use it if they know the right words, have a physical object connected to the ghost in question, and have a strong enough will to overcome the ghost's power. Or a an AmplifierArtifact.
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* IfICantHaveYou: [[spoiler:Melinda reacted murderously when the ghost she had a crush on didn't return her affections and didn't even know how she felt. She decided to expand this to include all ghosts.]]

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* IfICantHaveYou: [[spoiler:Melinda reacted murderously when the ghost she had a crush on didn't return her affections and didn't even know how she felt. She decided to expand this murderous anger to include all ghosts.]]



* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Lydia manages to do this for [[spoiler:Betelgeuse when he's under the influence of the Gem of Osiris. He's absolutely uncontrollable - but even in this state, he recognizes that this is the one person he cannot bring himself to hurt.]]
* InadvertentEntranceCue: When Lydia, Sam and Tucker confront Melinda, she tells them they should stay out of things they don't understand and aren't their business. However, Betelgeuse considers the whole affair to be very much ''his'' business, and uses that comment as his opportunity to join the conversation, materializing behind Lydia and putting his hands on her shoulders.

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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Lydia manages to do this for [[spoiler:Betelgeuse when he's under the influence of the Gem of Osiris. He's absolutely uncontrollable - but even in this that state, he recognizes he's somehow able to recognize that this girl is the one person he cannot bring himself to hurt.]]
* InadvertentEntranceCue: When Lydia, Sam and Tucker confront Melinda, she tells them they should stay out of things they don't understand and aren't their business. However, Betelgeuse considers the whole affair to be very much ''his'' business, and uses that comment as his opportunity to join the conversation, materializing behind Lydia and putting his hands on her shoulders.



* ItSeemedTrivial: Danny, Sam, and Tucker never think to mention to the new girl about the rumors concerning the Ghost With the Most and his missing "Mortal Bride." Likewise, Lydia never thinks to mention she was almost married to a ghost once. Without these minor details, no one can make the connection. Of course, it makes sense that the topics wouldn't come up when talking to near strangers.

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* ItSeemedTrivial: Danny, Sam, and Tucker never think to mention to the new girl about the rumors concerning the Ghost With the Most and his missing "Mortal Bride." Likewise, Lydia never thinks to mention she was almost married to a ghost once. Without these minor details, no one can make the connection. Of course, it makes sense that the such topics wouldn't come up when talking to near strangers.



* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler: Derrick brutally murders Betelgeuse in the flashback chapters. He does feel some regret for it later, when he realizes that his victim was actually innocent, but mostly he turns his attention to making sure that ''no one ever finds out''.]]

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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler: Derrick brutally murders Betelgeuse in the flashback chapters. He does feel some regret for it later, when he realizes that his victim was actually innocent, but mostly he turns his attention to making sure that ''no no one ever ''ever'' finds out''.out. And he succeeds.]]



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Aunt Melinda managed to induce a very specific form of this, [[spoiler:causing Lydia to forget Betelgeuse's name]].

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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Prior to the start of the story, Aunt Melinda managed to induce a very specific form of this, [[spoiler:causing Lydia to forget Betelgeuse's name]].



* NoSell: Sanduleak's attempts to repeatedly stab [[spoiler:Betelgeuse]] doesn't quite work out for him.

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* NoSell: Sanduleak's repeated attempts to repeatedly stab [[spoiler:Betelgeuse]] doesn't don't quite work out for him.



* OlderThanTheyLook: Betelgeuse has been around for apparently 600 years.

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* OlderThanTheyLook: Betelgeuse has been around for apparently approximately 600 years.



* PatchworkFic: In regards to "Beetlejuice," the writer describes it as 99% [[Film/{{Beetlejuice}} the film]] and 1% [[WesternAnimation/{{Beetlejuice}} the cartoon]] (namely Lydia's age, the existence of the red poncho, and a little of the characterization of Lydia and Betelgeuse).

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* PatchworkFic: In With regards to "Beetlejuice," ''Beetlejuice,'' the writer describes it as 99% [[Film/{{Beetlejuice}} the film]] and 1% [[WesternAnimation/{{Beetlejuice}} the cartoon]] (namely Lydia's age, the existence of the red poncho, and a little of the characterization of Lydia and Betelgeuse).



** [[spoiler:Sanduleak also plans to enact one against Betelgeuse, by targeting Lydia, after he escapes from Saturn.]]

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** [[spoiler:Sanduleak also plans to enact one against Betelgeuse, by once again targeting Lydia, after he escapes from Saturn.]]

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