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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Although their first conversation was presumably nowhere ''near'' as profound or life altering for her as it was for Naruto, Hinata shows recognition of its occurrence during their second conversation two years later.

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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: [[AvertedTrope Averted]].Averted]] in a non-villainous example by Hinata. Although their first conversation was presumably nowhere ''near'' as profound or life altering for her as it was for Naruto, Hinata shows recognition of its occurrence during their second conversation two years later.

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* AllThereInTheManual: Aside from the story itself, there are two sections that come with almost every chapter that help to further explain/define terms used within the fic.
** The denshi jisho (review) is used at the start of each chapter to define the various Japanese words/terms the authors use in the fic.
** KJ's Corner is used at the end of each chapter to further explain or refresh on specific terms and abilities that are used in the chapter.

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* AllThereInTheManual: Aside from the story itself, there are several places where more information on the story can be found.
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are two sections that come with almost every chapter that help to further explain/define terms used within the fic.
** *** The denshi jisho (review) is used at the start of each chapter to define the various Japanese words/terms the authors use in the fic.
** *** KJ's Corner is used at the end of each chapter to further explain or refresh on specific terms and abilities that are used in the chapter.chapter.
** The [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ tumblr page]] has two kinds of posts that further expand upon certain topics that aren't directly covered in the fanfic.
*** Good Question: Where certain questions asked by the readers are answered for everyone to see.
*** Things you ought to know: Various pieces of information that may not have been picked up on by the readers that are relevant to [[spoiler:The Chunin Exams Invasion Arc]].
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* PowerNullifier: Naruto's [[spoiler:Gentle Fist]] Seal prevents chakra flow through the affected areas of the body. Depending on the strength of the seal, it can affect specific body parts or the body as a whole.
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* LadyOfWar: Naruto makes note of how fluid and graceful [[spoiler:Hinata]] manages to remain even while [[spoiler:she]]'s practically cutting him to ribbons during their match in the Chunin Exams Finals.

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* LadyOfWar: Naruto makes note of how fluid and graceful [[spoiler:Hinata]] manages to remain even while [[spoiler:she]]'s she's practically cutting him to ribbons during their match in the Chunin Exams Finals.
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* BodyguardingABadass: Hinata has various retainers that escort her from place to place and double as bodyguards for her in the case that she is attacked within Konoha. Of course, her [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking position being what it is]] Hinata is an [[LadyOfWar absolute terror]] in battle as well.

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* BodyguardingABadass: Hinata has various retainers that escort her from place to place and double as bodyguards for her in the case that she is attacked within Konoha. Of course, her [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking position being what it is]] is]], Hinata is an [[LadyOfWar absolute terror]] in battle as well.
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* BloodKnight: Naruto [[LampshadeHanging remarks to himself]] that he probably comes across as such during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exams Finals. This is especially prominent during the second half of the fight after [[spoiler:Hinata removes her blindfold]], wherein he's effectively getting filleted by [[spoiler:Hinata]] but ''cannot'' keep the stupid grin off of his face.

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* BloodKnight: Naruto [[LampshadeHanging remarks to himself]] that he probably comes across as such during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exams Finals. This is especially prominent during the second half of the fight after [[spoiler:Hinata removes her blindfold]], wherein he's effectively getting filleted by [[spoiler:Hinata]] her but ''cannot'' keep the stupid grin off of his face.
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** [[spoiler:Hinata's]] reaction to being told [[spoiler:she's]] standing in the middle of Naruto's first [[BloodMagic blood seal]] [[spoiler:during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]

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** [[spoiler:Hinata's]] reaction to being told [[spoiler:she's]] she's standing in the middle of Naruto's first [[BloodMagic blood seal]] [[spoiler:during during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]

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* IgnoredEpiphany: After being defeated by [[spoiler:Naruto]] in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that [[spoier:Naruto]]'s first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]



* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler:After being defeated by Naruto in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that Naruto's first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
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* BlindfoldedVision: [[spoiler:Hinata]] begins training [[spoiler:herself]] to fight without needing to see shortly after becoming a genin on [[spoiler:her]] jonin instructor, [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s, suggestion. [[spoiler:Hinata]] [[UpToEleven goes above and beyond]] [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s suggestion by deciding to wear the blindfold at all times rather than just while training.

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* BlindfoldedVision: [[spoiler:Hinata]] begins training [[spoiler:herself]] herself to fight without needing to see shortly after becoming a genin on [[spoiler:her]] her jonin instructor, [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s, suggestion. [[spoiler:Hinata]] [[UpToEleven goes above and beyond]] [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s suggestion by deciding to wear the blindfold at all times rather than just while training.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Naruto uses several Shadow Clones during the month before the Chunin Exam Finals to observe the [[spoiler:Hyuuga]] fighting style. Come his first match with [[spoiler:Hinata]], he knows enough about [[spoiler:Juuken]] that despite the differences in [[spoiler:Hinata's]] own rendition of the fighting style, he manages to maneuver [[spoiler:her]] onto his Five Senses Seal even while [[spoiler:she believes that she's avoided letting him do so.]]

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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Naruto uses several Shadow Clones during the month before the Chunin Exam Finals to observe the [[spoiler:Hyuuga]] fighting style. Come his first match with [[spoiler:Hinata]], he knows enough about [[spoiler:Juuken]] that despite the differences in [[spoiler:Hinata's]] own rendition of the fighting style, he manages to maneuver [[spoiler:her]] her onto his Five Senses Seal even while [[spoiler:she she believes that she's avoided letting him do so.]]
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* AttentionWhore: Much like his canon counterpart, Naruto craves the acknowledgement and attention of those around him to the point that he's willing to completely embarrass himself to receive. Several of his "Pranking Rules" reflect this attitude.

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* AttentionWhore: Much like his canon counterpart, Naruto craves the acknowledgement and attention of those around him to the point that he's willing to completely embarrass himself to receive.receive it. Several of his "Pranking Rules" reflect this attitude.
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. This changes after Kakashi makes a point of demonstrating ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling Naruto's combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission. After that, Naruto begins to rapidly improve to the point that he defeats [[spoiler:Neji during the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]

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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. This changes after Kakashi makes a point of demonstrating ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling Naruto's combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission. After that, Naruto begins to rapidly improve to the point that he defeats [[spoiler:Neji [[spoiler:Neji]] during the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]



** Driven by [[spoiler:Itachi's]] statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest, Sakura finds the drive to become strong enough to nearly defeat [[spoiler:Sasuke in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]

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** Driven by [[spoiler:Itachi's]] statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest, Sakura finds the drive to become strong enough to nearly defeat [[spoiler:Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke]] in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
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* BadassBoast: Naruto is fond of these, but the clincher is what he says after he successfully activates his [[spoiler:Gentle Fist]] Seal on [[spoiler:Neji during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]

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* BadassBoast: Naruto is fond of these, but the clincher is what he says after he successfully activates his [[spoiler:Gentle Fist]] Seal on [[spoiler:Neji [[spoiler:Neji]] during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
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* SenseLossSadness: [[spoiler:Hinata]] is nearly overwhelmed by the sudden helplessness [[spoiler:she]] feels after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal, before powering through it on [[{{Determinator}} sheer willpower.]]

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* SenseLossSadness: [[spoiler:Hinata]] is nearly overwhelmed by the sudden helplessness [[spoiler:she]] she feels after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal, before powering through it on [[{{Determinator}} sheer willpower.]]
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: Near the end of their match [[spoiler:Hinata]] asks Naruto to stand down, because even though [[spoiler:she]] can't quite spell out to herself why, [[spoiler:she]] ''really'' doesn't want to kill him.

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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: Near the end of their match [[spoiler:Hinata]] asks Naruto to stand down, because even though [[spoiler:she]] she can't quite spell out to herself why, [[spoiler:she]] she ''really'' doesn't want to kill him.
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** Tatsuki Hyuuga assumes that [[spoiler:Haku is a girl]].

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** Tatsuki Hyuuga assumes that [[spoiler:Haku [[spoiler:[[DudeLooksLikeALady Haku is a girl]].girl]]]].
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* CheckAndMate: Shino [[AvertedTrope attempts]] to do this to Naruto during their fight in the [[spoiler:Chunin Exams Finals]], but ends up being interrupted and defeated by Naruto shortly thereafter.


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* IdiotBall: Rather than simply knock out Naruto, who is having trouble standing at that point, Shino decides to [[CheckAndMate monologue]] about how Naruto should give up because he's already [[EntertaininglyWrong drained Naruto of all of his chakra]] and that Naruto is incapable of beating him with purely taijutsu with the condition his body is in. Naruto proceeds to [[spoiler:summon a ring of shadow clones around Shino's wall of flesh eating bugs, replace himself with one of the clones and then set all of the bugs on fire with a fire jutsu]], which leads to Shino falling unconscious from the shock.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 24th, 2015 it sits at 41 Chapters and approximately 372,000 words.

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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 24th, March 3rd, 2015 it sits at 41 42 Chapters and approximately 372,000 384,000 words.

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* EntertaininglyWrong: When he first learns about the Uzumaki Clan, Naruto assumes that his ''father'' was the Uzumaki in the relationship and that he got his blond hair from his ''mother''.
** [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that standard practice ''would'' be to give him his father's last name, but of course, Naruto is a special case.

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* EntertaininglyWrong: When he first learns about the Uzumaki Clan, Naruto assumes that his ''father'' was the Uzumaki in the relationship and that he got his blond hair from his ''mother''.
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''mother''. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that standard practice ''would'' be to give him his father's last name, but of course, Naruto is a special case.case.
** Tatsuki Hyuuga assumes that [[spoiler:Haku is a girl]].


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* NoSell: During chapter 42, Tatsuki, Hinata's primary attendant, attempts to dissuade Naruto from approaching Hinata by unleashing a healthy dose of [[KillingIntent killing intent]]. Naruto doesn't react in the slightest.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Naruto and Hinata are the main example in this fic, with Naruto being the Red and Hinata being the Blue.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Naruto and Hinata are the main example in this the fic, with Naruto being the Red and Hinata being the Blue.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Due to it being [[RequiredSecondaryPowers required knowledge]], Naruto has a comprehensive understanding of higher level mathematics, to the point that he was studying basic calculus by the age of ''ten''.

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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Due to it being [[RequiredSecondaryPowers required knowledge]], Naruto has a comprehensive understanding of higher level mathematics, to the point that he was studying basic calculus by the age of ''ten''.''eleven''.

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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The Hyuuga's most powerful members are called the Yin, who leads the clan, and Yang, who leads the Military Police, and wear white and black respectively to indicate their status. The closer one's position in the family is to either position, the closer the color of their attire is to pure black or white. The standard Hyuuga uniform is grey.
** As the heir to the clan and Yin, Hinata wears a pure white ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kimono&redirect=no#Accessories_and_related_garments Haori]]'' as a part of her combat uniform.
** As the person who'd once been the Yang, before Hanabi was born, Neji has an honorary position in the Military Police and wears a very dark grey uniform to represent this.

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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The Hyuuga's most powerful members are called First Family, the rough equivalent of canon's Main Family, is divided into the Yin, who the family line that leads the clan, and Yang, who the family line that leads the Military Police, and wear white and black respectively to indicate their status. The closer one's position in the family is to the highest position in either position, family line, the closer the color of their attire is to pure black white or white.black. The standard Hyuuga uniform is grey.
** As the heir to the clan and member of the Yin, Hinata wears a pure white ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kimono&redirect=no#Accessories_and_related_garments Haori]]'' as a part of her combat uniform.
** As a member of the Yang and the person who'd once been next in line to lead the Yang, Hyuuga Military Police before Hanabi was born, Neji has an honorary position in the Military Police and wears a very dark grey uniform to represent this.


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*** Naruto [[ExploitedTrope exploits]] this for his prank ''Operation Fire Festival'', part of which involved [[spoiler: turning all of the Hyuuga police uniforms bright orange. The darker the uniform, the brighter the shade of orange the uniform became.]]

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* CassetteCraze: Naruto has hundreds of cassettes worth of voice recordings detailing the preparation and execution of all his pranks, as well as the details of his trials in learning and creating new fūinjutsu techniques that he calls his "Super Ninja Notes".



** Interlude VI occurs during Konoha's annual Fire Festival.



* LongGame: Naruto's execution of ''[[OperationBlank Operation Fire Festival]]'' took him six months of preparation.



* NoodleIncident: There are several references made to a prank Naruto pulled that involved him infiltrating four Hyuuga Military Police Towers, but nobody ever goes into the details of what happened.
** The prank is finally [[AvertedTrope partially explained]] during Interlude V(Chapter 32), where it is referred to as ''[[OperationBlank Operation Fire Festival]]'', and [[AvertedTrope shown]] happening during Interlude VI(Chapter 41). [[note]]The prank involved Naruto infiltrating four different Military Police Towers to apply one use seals on the roof and central power grid of each one as well as applying a seal to every single Hyuuga Police Uniform. When he activates the seals during the festival, all four towers turn bright orange, every police uniform turns an increasingly bright shade of orange the darker the uniform was, and fireworks launch from the roofs of the towers that say ''We Love Uzumaki'' and ''Uzumaki for Hokage'' upon detonation.[[/note]]



* OperationBlank: Naruto uses this naming scheme for his pranks.



** Naruto is shown to be learning basic calculus by the time he's ''ten''.
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** Chapter 40 is effectively a series of anti-climaxes . [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title.

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** Chapter 40 is effectively a series of anti-climaxes . [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title.title as well as Sakura near the end of the chapter.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Due to it being [[RequiredSecondaryPowers required knowledge]], Naruto has a comprehensive understanding of higher level mathematics, to the point that he was studying basic calculus by the age of ''ten''.



* AdaptationalIntelligence: Due to it being [[RequiredSecondaryPowers required knowledge]], Naruto has a comprehensive understanding of higher level mathematics, to the point that he was studying basic calculus by the age of ''ten''.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Due to it being [[RequiredSecondaryPowers required knowledge]], Naruto has a comprehensive understanding of higher level mathematics, to the point that he was studying basic calculus by the age of ''ten''.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 16th, 2015 it sits at 40 Chapters and approximately 362,000 words.

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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 16th, 24th, 2015 it sits at 40 41 Chapters and approximately 362,000 372,000 words.
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--> '''Rule 5:''' Proclaim innocence even when proven guilty.


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--> '''Rule 39:''' Never proceed with a prank without knowing your target.
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--> '''Rule 46:''' Avoid unnecessary collateral damage.

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