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** Naruto is shown to be learning basic calculus by the time he's ''ten''.
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* BrainBleach: Kiba wishes he had some after walking in on his sister, and his jonin sense, [[spoiler:Itachi]], in bed together.

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* BrainBleach: Kiba wishes he had some after walking in on his sister, and his jonin sense, sensei, [[spoiler:Itachi]], in bed together.

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* BrainBleach: Kiba wishes he had some after walking in on his sister, Hana, and [[spoiler:Itachi]] in bed together the morning of the Final Round of the Chunin Exams.

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* BrainBleach: Kiba wishes he had some after walking in on his sister, Hana, and [[spoiler:Itachi]] his jonin sense, [[spoiler:Itachi]], in bed together the morning of the Final Round of the Chunin Exams.together.


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* ADayInTheLimelight: Hana's three ninken get a scene from their point of view during chapter 34.
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*** After it gets out that he nearly lost to [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalBadass Sakura]]]] during the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams Finals, he learns that the betting pools had placed his odds of beating his first opponent in the Finals as so low that even members of his clan bet against him. After [[spoiler:Kankuro]] forfeits immediately and denies Sasuke the chance to show his skills, he barely prevents himself from throwing an outraged conniption fit in front of everyone.

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*** After it gets out that he nearly lost to [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalBadass Sakura]]]] during the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams Finals, Exams, he learns that the betting pools had placed his odds of beating his first opponent in the Finals as so low that even members of his clan bet against him. After [[spoiler:Kankuro]] forfeits immediately and denies Sasuke the chance to show his skills, he barely prevents himself from throwing an outraged conniption fit in front of everyone.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Naruto uses several Shadow Clones during the month before the Chunin Exam Finals to observe the [[spoiler:Hyuuga]] fighting style. Come his first match with [[spoiler:Hinata]], he knows enough about the style that despite the differences in [[spoiler:Hinata's]] own rendition of it to maneuver [[spoiler:her]] onto his Five Senses Seal even while [[spoiler:she believes that she's avoided letting him do so.]]

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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Naruto uses several Shadow Clones during the month before the Chunin Exam Finals to observe the [[spoiler:Hyuuga]] fighting style. Come his first match with [[spoiler:Hinata]], he knows enough about the style [[spoiler:Juuken]] that despite the differences in [[spoiler:Hinata's]] own rendition of it the fighting style, he manages to maneuver [[spoiler:her]] onto his Five Senses Seal even while [[spoiler:she believes that she's avoided letting him do so.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Sasuke vs Kankurou]] ends in [[spoiler:Kankuro's]] immediate forfeit.

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*** [[spoiler:Sasuke vs Kankurou]] ends in [[spoiler:Kankuro's]] [[spoiler:Kankuro]]'s immediate forfeit.



*** [[spoiler:Renji vs Gaara]] ends in [[spoiler:Renji's]] immediate forfeit.

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*** [[spoiler:Renji vs Gaara]] ends in [[spoiler:Renji's]] [[spoiler:Renji]]'s immediate forfeit.
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*** Naruto's stealth, infiltration and pursuit evasion skills are good enough that he's successfully pulled a prank on the ''Hyuuga operated'' Military Police Towers. ''Twice''.

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*** Naruto's stealth, infiltration and pursuit evasion skills are good enough that he's successfully pulled a prank on the ''Hyuuga operated'' Military Police Towers. ''Twice''. One of those pranks involved hitting ''four towers simultaneously''.
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** Due to the Branch House of the Hyuuga Clan not existing in it's canon incarnation in this fic, Neji is equal to or possibly ''stronger'' than his canon counterpart's Chunin Exam Finals strength by the time the Second Round Preliminaries occur.
** Driven by [[spoiler:Itachi's statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest]] Sakura becomes strong enough [[spoiler:to nearly defeat Sasuke in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]

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** Due to the Branch House of the Hyuuga Clan not existing in it's canon incarnation in this fic, incarnation, Neji is equal to or possibly ''stronger'' than his canon counterpart's Chunin Exam Finals strength by the time the Second Round Preliminaries occur.
** Driven by [[spoiler:Itachi's [[spoiler:Itachi's]] statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest]] interest, Sakura becomes finds the drive to become strong enough [[spoiler:to to nearly defeat Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
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* BadassBoast: Naruto is fond of these, but the clincher is what he says after he [[spoiler:successfully activates his Gentle Fist Seal on Neji during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]

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* BadassBoast: Naruto is fond of these, but the clincher is what he says after he [[spoiler:successfully successfully activates his Gentle Fist [[spoiler:Gentle Fist]] Seal on Neji [[spoiler:Neji during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
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* BloodKnight: Naruto remarks to himself that he probably comes across as such during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exams Finals. This is especially prominent during the second half of the fight after [[spoiler:Hinata removes her blindfold.]]

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* BloodKnight: Naruto [[LampshadeHanging remarks to himself himself]] that he probably comes across as such during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exams Finals. This is especially prominent during the second half of the fight after [[spoiler:Hinata removes her blindfold.]]blindfold]], wherein he's effectively getting filleted by [[spoiler:Hinata]] but ''cannot'' keep the stupid grin off of his face.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Naruto and Hinata are the main example in this fic, with Naruto being the Red and Hinata being the Blue.
** Less prominent examples include Naurot(Red)/[[spoiler:Haku]](Blue) and Kiba(Red)/Hinata(Blue)
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* {{Expy}}: A large number of the OC's used are ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' expys.
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** [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that standard practice ''would'' be to give him his father's last name, but of course, Naruto is a special case.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 9th, 2015 it sits at 39 Chapters and approximately 354,000 words.

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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 9th, 16th, 2015 it sits at 39 40 Chapters and approximately 354,000 362,000 words.
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* MakesUsEven: This concept is what drives Hinata [[spoiler:to give Naruto's team the scroll they need during the Second Round of the Chunin Exams]] because she's not fully capable of understanding that Naruto's actions during [[spoiler: the First Round]] were entirely altruistic and she wishes to repay her "debt" as quickly as possible.

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* MakesUsEven: This concept is what drives Hinata [[spoiler:to give to [[spoiler:give Naruto's team the scroll they need during the Second Round of the Chunin Exams]] because she's not fully capable of understanding that Naruto's actions during [[spoiler: the First Round]] were entirely altruistic and she wishes to repay her "debt" as quickly as possible.
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* PaintTheTownRed: Due to a combination of Naruto's [[HealingFactor healing factor]], [[CrazyPrepared:a fanny pack full of blood replenishing pills]], and his status as a {{Determinator}}, he manages to paint almost the entire floor of the arena for the Chunin Exams Finals ''with his own blood'' during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]].

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* PaintTheTownRed: Due to a combination of Naruto's [[HealingFactor healing factor]], [[CrazyPrepared:a [[CrazyPrepared a fanny pack full of blood replenishing pills]], and his status as a {{Determinator}}, he manages to paint almost the entire floor of the arena for the Chunin Exams Finals ''with his own blood'' during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]].
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* PaintTheTownRed: Due to a combination of Naruto's [[HealingFactor healing factor]], [[CrazyPrepared:a fanny pack full of blood replenishing pills]], and his status as a {{Determinator}}, he manages to paint almost the entire floor of the arena for the Chunin Exams Finals ''with his own blood'' during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]].
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* BloodKnight: Naruto remarks to himself that he probably comes across as such during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exams Finals. This is especially prominent during the second half of the fight after [[spoiler:Hinata removes her blindfold.]]


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* BonusMaterial: The [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ tumblr page]] for the story has a good deal of this, including artwork, snippets of the upcoming/just released chapter and songs chosen to fit the current chapter or specific characters.
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* ForWantOfANail: Instead of the Uchiha Clan it's the [[spoiler:Hyuuga Clan]] that the Senju Clan has a blood feud with prior to Konoha's founding in this fic.

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* ForWantOfANail: Instead of the Uchiha Clan it's the [[spoiler:Hyuuga Clan]] that the Senju Clan has a blood feud with prior to Konoha's founding in this fic. The Uchiha Clan is still one of the two founding clans of the village though.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it only exists in a different incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an [[BerserkButton direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]]]

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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it only exists in a different incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an a [[BerserkButton direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]]]

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** Sasuke's is being looked down on.

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** Sasuke's is are being looked down on.on and any reminder of the fact that the Hyuuga are practically revered in the village despite the fact that they weren't even one of the founding clans.


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* CantCatchUp: Sasuke begins to feel this after watching Naruto and [[spoiler:Hinata]]'s match in the Chunin Exams Finals, before viciously shoving the notion aside.


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** Fugaku treats both of his sons with open contempt when they do anything he views as lowering the image of the Uchiha Clan.

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* AntiClimax: The results of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]

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* AntiClimax: The results result of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]


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** Sasuke's is being looked down on.
*** After it gets out that he nearly lost to [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalBadass Sakura]]]] during the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams Finals, he learns that the betting pools had placed his odds of beating his first opponent in the Finals as so low that even members of his clan bet against him. After [[spoiler:Kankuro]] forfeits immediately and denies Sasuke the chance to show his skills, he barely prevents himself from throwing an outraged conniption fit in front of everyone.


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** Sasuke also wants his father's acknowledgement, enough so that when his first opponent during the Chunin Exams Finals, [[spoiler:Kankuro]], forfeits immediately, he sees red and has to bite himself to the point of bleeding to avoid making a scene in outrage.

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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]

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* AntiClimax: The end results of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]]]
** Chapter 40 is effectively a series of anti-climaxes . [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title.
*** [[spoiler:Sasuke vs Kankurou]] ends in [[spoiler:Kankuro's]] immediate forfeit.
*** [[spoiler:Shino vs Dosu]] is over so fast that Ino and Sakura miss the entire fight while talking to each other.
*** Shikamaru vs Temari occurs as it does in canon.
*** [[spoiler:Renji vs Gaara]] ends in [[spoiler:Renji's]] immediate forfeit.



** [[spoiler:She]] [[LampshadeHanging berates]] [[spoiler:herself]] for this after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal and resolves to treat him as an equal from that moment on, [[spoiler:but still ends up losing by TKO.]]

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** [[spoiler:She]] [[LampshadeHanging berates]] [[spoiler:herself]] for this after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal and resolves to treat him as an equal from that moment on, [[spoiler:but still ends up losing by TKO.knock out.]]
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]] [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.

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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]] [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.]]
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* SendInTheClones: ''All'' of Team 7 has taken to using various clone jutsu to augment their fighting prowess, though Naruto is still the only one to use Shadow Clones.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Naruto's work to build up the Uzumaki Clan once more is starting to look like this, with it's current members consisting of Naruto himself, Inari and [[spoiler:Haku]].

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* BadassBoast: Naruto is fond of these, but the clincher is what he says after he [[spoiler:successfully activates his Gentle Fist Seal on Neji during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
--> '''Naruto:''' Yeah, that's right. Meet ''my'' [[spoiler:Gentle Fist]]!



** If his reaction to thinking Hinata had been struck blind [[spoiler:the first time he saw her wearing a blindfold]] is any indication, Naruto has no compunctions with brutally murdering anyone who harms her.

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** Honestly, it's gotten to the point that Naruto seems to push Neji's [[BerserkButton berserk button]] by simply existing.
** If his Naruto's reaction to thinking Hinata had been struck blind [[spoiler:the first time he saw her wearing a blindfold]] is any indication, Naruto he has no compunctions with brutally murdering anyone who harms her.



* BodyguardingABadass: Hinata has various retainers that escort her from place to place and double as bodyguards for her in the case that she is attacked within Konoha. Of course, her [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking position being what it is]] Hinata is an [[LadyOfWar absolute terror]] in battle as well.



* IndyPloy: Contrary to his canon counterpart, Naruto [[AvertedTrope avoids this]] almost as often as he relies on it. Most of his fights rely on the long term goal of getting a powerful seal off on his opponent, than flying by the seat of his pants until a victory condition appears.

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* IndyPloy: Contrary to his canon counterpart, Naruto [[AvertedTrope avoids this]] almost as often as he relies on it. Most of his fights rely more on the long term goal of getting a powerful seal off on his opponent, than flying by the seat of his pants until a victory condition appears.



* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it only exists in a different incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]

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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it only exists in a different incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an [[BerserkButton direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]]]]]
* LadyOfWar: Naruto makes note of how fluid and graceful [[spoiler:Hinata]] manages to remain even while [[spoiler:she]]'s practically cutting him to ribbons during their match in the Chunin Exams Finals.


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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Even after spending most of the month before the Chunin Exams Finals training ''specifically'' to face Naruto's unique fighting style, [[spoiler:Hinata]] still ends up ''drastically'' underestimating his combat ability.
** [[spoiler:She]] [[LampshadeHanging berates]] [[spoiler:herself]] for this after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal and resolves to treat him as an equal from that moment on, [[spoiler:but still ends up losing by TKO.]]
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Though Naruto's adoration of Hinata started ''long'' before they first interacted, the fact that she always treats him with some measure of respect, [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer unlike almost everyone else in Konoha]], is one of the main reasons he thinks so highly of her.
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** Before the importance of color in the Hyuuga uniform had been fully explained in the [[AllThereInTheManual KJ Corner]] in chapter 31, Naruto makes note of how the darker the grey a Hyuuga Policemen's uniform was, the harder it was to successfully prank them.

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** Before the importance of color in the Hyuuga uniform had been fully explained in the [[AllThereInTheManual KJ Corner]] in of chapter 31, Naruto makes note of how the darker the grey a Hyuuga Policemen's uniform was, the harder it was to successfully prank them.

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