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** In one [[Dream Land dream sequence]], Lisa shows Taylor a stack of trade paperbacks referencing other ''[[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/]]'' fics by the same author, and by others as well. Lisa comments that she knows what she'll be doing for reading material for a while.
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** In one [[Dream Land [[DreamLand dream sequence]], Lisa shows Taylor a stack of trade paperbacks referencing other ''[[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/]]'' fics by the same author, and by others as well. Lisa comments that she knows what she'll be doing for reading material for a while.
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* ShoutOut: Taylor explicitly picks her new surname after traveling back in time from GameOfThrones.
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** In one [[Dream Land dream sequence]], Lisa shows Taylor a stack of trade paperbacks referencing other ''[[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/]]'' fics by the same author, and by others as well. Lisa comments that she knows what she'll be doing for reading material for a while.
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* [[IdenticalGrandson Identical Mom]]: Taylor looks enough like her alt-mother that
** Andrea mistakes Taylor for her [[FirstKiss on their first meeting]].
** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush from Taylor to [[DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem.
** She is able to [[ShellGame pass for Taylor]] in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
** Andrea mistakes Taylor for her [[FirstKiss on their first meeting]].
** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush from Taylor to [[DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem.
** She is able to [[ShellGame pass for Taylor]] in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Taylor looks enough like her alt-mother that
** Andrea mistakes Taylor for her [[FirstKiss on their first meeting]].
** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush from Taylor to [[DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem.
** She is able to [[ShellGame pass for Taylor]] in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
** Andrea mistakes Taylor for her [[FirstKiss on their first meeting]].
** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush from Taylor to [[DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem.
** She is able to [[ShellGame pass for Taylor]] in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
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** Nina Veder, ship's doctor and psychologist who takes Taylor under her wing.
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** Part 2-1: [[spoiler: ''Oh shit. My mom's in a lesbian relationship with my room-mate. What the fuck do I do now?'']].
** Part 3-1: [[spoiler: “The name's Tom,” he greeted me. “Tom Calvert.”]]
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** Major (and then Lt Col) Brian Hamilton, of the PRT Intelligence branch. Taylor's boss and father figure.
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** Major (and then Lt Col) Brian Hamilton, of the PRT Intelligence branch. Taylor's boss and [[AFatherToHisMen father figure.figure]].
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* DreamLand: Lisa creates settings within Taylor's head to host their interactions.
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* MoralGuardian: Dorothy Hebert, Taylor's alt-grandma. [[HolierThanThou Fervently Christian]], fervently anti-gay.
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* MoralGuardian: Dorothy Hebert, [[RacistGrandma Taylor's alt-grandma. alt-grandma.]] [[HolierThanThou Fervently Christian]], fervently anti-gay.
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* TheCaptain: Taylor ends up as one.
* TheSlowPath: What Taylor's taking to get back to what used to be her own time.
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* WhamEpisode: Part 2-4. [[Spoiler: Behemoth emerges for the first time]]
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** Part 3-1: [[spoiler: “The name's Tom,” he greeted me. “Tom Calvert.”]]
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** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush on Taylor to [[DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem.
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** Nina Veder, ship's doctor and psychologist who takes Taylor under her wing.
** Principal Paul Woodbine of Winslow High School. Directly contrasting with Ms Blackwell, of Taylor's time.
** Major (and then Lt Col) Brian Hamilton, of the PRT Intelligence branch. Taylor's boss and father figure.
** Nina Veder, ship's doctor and psychologist who takes Taylor under her wing.
** Principal Paul Woodbine of Winslow High School. Directly contrasting with Ms Blackwell, of Taylor's time.
** Major (and then Lt Col) Brian Hamilton, of the PRT Intelligence branch. Taylor's boss and father figure.
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* MoralGuardian: Dorothy Hebert, Taylor's alt-grandma. Fervently Christian, fervently anti-gay.
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** She is able to pass for Taylor in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
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* ButNotTooBi: Anne-Rose (Taylor's alt-mom) is portrayed as being a little bisexual, enough to [[spoiler: be having a relationship with Andrea when Taylor meets her]].
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* ButNotTooBi: Anne-Rose (Taylor's alt-mom) is portrayed as being a little bisexual, enough to [[spoiler: be having a relationship with Andrea when Taylor meets her]]. However, once Taylor sets her up with [[OneTruePairing Danny]] ...
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* ButNotTooBi: Anne-Rose (Taylor's alt-mom) is portrayed as being a little bisexual, enough to [[spoiler: be having a relationship with Andrea when Taylor meets her].
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** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush on Taylor to [[DoppelgängerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem.
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* [[IdenticalGrandson Identical Mom]]: Taylor looks enough like her twenty-two-years-younger alt-mother that
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* MoralityGuardian: Dorothy Hebert, Taylor's alt-grandma. Fervently Christian, fervently anti-gay.
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* ButNotTooBi: Anne-Rose (Taylor's alt-mom) is portrayed as being a little bisexual, enough to [[spoiler: be having a relationship with Andrea when Taylor meets her].
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* [[IdenticalGrandson Identical Mom]]: Taylor looks enough like her twenty-two-years-younger alt-mother that
** Andrea mistakes Taylor for her on their first meeting.
** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush on Taylor to [[DoppelgängerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem
** She is able to pass for Taylor in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
** Andrea mistakes Taylor for her on their first meeting.
** Danny is able to transfer his latent crush on Taylor to [[DoppelgängerReplacementLoveInterest Anne-Rose]] without a problem
** She is able to pass for Taylor in a dark movie theatre in order for Taylor to [[spoiler: sneak out and rescue Kinsey]].
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* AscendedExtra: Mrs Knott from canon [[spoiler: introduced as 'Gladys Harvey', given that she's in high school at the time]].
* BadassTeacher: MrsKnott.Knott, again [[spoiler: Taylor's influence causes her to attend JROTC and then ROTC, so that she's more confident, and capable, than in canon]].
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* DreamLand: Lisa creates settings within Taylor's head to host their interactions.
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* TheSlowPath: What Taylor's taking to get back to what used to be her own time.
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* [[MyOwnGrampa My Own Mom]]: Some readers were worried that Taylor meeting her alt-father would spark this trope. Nope. Just nope.
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* LastKiss: Taylor gives one to Lisa in her dying moments. [[spoiler: But it's not their ''last'' kiss ...]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''Fanfic/{{Security!}}''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''Fanfic/{{Security!}}'').''Fanfic/{{Security}}''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''Fanfic/{{Security}}''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''Fanfic/{{Security}}'').''Fanfic/{{Security!}}''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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* BoomHeadshot: Taylor's become such a good shot that all her lethal shots are these.
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* DeadPersonConversation: Taylor regularly chats with Lisa in her dreams, and Lisa possesses far more insight than Taylor's subconscious should have.
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* ShoutOut: Taylor explicitly picks her new surname after traveling back in time from GameOfThrones.
* SpiritAdvisor: After traveling back in time, Taylor begins to speak with Lisa in her dreams. Lisa continues to provide intelligence and insight to Taylor.
* SpiritAdvisor: After traveling back in time, Taylor begins to speak with Lisa in her dreams. Lisa continues to provide intelligence and insight to Taylor.
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* DirtyBusiness: Taylor knows that she couldn't [[spoiler:give too much advance warning about a Behemoth attack]] if she wanted to keep her cover. But knowing that doing so led to more people dying that she might have saved eats at her.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''Fanfic/{{Security}}''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
!Warning! Unavoidable spoilers for Worm canon follow!
The fight against Behemoth in New Delhi takes a wrong turn, nearly resulting in a TotalPartyKill. Taylor, one of the few survivors, is discovered by a NotQuiteDead Phir Sē and sent back into the past to try and do better. However, things don't go quite as planned, starting with the fact that her insect-control powers didn't follow...
!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
* BroughtDownToBadass: Taylor loses her insect-control powers after being sent back to the past. Doesn't stop her from kicking arse.
* MagicFeather: [[spoiler:The tapes Taylor use to put herself into the state needed to contact Lisa aren't actually needed.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: What Taylor's trying to do. Time will tell how it works out.
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!Warning! Unavoidable spoilers for Worm canon follow!
The fight against Behemoth in New Delhi takes a wrong turn, nearly resulting in a TotalPartyKill. Taylor, one of the few survivors, is discovered by a NotQuiteDead Phir Sē and sent back into the past to try and do better. However, things don't go quite as planned, starting with the fact that her insect-control powers didn't follow...
!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
* BroughtDownToBadass: Taylor loses her insect-control powers after being sent back to the past. Doesn't stop her from kicking arse.
* MagicFeather: [[spoiler:The tapes Taylor use to put herself into the state needed to contact Lisa aren't actually needed.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: What Taylor's trying to do. Time will tell how it works out.
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